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Okay! Here's the Duxi fic you've been waiting for! I'll give you a clue to what the story is all about. First of all is the title. And secondly, I watched episodes where Duck displays some very flambouyant movements (epspecially in "Creep from the Deep" and a little bit of "Apocolypso").

Chapter 1

"Bzzz! Bzzz! Bzzz! Bzzz! Bzzz!"

Lexi turned over to the buzzing alarm clock in her hammock and gave a groan. She pressed the button on the alarm clock to stop the cruel sound from torturing her in the morning. She sat up on the hammock and stretched her arms and gave a tired yawn. As she lowered her arms, she looked upon her gymnastic medals that hung around the table and certificates displaying her name and then gazed upon the picture in the picture frame of her posing in a proffessional pose like all gymnasts did. Lexi gave a smile.

"That was only when I was eleven." she said to herself.
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Lexi entered the dining room tying her hair up with the green ribbon around her ears as she approached Ace, Slam and Tech sitting around the table. She looked around to see Rev making his "Pick Me Up" milkshake. She noticed that Duck wasn't anywhere to be seen.

"So you haven't seen Duck this morning?" Lexi asked Ace.

"Have you?" He asked back at her as he was dealing with some paper work. "He hasn't been here all morning for the last four days."

"Yeah." Rev interrupted. "He doesn't appear in the morning but then appears in the afternoon. And when we ask where he's been, he either says it isn't any of our business or he ignores us and walks off. Something's really wrong. Do you think he's ill?"

"I very much doubt it Rev." Tech sipped his coffee. "Although, he does seem out of breath when he answers. So he must have been training in the training room most probably."

"But what for?" Ace wondered. "He can't do that much of training for the last four days. I wonder what started him off to do more practice."

"Maybe he wanted to improve his performance in missions." Slam piped up.

"Well there wasn't anything major in the last mission that he did to think that he needed more training. And that was a week ago." Ace said.

Lexi decided to exit the room as Ace spotted her disappearing.

"Where are you going?" Ace asked her.

"I think I forgot something from my room." She answered as she turned the corner.

Lexi walked down the hallway until she heard some music from her hearing powers.

"Music? It's coming from the training room?" She said in confusion.

She quietly crept towards the doors to the training room. She pressed the button to gain entrance. The doors hissed as she entered. She hid behind a wall where she saw Duck setting up a portable CD player with a long, black box sitting next to the radio. She kept focus on him as he turned to the box and opened it. Lexi couldn't see what he was getting out because he had his back turned to her. But until he turned around, she gave a puzzled look to see what he was holding in his right hand.

"A baton?" She whispered to herself. "Then that means..."

Duck pressed the play button on the portable CD and stood into a position which made him look like he had a string pulling from the top of his head. Two seconds later and the song began to play. Lexi recognised the song playing was "I'll get over you" by DJ Carlie so she knew it was an energetic and upbeat song.

From the very first moment you caught my eye
You were wearing nothing I've ever seen in my life
I caught your attention as you a passed me a smile
You bought me a drink we talked for a while.


She then saw Duck twirling the silver baton in his hand and then moving gracefully but sharply to the energetic music.

About amazing things
of what life brings
And then we kissed and said goodbye
I'll get over you.


Duck then tossed his baton in the air and did a backwards somersault in the air. Lexi's eyes opened wide as he landed on his feet and raised his right arm and caught the baton just in time.

Don't think you can get me down
There's nothing when you're around
As long as you're not around
I'll make it through and I'll get over you
Cos you are not worth my heart
You'll never have any part
Don't hurt me or I will start
I'll tell you again and I'll get over you.

Duck displayed a few cartwheels and flips and movements that were all familiar to Lexi.

I've been walking around with my head in the clouds
Sweet talk in stake, I would shiver and hide
Shared the intimate scene with my love
What if your words aren't long enough?


Lexi felt like she had never been so overwhelmed before. She was entranced by the amount of skills he demonstrated of his gymnastic abilities. She even felt that maybe he was even better than herself at what she had done best.

To fufill my needs
Replace my sheets
And then I saw that I was delirious
I'll get over you.


But she was to interested in the hypnotic movements that he was carrying out. He leapt in the air and twirled the baton again before he sunk into the floor to display the fancy moves onto the floor.

Don't think you can get me down
There's nothing when you're around
As long as you're not around
I'll make it through and I'll get over you
Cos you're not worth my heart
You'll never have any part
Don't hurt or I will start
I'll tell you again and I'll get over you.


Duck twirled the baton even more and done some explosive movements for the chorus. Lexi couldn't believe she still had her eyes fixed on Duck. She was that impressed with what Duck does secretly.

"Why didn't he say anything about it?" Lexi thought.

There are some intentions in your cruel games
You play with so many, we're all the same
I should have known who I'd believe
I was flying high ,I was full indeed
So you're heart is stone
Just leaving me alone
I've had enough to resist you're cruel
I'll get over you.

Duck skipped to the far corner of the room for what appeared to be his grand finale of movements.

"But then again, if he did say anything about this, they'd probably think he was joking." Lexi thought again. "And even if they did believe him, he'd probably think they'd laugh at him." 

The chorus of the song repeated as he displayed a triple somersault with two backflips and finally throwing the baton in the air. Lexi subconsciously walked out from her hiding place and approached the window where Duck did a final back flip.

Don't think you can get me down
There's nothing when you're around
As long as you're not around
I'll make it through and I'll get over you.


"Duck?" Lexi said with the mixture of confusion and amazement on her face.

Duck snapped out of his proffesional state and spun around to hear the voice from behind him. But before he could see Lexi, the baton bounced on top of his head and landed on the floor. Duck rubbed his head from where the baton hit his head. But as he took a step forward he stood on the baton and his foot rolled on top of it, making him fall backwards onto the CD player to turn the next song off. Lexi gave a gasp of panic and rushed down the stairs to console a moaning Duck.

END OF CHAPTER 1.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 12:07, 2007-08-12

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So Duck is good at gymnastics.

