Oh no! The Loonatics are being framed!  It's not them I tell you! It's some evil minded genius who's made clones or has them under mind control without realising! Hmm, they can't hear me. I know!

ICHIGO CAT TRANSFORMATION!!!

I transform into my alter-ego Ichigo Cat, and then I try and charge into the story. Unfortunately, I bump into an invisable wall and the villain walks up to the other side of the wall.

Villain:  Hah! You can't pedetrate the "4th Wall". Unless you're in the story, you can't do anything about what I have planned.

Me: Eeeehhhh...

Oh no! Oh no! oh no! The Loonatics evil?! Say it aint so! Noooooo!!!! -starts bawling-

Still, its a good start Hasani!

-- Edited by doggirl2772 at 21:31, 2007-05-02

-- Edited by doggirl2772 at 21:32, 2007-05-02

NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The loonatics have gone bad this can not be true!

Oooooooooooohhh..... cool!!!!!!!

and indeed. The plot does thicken!!!!

*edits chapter* Does it please you now, oh great shapeshifter from Thundera*?
*from the show ThunderCats

I guess that you must like Bionicle, because the powers of your Elemental Sleuths have the same mask powers as every previous Toa. KUTAW!

Techy_Coyote wrote:

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Interesting plot! I give it 4 out of 5! You lost one point for the really unorganised introduction...

YAY! MY 100th post after 5 months!

-- Edited by Techy_Coyote at 08:33, 2007-05-16

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I know I'm a novice and biased. Sue me.

Reader 1: Okay!

Not literally! The next time anyone has something to say that has to deal with making the story better, just give me a personal message instead of posting it so everyone can see it (Akira Cat, you really me embarrased me that time). Any way, here's a preview for the upcoming Chapter 3.

PREVIEW

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Cal: Who wants a piece of this?! *Shocked with pink energy* Oh, so the girl wants to go first.
Lexi: You have no idea what I can do.
Cal: Like what?
*Several tough and durable vines fly out of Lexi’s hands and constrict Cal’s athletic built body*
Lexi: Get yourself out of that.
*A jet of fire cuts through the vines (obviously the work of Jared)*
Jared: Mulch isn’t the best choice against us.
Lexi: Then here’s something that’s a real eyesore! *Uses the vines to grow flowers and expel pollen at an alarming speed with a fixed target: Jared’s eyes*
Jared: AAAAHHH! MY EYES!
Lexi *thinking*: [Now’s my chance!] *Charges with a energized psi beam and fists covered in spiked cacti*
*Jared releases a high frequency rumble that shows where Lexi was while unintentionally deafening her for a few moments*
Lexi: OH MY EARS! *Grabs her head with her spiked hands* AAAAHH!
Jared: Time to finish this. *Prepares a blue fireball that could kill her in an instant*
???: Not while I’m around! *Kicks Jared in the back of the head*
*Jared flies face-first into the water cooler, filled with water, and takes this opportunity to wash the pollen out of his eyes. As he does so, he finds Ace standing right in front of him.*
Ace: If you want a barbeque, serve yourself as the main course.
Jared: I’m going to enjoy roasting you, rabbit!
*Ace and Jared engage in a high-powered Kung Fu Wushu fight: *

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-- Edited by Hasani at 15:42, 2007-05-26

Ones agen Ace comes to Lexis aid. 
The chapter soundes very interesting Hasani

*Looks around* This is what happens when you edit a page, doesn't it. Well, since there aren't anyone reading this, I might as well reveal this spoiler:

In dark room where a golden robed figure is talking to a pair of big red eyes that has worn his contacts for too long.

Robed figure: The Elemental Slueths have captured the Loonatics, just as you've requested.
Red eyes: Now with them in prison, my diabolical plan will fall into place.
Robed figure: But, master...
Red eyes: Yes?
Robed figure: I really don't think this is right.
Red eyes: Do you want me to take away the powers I've given you and leave you with the worthless ones you had before?
Robed figure: No, master.
Red eyes: Now prepare yourself, you have to find them guilty in court tomorrow, judge.
*Fade out Transition*

Yes, I'm Reading it too!!! I just haven't been able to come on much lately (thinks: brat sister).

