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Child's Play.

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Oh and I just realised that I am now a Star Seeker.

Yay! Go me!Anyways, here is chapter 2!

Chapter 2

All the Loonatics apart from Tech are in the dining room having breakfast. They are all sat around the table.

Lexi: cry

I wonder if Tech's okay from yesterday.

Duck: hmm

Maybe he's still wondering what went wrong with his gun yesterday.

Lexi:

Duck!

Duck: cry

But it's true though. He said I was acting immature.

Ace: evileye

Maybe it's because of the fact that you've upset him.

Duck: hmm

Now why would I upset him.

Rev: Well if we know Tech, he'd still be disappointed about yesterday and would still think about it.

Suddenly they hear a bicycle bell. Then coming from the corridor, Tech is riding on a small red, blue and yellow tricycle and cycles around the dining room table. The others' eyes widened as they watch the coyote ride a tricycle that's too big for him around the table.

Tech: biggrin

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Ha ha! Wheeeeeeeeeeee!!!

He then cycles off into the living room. The others look at each other in shock.

Ace: weirdface

Was that Tech on a kids tricycle?

Lexi: weirdface

Well at least he isn't disappointed about yesterday anymore.

Slam: confused

Eh?

Duck: hmm

I can't believe it! He actually took it seriously!

Ace:

Took what too seriously Duck?

Duck: hmm

Okay! So we had an arguement about how him being too mature! Aw come on!

Since when have you guys ever seen him do anything... like that!?

They all suddenly hear a crash in the living room. They all rush into the living room to find Tech crying while holding his knee which has a small cut on it.

Tech:

Waaaaaahh!!! My knee has a boo-boo!!!

Waaaaaahhh!!!

Ace: weirdface

Tech. You can just use your healing powers to heal your cut.

Tech:

I wanna plaster!!! I wanna plaster!!!

Rev runs out of the living room and then comes back in there with a box of plasters with smiley cartoon faces on.

Rev: smile

Here you go Tech. What colour do you want?

Tech: aww

The red one. I wanna red smiley face that goes like this.

Tech gives a big smile at Rev, while trying to show as much of his teeth as possible. Rev puts the plaster on Tech's knee.

Rev: smile

Okay Tech. There you go. All better.

Duck:

What!? You're treating him as though he's an actual kid!? He's a fully grown coyote for crying out loud! He doesn't need a plaster for his knee!

Rev:

That's only because you were the one who argued with Tech and told him he can't be childish.

Rev turns to Tech.

Rev: aww

Come on Tech. Lets go get you some breakfast. You must be very hungry.

Tech: biggrin

Yay!

Rev leads Tech into the dining room as the other Loonatics follow them from behind.

Lexi: smile

Wow. Rev would make a very good parent would he?

Ace: weirdface

Yeah. But this isn't like Tech. He shouldn't be acting this way.

Lexi: aww

I think it's cute to see a more childish side of Tech.

Duck: hmm

And I'm beginning to regret it.

The rest manage to reach the dining room where Rev has got a bowl out for Tech.

Rev: smile

Okay Tech. What cereal would you like? I think I know your favourite...

Rev whips out a cereal box from behind him.

Rev: aww

Museili!

Tech: cry

Museili?

BLECH! That's yucky! cry

I want some of that Sugar Munchies you have Rev!

Rev: weirdface

Oh. Okay. Sugar Munchies it is.

Tech:

Yay!

Rev pours the cereal into the bowl in front of Tech. He pours the milk in and the coyote starts to wolf down the cereal.

Ace: weirdface

Okay. That's just unnatural. Tech never has Sugar Munchies. He always says that Sugar Munchies were bad for people's health because it's got so much sugar inside.

Slam: weirdface

Yeah.

Lexi: weirdface

Yeah. He always has museili.

Ace glares at Duck.

Duck: weirdface

What?

It's no use getting mad at me!

Ace:

Well I wasn't the one who upset Tech. I wasn't the one who drove Tech to ride a tricycle that's too small for him, cry because he fell off the tricycle, get cheered up by a plaster on his knee and eating cereal that is coated in tons of sugar that he usually objects to eating. I think we have the right to get mad at you.