Well cool. I think it takes a diferent kinda man to do gymnastics.
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Yay! A Duxi fic!

I do have to agree with you - Duck does seem to show some good acrobatic skills in the episodes: like in Acmegeddon when he was distracting the robots  during the fight against Optimatus and he did a perfect multiple cartwheel. Or in 'The Hunter' when he complained about how popular Ace was and he did a head stand which in reality is a complicated thing to do.

I like where this is going. Keep it up!

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Chapter 2

Lexi ran down the fleet of stairs and sprinted up to Duck.

"Are you okay?" she asked with concern.

Duck slowly sat up and gave another groan from the pain.

"I'm fine." he assured. "Nothing broken."

Lexi gave a sigh of relief.

"Cos I was just about to say that your gymnastic skills from there are unbelivable."

"I wasn't doing gymnastics!" Duck denied. "I was fighting along with the music. Ace said that sometimes when you get into the rhythm of combat, it helps you fight. So I was just wondering if what he said was true."

"Then how come you were using a baton?" Lexi interrogated. "You don't normally carry something like that along with you."

"It was just incase I didn't have a weapon like a gun for instance." Duck answered. "Ace sometimes uses a bamboo stick or something to defend himself."

"But Ace has his sword to do that." Lexi said.

"But what if he loses is sword?" Duck exclaimed. "Then what will he do?"

"Duck. I saw you doing gymnastics with that silver baton, to the music." Lexi frowned. "You might as well give up."

The mallard sighed and then crossed his legs.

"Okay. I give up." Duck confessed. "I... was doing rhythmic gymnastics."

He hung his head down.

"You can go and tell the others." Duck muttered. "They'd only laugh at a guy like me doing such a girly thing."

Lexi sat down next to him.

"I didn't laugh at you when you were doing that routine to the music." she complimented him. "In fact, I think you're really good."

Duck looked up at her smile on her face and he smiled back.

"Thanks." he said. "I thought you'd make fun of me because I do this. Well, being a gymnast yourself with your cheerleading and all."

"But I was entranced." Lexi . "Where did you learn it from?"

Duck scratched the back of his head with one hand.

"Well, it's hard to believe, but at first I didn't want to do it. I just turned up late for picking out the activities that were there and I got rhythmic gymnastics instead of soccer."

Lexi giggled.

"That must have been embarrassing for you."

"It was. Being the only guy in the class and all." Duck chuckled. "But as I was about to have enough of wearing a liatard, I leapt and done all graceful movements as I struggled to get the darn thing off. My class teacher was really impressed that day."

"And so you continued to do that ever since?" Lexi asked once more.

Duck nodded his head.

"Ever since I was seven years old, I loved doing it. But then I had to sit and watch when it came to the yearly competitions."

"Oh yeah." Lexi realised. "Since hardly any boys did rhythmic gymnastics, the competition has always been for girls."

"Yeah." Duck sighed sadly. "But I was determined to at least take part to see how good I was against the other girls."

"And how were you planning to do that?" Lexi asked.

"Well lets just say I still have the wig in very good condition." he answered as he stood up and grabbed Lexi's hand.

"Come on. I'll show you."

Lexi was pulled up from her seating spot as Duck lead her out of the training room.

They soon entered his room where Duck let go of Lexi's hand and rushed towards the wardrobe. Lexi looked aroundthe room to see the Mysty Breeze posters plastered all over the walls.

"Found it." Duck chirped as he brung a large cardboard box out and sat on the bed.

Lexi assumed shed should sit on the bed too and took her seat on the bed.

"Please. You must swear not to let the other guys know about this." Duck begged.

Lexi nodded her as Duck flipped open the cardboard flaps to reveal some trophies and medals as well as an orange, pony-tailed wig that Lexi took out and inspected. She also took out a picture frame with a certificate being displayed. She read what was written until she gave an unsure look to herself.

"Daphne Canarde?" she said in confusion.

Duck looked over her shoulder.

"Well I couldn't have "Daniel Duck" on the certificate." He explained. "Daniel's not a girl's name."

"And you won all this? And no-one knew?" Lexi said in shock.

"Not even my class teacher knew." Duck continued. "If they did know, I would have been disqualified. And I wouldn't have be able to take part in competitions."

"But you still got away with." Lexi glared at the golden trophy she held in her hand. "You must have been good to have gotten first place for a while."

"Yeah." Duck agreed. "Until after one competition, someone found my secret out."

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This is getting interesting! Continue it - I'm curious as to how Duck's identity was uncovered. 

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Chapter 3

Lexi gave a curious stare at Duck.

"Who managed to find out about you?" she asked curiously.

Duck gazed down sadly at the floor.

"One of the kids from rhythmic gymnastics class." He mumbled.

"Do you remember who it was?" Lexi asked again.

Duck looked up.

"Mimi Lawowlsky."
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"Aha! I knew there was something funny about you Daphne! Or should I say Danny!"

A young mallard turned to face a smirking girl with very large sandy brown pig-tails.

"Please Mimi!" Danny begged to the girl. "You can't tell anyone what I'm doing!"

"Oh I don't know." Mimi smirked again and turned her back to him. "Maybe I should tell everyone who you really are. After all, I could easily disqualify you from all the competitions so you can't take part ever again."

"Please!" Danny repeated. "I beg of you! I'll do anything!"

A mischevious smile crossed her face as soon as she heard the last sentence.

"Anything?" she grinned.

"Yes! Anything!" The duck cried.

Mimi turned around to face the frightened duck with tears rolling down his cheeks.

"Okay." She agreed. "I'll make a deal with you. If you stop entering the rhythmic gymnastics competition and stop going to the rhythmic gymnastics classes, I will consider not telling anyone of your dirty secret."

She then extended her right arm out as though she was prepared to shake his hand.

"Do we have a deal?"
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"And ever since then, I've stopped going to rhythmic gymnastic classes." Duck sighed of sadness. "And I no longer competed in the competitions."

Lexi gave an expression of sadness.

"That's so sad." she muttered. "I can't believe you stopped nurturing your talent."

