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Hiya! And this is the fan fic you voted for; Child's Play! I hope you enjoy this aww !

Chapter 1

In Acmetropolis, the Loonatics are chasing a villain Felina Evangeline. She is a black and white cat anthro who is a vampire with black bat wings wearing a dark, red, gothic, vampire dress with the frilly skirt down to her half way down her thighs and dark red high heeled shoes. Her long, brown hair flowed behind her as she continued to fly from the loonatics. 

Lexi: mad.gif This vampire cat is starting to annoy me now!

Ace: mad.gif Well keep focused Loonatics! We're catching up to her now!

Felina takes a glance behind her from the corner of her eye and turns another corner to an alleyway. She suddenly stops at a dead end as she turns around to face the Loonatics who've blocked the exit.

Ace: evileye We've got you now Felina! Either you come quietly, or we're going to have to take extreme precautions!

Felina: evileye Do as you wish rabbit. But remember, I'm a vampire cat. I can always do this.

Felina wraps herself in her dark red cape and transforms in a black bat. She starts to fly away.

Ace: mad.gif Don't let her get away!

Tech: I've got a solution.

He reveals a light blue and green gun.

Tech: It's my Bat Attack 6000. That should bring the bat down from the sky with some special gel, that neutralises her vampire powers.

Tech presses the trigger. But nothing comes out. Tech looks at the gun.

Tech: cry What!? Why isn't it working!?

The gun then explodes. The green gel splats out everywhere on the Loonatics, including Tech.

Lexi: doh Eeww! This is gross!

Tech: cry But I don't understand. This shouldn't have happened. It should have caught that vampire bat. But it just exploded.

Ace: Hey. Lets go back at HQ and clean ourselves up from this goo. Then you can think of a plan 'B'. Okay?

Tech: worry.gif Okay cheif.

So after failing the mission, they went back to HQ and got themselves cleaned. Tech is now in his lab still staring down at the table.

Tech: worry.gif What went wrong? The explosion shouldn't have happened.

???: Well at least I wasn't the one who messed up for a change.

Tech turned around to see Duck leaning against the door. He turned his back on him as Duck entered.

Tech: worry.gif What do you want Duck?

Duck: Well I was just coming here to see if I could cheer you up. But you accuse me of something that I would never think of thinking about.

Tech: cry But you do that all the time.

Duck: weirdface And? I just want a reward now and again.

Tech: hmm I knew it.

Duck: evileye So what's plaging your guilty conscience then? The fact that your invention managed to explode in your face for once?

Tech: mad.gif My inventions never explode or fail on me unless I program it to! cry I just don't know what happened.

Duck: Why don't you just say that it failed and relax and don't think about?

Tech: mad.gif But I can't relax! I need to know what went wrong so I can get it right this time!

Duck: hmm Oh for godness sake Tech! Give it a rest!

Tech: furious You know? You're not cheering me up like this! You're just rubbing it in and being really immature!

Duck: mad.gif I'm not being immature! Tech. cry You've got to just relax and move on.

Tech: mad.gif But If I do that, then Felina will never be caught and more victims will become vampires! If you think letting a villain run around wildly is a good idea, you're being childish!

Duck: mad.gif Oh yeah! Well I bet you were never even a child from when you were a kid! evileye I bet you never had a childhood.

Tech: rage.gif I did have a childhood Duck! Everyone has!

Duck: evileye Oh yeah. Tell me one thing that you did as a child that a normal kid would do.

Tech: mad.gif I did... furious I did stuff as a kid!

Duck: evileye Oh yeah. Building nuclear atoms, working out complicated equations, playing with a chemistry set. Yeah, a normal child would do these in their childhood. I bet you never had a cartoon hero from a kids TV show. I bet your heroes were like Albert Einstein of Thomas Edison. People who kids would have never heard of.

Tech: mad.gif Just get out Duck!

Duck: evileye See! I was right! I bet you never had a favourite childhood toy. So what was it Tech? A chemistry set? A soduko puzzle game? Something that geeks would like. Face it Tech. You were never a child and you never will be. 

Duck walks towards the door and opens it.

Duck: hmm I know. I know. It's a shame that you can't turn back time to your childhood. I guess it's just one of those things that you can't change.

Duck walks out of the lab and shuts the door. Tech looks down on the floor. He then walks towards his bed and then grabs a shoebox from under his bed. He opens the box and takes out a sandy, brown, teddy dog wearing a red coat. One of the beads that is meant to be an eye is hanging off a black piece of string. Tech smiles down upon it.

Tech: smile I think I'll stop the inventions for now. I want to show Duck that I can be just as childish and immature as he is. In the morning. Good night Bobby.

