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I got bored being home alone so I'm writing this cos it's a comedy that I wanted to write for ages and I laugh at the ideas I got up my sleeves that I want to unleash. Here it is! Sudden Attraction!

Chapter 1

A carnival fun fair is taking part at the Acmetropolis park and the Loonatics are walking around a carnival.

Rev: biggrin Oh man! That roller-coaster was so fast and I was like "Yeeeeeeeeeeaaaaahhh!!! I'm on top of the world"!

Tech: dead.gif And I was like "Ugh! I think I'm gonna be sick".


Tech's cheeks suddenly blow out and runs to the nearest bin to puke in. Rev runs after Tech as Lexi turns to Ace and holds up a pink and purple striped tiger.

Lexi: smile And Slam won this cuddly toy for me at the Can Knock Out Stall. Thanks Slam.

Slam: blush.gif


Duck: omfg.gif Hey Ace! Look at that tent! A fortune-teller! evileye I wonder what the future's got in store for me!

Duck grabs Ace's arm and drags him along.

Ace: cry Duck!

Lexi: smile Okay guys. We'll see you later at the HQ. Come on Slam. Lets help Rev see to Tech.

Slam nods his head as the two pairs separate. Duck and Ace reach the tent as they enter. They see and old gypsy woman in a purple shawl sitting on a chair next to the table with the round crystal ball sitting on a fancy stand.

Duck: evileye So you must be Lady Esmarelda, on the sign?

Esmalrelda: nod.gif Indeed I am. And I suppose you want your fortune's told?

Duck: That's what you're here more is it?

Esmareda: Alright. But first you must give me a little offering. 50 quarsalriliums should do it.

Duck passes the money to her as she concentrates into her crystal ball.

Duck: I wonder what fame and forune I'll come across. Maybe a few pretty girls if I'm lucky.

Ace: evileye Duck. You have as much luck as you walking under a ladder after crossing a cats path without you holding a four leaf clover and a horse shoe the right way up.

Duck: evileye You're just jealous cos I make an effort.

Ace looks at Esmarelda.

Ace: smile Oh and give it to him straight. He can't stand the mumbo-jumbo riddle that he seems to think you speak.

Esmarelda: nod.gif Very well.

She gazes a little longer into the crystal ball.

Esmarelda: Ah. smile The mist is clearing.

Duck: weirdface What? What is it?

Esmarelda: You will always be rubbish with girls.

Duck: furious Hey! That's not very nice!

Esmarelda: evileye Well you wanted it straight.

Duck: furious Not that straight!

Ace: Okay Duck. Lets go. You had your fotune told.

Duck: mad.gif Wait! You're a fortune-teller. How do I get girls to like me?

Esmarelda: I do not do those sort of things young man. I tell the future for people.

Ace: cry See. She can't do nothing about it. Lets go!

Esmarelda: evileye But there is one way you can look attractive to every girl in sight.

Duck: weirdface Really? How?

Ace: omfg.gif Duck! What are you doing!?

Esmarelda: evileye Give me another 50 quasarliums and I'll tell you.

Ace: mad.gif Don't encourage him!

Duck: mad.gif Ace! You've got plenty of girls that fawn all over you! I want some girls to like me for a change.

Esmarelda: evileye Be careful what you wish for! You might just get it.

Duck: furious I want it!

Ace: omfg.gif Duck! No! Don't do this!

Esmarelda: evileye Gaze into the crystal ball, and you shall get your hearts desire.

Ace: omfg.gif Duck! Don't! Noooooooo!!!

But Duck ignores Ace's pleas and gazes deeply into the crystal ball...

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LAWLS! I can't wait to read more!
Poor Techie! *hands Tech soda crackers and ginger ale* These always make me feel better when I feel sick. That and hot pictures of you! aww.gif

Tech: Thanks. *is being scarcastic*

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hehe this is one of thoughs story where you learn your beter off the way you are, isin't it?
Or in sipiller terms Be carfall what you wish for, It jest mite come true

Good lookin story A-Cat

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Oh man. I don't like the way I think this is going to turn out......
Except for possible Duxi moments biggrin.gif *is mauled*

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Oooo, what will Duck see within the crystal ball? Maybe that fortune-teller will inflict a love curse on Duck! LOL!