"Well, not exactly." Duck interrupted. "I only practice when I get the time to and no-one else is looking."

"And that's why you were practicing?" Lexi said.

"Sort of." Duck glanced at her. "I thought that I could see if I've still got what's left of my talent. The rhythmic gymnastics competition is only in five days. And I want to see whether I can still beat Mimi. I've had enough of not competing!"

Duck slammed his right fist on the bed as Lexi gave an worried expression. A thought then suddenly made her eyes widen and her eye brows lift and turn to Duck in excitement.

"Duck!" She exclaimed. "Why don't I compete with you?"

Duck turned around to Lexi in suprise.

"What? You're gonna enter the competition too?"

"Why not?" Lexi giggled. "I mean, it's been a while since I did some gymnastics in competition. Plus if Mimi's around, you don't have to be alone. We could practice together if you want."

Duck looked up at her and smiled.

"Okay."

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This should be good aww

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Nice job so far, keep up the good work. :D

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Here's chapter 4, but before we go on to it, I'd like to note that I will be using lyrics to Taylor Dayne's "Tell it to my Heart" thanks to Black_Oracle's MV. That video really gives me good inspiration. But now here's the chapter.

Chapter 4

Introduction.

I feel the night explode when we're together.
Emotion overload in the heat of pleasure.
Take me I'm yours into your arms.
Never let me go.
Tonight I really need to know.
 
5 Days to go:

Lexi displayed her gymnastic skills in front of Duck in the training room. She leapt around the room swirling a long pink ribbon on a stick as Duck applauds her.

Tell it to my heart
Tell me I'm the only one.
Is this really love or just a game?
Tell it to my heart.
I can feel my body rock every time you call my name.
 
After Lexi's performance, Duck shows off his gymnastic skills twirling the silver baton until Lexi interrupts Duck and gives him a tip on lifting his head a little higher as Duck nods his head in agreement.

The passion's so complete. It's neverending.
As long as I receive, the message you're sending.
Body to body, soul to soul
Always feel you near.
So say the words I long to hear.

4 Days to go:

At the dinner table, the rest of the Loonatics are having pizza. Rev decides to offer two of the pizza slices to Lexi and Duck and asks them. But they both shook their heads and pointed to the chicken salad they both had on their plates. Rev gives a confused look and walks off.

Tell it to my heart.
Tell me I'm the only one.
Is this really love or just a game?
Tell it to my heart.
I can feel my body rock every time you call my name.
 
3 Days to go:

Lexi and Duck does a synchronised run up and done two forward flips, 3 somersaults in the air, a tuck roll in the air and a straddle jump in the air to land in the finishing positions. Duck wobbles a little bit but still stays in position. Lexi giggles as he smiles back at her.

Love, love on the run, breaking us down,
Though we keep holding on.
I don't want to lose, no I can't let you go.

2 Days to go:

Lexi is stiching some light, sparkly, purple material onto the waist of a liatard of the same material Duck is wearing in her room. Once she finished the skirt on the liatard, Duck turns round to look at the back of it. Lexi then fits the orange wig Duck had on his head as they both look into the mirror. Duck gasps and jumps back a little in shock at his transformation. Lexi just smiled as Duck still has the shocked expression on his face but he eventually smiles as well.

Tell it to my heart.
Tell me I'm the only one.
Is this really love or just a game?
Tell it to my heart.
I can feel my body rock every time you call my name.
Tell it to my heart. Tell me from the start. Tell it to my heart.
Tell it to my heart. Tell me from the start. Tell it to my heart.
Never make it stop. Oh, take it to the heart.
Tell it to my heart...
(til fade)
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It was the next morning, and Ace, Tech, Rev and Slam sat around the breakfast table. Ace fidgeted with his fingers impatiently as he looked up to Tech.

"Tech. Haven't you noticed anything strange going on between Duck and Lexi?" he asked as the coyote sipped his coffee.

"Well they have been spending a lot of time with each other." Tech said.

"Yeah." Rev added. "And I've noticed a change in their diet. They hardly eat any thing too fatty or sugary. I mean sure it's okay to have the occassional treat now and again and I know that we superheroes do have to watch our weight but all they seem to eat now is salads and fruit."

"I'm thinking there's something going on thatthey haven't told us about yet." Ace gave a deep thought until he noticed Lexi enter the room holding a piece of paper in her hand. He saw this as an oppitunity to get answers from her.

"Uh, Lexi. Can I have a word with you please?" Ace asked as she turned her head to his direction.

"Sure." she said casually as she waltzed past the rest of the guys at the table as she approached Ace.

"So what did you want to talk about?" Lexi smiled cheerfully at Ace.

Ace turned his head around to face her.

"It seems to me that you've been spending quite a lot of time with Duck." he started. "Care to explain what's going on between you two?"

"Nothing." Lexi shook her head. "Why are you asking me that?"

"I was just noticing since you two are getting along so well." he continued. "But these days, we hardly see you two. What's going on?"

Lexi gave a smile at Ace.

"Okay." she giggled. "I was gonna keep it a secret until tonight, but I might as well tell you now since you're so concerned."

She gave the piece of paper to Ace.

"There's the annual rhythmic gymnastics competition going on at the dome tomorrow and I thought I should enter this year. I wanted to see whether I'm still had the skills from college. And I was wondering whether you guys could come and give me some support on the day."

Ace gave a look of confusion but he eventually got the idea.

"Sure if that's what you want." he answered.

He then suddenly felt his body being squeezed by a very happy Lexi hugging him.

"Thank you." she said gratefully. "You don't know how much it means to us."

"Uh... sure." Ace said as Lexi let go of him and exited the dining room.

Ace carried the piece of paper to the table where the other guys gave the rabbit a stare of curiosity.

"So what did she have to say?" Tech questioned Ace.

Ace put the paper down on the table and sat down.

"Lexi's entered a rhythmic gymnastics competition and she wants us to support her for tomorrow." he responded.

"I might as well come along then." Tech said. "I haven't thought of anything to do myself."