He puts Bobby back in the shoebox and slides the shoebox back under his bed. He gets changed into his pyjamas and slips into bed and drops off to sleep.

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Oh and I just realised that I am now a Star Seeker. w00t.gif Yay! Go me!Anyways, here is chapter 2!

Chapter 2

All the Loonatics apart from Tech are in the dining room having breakfast. They are all sat around the table.

Lexi: cry I wonder if Tech's okay from yesterday.

Duck: hmm Maybe he's still wondering what went wrong with his gun yesterday.

Lexi: mad.gif Duck!

Duck: cry But it's true though. He said I was acting immature.

Ace: evileye Maybe it's because of the fact that you've upset him.

Duck: hmm Now why would I upset him.

Rev: Well if we know Tech, he'd still be disappointed about yesterday and would still think about it.

Suddenly they hear a bicycle bell. Then coming from the corridor, Tech is riding on a small red, blue and yellow tricycle and cycles around the dining room table. The others' eyes widened as they watch the coyote ride a tricycle that's too big for him around the table.

Tech: biggrin Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Ha ha! Wheeeeeeeeeeee!!!

He then cycles off into the living room. The others look at each other in shock.

Ace: weirdface Was that Tech on a kids tricycle?

Lexi: weirdface Well at least he isn't disappointed about yesterday anymore.

Slam: confused Eh?

Duck: hmm I can't believe it! He actually took it seriously!

Ace: evileye.gif Took what too seriously Duck?

Duck: hmm Okay! So we had an arguement about how him being too mature! Aw come on! mad.gif Since when have you guys ever seen him do anything... like that!?

They all suddenly hear a crash in the living room. They all rush into the living room to find Tech crying while holding his knee which has a small cut on it.

Tech: crying.gif Waaaaaahh!!! My knee has a boo-boo!!! crying.gif Waaaaaahhh!!!

Ace: weirdface Tech. You can just use your healing powers to heal your cut.

Tech: crying.gif I wanna plaster!!! I wanna plaster!!!

Rev runs out of the living room and then comes back in there with a box of plasters with smiley cartoon faces on.

Rev: smile Here you go Tech. What colour do you want?

Tech: aww The red one. I wanna red smiley face that goes like this.

Tech gives a big smile at Rev, while trying to show as much of his teeth as possible. Rev puts the plaster on Tech's knee.

Rev: smile Okay Tech. There you go. All better.

Duck: mad.gif What!? You're treating him as though he's an actual kid!? He's a fully grown coyote for crying out loud! He doesn't need a plaster for his knee!

Rev: mad.gif That's only because you were the one who argued with Tech and told him he can't be childish.

Rev turns to Tech.

Rev: aww Come on Tech. Lets go get you some breakfast. You must be very hungry.

Tech: biggrin Yay!

Rev leads Tech into the dining room as the other Loonatics follow them from behind.

Lexi: smile Wow. Rev would make a very good parent would he?

Ace: weirdface Yeah. But this isn't like Tech. He shouldn't be acting this way.

Lexi: aww I think it's cute to see a more childish side of Tech.

Duck: hmm And I'm beginning to regret it.

The rest manage to reach the dining room where Rev has got a bowl out for Tech.

Rev: smile Okay Tech. What cereal would you like? I think I know your favourite...

Rev whips out a cereal box from behind him.

Rev: aww Museili!

Tech: cry Museili? bleh BLECH! That's yucky! cry I want some of that Sugar Munchies you have Rev!

Rev: weirdface Oh. Okay. Sugar Munchies it is.

Tech: w00t.gif Yay!

Rev pours the cereal into the bowl in front of Tech. He pours the milk in and the coyote starts to wolf down the cereal.

Ace: weirdface Okay. That's just unnatural. Tech never has Sugar Munchies. He always says that Sugar Munchies were bad for people's health because it's got so much sugar inside.

Slam: weirdface Yeah.

Lexi: weirdface Yeah. He always has museili.

Ace glares at Duck.

Duck: weirdface What? mad.gif It's no use getting mad at me!

Ace: mad.gif Well I wasn't the one who upset Tech. I wasn't the one who drove Tech to ride a tricycle that's too small for him, cry because he fell off the tricycle, get cheered up by a plaster on his knee and eating cereal that is coated in tons of sugar that he usually objects to eating. I think we have the right to get mad at you.

Lexi: mad.gif Yeah. And what about the missions Duck!? He can't go out and help us like...

She looks at Tech eating the cereal.

Lexi: mad.gif That!

Duck: hmm Yeah well, he always takes thing too seriously. I bet he's doing this just to make me feel guilty about what I've said to him.

Ace: mad.gif Well whether or not he is doing it for that reason, he's doing a very good job of it.

Slam: furious Uh-huh.