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Ducks going to wish he didn't do this. at lest at the end

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Ooooh! this is great!!! Sooo....Duck wants girls to fawn over him does he?

-imagnes out of control dream- heh heh heh....sweet....

I cant wait for the next chapter!

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Duck wants girls to fawn over him? HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAA....

Wait, if that really works, does that mean Lexi and Zadavia will go for him too?

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This sounds fun! He may gather some unwanted attention.....

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It's about time I continued with the story. And before I start the chapter, yesterday I went to the fun fair on the green with my sisters and my older sis' best friend and her daughter and just as we were getting something to eat, Twilightgirl pointed to something saying "Hey Akira. Look over there. I think they some how know about your fan fic". I spun round to find a fortune-teller in her caravan with the sign saying "Fortune Teller. Get your future told". I was confused. I asked how the hell did they know about the story I'm doing. And Twilightgirl goes "Fortune tellers work in mysterious ways". But enough chat from me. Onwards to the 2nd chapter!

Chapter 2

It's the morning at the HQ, and Slam is making himself a sandwich, Tech is sipping his coffee from the mug, and Rev is strangely gazing into and empty, upside down goldfish bowl on the coffee table. Ace enters from his room and notices the roadrunner oggling at the goldfish bowl.

Ace: weirdface Rev. What are you doing?

Rev: smile Well since you and Duck went the fortune teller person and you told me that she made 100 quarsarliums out of one person, I'd thought I'd try predicting the future so when I'm really good, I'll be able to make some money out of it.

Tech: evileye Okay Mystic Rev, then tell us where Duck is this morning.

Rev: biggrin I shall!

Rev gazes into the goldfish bowl.

Rev: Oh. He is many miles away...

Duck enters two seconds after Rev said his "prediction" in a white disco suit and has a huge, black afro on top of his head. The other's expressions change into suprised faces.

Rev: What I meant to say was... he's many decades away.

Tech: Duck. What are you wearing?

Duck: weirdface How do you mean?

Ace: reading.gif Well it's hard to miss the jump suit and the afro.

Duck: confused What are you talking about?

Duck looks in the floor mirror and only sees himself in his normal uniform.

Duck: smile I look completely normal.

Tech turns to Ace.

Tech: cry Ace. You were the last person with him yesterday. What happened?

Ace: reading.gif Umm lets see. Went to the carnival fair, entered a mysterious tent, a fortune teller put a curse on him, other than that nothing.

Tech: confused What was the last part?

Ace: blankstare Other than that nothing?

Tech: disbelief.gif No. The part before that.

Ace: blankstare A fortune teller put a curse on him.

Rev: cry To be what? A fashion reject!?

Ace: reading.gif She put a curse on him to be irresistable to every girl who sees him.

Tech: mad.gif Well she made a pretty bad job of it! What normal woman would think Duck in his present state is irresistable!?

Duck: I'm going to put some music on.

Duck turns on the CD player to the classic disco song from the BeeGees "Staying Alive Remix".

Tech: mad.gif I mean... Look at him!

Rev: cry Well it could be worse. Duck could be singing and dancing.

Duck: biggrin sing.gif Well you can tell from the way I walk and all... (I don't know the words to most bits of the song so bear with me.)

Ace: weirdface Yeah. What self respecting girl would get attracted to... that? 

Lexi then enters the living room from her room.

Lexi: smile Hey guys. What's-

She sees Duck.

Lexi: ... xd.gif going on?

Slam waves his hand in front of her face.

Rev: omfg.gif Oh no! It works on Lexi too!

Lexi: xd.gifheart.gif Wow... Isn't he gorgeous?

Ace: jawdrop.gif No! Lexi!

Lexi: xd.gif His dance moves are so hypnotic don't you think?

Tech: hmm About as hypnotic as a finger nails screeching on a chalk board.

Lexi: aww And his voice is as beautiful like a nightingale.

Ace: furious Oh he's a singing bird alright! A dying Duck!

Tech: weirdface This is some powerful magic we're dealing with here.

Ace: furious I just hope she doesn't get too frisky with him!!!

END OF CHAPTER 2.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 14:27, 2007-08-04

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Lexi: And his voice is as beautiful like a nightingale.

Ace: Oh he's a singing bird alright! A dying Duck!

Tech: This is some powerful magic we're dealing with here.