"I'll come too!" Rev said in excitement. "I've never seen how good she is at gymnastics so I want to see how she does against the other girls!"

Slam just grunted in agreement. Then Tech gave a sly smirk at Ace.

"So what did you think Lexi was doing then for these past few days Ace?" he said as Ace blushed at his curious thoughts.
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Evening arrived and Duck sat up on his bed with hid legs tucked under his arms around them. He seemed to be in very deep thought of tomorrow. Sure he'd feel nervous in the morning not only because he has to go into competition, but becausehe also has to fool everyone to believing he was female and that he was Daphne Carnarde. His other worries included what would happen should Mimi be there as well. She would go and tell everyone who he really is and then he'll get disqualified.

His door then opened to see Lexi's head peeking from around the door as she entered the room.

"You're ready for tomorrow?" she smiled as he looked up to her.

He smiled back.

"Sort of." his reply was.

Lexi sat at the end of his bed.

"You'll do great." she said confidently. "Don't let Mimi worry you. Besides, you wanted to beat her don't you?"

Duck nodded his head.

"I do but what if someone else manages to find out what I'm doing and gets me disqualified?"

Lexi moved up the bed next to Duck and wrapped her arm around Duck.

"Duck. Since I first saw you do that amazing routine the other day, I didn't even think you can't do it. If you want to win with all your heart, then go out there and enjoy yourself and don't worry about anything."
 
Duck felt strange having Lexi's arm wrapped around his shoulder. She'd never done that any of the other guys at least. But he felt it was most comforting to him. He needed a boost in confidence and felt a little bit of light is what he needed. Suddenly, he felt Lexi give him a kiss on his right cheek. Duck's eyes widened as she left his side and walked up to the door.

"Good night Duck." she smiled before she disappeared around the door and closed it behind her.

Duck mouth opened like he was catching flies and then touched his right cheek at the spot she kissed him on. He slightly rubbed his cheek as he tried to get over what just happened between the conversation between him and Lexi. He shook his head to shake off the thoughts and pulled the blanket covers over him and closed his eyes to at least try to get some sleep before the competition tomorrow.

END OF CHAPTER 4. 

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Wounder what Ace was thinking they where doing?
That was a good chapter Akira_Cat

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I don't really support the Duxi pairing, but you, Akira, as always, made something I didn't like into a wonderful fanfic that I can't stop reading.

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Luc Bunny - Oh no! Your computer crashed because of the awsomeness of my fan fic!

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RuthChang93 - aww Well I'm glad I can do that for you. You can't stop reading it? Well, I guess I do use the finest of ingredients to make it a really good fan fic.

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Chapter 5

The big day arrived at the sports dome in the centre of Acmetropolis. Large crowds of people entered the dome to take their seats around the arena.

But at the warm up area, loads of girls were preparing themselves before the competition starts. Lexi and Duck then arrived at the warm up area and looked around the room to see all the other competitors stretching and practicing their routines. Lexi looked down to Duck in his orange wig looking worried.

"Duck. Are you feeling okay?" Lexi asked the mallard.

He looked at the competitors for a few more seconds before looking up to Lexi's scensire face. He then looked back at the others warming up.

"Lexi. I'm so nervous." He stuttered. "It's been such a long time. I'm not sure whether I can do this."

"You can." Lexi assured him. "We can't turn back now! We've worked too hard for us to turn back! We can't just leave now!"

Duck looked down onto the floor.

"I'm sorry." he apologised. "I'm just afraid that people may find out about what I'm doing and I'll be dead for sure."

Lexi wrapped her arm around his shoulder.

"It'll be okay." she smiled. "We'll both do well."

"Indeed you'll both do well."

Duck and Lexi turned around to see a girl in navy blue track suit bottoms and purple jacket with large, sandy, brown pig-tails on both sides of her head, holding a blue, sports bag on her shoulders.

"Well if it isn't Daphne Canarde?" the girl gave a cynical smile as she approached them. "I thought you weren't gonna take part this year. Everyone was wondering about your disappearance a few years ago. But of course you did keep your part of the deal... until now."

Lexi was about to lunge for her but Duck put his arm in the way to block her from attacking.

"Well today, I want to prove something to myself Mimi." Duck said confidently. "I want to do my best and make up from what happened eleven years ago."

"And you're saying it with such confidence only because you have a friend with you this time, right?" the girl smirked as she walked past them a few steps before turning around to glare at them. "If I were you Daphne, I'd rather not make a fool of myself when everybody will know all about you."

Mimi gave her last giggle before walking off into a different part of the warm up area. Lexi gave a frown of anger.

"That girl thinks she can threaten you like that." She growled. "I so want to see her face when she loses."

"Come on." Duck said. "We better warm up."

"Hey. How you're doing?"

Lexi and Duck both turned around to find the owner of the voice was Ace along with the rest of the Loonatics.

"Ace!" Lexi gasped in suprise. "What are you doing here?"

"We came to wish you luck." Ace answered. "By the way, have you seen Duck?"

"We couldn't find him anywhere this morning." Tech added.

"He didn't even leave a note." Rev chirped.

Slam nodded in agreement.

Duck and Lexi stared at each other for a moment until Lexi looked back to the others.

"He said to me that he was a bit busy this morning but he'll come along later." Lexi lied.

Ace then looked at Duck. Duck flinched as Ace inspected him. And then he looked back up to Lexi.

"And who's your friend?" The rabbit asked.

"Oh!" Lexi realised he was asking about Duck. "This is Daphne Canarde. We used to be friends at the rhythmic gymnastic classes since we were small. Isn't it right Daphne?"

"Er, yes. That's right!" Duck stuttered nervously as he put on a girly voice. "Uh, we were the best of friends when we were little weren't we Lexi?"

Ace gave a suspicious look at them but then turned to Lexi.

"Well we hope you and Daphne do well in there." Ace said.

"Yeah!" Rev piped up. "We'll be watching!"

Duck shuddered at the senctence. Soon they could be watching him being made a fool of in from of everyone of Acmetropolis.

"Uh... thanks." he said as Ace and the others exited the warm up area.

