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In the city of Acmetropolis it was almost midnight and everyone was sleeping, incuding the loonatics. But all except one was sleeping. She was none other than Lexi.

Lexi tossed and turned in her bed but she could not sleep. She was recalling what was happening the day before yesterday when Ace told her that he loved her and kissed her before he went to bed causing Lexi to be stunned like a statue for some time before Tech emerged from his lab and woke her up from her trance like state. He asked her what happened and she told Tech as he was the only one in the whole team who could listen to a secret and keep it. After she told him what happened he just smiled and giggled. Why are you laughing Tech?? What is so funny? She demanded an answer as she punched him on the shoulder. Well, Tech said while holding his shoulder..Ace asked me to keep that same exact secret. He asked me to keep a secret that he was in love with you since day one when you joined the team. And he asked me to keep the exact same secret as you when he visited me in my lab about an hour ago. He also hopes that you will not reject him. Think about it he is the most gentlemanly besides me on this team, you should be proud that that he loves you and the way I see it, you should love him the same way too he said as he walked out of her room.

But unfortunately Ace was hurt really bad yesterday when he was hit by a new laser weapon by accident. Ace collided with the laser blast to prevent it from hitting Lexi. He was unconscious and unstable and was lying in sick bay in a controlled environment on the tenth floor of HQ.

How could I let him get hurt like this she screamed to herself only to be found by Tech once again who had a sad look upon his face standing at the door of her room. She quickly wiped her tears before ranting on Tech exclaiming that he was trespassing. But Tech just said: you are worried about him aren’t you? She suddenly stopped scolding him and just continued to sit in a crouched position on her bed. Well then, may I come in? He asked. Go ahead she groaned trying not to sound like she was weeping but she could not hide the fact that she was broken down by Ace almost sacrificing his life to save hers. Tech pulled her into a friendly hug and she could not resist, she just continued to cry in his arms. Tech just whispered into her ear: there there..Ace will be alright just give him time. She suddenly pulled out of Tech’s arms and said don’t think this will get you anywhere Tech she warned. Tech just smiled and said, what are you talking about? Not to mention, I already have a girlfriend he winked as he left the room.

Weird, she thought to herself. Tech has a girlfriend? Anyways i should go and see Ace after all it is my fault that he got hurt in the first place.

Finally, i have reached the sick bay. She went into the ward that said ACE, when she went in she almost screamed, because Ace was not there.



This Is Only Part 1 Of What I Believe Is Going To Be A 20 Part Fanfic About Lexi And Ace Having Kids. Please relpy. Is it good or does it suck?



-- Edited by Hisham at 12:19, 2007-10-14

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Good Very good, But use quotatiom marks for when someone is speaking.

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Luc Bunny wrote:

Good Very good, But use quotatiom marks for when someone is speaking.



Ditto with meaww.........Hisham is this story on FF.net?confused Because either it is or I read one that is uncanny in similarity.



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Yes it is me i posted this on fanfiction.net as well though i made some slight changes and my new stories are going to have quote marks too courtesy of Luc thanksw00t.gif

-- Edited by Hisham at 10:08, 2007-10-15

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CHAPTER 2

As Lexi began to panic, she heard a voice from the corridor. You know, you should have told me that you were coming so that I would be here a voice came from down the hall. Lexi immediately turned her head and was astonished to see Ace walking and still smiling. What are you doing out of bed she shouted at him what if you collapsed somewhere and we didn’t know where to find you? But Ace just smiled and walked towards his ward when he felt Lexi put his shoulder onto the back of her neck and holding the right side of his stomach. He didn’t know why but he felt comfortable to her touch, something that he had never felt before. As he lied down on the bed he saw Lexi start to cry. Why are you crying? He asked. Why did you do that Ace? Why did you risk your life for me? You could have died. I would never forgive myself if anything would happen to you Ace. Why did you do it. He gave a weak smile and said..I think you already have the answer to that question Lex. And by the way you should be sleeping, what are you doing down here anyway? I have come to tell you something Ace. Really? What is it? He asked. You remember what you said to me the day before? Ace gulped before replying yea i do remember what i said. Lexi cried again and replied softly i actually love you too since i first saw you Ace as she dove into his chest crying ace just hugged her and said, thanks Lex. I don’t know what i would do if you were the one to perish instead of me. If i died before that day, the only regret i would have had was not telling you how i really f-ff-felt. Ace coughed many times before he fell unconscious again as his health monitoring equipment were wailing all kinds of alarms.



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I like the chapters. But you need to put them in paragraphs and use quotation marks. I found it very difficult to read.

Other than that, keep going aww.gif .

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Chapter 3

Just then the sound of Tech and Rev running towards the ward could be heard. Tech shouted, THIS IS BAD Lexi you need to move away for a second please Rev fetch me my external defibrillator now.

 

Rev came back in two seconds as he handed Tech the machine. Lexi was overcome with emotions as she tried not to look but could hear all the commotion then she heard CLEAR followed by a thud she started to cry even more.

 

Meanwhile back in the ward, Rev 300volts CLEAR. No good 450volts CLEAR. Okay that’s enough he is stable...for now at least.

 

 Suddenly Duck quacked into the room from nowhere and demanded how is he? SPEAK UP TECH! He’s okay now Duck nothing to worry now. I see now I can go to sleep Duck replied with an annoyed look.

 

 Hey did u see Lexi? Rev asked Tech. Not really I only remember when she was here a moment ago when Ace health functions collapsed I wonder where she is now. I’ll go find her Rev replied and ran off.