Ace: I just hope she doesn't get too frisky with him!!!
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Hehehehe that made me laghe big time!!
Loved the chapter A-cat!!

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LOL, this made me laff. Duck is cooked if this curse goes farther than he expected. And of course it will. So our mallard friend is officially a dead duck.

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This is hilarious! Write more!

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LOL!!! Ooooooh!!! This is gettin' good!!!biggrin


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Akira_Cat wrote:



Rev: Oh. He is many miles away...

Duck enters two seconds after Rev said his "prediction" in a white disco suit and has a huge, black afro on top of his head. The other's expressions change into suprised faces.

Rev: What I meant to say was... he's many decades away.


Ahahahahahahahaha.

Hahahahahaha.


Nice. biggrin

 



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Tech: confused What was the last part?

Ace: blankstare Other than that nothing?

Tech: disbelief.gif No. The part before that.

I laughed at that part XD. Can't wait for the next part


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LOL. This story is funny, and a tad Acexi ish if you ask me. evileye
For Ace dousin't seem to like Duck attracting Lex.biggrin

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Finally! I'm actually writing another chapter! Sorry it took so long. I was so busy for the last few days but here it is. Chapter 3.

Chapter 3

Rev: weirdface So now what are we gonna do? Lexi is practically all over him!

Ace: Live in hope that Zadavia doesn't call us today.

As if on cue, the alarm sets off.

Ace: worry.gif Oh carrot sticks!

After everyone (including Duck) enters the meeting room, Zadavia appears on a hologram.

Zadavia: Greetings Loonatics. And- xd.gifheart.gif Oh my... Duck. You look very handsome today? Have you done something different to your hair? You looks so sexy with it.

Tech: cry Oh no! Not Zadavia too! I'd thought she'd be mature enough to resist the curse!

Ace: cry Zadavia! Just give us the mission and log out!

Zadavia: weirdface Oh. Sorry. I don't know what came over me. Anyway, there is a villain who is called The Shadow Crawler. We do not know their appearance yet. But they are at the local park, causing mayhem. This villain must be stopped before they cause anymore chaos.

Ace: weirdface So that's it?

Zadavia: No. xd.gif Duck... I do like your suit. It certainly makes you look-

Tech presses the end of message button as her hologram disappears.

Tech: furious I think that's enough of that!

Duck: cry Aw come on Tech! She was about to say I look good for once. hmm Wonder what bought it on though.

Ace: furious Okay! Loonatics! Lets Jet! And Lexi! You have to let go of Duck to get your jet pack on!

Lexi: weirdface Why? I wanna share with Duck.

Ace: angered.gifPUT YOUR OWN JET PACK ON!!!
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The citizens of the city are fleeing out the park as the Shadow Crawler marches along with their shadow army. The villain notices an innocent child throwing crumbs of bread to the ducks at the pond. They lift their arm up to lift the child's shadow up, they manipulate the shadow to snatch the loaf of bread off the kid and throw it at the ducks in the pond. One of the ducks gets hit with the heavy loaf of bread and the villain gives an evil smirk as the duck flips onto it's back in the pond with it''s feet pointing upwards in the air. The child runs away crying as the villain laughs.

Shadow Crawler: laughing.gif Ah ha ha ha! No-one can stop me now!

Suddenly they see the Loonatics land in front of them.

Ace: furious Lexi! I said you can't hold onto him while we're flying in the air!

Lexi: cry But I like Duck and I don't want him to leave me.

Duck: cry Lexi. I like you too. But this is making me feel a little uncomfortable.

Shadow Crawler: evileye So... it's you who is going to stop me. Well we can't have that. I think it's time for you to meet my little friends.

They lift their arm up again as the Loonatics shadows spring up and face them in fighting stances.

Shadow Crawler: evileye Loonatics. Meet the shadow Loonatics. Attack!

The shadows start attacking the Loonatics as they do their best to fend them off. A few minutes later, Duck manages to shake off his shadow and quacks behind the Shadow Crawler and jump on their back.

Duck: evileye Not even my shadow can stop a hero from catching the villain!

Shadow Crawler grabs Duck's arm and was about to throw him in the air when they froze on the spot. The Loonatic's shadows suddenly disappear as the Loonatics stop in their stances. 

Tech: weirdface What's going on? They... retreated.

Ace looks at the villain holding Duck.

Ace: omfg.gif Oh no! It can't be!