Once they disappeared around the corner, Lexi and Duck both gave sighs of relief.

"They didn't notice?" Duck asked Lexi.

"I don't think they recognised you." Lexi responded. "You had them fooled for now."

Suddenly the speakers started to fuzzle.

"Will Mimi Lawowlsky please enter the arena? That's Mimi Lawowlsky into the arena." the speakers announced.

"Oh! That will be me first." she said to both Lexi and Duck from behind them. She was completly changed into a almost transparent, peachy liatard with pastilley green sequined swirls around her chest.
 
"Now watch me set the pace for both you losers." she sneered as she walked towards the entrance of the arena.

END OF CHAPTER 5.

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This kinda reminds me of one of my fanfics, except Tech doesn't ice skate, only Cassidy does. LOL

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Go LEXI and..... DAPHNE!!!!
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I think Ace figured out who Daphne really is.... I mean with his detective skills and he himself enjoys cross-dressing.

Either way, Go Daphne! Mimi must get her just desserts!

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Chapter 6

Lexi and Duck peeked behind the entrance door to the arena as they watched Mimi in her starting position waiting for the music.

"Lets see how good she says she is." Lexi muttered under her breath, still gritting her teeth at the comment Mimi said to them.

Suddenly, the music started. The song "Luv 2 me" (which was a Konami original from those dance machines in arcades) pumped into the air as the girl swirled her ribbon on a stick around her while balancing on one foot with her other leg held very high by her arm. 

Now I find the sun is bright
And I feel like
If all is shadowed and we can't find a way
We will ask you.

Oh no but you've found out, I will do so
if we went away, I need to know
Now there's a way, I'll make you my dream
When you look at me, I've gone back to me

Mimi leapt gracefully in the air and skipped up to the corner to prepare for her set of somersaults.

"She isn't gonna be that great." Lexi huffed.

"You'd be suprised." Duck looked up at the rabbit.

You stand to love me. Look out you want me
Give me and tell me all that I don't know
I know what you're feeling, I know that you're dreaming
All that is real that you've seen in your eyes


Mimi ran and then flipped forwards twice, somersaulted forward twice, jumped in the air to perform a straddle shape in the air and land on her two feet and swirled the ribbon some more. Lexi rolled her eyes.

"Puh-lease." she said in a bored. "I can even do that and more. She thinks she's more special than anyone else. I don't see why she just picked on you."

Duck gave a sad face during the instrumental and continued to watch Mimi perform more unusual shapes in the arena.

Oh but you've found out, I will do so
If we run away, I need to know
Now there's a way, I'll make you my dream
When you look at me, I've gone back to me

Stand so close here, so many calls here
Dreamers all hold here, dancing all here
I'll give you a life line, the feelings are down high
With so much away, so many want the rhythm.

End.

The crowds cheered as Mimi finished in her finishing position. The gymnast then bowed to all the sides of the arena and exited it and sat on her designated bench where her coach was waiting for her. Lexi and Duck watched the panel of four judges work out a score for her.

"I bet she'll get a good score." Duck said. "She is very good."

"Yeah." Lexi gave an unimpressed laugh. "Some how, I don't think so."

The speakers then started to announce the score.

"And the total score for Mimi Lawowlsky is 35."

The crowds cheered as Lexi gave a face of disgust.

"How can they give her that!?" she felt so enraged. "She didn't have anything that deserved to give her that score!"

Lexi and Duck backed off from the door so the doors flung open to reveal Mimi smiling. She then turned to Lexi and Duck and gave them an evil grin.

"Try and beat that losers." she sneered. "There's no way you can top that."

Mimi laughed as she walked away from them. Lexi lurched again to try and grab her but Duck fortunately held her back.

"Lexi. Just leave her." Duck commanded as Lexi calmed down.

"I'm sorry." she apologised. "It just makes me so mad that someone as arrogant as her could act so snobbish just because she's good at one thing."

"Lexi. You said we'll beat her." Duck reminded the rabbit. "And that's what we're gonna do."

Lexi glanced at Duck with a smile.

"You're right." She admitted. "I shouldn't have gotten worked up over some snob. Thanks Duck."

Duck smiled back until they heard a scream.

"Where is it!? Where is it!?"

Lexi and Duck followed the scream to a girl with dark brown hair in a yellow liatard frantically delving into her red sports bag with her coach in a green jacket helping her look.

"Oh come on! It can't have just vanished in thin air." The coach told the girl. "You must have put it somewhere."

"No!" The girl snapped. "I definately put it in my bag before we came here! I saw it when I was finding my liatard!"

"Okay! Calm down." The coach advised her. "We'll find it before you go on."

They suddenly heard another cry from another part of the room.

"My liatard! It's gone! I can't go on if I don't have my liatard! It was specially made for this competition!"

They heard another girl panicking not so far away from them.

"Oh no! My hoop is gone! I can't do my routine without my hoop!"

Duck and Lexi stared at each other. All the missing things couldn't have just disappeared at the same time. They both knew what each other was thinking.

"I think we have a mystery to solve." Lexi said apprehensively.

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MIMI!! I say it was MIMI!!! She cheted! or her coach!!
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A little late, but...
GO LEXI!!! GO DAPHNE!!! *waves pompoms*
Can't wait for the next chapter (I know, I say that all the time with your stories)

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*dies* It's so good! Just when I think everything's gunna be ok, you pop in another plot twist that has me sitting on the edge of my seat for more! I'm so excited! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!

Could you please give a better description of Duck and Lexi's costumes? I'd like to put the idea into my 'to draw' list. I'd love to draw Duck in pigtails! If that's ok with you, that is. ^_^

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weirdface You wanna draw the costumes for Lexi and Duck's liatard? aww Okay. I'll describe it later on in the story. But if you're desperate, I'll send it to you on Private Messaging.

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I got the message and read through it quickly 'coz i haffta go to bed (i'm almost in college and I have a bedtime). But they sound great! Just curious, does Duck wear anything to make it look like he has breasts?