Lexi:

Yeah. And what about the missions Duck!? He can't go out and help us like...

She looks at Tech eating the cereal.

Lexi:

That!

Duck: hmm

Yeah well, he always takes thing too seriously. I bet he's doing this just to make me feel guilty about what I've said to him.

Ace:

Well whether or not he is doing it for that reason, he's doing a very good job of it.

Slam: furious

Uh-huh.

But they just can't help but stare at the coyote pretending the spoon with the cereal on is an aeroplane enetering his mouth.

Tech: biggrin

Neeooooooooooooooooooowwuuumm!!!

All the other Loonatics: weirdface

END OF CHAPTER 2.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 03:16, 2007-05-05

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

hehehehe!! Your stories never cease to amuse me Akira!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Yeah. I was actually wondering if a talented artist like you could either draw Tech on the tricycle, Tech crying because of his boo-boo, or something that I may not expect. biggrin

Please. I just want to see how you interpret the scene.

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Flattery will get you nowhere missy...

..well maybe a sketch... I'll see what I can do ;)

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Thank you! aww

I can't wait to see what you come up with.

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Awww... its good to know that Tech has at least SOMETHING from his childhood. And I couldn't stop laughing when I read the second chapter! Somehow I can imagne Tech doing those things.

Way to go Akira!

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

ZOMFG! *rofles* Is there a next chapter? Please?

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Its realy good so far!! wink

Like Lexi said
"I think it's cute to see a more childish side of Tech." aww

Espeshaly him pretending the spoon is an aeroplane

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Sorry if this chapter took a long time. I've just been a very busy bee. But here it is. Chapter 3!

Chapter 3

Tech:

NEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW UUUMM!

Ace:

We really need to sort him out before-

The emergency alarm buzzes in the meeting room.

Ace: doh

Oh carrot sticks!

So all of the Loonatics apart from Tech, are in the meeting room where Zadavia's hologram stands in the middle.

Zadavia: blankstare

Greetings Loonatics. And- where's Tech? Is he feeling alright?

Ace: Erm... Tech's not... feeling too well. He... er...

Lexi: He's got a stomach bug. He really wants to be here but we told him he should rest.

Zadavia: blankstare

Alright. Felina Evangeline is on the loose again. She's in the street trying suck people's blood. You must prevent her from claiming anymore victims before it's too late. Zadavia out.

Zadavia's hologram disappears.

Ace: evileye

Okay. We have that vampire cat to deal with. Lets-

Lexi: cry

Wait Ace! What about Tech?

They enter the living room and they see Tech running around with his arms spread out wide.

Tech: biggrin

NEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWW!!!

Duck:

Well just in advance, I am NOT babysitting him! He's quite capbable to go on the mission with us!

Lexi:

Duck. Does this look like he can come with us?

Tech continues to run around pretending to be an aeroplane. Ace picks up a piece of paper and a packet of crayons and stops Tech from running around.

Ace: smile

Here Tech. Why don't you calm yourself down and draw us a nice picture on this piece of paper? We're just going to go outside and we need you to stay here. And don't do anything apart from drawing until we get back. aww

Okay?

Tech: biggrin

Okay!

Tech grabs the paper and crayons and starts drawing a picture.

Ace: hmm

Okay. As I was saying; Lets Jet!
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In the street, a little six year old girl in a pink and red dress is running around.
Girl:

Mommy! Mommy! Where are you!? Mommy!

The little girl runs into a cat in a dark red dress. The cat turns around and grabs the little girl by her wrist. She gives and evil grin as she squeezes the girl's wrist.

Cat: evileye

Don't worry little one. I'll look after you until your mother comes back. But first, you must a pay a price... by your blood.

???: Hey! Felina! Let her go! It's us you want to mess with! Not her!

Felina lets go of the girl's wrist as the little girl runs away from her. She turns around and sees the Loonatics standing there before her.

Felina: evileye

Ah Loonatics. I've been missing you. I was beginning to think you wouldn't find me. And your coyote friend isn't here to play? Shame. I quite like him. I think he looks cute.

Duck: furious

Quit flirting with us Vampire Scum! Even without him, we can still beat you!