Hmmmm.....i wonder who those two were. Wait.....judge?! Uh oh.....

Today, I’ve decided to guest star one of the Message Boards’ moderators, The Oddity (the only Duckie I know). With any hope, she’s still passed out due to all the booze, Guinness, scotch, and brandy I gave her.
 The Oddity: Oh, Danger Duck, I’m not that kind of girl…
  Um, yeah… Let’s get to the chapter before anything weird happens.
 Chapter 4: The Most Unfair Case the Courtroom Has Ever Seen
 After the fiesta from last chapter, our falsely accused heroes were thrown into prison for the night before the court. So let’s gloss over that sad scene and get on to –
 Reader 1: Come on, what’s with the fast forward?
Reader 2: Yeah, I want to know what happened!
 Fine, I tried to spare you but you asked for it. Now before we go any farther through the plot, we're going to have a flashback, where the scene goes all watery and everything is in black and white.
 FLASHBACK
 In Prison…
 Duck: I’m innocent I tell you. INNOCENT!!!!
Ace: Will someone please shut him up?!!!
Slam: [Gladly.] *Punches Duck in the head, but that did not work* [Damn it.]
Duck: I’m falsely accused and in pain!
Lexi: Someone please stop it. I really want to go to *Sees the rotting piece of flesh being used the bed* …Never mind.
Slam: [UNLESS SOMEONE STOPS HIM, SOME HEADS ARE GONNA ROLL!!!!]
Tech: For everyone’s sake. *Performs the Vulcan nerve pinch on Duck, which renders him unconscious*
Rev: Yay!-Go-Tech!
 END FLASHBACK
 Reader 3: No wonder you wanted to do skip that.
 Well, I’m not the one who likes to place emphasis in unnecessary scenes. Also, I wanted to skip the E.S.’s secret meeting with –
 Reader 2: You skipped the most important part of the story?!
 Well, you could say that…
 Reader 1: GET HIM!!!
*Readers charge and smash into a force field*
Readers: Ugh…
  You’ve got to love protection.
 Bailiff: Would you hurry up?!
 Oh yeah. *Type*
 Bailiff: All rise! *Everyone stands up* The honorable Judge Nick “Aurora” Mulligan presiding.
*A man in a gold robe steps in the top podium*
The robed man *Nick*: You may all sit down. *Sounds of people sitting and mumbling amongst each other.* Quiet! *Silence* Prosecutor Hip O. Crite, please start us off.
Prosecutor: First off, I would like to bring Ace Bunny stand.
 I just want to take this time to inform you that the Loonatics are wearing suits due to the fact that their uniforms were confiscated. And yes, this is the first time Lexi is wearing a dress for something other than dances, dates, casual outings, and romance fan fics.
 Bailiff: *After Ace steps into the stand* Mr. Bunny, do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth?
Ace: Yes, sir.
Prosecutor: Mr. Bunny, Where were you on the day of October 11, 2774 at 5:30?
Ace: Well, I was in bed having the worst nightmare in my life.
Duck: Oh no…
Lexi: Don’t start that episode again.
Duck: But –
Nick: *Starts banging his gavel* Order in the court! Order in the court! *The argument gets louder* That’s it! *Delivers several laser beams at the defendants.* Stay quiet or I’m holding you all in contempt of this court. Got it?! *Regaining composure* Mr. Crite, would you please?
Prosecutor: Gladly. Now, Mr. Bunny, you say that this is what you’ve done at the said time, sleeping and dreaming?
Ace: Well, if you want to be that black & white about it…
Prosecutor: However, Exhibit A speaks differently. *Holds a bag of dust with a label that bore the letter “A”*
Nick: Please explain, Mr. Crite.
Prosecutor: Your honor, being a resident crime analyst, I’ve recently discovered that the dust particles included dead human body cells. Apparently, the cells were killed by a high powered amount of radiation. Usually, such amounts can only be found in laser beams or nuclear plants. Since there were no nuclear power plants around the Acmetropolis 1^st Advanced Bank, this can only come from a high powered laser emitter. Please, Mr. Bunny, charge up a laser beam for the court.
Ace: Don’t now how this is gonna help ya… *Charges his eyes for a laser beam*
Prosecutor: May I have a radiation detector? *The janitor brings one up to the stand* Thank you. First we must check the radiation of the cells. *Places the bag near the detector and analyzes the radiation levels of both the bag and Ace’s eyes* 4500 & 4500, just as I thought, the levels are equal. Ergo, Ace is the one who killed most of the police officers, whom I was able to identify them by indicating their DNA sequences.
Attorney: Objection, your honor, he hasn’t any evidence that Mr. Bunny was even at the scene of the crime.
Nick: Overruled. Mr. Act Right, please no outbursts. Mr. Crite, are you quite done?
Prosecutor: Yes, your honor.
Nick: Mr. Right, are you ready to cross-examine?
Attorney: Yes, your honor. Ace, do you remember doing anything during that night?
Ace: Well, I do remember waking up from something eerily similar to a vision.
Attorney: You mean that your dream told you what is going to happen?
Ace: Not very specific, but pretty much the same thing.
Attorney: So, other than that, you’ve done nothing else?
Ace: No, sir.
Attorney: It seems that the defendant is completely innocent of all false claims. *Everyone murmurs among each other* You can return to your seat.
Ace: Finally… *Walks to the Defendant’s table*
Prosecutor: May I call up another witness, your honor?