Oh! I'm so excited! i can't wait till the next chapter! this hasta be one of your best fanfics yet Akira!! ^__^

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Chapter 6

Ace and the others approached Lexi and Duck in the hall outside the warm up area.

"We came here as fast as we could." Rev puffed. "But I had to stop now and again to wait for the rest of the guys to catch up."

Tech gave a glare at Rev as Ace looked up to Lexi.

"So what's up?" he panted.

"Some stuff from the other competitors have gone missing." Lexi explained. "Me and Du- Daphne thought there could be a theif around here."

"Liatards, CD's and stuff for their gymnastic routines have got lost." Duck squeaked in his fake female voice.

"Hmm... the way I see it, someone must be trying to sabotage the competition." Tech said.

"Which means someone doesn't want to lose in the contest." Rev finished.

"Okay." Ace agreed. "Lets split up and look for the culprit."

After the sentence was said, the speaker muffled to speak.

"Will Lexi Bunny go to the arena? That's Lexi Bunny into the arena."

"Sorry Ace." Lexi apologised. "I've got to go and get ready for my routine."

"Alright." Ace nodded. "You can help us after you've done it."

Lexi nodded back as she walked down the tiled floor towards the warm up area when she suddenly slipped backwards and landed on her back with a thump. The guys turned around immediately to see their comrade in extreme pain as they rushed up to pick her up.

"Lexi! Are you okay!?" Duck squeaked again in concern.

"Ow!" she cried out as she felt her left ankle. "I don't think I can go to the arena. I think my ankle's twisted."

Duck's expression changed into fear.

"But you have to compete!" He exclaimed. "You're next in the competition!"

"Did I hear correctly? Lexi might be out of the competition?"

Everyone turned to Mimi standing outside the girl's toilet's door gazing down on the injured competitor.

"Well that is sad." she said in a sympathetic tone. "That means you'll be out of the competition along with the other competitors who's suddenly dropped out. But I send you my regards should I be able to lift the trophy up."

Mimi walked off as the others attention was back to Lexi's ankle.

"Come on. Lets get you up Lexi and settle you down." Ace said as he put Lexi's arm on his shoulder as Slam put the other arm on his shoulder. They both lifted Lexi up onto her feet as she hopped along with them.

"Great." Lexi moaned. "And I'm gonna have to change my jacket. It's all wet."

Tech looked down onto the puddle on the floor near the girls toilets.

"That puddle wasn't there on the ground when we were here." he stated. "And there wasn't even a sign here too."

"We better tell someone that Lexi can't go on." Rev suggested.

But the speakers started muffling again and started to speak.

"Since Lexi Bunny is not fit to compete in the competition, will Daphne Canarde please go to the arena? That's Daphne Canarde to go to the arena."

"Muh- me?" Duck murmured.

"Looks like you're the only one who can beat Mimi's score now Daphne." Lexi said.

"B- but I can't!" Duck cried. "I'm super nervous and I don't think I can do it! Not without your support Lexi!"

"We'll take care of Lexi." Ace said. "You need to go out there and do your best Daphne."

Duck clenched his jacket up.

"But-"

"Don't worry about Lexi." Rev piped up. "You can do it if you really try."

Duck looked at Lexi senscirely as she smiled at him.

"Daphne. Just beat Mimi for me okay?"

Duck gave a determined frown and nodded his head as he ran towards the warm up area.

A few minutes later and Duck entered the arena with crowds chanting cheers as he walked slowly towards the performing mat. He squeezed his silver baton nervously as he stepped onto the mat and posed in his starting position.

"And now performing her routine, Daphne Canarde." the commentator announced.

"This is it." Duck thought. "Once the music starts there's no going back. But I have to do this. I can't runaway now. I have to show the world boys can do rhythmic gymnastics."

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Come on, Duck! You can do it! *pom-poms*
*gasps* Lexi! *panics and runs around* Oh no! nonononononono!

Cassidy: *muals Danielle* CALM DOWN, WILL YOU?!

Danielle: *deep breaths* I'm OK. Just lost my head for a moment.

Cassidy: You'll lose more than that if I have to try and control you again.

Danielle: But, you're my conscience! You have to control me.

Cassidy: I'm looking for a new job.

Sorry, lost myself with that one. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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*squeals* OH! The suspense!! the torturous suspense!! *cries out dramatically and faints into Duck's arms*

Duck: You are so weird.
Xtream: I know. *snuggles into him*
Duck: Do you mind?? I'm about to perform...
Xtream: Yeah, and me cuddling you whilst you're in a skirt pro'lly makes me look lesbian... Not that there's anything wrong with lesbians... I'm just not one. At least... I don't think I am...
Duck: GET OFF OF THE MAT AND BACK INTO THE AUDIENCE!!
Xtream! *salutes and runs of singing 'Lollipop' by Mika*

Ack! i can't wait to read more!! Oh, and btw, I'm gunna ink the picture this arvo in my magazine subject at school. I can't wait!! eeeeeeei!!! X3

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*mildly hyperventilates* Doushiittekuliphuhangaaannno?!?!?!?!?
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Translation: WHY IS THERE A CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!?

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And speaking of a new chapter, here's chapter 7!

Chapter 7

Introduction

God Bless...


The song; God Knows (Euro Mix version) by Aya Hirano started to pump through the air as Duck started to display some graceful movements as the music grew louder.

I run past others with a parched heart.
Sorry, I can't do anything.
You won't even let me
Share our pain together.

To live on without tarnish,
I face your back and head out without looking back
on the lonely rail

Ace and the others gathered around the entrance door to the arena and peered around it as Lexi hobbled along on a pair of crutches. They all watched Duck in amazement at the complicated movements he made apart from Lexi. She just smiled in encouragement for Duck to do the best he can.

I will follow you.
No matter how agonizing the world is,
You will shine even in its darkest corners.
Cross over the end of the future,
My weakness will not shatter my spirit.
my way is overlapping with yours.
For the two of us, God bless...

Duck flipped three times, and circled in a cartwheel four times as he demonstrated more graceful movements to the tranquility of the instrumental.  

