LAWLS! I can't wait to read more!
Poor Techie! *hands Tech soda crackers and ginger ale* These always make me feel better when I feel sick. That and hot pictures of you!

Tech: Thanks. *is being scarcastic*

Oh man. I don't like the way I think this is going to turn out......
Except for possible Duxi moments *is mauled*

Ducks going to wish he didn't do this. at lest at the end

Duck wants girls to fawn over him? HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAA....

Wait, if that really works, does that mean Lexi and Zadavia will go for him too?

It's about time I continued with the story. And before I start the chapter, yesterday I went to the fun fair on the green with my sisters and my older sis' best friend and her daughter and just as we were getting something to eat, Twilightgirl pointed to something saying "Hey Akira. Look over there. I think they some how know about your fan fic". I spun round to find a fortune-teller in her caravan with the sign saying "Fortune Teller. Get your future told". I was confused. I asked how the hell did they know about the story I'm doing. And Twilightgirl goes "Fortune tellers work in mysterious ways". But enough chat from me. Onwards to the 2nd chapter!

Chapter 2

It's the morning at the HQ, and Slam is making himself a sandwich, Tech is sipping his coffee from the mug, and Rev is strangely gazing into and empty, upside down goldfish bowl on the coffee table. Ace enters from his room and notices the roadrunner oggling at the goldfish bowl.

Ace:  Rev. What are you doing?

Rev:  Well since you and Duck went the fortune teller person and you told me that she made 100 quarsarliums out of one person, I'd thought I'd try predicting the future so when I'm really good, I'll be able to make some money out of it.

Tech:  Okay Mystic Rev, then tell us where Duck is this morning.

Rev:  I shall!

Rev gazes into the goldfish bowl.

Rev: Oh. He is many miles away...

Duck enters two seconds after Rev said his "prediction" in a white disco suit and has a huge, black afro on top of his head. The other's expressions change into suprised faces.

Rev: What I meant to say was... he's many decades away.

Tech: Duck. What are you wearing?

Duck:  How do you mean?

Ace:  Well it's hard to miss the jump suit and the afro.

Duck:  What are you talking about?

Duck looks in the floor mirror and only sees himself in his normal uniform.

Duck:  I look completely normal.

Tech turns to Ace.

Tech:  Ace. You were the last person with him yesterday. What happened?

Ace: Umm lets see. Went to the carnival fair, entered a mysterious tent, a fortune teller put a curse on him, other than that nothing.

Tech:  What was the last part?

Ace:  Other than that nothing?

Tech: No. The part before that.

Ace:  A fortune teller put a curse on him.

Rev:  To be what? A fashion reject!?

Ace: She put a curse on him to be irresistable to every girl who sees him.

Tech: Well she made a pretty bad job of it! What normal woman would think Duck in his present state is irresistable!?

Duck: I'm going to put some music on.

Duck turns on the CD player to the classic disco song from the BeeGees "Staying Alive Remix".

Tech: I mean... Look at him!

Rev:  Well it could be worse. Duck could be singing and dancing.

Duck:   Well you can tell from the way I walk and all... (I don't know the words to most bits of the song so bear with me.)

Ace:  Yeah. What self respecting girl would get attracted to... that? 

Lexi then enters the living room from her room.

Lexi:  Hey guys. What's-

She sees Duck.

Lexi: ...  going on?

Slam waves his hand in front of her face.

Rev: Oh no! It works on Lexi too!

Lexi: Wow... Isn't he gorgeous?

Ace: No! Lexi!

Lexi: His dance moves are so hypnotic don't you think?

Tech:  About as hypnotic as a finger nails screeching on a chalk board.

Lexi:  And his voice is as beautiful like a nightingale.

Ace:  Oh he's a singing bird alright! A dying Duck!

Tech:  This is some powerful magic we're dealing with here.

Ace:  I just hope she doesn't get too frisky with him!!!

END OF CHAPTER 2.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 14:27, 2007-08-04

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 15:22, 2007-08-08

LOL, this made me laff. Duck is cooked if this curse goes farther than he expected. And of course it will. So our mallard friend is officially a dead duck.