Felina: evileye

Oh yeah? Well, try this!

She gathers some black energy from her hands and throws it at the Loonatics. They all dodge the blow. Ace whips out his guardian strike sword and charges at her. She quickly spins around and blocks the slash with her long black claws and throws Ace against the wall. She turns around and spots the little girl still running. She flies in front of her. The girl stops.

Felina: evileye

Now why would you run away from me? I'm not that scary. Maybe I should teach you for trying to run without my permission.

She raised her claws and threw them down. Rev then zips in front of the girl and carries her off. But he then recieves the blow on his back. He gives a cry in pain as he dived across the floor with the little girl still in his arms. Felina was about to attack when she finds herself surrounded by the rest of the Loonatics.

Felina: evileye

Oh dear. Sorry to leave you here but I have to take flight for more blood. And next time, bring your coyote friend. He's ever so fun to play with.

She turns herself into a bat and then flies away, leaving the Loonatics to grit their teeth. Rev then gets up with the little girl in his arms as a woman runs to him and collects the girl.

Woman: smile

Thank you! Thank you so much! I don't know how to repay you for protecting my little girl!

Rev: aww

It's no problem m'am. I'm just doing my job.

The woman thanks Rev once more time and then she carries the girl off down the street.

Duck:

We lost her! I can't believe we lost her again!

Ace: cry

Lets go back to HQ. We don't know where she'll strike next. Lets head home.

Rev begins to flap his arms but then he suddenly gives a cry of pain as he holds his back with both of his hands. The other loonatics turn to look at the roadrunner.

Ace: cry

Rev! Are you okay?

Rev: I'm fine. Don't worry. I'm okay.

Ace: Well just to make sure, we'll get Slam to carry you home. And then we'll look at that injury.

Rev reluctuantly agrees as Slam grabs hold of the roadrunner and gives him a piggy back home.
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They eventually get to the HQ and they go through the elavator doors.

Rev: smile

I'm okay Slam. I can stand.

Lexi: weirdface

I do hope Tech's okay.

Duck: Tech's pretending to be a kid. He'll be able to occupy himself somehow.

Ace: cry

But we need Tech back soon. This is twice that we've lost that vampire. If we don't catch her soon, she'll be chasing down her next victim.

They go through the hallway into the living room. But all of them freeze on the spot as all their jaws drop.

Ace:

Tech! What have you done!?

END OF CHAPTER 3. SO WHAT DID TECH DO? FIND OUT IN CHAPTER 4!

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 07:17, 2007-05-07

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Oh carrot sticks! As opposed the the tradition fiddlesticks? Haha! I love it!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Well, I was originally gonna make him swear. But then I thought; "Akira. This is a light-hearted comedy, not a naughty story". So 'Carrot Sticks' it was. I like it though. Sounds funny.

zadavias_spirit · Out of This World

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love your stories, Akira. Now Felina's a Techie.

And I'll bet Rev's gunna be a roadpire (roadrunner + vampire). Tech's gunna have to cure him, 'cept he's a kid.......

I'll bet he drew on the walls.
But where is "With a Scent of Rose?" I wanted to read that.

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Ya, they walk in and everywhere has been coloured! That would be funny! Or if he invented something, like paint bubbles, and when they pop the thing it touches turns a certain colour! That would be soooooo funny to see a bright, neon coloured HQ! Ooooooh I wanna know what happens!!!!! smile

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

zadavias_spirit wrote:

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love your stories, Akira. Now Felina's a Techie.
And I'll bet Rev's gunna be a roadpire (roadrunner + vampire). Tech's gunna have to cure him, 'cept he's a kid....... I'll bet he drew on the walls.
But where is "With a Scent of Rose?" I wanted to read that.

Well, I do think he's made an impression on her at least. Pretty ironic that she's a cat anthro and Tech is a coyote from the wolf/dog family.

The story "With a Scent of Rose" is on the Naughty Fan Fic section. You'll know why eventually

.

But you're just gonna have to wait until chapter 4 to find out what on earth Tech has done.

Hee hee!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

And speaking of which, Chapter 4 is here!

Chapter 4

Ace:

Tech! What have you done!?