Instrumental

"Wow." Tech's jaw dropped. "She's good." 

"You can say that again." Ace's eyes didn't even blink.

Lexi just continued smiling as Duck started to twirl his silver baton around around him.

You are here, I am here.
Everyone else has disappeared.
While we paint the beauty of this fleeting dream,
We trace out the lines of our scars.

Duck leapt towards the corner to perform his finale of movements that he has to offer.

"This is it." Duck thought to himself confidently. "Time to wow the audience."

That's why,
That's why I will follow you.
No matter how agonizing the world is,
You will shine even in its darkest corners.
Cross over the end of the future,
My weakness will not shatter my spirit.
my way is overlapping with yours.
For the two of us, God bless...

Duck ran up and did three somersaults, two flips and a pike shape in the air and leapt and jumped in the air while twirling the baton around until throwing it backwards in the air so he flipped three times before catching it in his right hand in time.

God bless...

END.

As he lifted the arm up with the baton in his hand, the crowds started cheering loudly. His gave deep breaths of relief as he strolled off the performing mat. But the crowds still cheered as loud as they could before they were silenced by the commentator.

Duck walked towards the others who's jaws still hung at the amazement of the routine.

"You were watching me?" he said in confusion.

"Of course we did!" Rev screeched in excitement. "You were absolutely amazing! Stupendous! Absolutely incredible!"

"Yeah. I have to hand it to you, you probably performed the best routine by miles around." Ace complimented him as Duck looked at all his friends.

"You really think I was great?" Duck asked.

Lexi grinned.

"Daphne. You did everyone proud. And even if I was well enough to take part, you still would have beaten me by miles. Great job."

Duck smiled back until everyone heard the speakers screech. He turned around to listen to the result.

"And the score the judges have given to Daphne Canarde is..."

Rev chewed his fingers furiously as everyone else looked at the speakers nervously. Sweat dripped down Ducks face as he shook like a leaf.

"37 points! Daphne Canarde has won the competition!"

The stadium immediately filled with the loudest amount of cheers anyone could possibly imagine. Rev cried for joy as he glomped Tech and shook him violently. As Tech tried to push the roadrunner off himself, Duck stood there motionless in shock. It wasn't until a hand patted his shoulder that he snapped out of his trance and turned to see Lexi with the biggest smile on her face.

"You've won! You really won!"

Duck finally smiled back as the speakers commanded Duck to step onto the performance mat. He faced the mat and then turned back to Lexi.

"Go on Daphne!" Lexi encouraged. "You have to collect your prize!"

Duck nodded his head as he strode towards the performance mat where the group of judges waited for him to approach them. Once he was finally on the mat, he was embraced by a bouquet of pink and white flowers from one of the judges as another one hooped a looped ribbon with a gold medal hanging off it around his neck. As he shook hands with another judge, Duck looked around him to hear the chants of the people around him chanting Daphne. He smiled to himself. Things just couldn't get any better.

"Stop everything! She can't win!"

Everyone turned to Mimi who marched up to the group of people in the middle. Everything fell silent as she grabbed one of the microphones from a random reporter. 

"Daphne Canarde does not deserve the title of rhythmic gymnastics champion!" Mimi repeated.

"Why not?" The judge in a black suit stood in front of her. "She got the most points for her routine, so she deserves the prize. I'm sorry if you didn't win but you can't win at everything you know?"

Mimi pushed past the judge and grabbed Duck's arm.

"Daphne Canarde cannot win," she shouted again. "because she is a he!"

At that moment, Mimi grabbed the pony-tail of Duck's wig and pulled it off his head. As soon as the audience saw the wig hanging from Mimi's hand, they all gasped. The other Loonatics gasped as well.

"Duck!?" Rev said gobsmacked.

"Daphne was Duck all this time!?" Ace shook his head in disbelief.

END OF CHAPTER 7.

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Now I can review XD, Very good, now whats gonna happen!?
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YAY! I can read it!

*faints from awesomness*

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Hi, Akira_Cat! I just found this fanfic and I must say it is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while. I was actually nervous when it was Duck's turn! Now, I really have to know what happens next, or I'll probably go crazy! Please update it soon!

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NOOOOOOO!!!!!

Just whem it was getting better, Mimi had to come and screw everything up!!!!

It's official, I hate Mimi.

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That was becoming too good to be true..... Mimi was bound to ruin it.
Poor Duck. He'll get immediately disqualified and it'll be all over the papers!

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Chapter 8

Duck gave a sad yet solemn sigh as he hung his head down in shame. The judges gave suprised expressions as they tried to comprehend of what was going on.

"Since he is a guy and he tried to take part in a girl's competition, he just has to be disqualified." Mimi boasted.

"And what about you Mimi? It's not like you've been cheating as well."

Everyone turned to the Loonatics as they stepped onto the performance mat. Mimi gritted her teeth.

"What you mean I've been cheating!?" she snapped. "You haven't got any evidence for it!"

"Well lets see what's in your bag." Ace unzipped the bag. "I'm sure what we find in here is one of the reasons why most of the competitors couldn't compete."

He tipped the blue bag upside down and some liatards, CD's and other gymnastic objects fell from the bag onto the pile. Some other gymnasts dropped their jaws.

"Hey! That's the CD I was looking for!" shouted one.

"That's my ball!" barked another.

The audience whispered to each other as the judges looked at each other with blank expressions on their faces.

"And how do you think Lexi twisted her ankle and got wet just before she had to go on?" Ace gave Mimi a sly look.

"No-one else appeared to have caused a flood without putting a warning sign on first now did they?" Tech added.

"Alright!" the judge in the black suit bellowed. "That's enough!"

"Wait!" Duck interrupted. "I don't care whether I get disqualified or not. As long as I enjoyed the experience of competing against other people, that only matters to me."

"So you competed here plenty of times a long time ago?" A female judge in a pink suit stepped forward.

"Yes." Duck answered. "Since boys weren't allowed in rhythmic gymnastics competitions, it felt like a duty that I had to do this. But I didn't care about winning the trophies or getting the attention. I just did what I like doing best. And you know what? I love doing rhythmic gymnastics. I'm a guy who loves doing this. So what? Nothing stopped me from doing what I wanted to do. Except for one thing."