LOL!!! Ooooooh!!! This is gettin' good!!!

Tech:  What was the last part?

Ace:  Other than that nothing?

Tech: No. The part before that.
I laughed at that part XD. Can't wait for the next part

Finally! I'm actually writing another chapter! Sorry it took so long. I was so busy for the last few days but here it is. Chapter 3.

Chapter 3

Rev:  So now what are we gonna do? Lexi is practically all over him!

Ace: Live in hope that Zadavia doesn't call us today.

As if on cue, the alarm sets off.

Ace: Oh carrot sticks!

After everyone (including Duck) enters the meeting room, Zadavia appears on a hologram.

Zadavia: Greetings Loonatics. And- Oh my... Duck. You look very handsome today? Have you done something different to your hair? You looks so sexy with it.

Tech:  Oh no! Not Zadavia too! I'd thought she'd be mature enough to resist the curse!

Ace:  Zadavia! Just give us the mission and log out!

Zadavia:  Oh. Sorry. I don't know what came over me. Anyway, there is a villain who is called The Shadow Crawler. We do not know their appearance yet. But they are at the local park, causing mayhem. This villain must be stopped before they cause anymore chaos.

Ace:  So that's it?

Zadavia: No. Duck... I do like your suit. It certainly makes you look-

Tech presses the end of message button as her hologram disappears.

Tech:  I think that's enough of that!

Duck:  Aw come on Tech! She was about to say I look good for once.  Wonder what bought it on though.

Ace:  Okay! Loonatics! Lets Jet! And Lexi! You have to let go of Duck to get your jet pack on!

Lexi:  Why? I wanna share with Duck.

Ace: PUT YOUR OWN JET PACK ON!!!
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The citizens of the city are fleeing out the park as the Shadow Crawler marches along with their shadow army. The villain notices an innocent child throwing crumbs of bread to the ducks at the pond. They lift their arm up to lift the child's shadow up, they manipulate the shadow to snatch the loaf of bread off the kid and throw it at the ducks in the pond. One of the ducks gets hit with the heavy loaf of bread and the villain gives an evil smirk as the duck flips onto it's back in the pond with it''s feet pointing upwards in the air. The child runs away crying as the villain laughs.

Shadow Crawler: Ah ha ha ha! No-one can stop me now!

Suddenly they see the Loonatics land in front of them.

Ace:  Lexi! I said you can't hold onto him while we're flying in the air!

Lexi:  But I like Duck and I don't want him to leave me.

Duck:  Lexi. I like you too. But this is making me feel a little uncomfortable.

Shadow Crawler:  So... it's you who is going to stop me. Well we can't have that. I think it's time for you to meet my little friends.

They lift their arm up again as the Loonatics shadows spring up and face them in fighting stances.

Shadow Crawler:  Loonatics. Meet the shadow Loonatics. Attack!

The shadows start attacking the Loonatics as they do their best to fend them off. A few minutes later, Duck manages to shake off his shadow and quacks behind the Shadow Crawler and jump on their back.

Duck:  Not even my shadow can stop a hero from catching the villain!

Shadow Crawler grabs Duck's arm and was about to throw him in the air when they froze on the spot. The Loonatic's shadows suddenly disappear as the Loonatics stop in their stances. 

Tech:  What's going on? They... retreated.

Ace looks at the villain holding Duck.

Ace: Oh no! It can't be!

Shadow Crawler: Oh my! Are you alright? I hope I didn't hurt you too much.

All the male Loonatics apart from Duck: The Shadow Crawler's a girl!?

END OF CHAPTER 3.

BAHAWW HAHAHAH HEHEH HO BAWW HAHAHA....
*caches breth*....Sorry but *snicer* Was jest to funny. 
* starts laghing agen*
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-- Edited by Siamese712 at 16:18, 2007-08-08

I always wanted to hear Zadavia say "you looks so sexy".

Chapter 4

Tech: I don't believe it! The one day when Duck has a curse of attracting girls, and the villain we're fighting just happens to be a girl!

Duck turns to Shadow Crawler.

Duck:  So you're not gonna hurt me?

Shadow Crawler: Of course not. Why would I want to do that?