What all the Loonatics are seeing is the living room coloured in all sorts of crayon colours with toilet paper meandering in and out of gaps.

Ace: cry

Tech. Why on earth did you do this!?

Tech: cry

Because I got bored after I finished the picture and I accidently marked the sofa and drew a pretty picture from it. And then after I turned this place into a jungle, I decided to make myself a den.

Lexi: weirdface

Out of toilet paper?

Duck then treads on a poster of Mysty Breeze with crayon coloured all over her face.

Duck:

My Mysty Breeze poster! You ruined it you monster!

Ace: Hey hey! Easy Duck! I'm sure he didn't mean to-

Duck:

He did it on purpose! He was trying to get back at me for upsetting him! Saying to him that he was never a child in his childhood! But this takes the joke too far! In fact, it isn't even a joke!

Tech:

I'm sorry.

Duck: furious

Oh don't you dare try and make me forgive you! I can never forgive someone who does this to Mysty Breeze!

Rev: cry

Look. Lets just get the place cleaned up and then we can get you another poster.

Rev was about to go and get some cleaning stuff when he gave a shrill of pain and collapsed onto the floor.

Tech:

Rev!

Tech touched Rev's back. He then looks at the palm of his hand to find a stain of red blood on him.

Ace: He's wounded! We have to get him to the med room now!

Slam lifts Rev onto his shoulder and carries him to the med room while Ace and Lexi followed Slam from behind. Tech was left alone to stare at the blood on his hand until Duck spoke.

Duck:

I hope you're happy! I hope you're satisfied with your attempt to get revenge on me! Some revenge huh?

Duck ran after Ace and Lexi as Tech continued to stare down at the blood. A few tears came running down his cheeks and onto his hand. A flash of voices came rushing back to him.

Voice 1: Tech! Look out!

CLANG!

Voice 1: AAH!!!

Voice 2: MOM!

Tech snapped out of the flashes of voices to hear a scream coming from the med room. He immediately recognised that the scream belonged to Rev. He began to run into the bathroom and turned the tap on. He was frantically scrubbing his hand, trying to remove the blood. Hot tears rolled down his cheeks as he did his best at scrubbing his hands clean. But then he collapsed onto his knees and cried loudly as the tap kept running. There was only a faded stain of blood that remained on his hand.

END OF CHAPTER 4.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 04:03, 2007-05-08

zadavias_spirit · Out of This World

NUUU!!!! LIVE, REV, LIIIIIVE!!!!!!!!!!!
Darn cliffhanger.

That last part reminds me of Macbeth, "Out, damn spot, out I say!!!" with Lady Macbeth and the (imaginary) blood. Can't wait for teh next installment!!!

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

By that flash back I'm gessing Techs the way he is becas he lost his mom and now he'llsnap out of it becas of Rev.
Poor coyote cry

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Tech's mum didn't die. She just had an injury that was similar to Rev that affected Tech from a very young age. But I have to feel sorry for him. Even if it never happened in the real LU episodes. No. It's just a bit of history repeating itself in front of Tech's eyes. How will the coyote cope? You'll just have to wait and see.

RevRunner · Frelengian

No, I want Rev to live!!!

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Poor Rev.

Poor Tech. cry

I feel so sad. cry

I wonder if Tech saw what happened to his mom or not. Either way, Poor Tech. cry

Poor Rev.

I'm so sad. cry

but good story Akira!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Well here's chapter 5.

Chapter 5

Rev is laying on his stomach on the med bed while Ace, Duck, Slam and Lexi give concerned looks at the scratches on his back.

Lexi: cry

Do you think he'll be okay?

Ace: weirdface

I'm not sure. He took a lot of damage from Felina's claws.

Duck:

Well if it wasn't for Tech acting so childish in the first place, none of this would be happening!

Outside the door, Tech listened closely at this statement and leaned his back against the wall. He stared at his paw, which still had the faint blood stain in his fur. He tilted his head against the wall as another tear rolled down his furry cheeks.
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A young seven year old coyote ran around in the kitchen with a sandy, brown teddy dog in a red waist coat, while a female adult coyote was stirring a pot of stew.