HEY TECH.

What is it Rev? Tech answered. I found her. Tech ran to the direction of the sound and saw Lexi lying on the ground with tears in her eyes.

 

Tech gave a sigh, she must have passed out after Ace collapsed she is the most worried one of us all maybe you should go now Rev I can handle things from here. Okay if you need anything just scream I’ll be there in a flash then he ran off.

 

Unfortunate Tech thought to himself. How many people express their true feelings for someone then the next day have a health complication that could cost their lives he thought as he carried Lexi to a chair right beside Ace’s bed and laid her there before closing the door behind him softly. Normally I don’t believe in god but for this once, please help Ace. It pains me to see him and Lexi like this he prayed (for Once) before he went to bed.



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This sound like a nice Acexi fic hear. Abit dificalt to read but I'm not complaning

good goin'

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thanks! the next chapter should be released later today.smile

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“Where am I?” Lexi said softly to herself as she saw Ace lying right in front of her she began to cry again.

 

“ You passed out yesterday” A voice came from the door she turned only to see a green coyote. “You want breakfast?” He asked. “No thanks i think i will stay here and watch over Ace” she replied but thanks anyway.

 

“I understand” Tech replied as he closed the door behind him. Lexi looked at Ace again as she closed her eyes couldn’t bearing to see the sorry figure right in front of her. “How c-come y-you are here...s-shou-shouldn’t you be having your breakfast?” A soft voice stuttered as she opened her eyes wide to see Ace smiling at her.

 

 “You are already in this bad shape and you are still worried?  Why. Why Ace. Why do you care so much!” She cried as she asked the question. “I have no idea” Ace replied.

 

“Don’t worry about me Lex, this bunny in front of you is a survivor he said pointing to himself. What if something happened to you Ace? What if you died? What if you....” she was blocked by Ace’s hand.

 

He stroked her hair and said: “But i’m fine now Lex nothing to worry about”. “I almost lost you twice I can’t bear to lose you again!” She cried and hugged Ace while he was on the bed and pulled him into a kiss.

 

His eyes opened widely. “Lex?” He said blushing. “I thought you hated mushy stuff”.

 

“I wanted to do this just in case i might never get the chance to do this again.” She replied as tears rolled down her cheeks. “Come on don’t talk like this” Ace said trying to make her stop crying.

 

 “Ace you need your rest sorry I am disturbing you” She said as she ran out of the ward trying not to sound like she was crying.

 

 As she was walking to the kitchen an alarm sounded. “WARNING  WARNING  ACTIVITY OFF SOUTH WEST ACMETROPOLIS COORDINATES 142 BY 325 CODE 5 REPEAT CODE 5.”

Lexi dried off her tears as she ran towards the jetpack launching platform she could see that everyone was ready to go. “Lets jet team” she demanded as the launch door hissed open and everyone flew out as the doors closed behind them.

 



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Nice story so far. Thank goodness Ace is alright for now. Keep up the good writing.

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I love the story!! It is sooooooo cool, I can't wait for more chapters!
Keep it up!

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LADIES AND GENTLEMEN.....I GIVE YOU....CHAPTER 5....(echos)

A tall dark figure laughed heartily as he shot another laser blast into a building causing it to crumble.

 

“Hey keep this up and the only thing that is going to be destroyed will be your head” Lexi shouted. “HAHAHA how rude of me I forgot to introduce myself” the figure exclaimed. “I am the Dark Enforcer and you have a choice get out of my way or be annihilated”

 

“Sorry don’t think so” Duck replied. “So it begins, STEP INTO BATTLE” the figure spoke one more time before taking out a large sword and swinging it around his body.

 

“Guys we can’t take this guy on not without Ace’s laser vision the armour on the Dark Enforcer is a highly tough and light alloy that can only be brought down by Ace’s laser blast if combined with Lexi’s and Duck’s powers provided my calculations are not mistaken or by one big bomb say 500lbs.”

 

“Well, then we will just have to try” Lexi replied as she gained her fighting stance.

Meanwhile back at HQ Ace was out of bed and in the main control room looking at various screens showing the team fighting against the Dark Enforcer and the bad thing was that they were losing. Suddenly Ace recalled his past when he and his friend accepted a request from a temple-like place which took them to an unknown part of Acmetropolis and one of the priests there said that one of them might have to make a sacrifice but they believed that they could both make it out of there alive.

Flashback

Ace and his friend went to a strange place deep underground when.....

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So? what do you think? Sorry this chapter was so short i'll make the next one longer. And pay no attention to this fic in fanfiction.net that was just a trial this is the real story. winkbiggrin



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Cool, I love it. You have me hooked so you'd better get writing!!!!! LOL
Great work!

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so interesting!

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Don't worry i always make sure i finish what i start next chapter should be comming soon. As soon as i've finished editing the existing story a little and adding some other things i should be able to give you this story today latest tomorow.biggrin

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Awwwwww.......how i luv Acexi fics....

Great job! I luv this story, it's really interesting! And, as much as i hate to say it, seeing Ace's vulnerable side is always a treat!

Please keep going!

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when will it continue im dieing to know whats gunna happen! plus ive got nothing else to do

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You know Riley the hole story is on FF.net.

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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i tryed looking for it but its not there did hisham change the name or something

-- Edited by rileybunny at 21:09, 2008-04-13

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No he didn't. did you check the M rated section?

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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no ill check right now! *zooms to ff.net*

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she did change the title! but at least i found it


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  3. goodvsevil (and good wins and then they meet brandon and kick his sorry little butt!)
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