Luc Bunny wrote:

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Good Very good, But use quotatiom marks for when someone is speaking.

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Ditto with me.........Hisham is this story on FF.net? Because either it is or I read one that is uncanny in similarity.

As Lexi began to panic, she heard a voice from the corridor. You know, you should have told me that you were coming so that I would be here a voice came from down the hall. Lexi immediately turned her head and was astonished to see Ace walking and still smiling. What are you doing out of bed she shouted at him what if you collapsed somewhere and we didn’t know where to find you? But Ace just smiled and walked towards his ward when he felt Lexi put his shoulder onto the back of her neck and holding the right side of his stomach. He didn’t know why but he felt comfortable to her touch, something that he had never felt before. As he lied down on the bed he saw Lexi start to cry. Why are you crying? He asked. Why did you do that Ace? Why did you risk your life for me? You could have died. I would never forgive myself if anything would happen to you Ace. Why did you do it. He gave a weak smile and said..I think you already have the answer to that question Lex. And by the way you should be sleeping, what are you doing down here anyway? I have come to tell you something Ace. Really? What is it? He asked. You remember what you said to me the day before? Ace gulped before replying yea i do remember what i said. Lexi cried again and replied softly i actually love you too since i first saw you Ace as she dove into his chest crying ace just hugged her and said, thanks Lex. I don’t know what i would do if you were the one to perish instead of me. If i died before that day, the only regret i would have had was not telling you how i really f-ff-felt. Ace coughed many times before he fell unconscious again as his health monitoring equipment were wailing all kinds of alarms.

Chapter 3

Just then the sound of Tech and Rev running towards the ward could be heard. Tech shouted, THIS IS BAD Lexi you need to move away for a second please Rev fetch me my external defibrillator now.

Rev came back in two seconds as he handed Tech the machine. Lexi was overcome with emotions as she tried not to look but could hear all the commotion then she heard CLEAR followed by a thud she started to cry even more.

Meanwhile back in the ward, Rev 300volts CLEAR. No good 450volts CLEAR. Okay that’s enough he is stable...for now at least.

 Suddenly Duck quacked into the room from nowhere and demanded how is he? SPEAK UP TECH! He’s okay now Duck nothing to worry now. I see now I can go to sleep Duck replied with an annoyed look.

 Hey did u see Lexi? Rev asked Tech. Not really I only remember when she was here a moment ago when Ace health functions collapsed I wonder where she is now. I’ll go find her Rev replied and ran off.

HEY TECH.

What is it Rev? Tech answered. I found her. Tech ran to the direction of the sound and saw Lexi lying on the ground with tears in her eyes.

Tech gave a sigh, she must have passed out after Ace collapsed she is the most worried one of us all maybe you should go now Rev I can handle things from here. Okay if you need anything just scream I’ll be there in a flash then he ran off.

Unfortunate Tech thought to himself. How many people express their true feelings for someone then the next day have a health complication that could cost their lives he thought as he carried Lexi to a chair right beside Ace’s bed and laid her there before closing the door behind him softly. Normally I don’t believe in god but for this once, please help Ace. It pains me to see him and Lexi like this he prayed (for Once) before he went to bed.

A tall dark figure laughed heartily as he shot another laser blast into a building causing it to crumble.

“Hey keep this up and the only thing that is going to be destroyed will be your head” Lexi shouted. “HAHAHA how rude of me I forgot to introduce myself” the figure exclaimed. “I am the Dark Enforcer and you have a choice get out of my way or be annihilated”

“Sorry don’t think so” Duck replied. “So it begins, STEP INTO BATTLE” the figure spoke one more time before taking out a large sword and swinging it around his body.

“Guys we can’t take this guy on not without Ace’s laser vision the armour on the Dark Enforcer is a highly tough and light alloy that can only be brought down by Ace’s laser blast if combined with Lexi’s and Duck’s powers provided my calculations are not mistaken or by one big bomb say 500lbs.”

“Well, then we will just have to try” Lexi replied as she gained her fighting stance.

Meanwhile back at HQ Ace was out of bed and in the main control room looking at various screens showing the team fighting against the Dark Enforcer and the bad thing was that they were losing. Suddenly Ace recalled his past when he and his friend accepted a request from a temple-like place which took them to an unknown part of Acmetropolis and one of the priests there said that one of them might have to make a sacrifice but they believed that they could both make it out of there alive.

Ace and his friend went to a strange place deep underground when.....

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So? what do you think? Sorry this chapter was so short i'll make the next one longer. And pay no attention to this fic in fanfiction.net that was just a trial this is the real story.