But they just can't help but stare at the coyote pretending the spoon with the cereal on is an aeroplane enetering his mouth.

Tech: biggrin Neeooooooooooooooooooowwuuumm!!!

All the other Loonatics: weirdface weirdface weirdface weirdface weirdface 

END OF CHAPTER 2. 

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 03:16, 2007-05-05

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hehehehe!! Your stories never cease to amuse me Akira!

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Yeah. I was actually wondering if a talented artist like you could either draw Tech on the tricycle, Tech crying because of his boo-boo, or something that I may not expect. biggrin Please. I just want to see how you interpret the scene.

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..well maybe a sketch... I'll see what I can do ;)



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Thank you! aww I can't wait to see what you come up with.

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Awww... its good to know that Tech has at least SOMETHING from his childhood. And I couldn't stop laughing when I read the second chapter! Somehow I can imagne Tech doing those things.

Way to go Akira!clap.gif

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ZOMFG! *rofles* Is there a next chapter? Please?

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Its realy good so far!!wink
Like Lexi said 
"I think it's cute to see a more childish side of Tech."aww
Espeshaly him pretending the spoon is an aeroplane

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Sorry if this chapter took a long time. I've just been a very busy bee. But here it is. Chapter 3!

Chapter 3

Tech: biggrin.gif NEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW UUUMM!

Ace: weirdface.gif We really need to sort him out before-

The emergency alarm buzzes in the meeting room.

Ace: doh Oh carrot sticks!

So all of the Loonatics apart from Tech, are in the meeting room where Zadavia's hologram stands in the middle.

Zadavia: blankstare Greetings Loonatics. And- where's Tech? Is he feeling alright?

Ace: Erm... Tech's not... feeling too well. He... er...

Lexi: He's got a stomach bug. He really wants to be here but we told him he should rest.

Zadavia: blankstare  Alright. Felina Evangeline is on the loose again. She's in the street trying suck people's blood. You must prevent her from claiming anymore victims before it's too late. Zadavia out.

Zadavia's hologram disappears.

Ace: evileye Okay. We have that vampire cat to deal with. Lets-

Lexi: cry Wait Ace! What about Tech?

They enter the living room and they see Tech running around with his arms spread out wide.

Tech: biggrin NEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWW!!!

Duck: mad.gif Well just in advance, I am NOT babysitting him! He's quite capbable to go on the mission with us!

Lexi: mad.gif Duck. Does this look like he can come with us?

Tech continues to run around pretending to be an aeroplane. Ace picks up a piece of paper and a packet of crayons and stops Tech from running around.

Ace: smile Here Tech. Why don't you calm yourself down and draw us a nice picture on this piece of paper? We're just going to go outside and we need you to stay here. And don't do anything apart from drawing until we get back. aww Okay?

Tech: biggrin Okay!

Tech grabs the paper and crayons and starts drawing a picture.

Ace: hmm Okay. As I was saying; Lets Jet!
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In the street, a little six year old girl in a pink and red dress is running around.
Girl: crying.gif Mommy! Mommy! Where are you!? Mommy!

The little girl runs into a cat in a dark red dress. The cat turns around and grabs the little girl by her wrist. She gives and evil grin as she squeezes the girl's wrist.

Cat: evileye Don't worry little one. I'll look after you until your mother comes back. But first, you must a pay a price... by your blood.

???: Hey! Felina! Let her go! It's us you want to mess with! Not her!

Felina lets go of the girl's wrist as the little girl runs away from her. She turns around and sees the Loonatics standing there before her.

Felina: evileye Ah Loonatics. I've been missing you. I was beginning to think you wouldn't find me. And your coyote friend isn't here to play? Shame. I quite like him. I think he looks cute.

Duck: furious Quit flirting with us Vampire Scum! Even without him, we can still beat you!

Felina: evileye Oh yeah? Well, try this!

She gathers some black energy from her hands and throws it at the Loonatics. They all dodge the blow. Ace whips out his guardian strike sword and charges at her. She quickly spins around and blocks the slash with her long black claws and throws Ace against the wall. She turns around and spots the little girl still running. She flies in front of her. The girl stops.

Felina: evileye Now why would you run away from me? I'm not that scary. Maybe I should teach you for trying to run without my permission.

She raised her claws and threw them down. Rev then zips in front of the girl and carries her off. But he then recieves the blow on his back. He gives a cry in pain as he dived across the floor with the little girl still in his arms. Felina was about to attack when she finds herself surrounded by the rest of the Loonatics.

Felina: evileye Oh dear. Sorry to leave you here but I have to take flight for more blood. And next time, bring your coyote friend. He's ever so fun to play with.

