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You need to Keep reading to find out Rev Girl. Next chapter up soon.

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 Oh, i'm dying of suspense here!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I hope it comes up soon!biggrin

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Timmy will live, I know he will! Siamese won't just kill him of!

Tessa: He did it to Lexi in "We Promise", remember?

Me: But...but...

Tessa: -rolls eyes- Calm down, I'm just saying. It's up to Siamese how this story is going to end.

Me: -stares at screen for the next chapter while nevously biting fingernails-

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Rev girl: I've been trying to get the next hapter writen, the problem is I ceep hiting writers block!

Ruth: Well lets gets say...wait did you call me a he? I'm a she...Any ways lets jest say some things are not all way what they seem. ceep that in mind when reading this story.

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Chapter 11


 

Rev returned back to HQ with Timmy by his side. The others weren't there. They where still on the search.


 

Rev activated his communicator and told the others that he had found Timmy. The rest of the team wouldn't be back. Giving Rev time to talk with Timmy.


 

So-Timmy,” Rev said a he sat down next to Timmy on the couch, “why-did-you-go-to-the-docks?”


 

I...I don't really know.” Timmy replied looking down, “Some...some part of my memory has me there with you and the others. It's not very clear; some parts are like faded to. It jest seemed so peaceful.”


 

Be Rev could say any thing the doors to the room opened to revel the other Loonatics. Rev and Timmy stood up to greet the others.


 

Lexi, with what could only be classified as mother like instinct kicking in, pulled Timmy into a slightly tight hug, “Oh Timmy why did you run of like that.” she released him a little, “You had us all worried.”


 

Timmy let his ears flatten against his head in sham, “I'm sorry Lexi. To all of you I'm sorry. I jest...I guess I heard something that misinterpreted.”


 

It's okay Timmy,” Ace pleased his hand on Timmys shoulder, “You're home now, and safe. Now come on. You have to go with Tech.”


 

Timmy, Rev, and Tech all walked to the lab. Duck and Slam went there separate ways as well. Leaving Ace and Lexi in the main room.


 

Ace, do you think Timmy will be okay?” Lexi asked.


 

In all truth I have no idea. Tech may be a genius but hes never been up against something like dis.” Ace raped his arms around Lexi as she leaned into him.


 

I hope he'll be all right.” Lexi replied.


 

So do I Lex. So do I.”


 

As Timmy sat on one of the med beds for Tech to take a blood sample, Rev and Tech talked amongst them selfs.


 

Tech-Timmy-went-to-the-docks-because-he-remembered-it,-but-how-could-he.-he-also-learns-so-fast.-thats-not-normal.-Is-it.-I-mean-I've-seen-kids-catch-on-really-fast-but-never-that-fast.” Rev said.


 

I see your point Rev. I'll do a CT-scan on him, and see if there's any thing unusual. It's possible the chemical may have affected his brain capacity. Allowing him to learn faster.”


 

All-right-Tech



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Keep going!

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in the end nothing maters so why be coshes in life? live like you whant to live but do not dwingle in sorow. You deside your mental status so why desid to be sad? desid to be happy. Even if you live a thousedn years life is still short. Even if you live a milon years life is still not worth it with out love.


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I will B-cat.

Chapter 12

It was 9:30 now as most the Loonatics slept. Timmy also slept in the Lab, connected to a couple of computers to monitor for any kind of strange activity. Tech was awake, as usual, awaiting the test results of Timmys resent Blood and CT-Scan.

He read through the first one, “Blood looks normal. Thats good.” He then looked at the scan. His eyes widened as he reread it jest to make sure he wasn't seeing thin, “Nanites?! In his brain?!”

Tech quickly got up and went to the part of the Lab where Timmy lays. Next to Timmy layed a small cote where a sleeping roadrunner was. Tech quietly shook him awake.

Rev...Rev...Rev I found something out about Timmy.” Tech whispered not trying to wake anyone but Rev. 

Rev opened his eyes and slowly sat up, “Wha?...Whats going on?”

Come with me” Tech said.

As they came to where Tech had been Tech handed the Red bird the results.

Nanites?” Rev said confused.

“I felt you should be the first to know sins you've become closest to Timmy, but these nanites have got me thinking.”

What-about-Tech?”

I think all this was done on purpose.” Tech said.

Purpose!?-Who-would-wont-to-do-this-and-what-makes-you-say-that?” Rev questioned.

Nanites do NOT come into a persons body normally. Someone, or dare I say something, had put them there. With that in mind it's possible some one made it that Timmy would rapidly age! It's like hes some experiment.”

Rev went silent 'who would wont to such a thing' he thought, 'Timmy is such a kind boy. He doesn't deserve this.'