Adult coyote: aww

Tech. Stop running around in the kitchen and help me put away some things.

Tech: biggrin

Okay mom.

Tech squeezes his toy dog under his arm while he goes to grab a bowl with a sharp looking knife inside. He runs towards a high cupboard and steps up onto a stool. He opens the door with one hand and tries to push the bowl with the knife in with the other. He then feels the toy dog slipping from under his arm.

Tech: Bobby!

The knife slips out of the bowl and starts falling down. His mum turns around and notices this.

Tech's mum:

Tech! Look out!

She pushes Tech off the stool. But the knife cuts her hand, making it bleed heavily.

Tech's mum: AAH!!!

Tech: MOM!
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Tech stares at his hand a few moments longer before he finally walks towards his lab.
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The rest of the loonatics apart from Rev and Tech, are in the meeting room, having been summoned by Zadavia.

Lexi: cry

Felina is at it again!?

Zadavia: blankstare

This time she has been sighted at the supermarket. You must deal with her with extreme caution.

Duck: hmm

Yeah. She kicked our butts twice and now Rev can't come with us.

And we all know who to thank for that.

Ace glared at Duck and then turned to Zadavia.

Ace: Don't worry Zadavia. We'll make sure we get her this time.

Zadavia: I hope you do. blankstare

Zadavia out.

Zadavia's hologram disappears.

Ace: Okay guys. We'll go and ask Tech first.

Duck:

Are you sure he's not going to cause another "accident"?

Ace:

Duck. We need as many people we can get. And Rev is not in the condition where he can go and fight.

Lexi: cry

We have no choice Duck. We have to ask him.

Slam:

Duck:

Fine! We'll go ask him!

They all exit the meeting room and approach Tech's lab. Ace knocks on the door.

Ace: weirdface

Er... Tech ol' buddy. We got another mission against that vampire cat. You wanna come? We could really use your help.

Lexi: cry

Look. Whatever Duck said to you, I'm sure he didn't mean to. Please Tech. You've gotta help us. You're the only one who knew about the substance that can help us beat her. Please?

No reply.

Duck: furious

See!? He's too ashamed to admit it cos he always has to be right! And I thought I was immature!

Duck walks away from the door as Slam follows him. Ace still stands in front of the door.

Ace:

Tech?

Lexi:

Come on Ace. We better go.

Lexi walks away as Ace gives one last glance at the door before walking away to begin their mission.

END OF CHAPTER 5.

zadavias_spirit · Out of This World

Poor Tech. A lot of traumatic experiences in childhood, no matter how harmless, can mess up the mind for years. And a knife in your mom's hand is not harmless.
Return of Bobby....... *voodoo spells* Ph33r it.
"

It seems like one of us has gone AWOL." ~ Heir Up There, kinda'
I'll bet Tech went to stop Felina himself. That, or he's with Rev. Or he's been kidnapped. Or he's gone insane. Or...
Flexa: Yeah........ Might as well the to the point. Another great chapter, Akira!!!

Me: Or he fell into a vat of toxic waste. Or he went to see his mom. Or....

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

..... Or hes' not in the room at all! biggrin

Good story Akira! smile

Will the Loonatics beat Felina? Will Rev survive?? Will Tech finally return to being the genious we love??? No one will know until Akira decides to tell!!! biggrin

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Don't worry. I will put up the chapter later. wink

You just have to be patient.

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Chapter 6

Crowds of people run out from the supermarket building as Felina searches for victims within the building.

Felina: hmm

Yoohoo. Anyone home? Aw come on. Just because I'm a vampire, doesn't mean I'm gonna hurt you.

???: Well we think otherwise!

Felina spins around to find the four remaining Loonatics in front of her.

Felina: evileye

Oh there you are. I was beginning to think you were getting bored of me. And there's only four of you? I though I told you to bring your coyote friend along. Weren't you listening?

Duck:

You left before we could hear you!

Felina: evileye

Well at least I can play with you instead.

Felina throws some black orbs at the Loonatics and the Loonatics dodge them. Slam tries to use his tornado powers on her. But she notices this and dodges that and she pushes some shelves over like a domino effect and the shelves land on the Tasmanian Devil knocking him out cold. Lexi tries to use her brain blast but Felina prepares another dark orb and throws it at her. It hits Lexi as she flew across the super market aisle and she knocks over a tower of baked bean tins.