She turns herself into a bat and then flies away, leaving the Loonatics to grit their teeth. Rev then gets up with the little girl in his arms as a woman runs to him and collects the girl.

Woman: smile Thank you! Thank you so much! I don't know how to repay you for protecting my little girl!

Rev: aww It's no problem m'am. I'm just doing my job.

The woman thanks Rev once more time and then she carries the girl off down the street.

Duck: mad.gif We lost her! I can't believe we lost her again!

Ace: cry Lets go back to HQ. We don't know where she'll strike next. Lets head home.

Rev begins to flap his arms but then he suddenly gives a cry of pain as he holds his back with both of his hands. The other loonatics turn to look at the roadrunner.

Ace: cry Rev! Are you okay?

Rev: I'm fine. Don't worry. I'm okay.

Ace: Well just to make sure, we'll get Slam to carry you home. And then we'll look at that injury.

Rev reluctuantly agrees as Slam grabs hold of the roadrunner and gives him a piggy back home.
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They eventually get to the HQ and they go through the elavator doors.

Rev: smile I'm okay Slam. I can stand.

Lexi: weirdface I do hope Tech's okay.

Duck: Tech's pretending to be a kid. He'll be able to occupy himself somehow.

Ace: cry But we need Tech back soon. This is twice that we've lost that vampire. If we don't catch her soon, she'll be chasing down her next victim.

They go through the hallway into the living room. But all of them freeze on the spot as all their jaws drop.

Ace: jawdrop.gif Tech! What have you done!?

END OF CHAPTER 3. SO WHAT DID TECH DO? FIND OUT IN CHAPTER 4!


-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 07:17, 2007-05-07

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Oh carrot sticks! As opposed the the tradition fiddlesticks? Haha! I love it!

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Well, I was originally gonna make him swear. But then I thought; "Akira. This is a light-hearted comedy, not a naughty story". So 'Carrot Sticks' it was. I like it though. Sounds funny.

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BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love your stories, Akira. Now Felina's a Techie. giggle.gif
And I'll bet Rev's gunna be a roadpire (roadrunner + vampire). Tech's gunna have to cure him, 'cept he's a kid....... giggle.gif I'll bet he drew on the walls.
But where is "With a Scent of Rose?" I wanted to read that.

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Ya, they walk in and everywhere has been coloured! That would be funny! Or if he invented something, like paint bubbles, and when they pop the thing it touches turns a certain colour! That would be soooooo funny to see a bright, neon coloured HQ! Ooooooh I wanna know what happens!!!!!smile

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zadavias_spirit wrote:

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love your stories, Akira. Now Felina's a Techie. giggle.gif
And I'll bet Rev's gunna be a roadpire (roadrunner + vampire). Tech's gunna have to cure him, 'cept he's a kid....... giggle.gif I'll bet he drew on the walls.
But where is "With a Scent of Rose?" I wanted to read that.



Well, I do think he's made an impression on her at least. Pretty ironic that she's a cat anthro and Tech is a coyote from the wolf/dog family.

The story "With a Scent of Rose" is on the Naughty Fan Fic section. You'll know why eventually giggle.gif .

But you're just gonna have to wait until chapter 4 to find out what on earth Tech has done. giggle.gif Hee hee!



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And speaking of which, Chapter 4 is here!

Chapter 4

Ace: jawdrop.gif Tech! What have you done!?

What all the Loonatics are seeing is the living room coloured in all sorts of crayon colours with toilet paper meandering in and out of gaps.

Ace: cry Tech. Why on earth did you do this!?

Tech: cry Because I got bored after I finished the picture and I accidently marked the sofa and drew a pretty picture from it. And then after I turned this place into a jungle, I decided to make myself a den.

Lexi: weirdface Out of toilet paper?

Duck then treads on a poster of Mysty Breeze with crayon coloured all over her face.

Duck: jawdrop.gif My Mysty Breeze poster! You ruined it you monster!

Ace: Hey hey! Easy Duck! I'm sure he didn't mean to-

Duck: furious.gif He did it on purpose! He was trying to get back at me for upsetting him! Saying to him that he was never a child in his childhood! But this takes the joke too far! In fact, it isn't even a joke!

Tech: worry.gif I'm sorry.

Duck: furious Oh don't you dare try and make me forgive you! I can never forgive someone who does this to Mysty Breeze!

Rev: cry Look. Lets just get the place cleaned up and then we can get you another poster.

Rev was about to go and get some cleaning stuff when he gave a shrill of pain and collapsed onto the floor.

Tech: omfg.gif Rev!

Tech touched Rev's back. He then looks at the palm of his hand to find a stain of red blood on him.

Ace: He's wounded! We have to get him to the med room now!