Nick: Yes, you may.
Prosecutor: The prosecution calls Rev Runner to the stand and away from the door.
*Everyone turns to see Rev prying the doors open with a crowbar*
Rev: Heh-heh…
Tech: Stupid, stupid… *Starts banging head on the table*
Prosecutor: *As soon as Rev entered the stand* Mr. Runner, did you remove all the treasures within the bank’s vault in 2.0 seconds?
Rev: Well,-it-is-possible-for-me-to-do-so–
Prosecutor: Aha! He admits it.
Rev: But-I-never-said-I-did-it!
Slam: [Why won’t you object?]
Attorney: Because we’ll be held in contempt of the court if I do.
Prosecutor: No further questions, your honor.
Attorney: I’d rather refrain from cross examination.
Rev: Turkey! *Runs back to defense*
Attorney: That hurts emotionally, you know.
Nick: Mr. Crite, please call up your next witness.
Prosecutor: Yes, your honor. I would like to call Mr. Tech E. Coyote to the stand.
Tech: That’s Prof. Technic Ezekiel Coyote to you!
Prosecutor: Whatever! Just go to the stand. *Tech walks up to the stand pulpit* Now, is it true that you possess magnetic powers.
Tech: Yes, and does this help you with trying to get us in prison?
Prosecutor: Hey, I’m the one asking the questions here!
Tech: *Not amused* Well, no one said you’re the one able to interject.
Prosecutor: WHY I OUGHTA KILL YA WITH MY BARE HANDS!!!!
Tech: Your honor, I would like to inform the court of my theory of how anger can lower one’s intelligence.
Prosecutor: Just take your seat.
Attorney: Not until I cross-examine. *Walks just in front of the stand* “Prof. Coyote,” were you anywhere near the Acmetropolis First Advanced Bank?
Tech: No, I was in my laboratory, trying to develop a new form of transportation for my team. Oh wait, I was trying to keep that as a surprise.
Attorney: And I take it that you were there during the time of the supposed robbery?
Prosecutor: Objection, your honor! The defense is leading the witness.
Attorney: I’m not leading him, I’m just making him say what I want him to say.
Nick: Sustained. Please take your seats, you two. *Attorney and Tech leave to their seats* Let’s have an hour long recess to figure this out.
Slam: [Hey, we didn’t get our chance to speak!]
Duck: Yeah, I had a full speech ready to prove my innocence.
Lexi: *Sarcastically* And we all know how interesting that is.
Duck: You think you’re so funny, don’t ya. Well, how would you like it if someone decided to show your stand-up comic reject video to everyone in this room?
Lexi: You wouldn’t dare.
Duck: *In his mind: * Ladies and Gentlemen of the court, here’s 30 minutes of shame. *Uploads the file on TV and…*
 The following was deleted for the fact that the comic judges who originally watched this died due to the terrible jokes. In case you were wondering, I left those three out of the interrogation due the lack of fans (excluding me, I care about them on relatively equal levels).
 The Oddity: What about me?
 Sorry, (The Oddity’s real name) other than you, there aren’t many Ducker-
 The Oddity: What did I tell you we were called?
 Er, Duckies on the message board.
 The Oddity: You still need to find a better reason for this.
 Since the video is going to be on for a while, let’s chat.
 The Oddity: Mind telling me how you got those three? *Points to the now awake Readers*
Readers: *Unison* Oh, my head.
 Well, when I was strolling on Bzpower Forums, I read six comedies made by the same author who uses the same readers. I asked if I could use them for a while. Instead, he sold me their contracts at rock bottom prices. I practically own them.
 Oh wait, the video’s finished. Let’s see what happens next.
 *Duck is being chased by an enraged Lexi*
Duck: AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!
Lexi: YOU’RE GONNA BE SHREDS OF VELVET WHEN I’M DONE WITH YOU!!!!
 The Oddity: I bet you’re gonna to regret that later on.
  Let’s just see what happens after the recess.
 Reader 3:  Why?
Reader 2: Are you trying to hide something from us?
 No, there is absolutely nothing to see, just the jury discussing with each other about the case.
 Reader 1: Are you sure?
 *Rolls eyes to show that he’s lying* Yup!
 Nick: Now that the jury had their brain storming session, let us see what verdict they made. * to the jury*
Jury Member (J. M.) 1: Your honor, we have found the defense… *Everyone bites their fingernails repeatedly for the suspense* … innocent.
Loonatics & Zadavia: YEEEAAAAAHHHH!!!
Everyone except jury & Loonatics: ¿Qué?
J. M. 2: You idiot, we’re supposed to say “Guilty!”
J. M. 1: Sorry, sir.
Nick: As punishment for your crimes, I sentence the Loonatics to life…
Rev: But-we’re-already-alive.
Nick:… in prison! Not like the prison you went to last night, but the real deal.
Duck: Please oh kind sir, I beg you not to send me there! I won’t last 5 minutes there!
Nick: Guards, take them away. *Robo-guards show up and remove the Loonatics painfully out of the court* As for their benefactor, she has to pay for all the damages, life insurance policies for the slain, and stolen wealth.
Zadavia: NOOOOO!!!! I’M RUINED!!!!
 As Nick stepped down from the podium, he then joined the company of his partners, the E. S., and shook hands with each other. Stage 2 was complete.
 Bailiff: *Staring at the judge suspiciously*  I just can’t put my finger on it, but the judge seems very odd to me.
I'll edit the story later on