Duck: furious

Hey! Why don't you have a bit of this!

Duck throws some orange orbs. They both hit Felina. Felina growls and points her sharp claws at Duck. The claws shoot out and pin Duck against a wall. Duck struggles to get out. Now it was up to Ace to stop the vampire cat. Ace whips out his guardian strike sword.

Ace:

Guardian Strike Sword Attack!

Ace charges at her with his sword. Using her super fast reflexes, Felina turns around and clashes her claws against Ace's sword. The sword gets stuck in Felina's claws.

Felina: furious

Get your sword out of my claws!

Ace:

Well get your claws off my sword!

Felina: furious

Okay then!

Felina kicks Ace in the stomach, sending him sliding across the floor and groaning in pain while he wrapped his arms around his stomach. Felina looks at all the injured Loonatics around her.

Felina: evileye

Looks like I won. And my prize... is to suck some blood. Now, whose blood should I taste first?

She approaches Ace who is still groaning from the pain.

Felina: evileye

I think I'll start with you. Since you played so nicely against me. I hope your neck is tasty.

Just as she was about to pierce Ace's neck, she is suddenly hit by a green jelly like substance and she slides across the floor. Felina finds herself inside the green jelly and struggles to get out. She looks up to find a dark figure in the shadows standing on a shelf.

???: Sorry Felina! But he doesn't taste good!

The figure jumps from the shelf and lands near the vampire cat. All the loonatics jaws dropped.

Duck:

Tech! Oh am I glad to see you! Get me out of here!

Tech ignores Duck's plea and approaches Felina.

Felina: evileye

So they did bring you here. Well that was mean, giving me a nasty suprise like that.

Tech:

After what you did to one of my friends, I couldn't just let you get away with it. The others were just buying me some time for this Bat Attack 2000. The jelly you're sitting in is neutralising your powers. So you can't use your vampire powers anymore.

Felina:

Very clever. I thought you were a nice coyote. Now I just think you're a dirty dog!

Tech: furious

I am only going to tell you once and once only; I'm not a dog, I'm a coyote! And don't you forget it! And a fully grown one at that!

END OF CHAPTER 6.

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Yay Techs back!!!! "And a fully grown one at that!" fav. line So are you gooing to tell us more about Techs past A-cat? confused

Hay! I jest terned Beast!! biggrin

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 07:52, 2007-05-11

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Congrats Siamese on becoming a beast! And I like your "call me avatar". Very nice. weirdface

And A-Cat? Nobody's called me that before.

I like it. I think it's cute.

And yes. A snippet of Tech's past might be revealed by a special guest wink

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Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

YAY... We see Techs past!!! biggrin

Thanks on the Beast. And the call me avatar is from 'Cape Duck' wink

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

GAHHH! I can't believe i haven't been following this Tech story! Please forgive me Akira! *Begs for Akira's forgiveness.* I've been busy with other things and haven't had much time to be reading stories in the last couple of weeks!

But i like this one very much, naturally, since it is a Tech-centred story! It was rather strange, but amusing to see Tech acting so childishly. And i see even Felina couldn't resist Tech charms! He! He! So i'm guessing that Tech must've somehow reverted psychologically back into a childhood state then? Not entirely intentional, but brought on by his heated 'chat' with Duck? Silly Duck, he brings out the worse feelings in his team mates me thinks. But it's a good thing Tech recovered in time to help Ace and the others! It was tres cool how he ambushed Felina in the supermarket! And ignored Duck's cry for help! Ha! Ha! Serves that water fowl right!

Looking forward to what will be revealed about Tech's past in your next installment Akira! This has been entertaining to read so far!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Well, you might have to do something for me for not following this story.

Heh heh heh.

No no. Joking! I'm glad you like it. The last chapter will be up soon wink

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RevRunner · Frelengian

It's a cute story. But, why out of all characters does it have to be Rev that is injured and in the hospital?