Lexi:  Because you're a villain! And he already has a girlfriend! Me!

Lexi grabs Duck's spare arm.

Lexi:  He's mine!

Shadow Crawler:  No! He's mine!

Lexi:  Back off!

Shadow Crawler:  Make me!

Duck: GAAAH! PLEASE DON'T TEAR ME IN HALF! I'M A VERY SENSITIVE DUCK!

Rev: We really need to get Duck out of there.

Tech: Don't worry! I've called the police! They should be here any minute!

A police car turns up and some female police officers climb out of the car. They see Duck and immediately charge to him where they try and grab what ever they can of Duck.

Police woman 1:  You're all under arrest for being with the duck I love!

Police woman 2: The duck I love you mean!

Shadow Crawler:  I was with him first! So he's mine!

Lexi: But I was the first one to see him! So he's mine! Back off!

Ace: Lexi! Get off Duck! You're meant to like me!

Ace grabs Lexi's arm and tries to pull her off Duck!

Lexi: Get off me Ace! Duck is the one I love!

Rev: Oh no! It even works on guys now!

Tech: We have to get everyone off Duck and back at the HQ! CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRGE!!!

Slam, Tech and Rev charges towards Duck and tries to peel the girls off Duck.

Duck: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! EVERYONE'S ALL OVER ME! GAAAAAAAAAHH!!!  I WISH I WAS MY UNATTRACTIVE SELF AGAIN!!!

Suddenly, Duck changes back to normal in a puff of smoke. When the smoke clears, he's in his uniform again and the girls take a step back away from him.

Police woman 1:  Ugh! He's so... uncool.

Police woman 2: Yeah. Lets arrest this villain and get out of here.

They put the handcuffs on Shadow Crawler.

Shadow Crawler:  Ugh! Yuck! I can't believe I touched a good guy! Ew! Especially someone as unattractive as him! I'll get you next time Loonatics!

The police women puts Shadow Crawler in the police car and drive away. Lexi turns to Ace in confusion as the rest of the guys let go of Duck.

Lexi:  What's going on? Ace. What's going on?

Ace:  Trust me. You do not want to know. Really. You don't.

Duck: Oh! I'm unattractive again!

Rev:  Don't worry Duck. At least you don't have to have hordes off girls surrounding you from left, right, and center.

Ace:  And you can back off from Lexi! She's mine!!!

Duck:  Okay. Okay. I get the message.

All the Loonatics fly off back to the HQ.

END OF CHAPTER 4. 

*dies from halarity*

Hehehe...ones agen a realy funny chappe A-cat. good job

He he, bump and tumble moment XD

Aw how sweet Danger found a girl

*dies from halarity again*

Luc Bunny - A bump and tumble moment indeed. I found it pretty difficult to put a satisfying ending for this fan fic. But my imagination helps me in the end.

Zadavia's Spirit - Yeah. Originally, I was trying to find as many girls as possible to glomp him. But then I thought: "Why don't the rest of the guys get involved"? I like that particular part too.

Black Cat - Yep. By complete accident. Hee hee!

Cassidy Coyote - Oh noes! I killed Cassidy by humor! I'm sure to get arrested again by this!

Siamese712 - I don't know myself. I just thought Duck should have a happy ending instead of being disappointed through out. Plus I wanted to make Ace act over-dramatic over the ending. Hee hee!

Thank you everyone for the comments! And as promised, I will make the Duxi fic ASAP!  

Awww, my computer crashes for a few days and Akira's already written another fanfic!

Pegasusmon: That's life kid.

Me: Shut up.

Akira, its so FUNNY! And its sweet that Duck finds a girl....and we can tease him about it! *bricked by Duckies*

 

I say that the girl is Oddity!!

Nice story, Akira! I loved it!

Zadavia: Greetings Loonatics. And- Oh my... Duck. You look very handsome today? Have you done something different to your hair? You looks so sexy with it.
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OMFG! That is sooooo funny! I have never heard Zadavia say that before! *dies from laffter*
Amazing story, Akira_Cat! *drinks coffee* *spits coffee out and starts laffing her head off*

Eddie: Great. *wipes face*