Slam lifts Rev onto his shoulder and carries him to the med room while Ace and Lexi followed Slam from behind. Tech was left alone to stare at the blood on his hand until Duck spoke.

Duck: mad.gif I hope you're happy! I hope you're satisfied with your attempt to get revenge on me! Some revenge huh?

Duck ran after Ace and Lexi as Tech continued to stare down at the blood. A few tears came running down his cheeks and onto his hand. A flash of voices came rushing back to him.

Voice 1: Tech! Look out!

CLANG!

Voice 1: AAH!!!

Voice 2: MOM!

Tech snapped out of the flashes of voices to hear a scream coming from the med room. He immediately recognised that the scream belonged to Rev. He began to run into the bathroom and turned the tap on. He was frantically scrubbing his hand, trying to remove the blood. Hot tears rolled down his cheeks as he did his best at scrubbing his hands clean. But then he collapsed onto his knees and cried loudly as the tap kept running. There was only a faded stain of blood that remained on his hand.

END OF CHAPTER 4. 


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NUUU!!!! LIVE, REV, LIIIIIVE!!!!!!!!!!!
Darn cliffhanger. biggrin.gif
That last part reminds me of Macbeth, "Out, damn spot, out I say!!!" with Lady Macbeth and the (imaginary) blood. Can't wait for teh next installment!!!

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By that flash back I'm gessing Techs the way he is becas he lost his mom and now he'llsnap out of it becas of Rev. 
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Tech's mum didn't die. She just had an injury that was similar to Rev that affected Tech from a very young age. But I have to feel sorry for him. Even if it never happened in the real LU episodes. No. It's just a bit of history repeating itself in front of Tech's eyes. How will the coyote cope? You'll just have to wait and see.

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No, I want Rev to live!!!

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Poor Rev.cry Poor Tech.cry I feel so sad.cry I wonder if Tech saw what happened to his mom or not. Either way, Poor Tech.cry Poor Rev.cry I'm so sad.cry

but good story Akira!

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Well here's chapter 5.

Chapter 5

Rev is laying on his stomach on the med bed while Ace, Duck, Slam and Lexi give concerned looks at the scratches on his back.

Lexi: cry Do you think he'll be okay?

Ace: weirdface I'm not sure. He took a lot of damage from Felina's claws.

Duck: mad.gif Well if it wasn't for Tech acting so childish in the first place, none of this would be happening!

Outside the door, Tech listened closely at this statement and leaned his back against the wall. He stared at his paw, which still had the faint blood stain in his fur. He tilted his head against the wall as another tear rolled down his furry cheeks.
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A young seven year old coyote ran around in the kitchen with a sandy, brown teddy dog in a red waist coat, while a female adult coyote was stirring a pot of stew.

Adult coyote: aww Tech. Stop running around in the kitchen and help me put away some things.

Tech: biggrin Okay mom.

Tech squeezes his toy dog under his arm while he goes to grab a bowl with a sharp looking knife inside. He runs towards a high cupboard and steps up onto a stool. He opens the door with one hand and tries to push the bowl with the knife in with the other. He then feels the toy dog slipping from under his arm.

Tech: Bobby!

The knife slips out of the bowl and starts falling down. His mum turns around and notices this.

Tech's mum: omfg.gif Tech! Look out!

She pushes Tech off the stool. But the knife cuts her hand, making it bleed heavily.

Tech's mum: AAH!!!

Tech: MOM!
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Tech stares at his hand a few moments longer before he finally walks towards his lab. 
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The rest of the loonatics apart from Rev and Tech, are in the meeting room, having been summoned by Zadavia.

Lexi: cry Felina is at it again!?

Zadavia: blankstare This time she has been sighted at the supermarket. You must deal with her with extreme caution.

Duck: hmm Yeah. She kicked our butts twice and now Rev can't come with us. mad.gif And we all know who to thank for that.

Ace glared at Duck and then turned to Zadavia.

Ace: Don't worry Zadavia. We'll make sure we get her this time.

Zadavia: I hope you do. blankstare Zadavia out.

Zadavia's hologram disappears.

Ace: Okay guys. We'll go and ask Tech first.

Duck: evileye.gif Are you sure he's not going to cause another "accident"?

Ace: mad.gif Duck. We need as many people we can get. And Rev is not in the condition where he can go and fight.

Lexi: cry We have no choice Duck. We have to ask him.

Slam: nod.gif

Duck: mad.gif Fine! We'll go ask him!

They all exit the meeting room and approach Tech's lab. Ace knocks on the door.

Ace: weirdface Er... Tech ol' buddy. We got another mission against that vampire cat. You wanna come? We could really use your help.

Lexi: cry Look. Whatever Duck said to you, I'm sure he didn't mean to. Please Tech. You've gotta help us. You're the only one who knew about the substance that can help us beat her. Please?