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

He's not in the hospital. He's in the med room in the HQ. And why I chose Rev was... I don't really know. I just thought it be more of an impact for Tech than with any other characters.

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

And..... Tech is back!!! Yay!!! -cheers coming from crowds around him-
Tech: -rubs back of neck- Heh heh... thanks?

Awsome story!!! Tech was in his lab when they were knocking on his door wasn't he?! Loving this!! I'll wait here till the next chappie!!! biggrin

Go Akira Go!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Akira_Cat wrote:

Well, you might have to do something for me for not following this story. Heh heh heh.

No no. Joking! I'm glad you like it. The last chapter will be up soon .

NUUUUU! Don't make me do something embarrassing or against my principles! Have mercy! biggrin

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Okay! Final chapter guys and girls!

Chapter 7

After Felina Evangeline was safely taken away to serve her life sentence, the rest of the Loonatics were relaxing in the living room. Ace and Lexi were playing pool, Slam was raiding the fridge, Duck was watching TV and Tech was reading a book. Rev enters from his room. There are bandages wrapped around his torso to conceal the scratches. Tech turns around as he enters.

Rev: smile Hiya Tech! What are you reading?

Tech: A book. What else? And I'm really sorry for what happened to you because of my behaviour.

Rev: aww Tech. You said sorry at 452 times including this apology. It's okay. You didn't mean to. It was bound to happen anyway.

Tech: But I got you hurt.

Rev: smile It's okay Tech. I'm fine now.

Tech: smile That's good to hear.

Rev still over looks the text Tech's reading until they hear a door bell.

Duck: weirdface Is anybody expecting something?

Rev: confused Not that I know of.

Tech: I'll go get it.

Tech goes to get the door. He opens it to find a familiar face wearing a pink flowery dress holding a blue bag.

???: Tech!

Tech: Mom!?

Tech's mom wraps her arms around him.

Mom: I heard something terrible has happened to you! Are you okay?

Tech: cry I'm fine mom.

Mom: cry Cold? Fever? Flu? Chicken pox?

Tech: cry MOM! I think you better come in.

Tech brings his mother into the living room. All the others turn around to see her.

Ace: aww Oh. Hello Mrs Coyote. Nice of you to come and visit.

Mom: aww And I thank you Ace for inviting me in.

She turns to Tech.

Mom: cry Oh Techie dear. As soon as I heard you were not acting like yourself, I came straight from home and did my best to come here as quickly as possible! But now I'm here, maybe we can talk about what it is that's making you behave strangely.

Duck: evileye So come on! Dish the dirt up! What embarrassing things did Tech do when he was a kid?

Tech: Duck! cry Mom. Can we go somewhere private?

Mom: aww Sure. Lead me to your room.

Tech leads his mom into Tech's lab and locks the door. His mom slowly sits on the bed along with Tech.

Mom: weirdface Now what seems to be the problem? I hear you've been acting very childish recently.

Tech: cry I'm fine now mom. As long as I'm fine you don't have to worry.

Mom: cry But still, riding on a tricyle that's too big for you, eating cereals that are high in sugar and colouring the HQ in coloured crayons is strange coming from you. Has anyone upset you at all?

Tech gives a hesitant pause.

Tech: weirdface Mom. What was I like as a child?

Mom: blankstare Well... you were a very precoscious child. Many teachers said that you had an above average intelligence. A lot higher than the other children in fact.

Tech: Duck was right. I wasn't a child at all. I was a geek as a child. I bet my favourite games were "Trivial Persuit" and "Chess" no doubt.

Mom: No as a matter of fact. Your favourite game was "Tech Man". You used to imagine you were a super hero and was able to do anything. You used to get one of my clean sheets and tie it around your neck for the cape. And you'd run around the house in nothing but a pair of under wear and another pair on your head.

Tech: hmm Hmph. If that secret got out than I'd never live it down.

Both coyotes then hear some giggles behind the door. He opens the door and the rest of the Loonatics tumble in front of his feet.

Ace: Uummm... biggrin Just checking to see if this door is secure! You wouldn't want your private conversation to be heard.

Duck: Yeah... Tech Man.

At first, Tech frowns. Then he gives a smile and giggles.

