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I blamed it on the dog...

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Chapter 32

We'll stop her and save Lexi!” Kari growled as she razzed her first in determination to the hight of her chest, “Right Duck?!”

Right,” Duck echoed, “This is are problem not yours.

Kari!” Ace snapped straiting his poster, “You honestly t'ink you can jest go on doin' it yourself? You nearly got Cody killed yesterday!

If the three of us hadn't come you would all be dead!” Shouted Kari. Kari placed her hand over her mouth as she regretted the comment immediately. Ace gave her a glare so cold it could re-kill a ghost. Ace stood in front of her as a leader not a friend as the other stared at Kari in shock. Duck teased Ace, but no one back talked him.

You listen hear, and you listen good, KariBunny.” Ace said sternly. His voice tinted with anger and slightly hushed. “You do not know if dat is or isn't true. And even if it was true,” Ace's voice slowly started to rise with every word after that, “ you do not take a seven year old boy, with no powers, onto da battle filed! And you better watch it with thoughs little out burst of yours, dere going to get you into a lot of trouble sooner or later.

Kari looked down, speechless. Hearing it, especially from your team leader, makes it sound so much more stupid, and can make one feel very shamed.

Ace sighed and softened his voice, “Kari, you need to learn to listen to my orders. Your still new on da team so your punishment wont be very harsh.” And then turned to Duck, “But you Duck. You've been around for awhile... I'm gonna see what Zadavia has in store for you.”

As Ace left the room Duck stared down at the ground in a mix of shock and fear.

But Ace-!” Kari was about to fallow and argue with her leader, but Duck placed a hand on her shoulder. Stopping her.

No Kari.” He looked her in the eyes, “He's right.”

Ace pressed the button that contacted there boss. A holographic Zadavia appeared before him. “Hello Ace. I am glad you have finally contacted me. I was beginning to think the worst. I hope things went all right yesterday.”

Not...Not exactly Zadavia.” Ace looked away from the hologram for a moment, “We have a Loonatics down.

What happened?”

Ace went into detail about how Lexi had been hit and was now badly injured in critical condition. Adding in the threat and the fact that they got away. Lastly he made the comment of how Duck and Kari not only disobeyed orders, but brought Cody out there. As he spoke the loonatics gathered behind him.

When he finished Zadavia went silent. A long pause that kept them all questioning the future of the black mallard. “Duck, Kari, place step forward.”

The pair did as ordered and looked up the holographic women, “You both realize what you've done is a serious offense of the rules provided to you to keep and maintain your positions on this team? I would of expected you, Duck, to think through what you where putting Cody.” Zadavia sighed, “Kari, you are new, so I expect you don't know the rules to well. But Duck the seriousness of your actions demands a serious consequence. You have broken the rules many times, but I have let it slide in the past. Now it must all come together. As much as I wish not to say this: Danger Danger Duck, you are hear by dismissed from this team.

everyone looked up at her in shock and horror. Duck shaking his head as his face fell into one that only some one who had lost every thing could poses. “Collect your personal items, turn in your communicator and Uniform, and return to your civilian life.”

Duck looked down. His mouth slightly parted. Non of them had ever seen duck truly cry, but now small tears glided down his shocked expression.



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Aww, poor Duck!

But then again, he and Kari did lead Cody into danger, but still.

The team won't be the same without him!!!

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Chapter 33

Kari looked at Duck. Her devastated friend Then looked up at the holographic women, “Zadavia.” She paused, “It was my fault. If Duck got his way we would of stayed but I got strong headed. If any one she be removed form this group it's me. The team needs duck. They don't need me.

Are you sure Kari?”

Yes.”

Then it was nice having you on the team. No matter how brief it was.”

Thank you.” Kari left, quickly changed, and gathered her things. With a brief good bye she left.

Around 8 at night Ace called Zadavia.

Zadavia pleas reconsider! I didn't want Kari or Duck to be kicked off da team. There both great fighters and I know dey'll do what ever it takes to mack things right.”The yellow rabbit pleaded to his boss.

“Ace I understand your concern but they put the life of civilian child into jeopardy, and didn't fallow orders.”

“All of us have disobey orders at one time or another!Listen Zadavia I don't care about that part. At first I didn't know how to punish them about bringing Cody onto da battle filed, but now I think putting dem on a weeks suspension or something like dat could work. Jest pleas Zadavia let her come back.”

“Ace are you sure you can handle her? She is a very strong willed person.”

“Yes, I am sure.”

“Are you willing to give her what you believe to be a proper punishment?”

yes

“Thin very well you and the team may bring her back tomorrow.”

Thank you Zadavia.”

Zadavia out.”

Ace let out a sigh of relief. As he was about to leave he notes they where getting an incoming call.