No reply.

Duck: furious See!? He's too ashamed to admit it cos he always has to be right! And I thought I was immature!

Duck walks away from the door as Slam follows him. Ace still stands in front of the door.

Ace: worry.gif Tech?

Lexi: worry.gif Come on Ace. We better go.

Lexi walks away as Ace gives one last glance at the door before walking away to begin their mission.

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Poor Tech. A lot of traumatic experiences in childhood, no matter how harmless, can mess up the mind for years. And a knife in your mom's hand is not harmless.
Return of Bobby....... *voodoo spells* Ph33r it.
"hmm.gif It seems like one of us has gone AWOL." ~ Heir Up There, kinda'
I'll bet Tech went to stop Felina himself. That, or he's with Rev. Or he's been kidnapped. Or he's gone insane. Or...
Flexa: Yeah........ Might as well the to the point. Another great chapter, Akira!!!

Me: Or he fell into a vat of toxic waste. Or he went to see his mom. Or....

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..... Or hes' not in the room at all!biggrin

Good story Akira!smile
 
Will the Loonatics beat Felina? Will Rev survive?? Will Tech finally return to being the genious we love??? No one will know until Akira decides to tell!!! biggrinbiggrinbiggrin

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Don't worry. I will put up the chapter later. wink You just have to be patient.

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Chapter 6

Crowds of people run out from the supermarket building as Felina searches for victims within the building.

Felina: hmm Yoohoo. Anyone home? Aw come on. Just because I'm a vampire, doesn't mean I'm gonna hurt you.

???: Well we think otherwise!

Felina spins around to find the four remaining Loonatics in front of her.

Felina: evileye Oh there you are. I was beginning to think you were getting bored of me. And there's only four of you? I though I told you to bring your coyote friend along. Weren't you listening?

Duck: mad.gif You left before we could hear you!

Felina: evileye Well at least I can play with you instead.

Felina throws some black orbs at the Loonatics and the Loonatics dodge them. Slam tries to use his tornado powers on her. But she notices this and dodges that and she pushes some shelves over like a domino effect and the shelves land on the Tasmanian Devil knocking him out cold. Lexi tries to use her brain blast but Felina prepares another dark orb and throws it at her. It hits Lexi as she flew across the super market aisle and she knocks over a tower of baked bean tins.

Duck: furious Hey! Why don't you have a bit of this!

Duck throws some orange orbs. They both hit Felina. Felina growls and points her sharp claws at Duck. The claws shoot out and pin Duck against a wall. Duck struggles to get out. Now it was up to Ace to stop the vampire cat. Ace whips out his guardian strike sword.

Ace: rage.gif Guardian Strike Sword Attack!

Ace charges at her with his sword. Using her super fast reflexes, Felina turns around and clashes her claws against Ace's sword. The sword gets stuck in Felina's claws.

Felina: furious Get your sword out of my claws!

Ace: mad.gif Well get your claws off my sword!

Felina: furious Okay then!

Felina kicks Ace in the stomach, sending him sliding across the floor and groaning in pain while he wrapped his arms around his stomach. Felina looks at all the injured Loonatics around her. 

Felina: evileye Looks like I won. And my prize... is to suck some blood. Now, whose blood should I taste first?

She approaches Ace who is still groaning from the pain.

Felina: evileye I think I'll start with you. Since you played so nicely against me. I hope your neck is tasty.

Just as she was about to pierce Ace's neck, she is suddenly hit by a green jelly like substance and she slides across the floor. Felina finds herself inside the green jelly and struggles to get out. She looks up to find a dark figure in the shadows standing on a shelf.

???: Sorry Felina! But he doesn't taste good!

The figure jumps from the shelf and lands near the vampire cat. All the loonatics jaws dropped.

Duck: omfg.gif Tech! Oh am I glad to see you! Get me out of here!

Tech ignores Duck's plea and approaches Felina.

Felina: evileye So they did bring you here. Well that was mean, giving me a nasty suprise like that.

Tech: mad.gif After what you did to one of my friends, I couldn't just let you get away with it. The others were just buying me some time for this Bat Attack 2000. The jelly you're sitting in is neutralising your powers. So you can't use your vampire powers anymore.

Felina: mad.gif Very clever. I thought you were a nice coyote. Now I just think you're a dirty dog!

Tech: furious I am only going to tell you once and once only; I'm not a dog, I'm a coyote! And don't you forget it! And a fully grown one at that!

END OF CHAPTER 6. 

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Yay Techs back!!!! "And a fully grown one at that!" fav. line So are you gooing to tell us more about Techs past A-cat? confused

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aww.gif Congrats Siamese on becoming a beast! And I like your "call me avatar". Very nice. weirdface And A-Cat? Nobody's called me that before. aww.gif I like it. I think it's cute.