Please note the “full names” are only guesses.

Chapter 5: The Slammer

We now take you to the Elemental Sleuths are speaking with their master who is enshrouded in darkness which makes only his red eyes visible.

Jared: We finally got those fools out of the way.
Red-Eyes: Excellent. Now that they’re in prison, my plan will soon be complete.
Alex: I must say, Nick, bribing the jury was very low brow.
Nick: Really? That seemed to be a new high for me.
Red-Eyes: Enough, let’s continue to Stage 3…

In this point of the story, the Loonatics were given orange power-restrictive jump-suits and a cell right next those of their enemies.

*The Orbital Prison Alpha*
Rev: I-guess-this-is-the end of line.
Duck: Hey, guard, any chance of me getting a parole?
Guard 1 (Ryan): *Sarcastically with his Scottish accent* Sure, we’ll even get ye a free tropical vacation.
Ace: You don’t need to be sarcastic about it, Doc.
Guard 2 (Eric): *In his eastern coast American accent* Well, you’re no longer considered as citizens, thusly you have no rights or dignity.
Guard 3 (Christopher): *In a high west English accent* Ryan, did you tell them that they will be taking their mug shots today?
Ryan: Oh yeah, you lazy burkes have a full schedule.
Tech: Please, what did we do to deserve this?
Eric: *Thinks of crimes the Loonatics have committed, which are not of the product of a sane mind* Where do I start.
Christopher: Come on, we need to take them to the photo ops. *Turns off electric bars*
Ryan: *Whistles “Nobody Knows” while handcuffing the Loonatics and takes him to the photo lab.*
“Special” Photographer: OK, little ones, let’s have some SMILES!
Ace: Not on your life, buddy.