He turned around to glare at Mimi. Mimi's fists clenched tighter.

"Someone threatened to tell all of you about this after they seen me." Duck continued. "They told me to stop doing what I felt happy to do or they said I'd look like a fool in front of everyone. But then going along with what they said had to be my biggest mistake I had ever made. I was too scared to compete because of that fact I'd be found out by everyone. But it wasn't until I realised that I wanted to start again that I wanted to compete once more."

He then turned to the four judges.

"I don't care whether I'm disqualified or whether I'm gonna be laughed at, cos at least I had just that ounce of passion to perform once more. And I... really enjoyed it."

The judges looked at each other confused. But suddenly a single clap was to be heard until the volume gradually built up to be a unision of cheers and applause. Everyone on the centre mat looked around with the overwhelming feelings around them. The judges then gathered together as if they were discussing the current surreal situation. Everyone else stared at the judges nervously before they broke apart to face the group of others.

"We have discussed the situation carefully and have come to a desicion." The judge in the black suit started. "As we know, we never let cheaters prosper in any competition. Which is why we all agreed that Mimi Lawowlsky, will be disqualified for sabotaging the competition and ruining other people's chances of gaining victory."

Mimi's mouth opened wide in outrage as a few boos from the audience was heard from. The judges then faced Duck.

"As for you, you know very well that rules are there to be obeyed." The judge continued. "You defiantly took the risk of impersonating a girl so you could take part in the contest along with the other girls. And succeeded many times at that. So all of us have agreed on this..."

Duck winced for the worst as his friends gave looks of concern and worry.

"The way you acted today was based on your passion for what you want to do. And for that, we have never seen as much passion from anyone else as much as you. Which is why we decided that you, Daniel Canarde, should deserve the title of rhythmic gymnastics champion."

The sudden loud cheers filled the stadium as Duck stood there, overwhelmed at the response he got from them. He then suddenly felt his friends glomp him, with Lexi just bringing up the rear.

"You did it Duck!" Rev cried out in happiness. "You won!"

Mimi however, was screaming in a tantrum. But all Duck could do was smile. As he grinned from ear to ear, the audience still cheered on like a big celebration was being held. But Duck knew only one thing though throughout the celebration of his victory; the nervousness and anxiety, suddenly disappeared.

END OF CHAPTER 8.

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Excellent chapter Akira_Cat! Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

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*dies from the awesomeness* *just... dies*

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This reminds me a bit of the movie Motocrossed where this girl pretended to be a boy so she could get into an all boys motorbike competition.
Anyway, blah. Duck hath doth won!!!! *waves pompoms because I have no gymnastic skills whatsoever*

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WOOT! DUCK WON!!!! *glomps Duck*

Duck: Wait... what about Tech? I thought you liked glomping him only.

Danielle: I still do, watch! *glomps Tech* Whheeeee!!!

Tech: You just HAD to remind her of me.... didn't you?


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WOW, Awsome story A-cat.
I wish I was hear earlyer to read it.
But what can ya do
It great

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Okay everyone! This is the last chapter for this story until I start another one!

Chapter 9

Duck sat in his bedroom on his bed, staring at the golden trophy sitting on the table against the wall. Everything that happened to him felt so surreal like a dream. People accepting what he did didn't often happen. So it was strange for him when people cheered for him instead of laughing at him in hilarity and disgust. Suddenly he heard the door creaking open. He spun around to see Lexi smiling from the door way as she limped into the room on her crutches.

"You feeling okay?" she asked him.

Duck looked down onto his hands planted on his thighs.

"Relieved actually." he started. "I thought that I was going to be the biggest laughing stock in Acmetropolis. But instead of that, people really respected my reasons for doing that."

"And everyone got what they deserved." Lexi added. "Especially Mimi."

"But you didn't deserve that twisted ankle Lexi." Duck said sadly.

Lexi looked down on her ankle and sighed.

"You're right." she said. "I didn't deserve to get hurt."

They both then glanced at the trophy.

"But you did deserve to win the competition." Lexi finished.

"Even if it did mean having to dress up as someone else in order to do it." Duck added as they both giggled.

Duck then glanced at Lexi.

"Um... Lexi?" He started. "I want to say thanks for encouraging me to enter the competition with you. I wouldn't have done it otherwise."

"You're welcome." she smiled back at him.

Lexi then gazed at Duck.

"We should celebrate with the others." Lexi smiled as she grabbed her crutches.

"Let me help you." Duck insisted as he grabbed one of Lexi's arms and pulled her up from the bed.

He was about to let her go when he stood on his silver baton and slipped backwards as the baton rolled. Lexi was suddenly dragged down since Duck didn't let go of her arm. The next thing they both knew, Lexi was accidently on top of Duck with their lips unknowingly touching. Their eyes both widened as they pulled themselves away from each other. They both stared at each other wanting to say something but couldn't get their words out. Duck finally got himself up and approached Lexi.

"Here. Let me help you." He finally stuttered as he grabbed her arm once more and pulled her up.

They both glared at each other for a minute.

"Well... that was embarrassing." Lexi commented.

"Yeah." Duck stammered. "Um... we should go and celebrate with the others now. They'll be waiting."

Both of them suddenly and randomly giggled and then burst out laughing as they opened the door and walked out, still laughing at the embarassing moment they both shared together.

THE END.

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Awwwwww! aww.gif
How can you ppl call it embarassing?!? furious.gif Do it again, darnit!!! *raves*
Flexa: 0.0 Best let her be. Great job on another great story!

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YAY!! LAST CHAPTER!!!! *runs around*

Wait... that means this awesome story is over..... NO! *cries*

Cassidy: 0_o Yeah.... thanks to her sister, she wasn't allowed on the internet yesterday... it was really hard on her... *pats Danielle's back*

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Nice Ending

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That was a nice, embarising, ending great story A-Cat! Can't wait till your next one

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