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Lumosnight · Loonatic

RE: Boy can't do gymnastics.

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Thanks guys for the comments. To tell you the truth, I thought that must have been one of the worst endings in any of my fan fics. But on the other hand, it probably the only way that the story would end. With Duck and Lexi accidently kissing each other and laughing about it.

As I said before, thanks for commenting on the story.

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Wow, just spent an hour reading thru' this story! And what a charming, feel-good story it was! Duck confronted the thing that i think his character most fears: damage to his pride and reputation. But fairness and justice prevailed for all! And the 'follow your passion' moral of the story was a heart-warming one. I also must comment that i like your style of prose in the write-up for this story Akira, as opposed to your past 'script-format' stories. Lovely work Akira! I think your story writing skills are really improving!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 22:11, 2007-08-30

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Black Oracle wrote:

Wow, just spent an hour reading thru' this story! And what a charming, feel-good story it was! Duck confronted the thing that i think his character most fears: damage to his pride and reputation. But fairness and justice prevailed for all! And the 'follow your passion' moral of the story was a heart-warming one. I also must comment that i like your style of prose in the write-up for this story Akira, as opposed to your past 'script-format' stories. Lovely work Akira! I think your story writing skills are really improving!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 22:11, 2007-08-30

Really? Um... thanks. I never actually thought about Duck confronting his fear. But that is something. I guess I use the script stories more for comedies while I do the proses for the more serious stuff. I don't know my style of prose. I wonder what it is. I just hope I don't get too repeatitive with some vocabulary I 've been using. I'm going to have to analyse my proses to see what I do. Or maybe not to keep the quality of my writing intact.

But thanks for the comment once again aww

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