Here is the results in the mug shot shoot:
Arnold “Ace” Bunny *In a foul mood*: Charged for Crime Organization G.T.A., Mass Murder, & Armed Robbery.
Alexis “Lexi” Bunny * In an “I want to leave this place pronto” mood*: Charged for Armed Robbery, Mass Murder & Property Destruction.
Technic “Tech” Ezekiel Coyote *In an un-amused look*: Charged for Hacking, Armed Robbery, & Property Destruction.
Darrel “Danger” Duck *Unsuccessfully trying to give the camera his good side*: Charged for Armed Robbery, Property Destruction, & Mass Murder.
Reveille “Rev” Runner *Pitiful look*: Charged for Armed Robbery & Property Destruction.
Slamacus “Slam” Tasmanian *”Ready to attack” look*: Charged for Mass Murder & Property Destruction.

“Special” Photographer: I guess these are OK…
Christopher: OK, to the exercise room with you lot. *Prods our disheartened heroes*

Narrator: As the Loonatics are  being forced in the work-out area, they have made a startling discovery.

Loonatics: Sypher!
The Newly Hunk-like Sypher: And, I didn’t need steroids to get this form. Now, I’m a babe magnet.
Lexi: You are not going to get me that easy. [ Wonder if he’s good at “it,” too…]
Sypher: So, I guess that you guys haven’t received the message yet.
Slam: [What message?]
Sypher: Wouldn’t you want to know?
Ace: Spill what you know or your guts. I’m in a bad temper and won’t accept any bull you give. *Other Loonatics back away slowly*
Sypher: All right, I’ll tell you! The bunnies and coyote are going to bite the dust by the end of the week.
*20 minutes worth of awkward silence*
Ace: That wasn’t what I was hoping for.
Rev: I-would-have-preferred-a-plan-for-a-prison-break.
Lexi: Why wouldn’t they tell us?
Duck: Maybe they wanted to make a surprise.
Tech: But, that’s not right. From what I remember, we were only given the life sentence.
Sypher: Hey, I don’t make the news, I just spread it like it is.
Ace: [ Hmm, someone wanted to get rid of the most competent members of the team so we can’t interfere with their plan. I wonder…]
Eric: I’m pretty sure you’ve done a lot of work here. Now get to your cell!
Tech: May I have a pen and paper?
Eric: What for?
Tech: I need to write my will early.
Christopher: * to Ryan* I thought that they didn’t know about the execution.
Ryan: Someone must’a tipped them off. These prisoners have some sort of secret code.
Eric: Well, as soon as this clears up, I swear I’m going to be signing my resignation slip. I started to pick up smoking weed after all the tension. I just can’t stand it.
Ryan: As uninteresting as your rant is, we need to get back to work.
Christopher: When exactly do you smoke?
Eric: During break hours.
Christopher: Oh.

Well, if you notice the three guards, you would realize that they're incarnates of the leaaders of this forum. I know that how the site looks is pretty sappy, but hey, Eric a.k.a. Ciremi and Christopher are OK. Ryan, not so sure.

I'm glad you like it, DogGirl. I like placing in stunning plot twists here and there. Don't worry, they will have a nice funeral. And Duck will have to be leader, Rev gets full control of lab and operations, & Slam will leave for good to a monastary.
PSYCHE! I can't believe you actually beleived me!

ya, but I'm still gunna brace myself just in case. I did read a fanfiction were his hand was cut off, it grossed me out but mostly angered me. The thing that would gross me out more would be the electric chair or chopping of the head.
-thinks for a few minutes- Gah!! bad thoughts, bad thoughts!!!!

Why does everyone wanna kill Ace anyway I've read at least 10 fanfics where the writer has killed him off!

on noes i liked this chapter and very unusle punesments indeed

If you want to know, the Time Lord is the "Doctor" from the British show, Doctor Who. And you would be pretty surprised who he is in the story.