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Beast

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Ok this is my first thing so please be nice but truthful, if thats even possilble.  It is Ace thinking to himself.  It is also a hint to what is going to happen in a story im writing that might be called Dark side of the Moon.  So tell me what you think of Ace's thoughts please.  Cos if its ok i might do some for other characters:

 
Sitting here, near my friends has got me thinking.  What would I do if they were taken away from me?  Obviously I would try and get them back, that’s the first thing that came into my head.  Then, looking back at the missions where my friends were almost or were hurt.  I decided, or realised something.  I would give my life to save my friends.  Even Duck, because without them I’m nothing.  And their lives are more important than mine.

I might not always seem to care but I do.  Their my reasonability.  – My family, I guess.  They don’t know anything about my past and yet they trust me to lead them.  Before I got my powers, my past or other life as I call it, was never like this.  The gang I was in was never as supportive as my friends.  We fought together, but not like a team.  My team.

My past always haunts me, when I’m alone, and I guess it always will, but my friends are never far away.  Always there for me.  I mean they get on my nerves sometimes, like Duck trying to tell me what to do, Rev being overly hyper.  But every family is like that.  No matter what they are always there for me.

But what if someone went after them to get to me?  If they got hurt, because of me I don’t know what I’d do.  It would be my fault.  I would have failed them.  I can’t lie and say I don’t have any enemies from my past.  It’s not like I can’t defeat most of them in a fight, because a probably can.  But what if they know how to get to me.  My real weakness.  When it comes to it, I will do anything to protect my friends.  No matter what the cost.



-- Edited by magicmeercat at 15:47, 2007-11-18

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Well it looks realy interetin'. Is there more or is this aone chapter thing?

If its a one chapter thing, Its good and well writen
If theres more to come, I can't wait.

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Thanks. I'm really happy you like it. Its alone chapter at the mo. But i didn't plan to write this I was inspired so I may be inspired to write more.

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