Ace pressed a button and answered, “Hello?”

Hello, Ace.”

Diane?”

Thats me.”

Why ya callin'?” Ace was a tad more relaxed as he listened to her voice.

Well we kinda had a date, or did that slip throw that big space between your ears?” She replied with sarcasm.

Ace mentally kicked himself, “I'm so sorry Dane I completely forgot about are date. So much has happened hear I..I'm sorry.”

It all right Ace. I understand that you wont all ways be able to be there....So what happened? I saw you on the new. You guys got some new enemy's.”

Well ya. Where battling agents 2 of are old enemy's and 2 new one that are apparently related to some of are team members.”

Wow. Sounds difficult.”

You have no idea. We also have a injured member.”

Who?”

Lexi got hit by a strange plasma and now all her vital body systems are crashing.” Ace replied in a dull some what depressed voice.

Oh....I-I'm sorry, Ace. I know you care about her allot.....will she be okay?

I don't know.” you could hear the shaky town indicating he mite start to cry.

I guess I'll see you another time, by Ace.”

By.”



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Hmmm....Diane seemed...Unconcerned....about Lexi, and Ace's sadness....she almost seemed...cold with him, like she really didn't care....(But I could be wrong)

But I'm glad Duck won't be off of the team, and I'm happy that Ace talked Zadavia out of kicking Kari off of the team too.

But I wonder how Ace will punish her....

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Chapter 34

 

Ace, Tech, and Duck landed on the side walk next to the hotel that Kari worked at. Allowing there jet packs revert back into backpacks. They walked in and tapped the small bell at the front desk. The same, plump, bald man from when they first came to retrieve Kari came to great them.

 

My I help you?

 

Is Kari here?”

 

Why yes she is. One second pleas.” He turned around and in a booming voice, “Kari!”

 

Kari walked through a door wearing her old uniform that indicated she worked there. A bright long sleeved red shirt with a caller, a black tie and matching black pants. bagging around her feet. Kari had a depressed look about her.

 

When she looked up she was surprised to see the three Loonatics in front of her, but her surprise quickly melted into an angered yet hurt look.

 

Send them away Markus.” She said to the one who called her out.

 

Kari wait!” Duck said as he quacked in front of her blocking her path, “You have to listen for a sec.”

 

Kari raised her hand up as if she was about to hit him, but was stopped by someone grabbing it. Ace stood there her wrist in his hand.

 

Let me go.” Kari thrust her hand out of his.

 

Kari pleas jest listen. I talked with Zadavia. No I pleaded to Zadavia to let you back on the team. Okay, I didn't want any one to be kicked off. Kari we're asking you to come back. You and Duck will still haft to face punishment, but not one so harsh. Maybe paper work, I don't know. Jest come back. Pleas.” Ace looked at her.

 

She looked at Ace with angry eyes, “NO!” She turned around and started to walk off.

 

What about Rev?!” Tech said.

 

She stopped and looked down at the ground her back still facing them. She put her hand up to her heart.

 

He's miserable Kari.” Tech said slowly. Kari some what clenched her shirt. “Kari, Rev has never been so sad. Not as long as I've known him, and thats a pretty long time. And what about Lexi. You know Shadow. You may be the only one who can find out what she did to Lexi, and help us bring her back. First though you need to be on the team.”

 

Kari terned and faced them.

 

What do you say Kari?” Ace held out his hand. Kari stared at his hand a moment. Her own hand still clutched to her chest. She reached forward a little, but then to there surprise she batted his hand away.

 

NO!” Kari turned around, but looked back one more time, “I'm no longer a Loonatic! I don't think I ever wanted to be one! And I don't care about Rev anymore! I never did!

 

As Kari walked out of site from the three Loonatics her steady walk slowly evolved into a run. She felt tears escape her eyes as she ran. She lied. She knew she lied. She loved the thought of being a Loonatic and protecting lives. Standing for something greater then herself. But most of all she cared for Rev. Never had she cared for some one so. Perhaps she loved him. But if she wanted to protect them she couldn't be with them.

 

When Kari stopped running she found herself at one of the hotels exits. It lead to a small ally at the side of the building. She burst through it and sat down on the steps out side. She bared her face into her hands and let the tears fall.

 

But she looked up when she heard familiar voices.

 

What are w going to tell Rev, Tech? Dis will break his heart.

 

I don't know Ace. I've never seen him act this way. I don't think he's ever been in love before.

 

Ya... You're right Duck. Come on, we should get back to HQ. Tech need to check up on Lexi.”

As she listened to there jet pack activate and fly off, Kari pulled her legs to her chest and thought.



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Aww, poor Kari - she really does love Rev, but why does she need to lie?  

She doesn't seem like the stubborn type....but then again, she kind of does....

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this is amazing.

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