Tech: You guys. smile Wanna go to the theme park? We haven't had any fun since the last time we went.

Rev: Yeah! Lets go!

Lexi: smile I'm up for it.

Slam: Candy Floss! Yum!

Tech turns to his mom.

Tech: smile You wanna come mom? As a thank you present.

Mom: aww Oh I love to, Techie Wechie Woo.

Tech: cry Mom!

Everyone laughs at the nickname as they prepare to go to the theme park.

THE END. YAY! THE END! BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO FOR MY GENERAL STUDIES EXAM! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Hope your exam goes okay Akira!

Aww, that's a sweet ending! I'm surprised that Tech was so willing to invite his mother along to the theme park, given how she revealed all his embarrassing childhood secrets to the others! Ha! Ha! But you can't deny your mother i suppose.

So Tech did have a fairly normal childhood then. Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Ah, the choldhood moments... Hehehee!!

zadavias_spirit · Out of This World

Ah, childhood.

Awesome ending!!!

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Awww..... so sweet! Tech's mom comes to cheek up on him and he had a fairly normal childhood like the rest of us! it was pretty funny how the others tumbled out from behind the door!

Tech: Ya, ya, laugh it up blondie.
Me: alright..... Tech Man.
Tech: NEVER SAY THAT AGAIN!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!!!! NEVER AGAIN!!!
me: sure thing.... Techie Wechie Woo.
Tech: GRRRR......

Love the ending.

Hope you do well on your exam!!! biggrin

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Done my exam. And it sucked. I think I might fail it even though I'm secretly confident that I could have passed. Talk about moral issues and I should get an 'E' which is a pass mark.

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Black Oracle wrote:
Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?

Well, Duck did wind him up and it broke out into an arguement. And in the end, Duck says that Tech didn't have a normal childhood. So Tech wanted to prove Duck wrong.

And the second question, I don't know. I mean you can't remember much from when you were a little kid (maybe 1-3, possibly 4 years old). I mean, since I didn't really enjoy middle school for social reasons, I tried to erase those memories from my head. I must have done it well cos there was this girl who I couldn't even remember even though she knew me. I couldn't remember her no matter how hard I tried.

Techy_Coyote · Beast

Thanks for reminding me about Duck!

Me:*Throws a brick at Duck* biggrin

Duck: HEY! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?! furious

Me: For bullying my TECH! *reaches for brick*

Duck: Don't bother, I already sent them through a wormhole. HAH!

Me: I got something better... Takes out embarrassing photos of Duck

Duck: GIMME BACK! WHERE DID YOU GET THOSE?!

Me: From your mom, Duckie wuckie. biggrin

Duck: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Akira_Cat wrote:

Black Oracle wrote:
Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?
Well, Duck did wind him up and it broke out into an arguement. And in the end, Duck says that Tech didn't have a normal childhood. So Tech wanted to prove Duck wrong.

And the second question, I don't know. I mean you can't remember much from when you were a little kid (maybe 1-3, possibly 4 years old). I mean, since I didn't really enjoy middle school for social reasons, I tried to erase those memories from my head. I must have done it well cos there was this girl who I couldn't even remember even though she knew me. I couldn't remember her no matter how hard I tried.

There will always be some things about your childhood that you'll forget. The problem with me is that most of my earlier memores are of the bad experiences or embarrassing moments i had! cry

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

ZOMFG! *rofl* The ending was awesome! and sweet! Tech's mom is my hero!

Techy_Coyote · Beast

I can remember some of my childhood friends... they are called Maggie and Kelly. They are my kindergarden friends.

I wonder how they are doing right now...

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Black Oracle - Yeah. Me too. I also remember some weird random stuff that I did too.

Cassidy Coyote - I'm starting to like Tech's Mom. I just like her caring, over-protecting and embarrassing character.

Techy Coyote - You're lucky then. I only started having real friends when I was in high school. Even some of the friends I've made I'm starting to regret now. But my current friend list is A-Okay now. So I'm happy.

Just to let you guys know, I've started another fan fic called "A Nice Looking Bird" in the naughty fan fic section. So have a look in there if you want. Post comments on the story there, not here.

Rach Runner · Beast

Me like very funny