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YAY... We see Techs past!!! biggrin
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GAHHH! I can't believe i haven't been following this Tech story! Please forgive me Akira! *Begs for Akira's forgiveness.* I've been busy with other things and haven't had much time to be reading stories in the last couple of weeks!

But i like this one very much, naturally, since it is a Tech-centred story! It was rather strange, but amusing to see Tech acting so childishly. And i see even Felina couldn't resist Tech charms! He! He! So i'm guessing that Tech must've somehow reverted psychologically back into a childhood state then? Not entirely intentional, but brought on by his heated 'chat' with Duck? Silly Duck, he brings out the worse feelings in his team mates me thinks. But it's a good thing Tech recovered in time to help Ace and the others! It was tres cool how he ambushed Felina in the supermarket! And ignored Duck's cry for help! Ha! Ha! Serves that water fowl right!

Looking forward to what will be revealed about Tech's past in your next installment Akira! This has been entertaining to read so far!

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Well, you might have to do something for me for not following this story. devilish.gif Heh heh heh.

No no. Joking! I'm glad you like it. The last chapter will be up soon wink.

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It's a cute story. But, why out of all characters does it have to be Rev that is injured and in the hospital?

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He's not in the hospital. He's in the med room in the HQ. And why I chose Rev was... I don't really know. I just thought it be more of an impact for Tech than with any other characters.

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And..... Tech is back!!! Yay!!! -cheers coming from crowds around him-
Tech: -rubs back of neck- Heh heh... thanks?

Awsome story!!! Tech was in his lab when they were knocking on his door wasn't he?! Loving this!! I'll wait here till the next chappie!!!biggrin

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Well, you might have to do something for me for not following this story. devilish.gif Heh heh heh.

No no. Joking! I'm glad you like it. The last chapter will be up soon wink.



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Okay! Final chapter guys and girls!

Chapter 7

After Felina Evangeline was safely taken away to serve her life sentence, the rest of the Loonatics were relaxing in the living room. Ace and Lexi were playing pool, Slam was raiding the fridge, Duck was watching TV and Tech was reading a book. Rev enters from his room. There are bandages wrapped around his torso to conceal the scratches. Tech turns around as he enters.

Rev: smile Hiya Tech! What are you reading?

Tech: A book. What else? worry.gif And I'm really sorry for what happened to you because of my behaviour.

Rev: aww Tech. You said sorry at 452 times including this apology. It's okay. You didn't mean to. It was bound to happen anyway.

Tech: worry.gif But I got you hurt.

Rev: smile It's okay Tech. I'm fine now.

Tech: smile That's good to hear.

Rev still over looks the text Tech's reading until they hear a door bell.

Duck: weirdface Is anybody expecting something?

Rev: confused Not that I know of.

Tech: I'll go get it.

Tech goes to get the door. He opens it to find a familiar face wearing a pink flowery dress holding a blue bag.

???: Tech!

Tech: omfg.gif Mom!?

Tech's mom wraps her arms around him.

Mom: crying.gif I heard something terrible has happened to you! Are you okay?

Tech: cry I'm fine mom.

Mom: cry Cold? Fever? Flu? Chicken pox?

Tech: cry MOM! I think you better come in.

Tech brings his mother into the living room. All the others turn around to see her.

Ace: aww Oh. Hello Mrs Coyote. Nice of you to come and visit.

Mom: aww And I thank you Ace for inviting me in.

She turns to Tech.

Mom: cry Oh Techie dear. As soon as I heard you were not acting like yourself, I came straight from home and did my best to come here as quickly as possible! But now I'm here, maybe we can talk about what it is that's making you behave strangely.

Duck: evileye So come on! Dish the dirt up! What embarrassing things did Tech do when he was a kid?

Tech: mad.gif Duck! cry Mom. Can we go somewhere private?

Mom: aww Sure. Lead me to your room.

Tech leads his mom into Tech's lab and locks the door. His mom slowly sits on the bed along with Tech.

Mom: weirdface Now what seems to be the problem? I hear you've been acting very childish recently.

Tech: cry I'm fine now mom. As long as I'm fine you don't have to worry.

Mom: cry But still, riding on a tricyle that's too big for you, eating cereals that are high in sugar and colouring the HQ in coloured crayons is strange coming from you. Has anyone upset you at all?

Tech gives a hesitant pause.

Tech: weirdface Mom. What was I like as a child?

Mom: blankstare Well... you were a very precoscious child. Many teachers said that you had an above average intelligence. A lot higher than the other children in fact.