Shadow Crawler: xd.gifheart.gif Oh my! Are you alright? I hope I didn't hurt you too much.

All the male Loonatics apart from Duck: jawdrop.gif The Shadow Crawler's a girl!?

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rofl.gifrofl.gif So bloody hilarious! XD


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BAHAWW HAHAHAH HEHEH HO BAWW HAHAHA....
*caches breth*....Sorry but *snicer* Was jest to funny. 
* starts laghing agen*
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*kills self laughing*

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I always wanted to hear Zadavia say "you looks so sexy".

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Oh the twist is great! I think the Shadow and Lexi may get into a fight....

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Chapter 4

Tech: omfg.gif I don't believe it! The one day when Duck has a curse of attracting girls, and the villain we're fighting just happens to be a girl!

Duck turns to Shadow Crawler.

Duck: weirdface So you're not gonna hurt me?

Shadow Crawler: xd.gif Of course not. Why would I want to do that?

Lexi: furious Because you're a villain! And he already has a girlfriend! Me!

Lexi grabs Duck's spare arm.

Lexi: furious He's mine!

Shadow Crawler: furious No! He's mine!

Lexi: furious Back off!

Shadow Crawler: furious Make me!

Duck: fear.gif GAAAH! PLEASE DON'T TEAR ME IN HALF! I'M A VERY SENSITIVE DUCK!

Rev: fear.gif We really need to get Duck out of there.

Tech: Don't worry! I've called the police! They should be here any minute!

A police car turns up and some female police officers climb out of the car. They see Duck and immediately charge to him where they try and grab what ever they can of Duck.

Police woman 1: furious You're all under arrest for being with the duck I love!

Police woman 2: rage.gif The duck I love you mean!

Shadow Crawler: furious I was with him first! So he's mine!

Lexi: rage.gif But I was the first one to see him! So he's mine! Back off!

Ace: rage.gif Lexi! Get off Duck! You're meant to like me!

Ace grabs Lexi's arm and tries to pull her off Duck!

Lexi: rage.gif Get off me Ace! Duck is the one I love!

Rev: omfg.gif Oh no! It even works on guys now!

Tech: omfg.gif We have to get everyone off Duck and back at the HQ! rage.gif CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRGE!!!

Slam, Tech and Rev charges towards Duck and tries to peel the girls off Duck.

Duck: buggered.gif GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! EVERYONE'S ALL OVER ME! GAAAAAAAAAHH!!! fear.gif I WISH I WAS MY UNATTRACTIVE SELF AGAIN!!!

Suddenly, Duck changes back to normal in a puff of smoke. When the smoke clears, he's in his uniform again and the girls take a step back away from him.

Police woman 1: bleh Ugh! He's so... uncool.

Police woman 2: Yeah. Lets arrest this villain and get out of here.

They put the handcuffs on Shadow Crawler.

Shadow Crawler: bleh Ugh! Yuck! I can't believe I touched a good guy! Ew! Especially someone as unattractive as him! angered.gif I'll get you next time Loonatics!

The police women puts Shadow Crawler in the police car and drive away. Lexi turns to Ace in confusion as the rest of the guys let go of Duck.

Lexi: confused What's going on? Ace. What's going on?

Ace: no.gif Trust me. You do not want to know. Really. You don't.

Duck: worry.gif Oh! I'm unattractive again!

Rev: smile Don't worry Duck. At least you don't have to have hordes off girls surrounding you from left, right, and center.

Ace: furious And you can back off from Lexi! She's mine!!!

Duck: hmm Okay. Okay. I get the message.

All the Loonatics fly off back to the HQ.

END OF CHAPTER 4. 

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Hehehe...ones agen a realy funny chappe A-cat. good job

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Last chapter! Chapter 5!

Chapter 5

All the Loonatics apart from Duck are in the coffee shop drinking... coffee. They are all wearing casual clothes so they wouldn't stick out like a sore thumb.

Lexi: weirdface I can't believe I actually fallen in love with him. I like him as a friend but being in love with him is kind of... creepy.

Ace: hmm And all because of a curse that the fortune teller put on him.

Rev: smile Which is the reason Duck isn't coming out today?

Tech: Most probably.

Lexi: I'm just wondering how he's gonna show his face in Acmetropolis. With the amount of girls that fell for him on the way to that mission, who knows how they're gonna react.