Tech could see that Rev was a little distressed from all this, so he pleased a comforting hand on his comrades shoulder.

Rev you should go get some sleep. Right now we can't be worrying over the whos and whys. We need to constraint on finding a cure and prolonging the aging.”

All right Tech...but shouldn't we tell the others?” Rev asked abnormally slow.

The nanites can wait till dawn. You need to go get some sleep. You and Timmy both have to get up early tomorrow.”

Ya...See ya in the morning Tech.” With that Rev went back to his bed next to Timmy.



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Oh,I do hope they are able to stop the nanites!

I heart your stories Siamese!

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Thank you Rev girl, but the nanites arn't doing any thing wrong. It that chemical in Timmys DNA that mite get him. Which is discused in this chapter

Chapter 13

So Tech hows the kid?” Ace asked as he leaned back on the wall of the lab.

“I sent him and Rev out in order for them to do something active. This jest may work.” Tech said addressing Zadavia and all the Loonatics minus there red runner, “If we keep Timmy on a simple sleeping arrangement and get him as active as we can it may give us a couple of days or even weeks before...well you guys know.”

So Tech why have you called this meeting?” Zadavia asked.

Well last night when I was checking Timmys CAT-scan I found nanites in his brain.”

Nanites!?” The other repeated in shock.

Are the nanites hearing him?” Lexi couldn't help but ask.

No, The nanites aren't hurting him. There accusaly amplifying his brain waves so that he can learn faster and proses data easer then a normal person. Are main problem is still that chemical in his DNA.” Tech explained.

Doszed Rvknow?” Slam asked.

Ya. Rev was the first one I told. He's taking it surprisingly well.”

“I wouldn't be surprised if he's boodling it up.” Lexi commented.

Nether would I.” Ace said. 

Ack! Rev! R-rev let me go! Ah ha ha.” Timmy laughed as Rev had him in a head lock and nogged him. When Tech had told him to take Timmy some where active only one place came to mind. It was a place where Revs father had him when he was a bit younger. It was a place called 'The Ruff House'. It had many different activity's to do. There was a small resealing ring,  robotic bull riding, rock climbing, bumper cars, and much more.
 Timmy quickly reversed the head lock on Rev and sent him to the floor. Timmy was able to pin Rev to the floor. A man dressed in a wight and black striped costume counted to 3 and claimed loudly “
YOU'RE OUT!”
 
Timmy let Rev up and through his hands in the air triumphantly. Timmy wasn't wearing his shirt or vest, but had his hands raped up in wight bands. When they had entered the ring Timmy had taken them of so that they didn't get hurt. Rev high fived the cat and got out of the ring. Timmy did as well and grabbed his close of a near by chair. As Timmy put back on his shirt he couldn't help but notes two girl anthros checking him out. He blushed as he tried to pay no attention. The girls giggled as they walked past.

Hay-Timmy-why-don't-you-go-talk-to-them?” Rev said, seeing the hole thing.

Ne..I don't think I'm that comfortable.” Timmy replied straitening his vest.

All-right-then.-You-wont-to-try-the-bull-ride?” 

Sure.”

The two walked over to the bull ride only to hear the operator say it was closed.

Sorry folks. But the ride has been having some technical ears so we have to shut it down.” There where a few disappointed groans.

“I mite be able to fix it.” Timmy peeped up.

You can try if you'd like kid. Non of us have been able to make it budge.”

Timmy got up and opened up the robot. He looked at it carefully thin asked for a scow driver and wrench. He made a few adjustments to the wires and gears. He closed it up, but nothing happened. He clenched up his fist and punched the side. The bull soddenly came to life.

Wow way to go kid!

Aw it was nothin'. A few of your wires where fried thats all.” Timmy responded as he got back down. When he did the two girls who ad walked by him before came by  to strike up conversation with him.

Rev watched as Timmy was able to get more comfortable in the conversation. But as he watched Rev started to think of every thing that was happening to Timmy. For the first time sins it all began Rev wondered 'Will Timmy live'.



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...you're a girl? Darn it. I'm sorry, I just sort of assumed you're a boy and... ah, crud.

I like where this story is going, do update soon!

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ruthchang93 wrote:

...you're a girl? Darn it. I'm sorry, I just sort of assumed you're a boy and... ah, crud. I like where this story is going, do update soon!



It okay Ruth. I've though a few of the other member where what they wheren't, and I'm not giving names. As a question WHY did you think I was a boy?

And I hope to post the next chapter SOON! If I timed it right the next chappe will be the last and determen whether or not Timmy will be cured DUH DUN DU!



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All right the FINAL chappe. As you read i wont every one to keep in mind things arn't allways how they seem


Chapter 14

The days turned them selves into weeks sins the day Tech started his testing. Though he came closer and closer he was still incapable of finding a anti-chemical.
Soon came the two month anniversary of the day they found Timmy. Rev was showing Timmy the training room for the first time.