Tech: worry.gif Duck was right. I wasn't a child at all. I was a geek as a child. I bet my favourite games were "Trivial Persuit" and "Chess" no doubt.

Mom: aww.gif No as a matter of fact. Your favourite game was "Tech Man". You used to imagine you were a super hero and was able to do anything. You used to get one of my clean sheets and tie it around your neck for the cape. And you'd run around the house in nothing but a pair of under wear and another pair on your head. 

Tech: hmm Hmph. If that secret got out than I'd never live it down.

Both coyotes then hear some giggles behind the door. He opens the door and the rest of the Loonatics tumble in front of his feet.

Ace: fear.gif Uummm... biggrin Just checking to see if this door is secure! You wouldn't want your private conversation to be heard.

Duck: giggle.gif Yeah... giggle.gif Tech Man.

At first, Tech frowns. Then he gives a smile and giggles.

Tech: no.gif You guys. smile Wanna go to the theme park? We haven't had any fun since the last time we went.

Rev: w00t.gif Yeah! Lets go!

Lexi: smile I'm up for it.

Slam: hungry.gif Candy Floss! Yum!


Tech turns to his mom.

Tech: smile You wanna come mom? As a thank you present.

Mom: aww Oh I love to, Techie Wechie Woo.

Tech: cry Mom!

Everyone laughs at the nickname as they prepare to go to the theme park.

THE END. YAY! THE END! BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO FOR MY GENERAL STUDIES EXAM! crying.gif NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!



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Hope your exam goes okay Akira!

Aww, that's a sweet ending! I'm surprised that Tech was so willing to invite his mother along to the theme park, given how she revealed all his embarrassing childhood secrets to the others! Ha! Ha! But you can't deny your mother i suppose.

So Tech did have a fairly normal childhood then. Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?

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Ah, childhood. aww.gif
Awesome ending!!!

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awwAwww..... so sweet! Tech's mom comes to cheek up on him and he had a fairly normal childhood like the rest of us! it was pretty funny how the others tumbled out from behind the door!

Tech: Ya, ya, laugh it up blondie.blankstare
Me: alright..... Tech Man.smile
Tech: NEVER SAY THAT AGAIN!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!!!! NEVER AGAIN!!!furious
me: sure thing.... Techie Wechie Woo.smile
Tech: GRRRR......furious

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 Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?

Well, Duck did wind him up and it broke out into an arguement. And in the end, Duck says that Tech didn't have a normal childhood. So Tech wanted to prove Duck wrong.

And the second question, I don't know. I mean you can't remember much from when you were a little kid (maybe 1-3, possibly 4 years old). I mean, since I didn't really enjoy middle school for social reasons, I tried to erase those memories from my head. I must have done it well cos there was this girl who I couldn't even remember even though she knew me. I couldn't remember her no matter how hard I tried.



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Thanks for reminding me about Duck!

Me:*Throws a brick at Duck*biggrin

Duck: HEY! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!furious

Me: For bullying my TECH! *reaches for brick*

Duck: Don't bother, I already sent them through a wormhole.  HAH!

Me: I got something better... Takes out embarrassing photos of Duck

Duck: GIMME BACK! WHERE DID YOU GET THOSE?!

Me: From your mom, Duckie wuckie. biggrin

Duck: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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 Then why did he still revert into childish behaviour earlier? Had he forgotten or repressed his childhood memories that badly?

Well, Duck did wind him up and it broke out into an arguement. And in the end, Duck says that Tech didn't have a normal childhood. So Tech wanted to prove Duck wrong.

And the second question, I don't know. I mean you can't remember much from when you were a little kid (maybe 1-3, possibly 4 years old). I mean, since I didn't really enjoy middle school for social reasons, I tried to erase those memories from my head. I must have done it well cos there was this girl who I couldn't even remember even though she knew me. I couldn't remember her no matter how hard I tried.



There will always be some things about your childhood that you'll forget. The problem with me is that most of my earlier memores are of the bad experiences or embarrassing moments i had! cry

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ZOMFG! *rofl* The ending was awesome! and sweet! Tech's mom is my hero!

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I can remember some of my childhood friends... they are called Maggie and Kelly. They are my kindergarden friends.

I wonder how they are doing right now...

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Black Oracle - Yeah. Me too. I also remember some weird random stuff that I did too.

Cassidy Coyote - I'm starting to like Tech's Mom. I just like her caring, over-protecting and embarrassing character.

Techy Coyote - You're lucky then. I only started having real friends when I was in high school. Even some of the friends I've made I'm starting to regret now. But my current friend list is A-Okay now. So I'm happy.

Just to let you guys know, I've started another fan fic called "A Nice Looking Bird" in the naughty fan fic section. So have a look in there if you want. Post comments on the story there, not here.

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