Suddenly, a mysterious person in a brown mackintosh enters the coffee shop and approaches the table the Loonatics are sitting at.

???: gadget.gif Pssst! Is it safe here?

Ace: smile Don't worry Duck. There's no girls that you'll recognise.

Duck takes the coat off and sits down with them.

Duck: cry I swear. After yesterday, I never want to see another pretty girl for as long as I live.

Rev: giggle.gif Tee hee. But you have to admit, that was funny.

Slam: giggle.gif Hee hee!

Duck: furious Hmph! I'm going to get a cup of coffee.

Duck gets up from his seat and walks towards the coffee bar when he bumps into a girl carrying a cup of coffee. The coffee is spilt and both land on the floor.

Duck: Ah! Sorry! I wasn't looking where I was going.

Girl: No. It's my fault! I should have concentrated while holding the coffee.

They both look up to each other and gaze at each other gormlessly. The other Loonatics observe the situation as the song "Love is in the air" plays on the radio.

Ace: fear.gif Oh no. Please no...

Duck:weirdface Um... let me clean that up for you.

Girl: No! Let me!

They start to clear up the mess when their hands accidently touch each other. They stare at each other gormlessly again as the air of romance fills the room.

Ace: jawdrop.gif Noooooooooo!!! This cannot be happening! I refuse to let this sort of scene take place here!

Lexi grabs Ace's arm.

Lexi: aww Leave him. I think it's his first chance of finding love without a curse hanging over him.

Rev: smile Are they gonna kiss!?

Tech: mad.gif If they do, you're not looking.

Tech covers Rev's eyes with his hands.

Rev: crying.gif Hey! I can't see!

Tech: hmm That's the whole purpose!

Everyone stares dumbfoundly as the romantic scene between Duck and a girl unfolds...

THE END.

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He he, bump and tumble moment XD

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1,2,3...
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I loved it when they all charged at him. *also dies from hilarity*

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Aw how sweet Danger found a girl

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Nice ending that was cute how Duck bump and tumble into the girl. A clasic way of meating someone to love

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*dies from halarity again*

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Adorable ending A-Cat.
Duck found a girlefriend. Or at lest I think he did the endings not to clear on that
Any whays good story in was funny and the ending was cute

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Luc Bunny - A bump and tumble moment indeed. I found it pretty difficult to put a satisfying ending for this fan fic. But my imagination helps me in the end.

Zadavia's Spirit - Yeah. Originally, I was trying to find as many girls as possible to glomp him. But then I thought: "Why don't the rest of the guys get involved"? I like that particular part too.

Black Cat - Yep. By complete accident. giggle.gif Hee hee!

Cassidy Coyote - omfg.gif Oh noes! I killed Cassidy by humor! I'm sure to get arrested again by this!

Siamese712 - I don't know myself. I just thought Duck should have a happy ending instead of being disappointed through out. Plus I wanted to make Ace act over-dramatic over the ending. giggle.gif Hee hee!

Thank you everyone for the comments! And as promised, I will make the Duxi fic ASAP!  

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Duck did deserve to have a happy ending, after all the embaressing things that happened to him.

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Awww, my computer crashes for a few days and Akira's already written another fanfic!

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Me: Shut up.

Akira, its so FUNNY! And its sweet that Duck finds a girl....and we can tease him about it! *bricked by Duckies*

 

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Akira_Cat wrote:
Cassidy Coyote - omfg.gif Oh noes! I killed Cassidy by humor! I'm sure to get arrested again by this!


You should start your own seminar/clinic/class and call it "Killing With Humor". =P

I like how Tech covered Rev's eyes as if he were his father or something.

 



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I say that the girl is Oddity!!

Nice story, Akira! I loved it!

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Duck finally gets all the female attention he could ever hope for and realizes how scary it can be! Nice little comedy once again Akira!

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Zadavia: Greetings Loonatics. And- Oh my... Duck. You look very handsome today? Have you done something different to your hair? You looks so sexy with it.
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OMFG! That is sooooo funny! I have never heard Zadavia say that before! *dies from laffter*
Amazing story, Akira_Cat! *drinks coffee* *spits coffee out and starts laffing her head off*

Eddie: Great. *wipes face* dizzy.gif

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great story i reckon that girl was the oddity....

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great story i reckon that girl was the oddity....

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