Wow! This room is hug!” The young lad said.

Rev chuckled at his amazement, “Yup-the-trainer-it-prity-big,-and-very-useful-to-us-Loonatics.-It-helps-keep-us-on-edge.” 

Cool...Hay Rev ya think I could try around?” Timmy asked looking up at Rev with hopeful eye.

Hehe-why-not.-Tech-would-be-happy-to-know-you-got-your-exercise-to-day.” Rev answered as he activated a simple combat round and tossed Timmy a wooden staff.

The two fought well against the simple robots, and soon finished felling proud about them selves.

Well-that-was-fun.” Rev said.

Ya.” Timmy said dully as he raped his arms around his stomach.

Some thin' wrong Timmy.” Revs cheerful tone dissolved in to worry.

I'm fine. Jest a little stomachache.” Timmy shrugged.

I-think-you-should-go-see-Tech.-He-told-me-to-take-you-to-him-if-you-have-any-physical-symptoms-of-any-kind.-He-said-it-may-be-a-reaction-from-the-amount-of-blood-test-and-stuff-you've-been-going-through.” Rev said helping Timmy stand.

The two walked into Techs Lab and greeted him with a cheerful hello.

Hay-Tech!-Timmys-felling-a-little-under-the-weather.” Rev said

It's not that bad. It's jest a stomachache.” Timmy added.

Well come on and site so I can get a look at ya.” Tech jestered for Timmy to sit on a med bed that had been stationed in the Lab. Timmy sat and Tech started to check his through, pules, eyes, and breathing.

Well every thing looks normal hear. Did the stomachache come out of no ware?” Tech asked.

Ya.” Timmy replied shacking his head up and down.

Well it sounds like you have a harmless stomach virus. I'll go get you something for it.” Tech said as he started to walk out of the room. Rev followed.

Hay-Tech-how-close-do-you-think-you-are-to-finding-a-cure?” Rev asked.

I'm close,” Tech toke a small bottle of medication from a cabinet, “I can fell it. I jest need a little bit more time...Although I think are times starting to shorten.”

Tech faced Rev. “You-think-you'll-be-able-to-get-it-in-time?”

Tech looked Rev strait in the eye. He opened his mouth to say something but was stoped when they heard Timmy scream.

REV! AHH! TECH!”

Tech dropped the medicine as they ran to Timmy. On the med table Timmy laid shacking.

Oh no!” Tech said.

Rev!” Timmy cried.

I'm hear Timmy! Right hear!” Rev said taking Timmys hand.

It hurts! AHHH! It hurts!” Timmy sat in spasms. Every thing to Rev seemed to stop as a white light came forth engulfing the room. Tears filled his shut eyes.

As the light continued Rev could fell Timmys hand in his diapering till Rev merely had a clenched fist.  The screams of pain dissolved and the light went away. All that was left where two tearful anthros and the close Rev had given Timmy so long ago.

Rev sat on the bed in the room they had set up for Timmy sniffling as he held a red harmonica. The other Loonatics stood in at the door way. Lexi cried into Aces arms as he cried to. Slam and Duck stood in silents with tears falling down there cheeks. Tech didn't cry but remained silent.

Guys lets give Rev some time alone.” Lexi said as she pushed them away.

A tear fell down Revs beak and onto the small interment as heard a harmonica in the back of his mind.

***
Some ware far off from Loonatics HQ, In a underground cavern, a blue hooded figer stood staring at a big screen with pitchers and recording of the Loonatics displayed upon it.

He stood silent, motionless. A nether hooded figer approached him, knelling down.

Leader,” Her voice was soft and had a kindness to it as she knelled, “the Loonatics have passed the first test.” 

Excellent.” The man said with a stern, direct, voice, “Prep the second test. Lets see if they truly are The Guardians.”

THE END.



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Me:WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Oh,Timmy! Why did you have to leave poor Rev like that?!=c
Tito:Don't...be...such...a...baby!
Me:Oh,Tito are you crying?
Tito:(sniff)No...(sniff)I just got something(sniff) in my eyes thats all.........WAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story siamese! I wonder who those people are? hm....

Me:Oh, poor Rev!!! I must comfort him!(hugs and pats Rev)

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Thank you Rev girl, and thoughs people will be reviled after a few more storys of mine.

The next story I shall wright is 'I'm a country Gal' a nother Acexi fic. where Lexis family comes to visit. In this story we see a little more into both Lexis and Aces past.

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awwwwww That story made me happy (As a Rev fan) And the sad! (b/c the ending)

So WOOHOO!!  biggrin BOOHOO!! tears.gif


But it was really good!

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