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Stylediva127


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As you can see, I'm a new member, not sure if it's very interesting but just tell me what are the minor mistakes and maybe I could fix it. Sorry if it's not really good.

                                      Chapter 1: Pizza Duck?
Just an ordinary day at headquarters.....Lexi listening to her PMP3 Music Blaster 5000, Ace meditating, Tech working on a new invention (this time in the living room), Rev watching Tech work (which kinda annoyed Tech), Slam making his fave sandwich and Duck watching T.V.

(doorbell rings)
Lexi: stereo.gif I got it! (gets their pizza)
Tech: hungry.gif Mmmmm! I smell my fave pizza! (gets a slice) chew.gif
Ace: (Opens one eye) Is that (opens the other eye) double peperonni pizza?!
Rev: (runs and sniffs the pizza) nod.gif Just the way you like it!
Slam: hungry.gif PIZZA!!!
Duck: pc.gif uuhhh..........
Ace: Is he gonna be fine? confused.gif
Lexi: Don't ask me! That Duck has been watching T.V. 3 weeks straight non-stop! (bites her pizza) chew.gif
Rev: Well.........have you tried doing this! boo.gif
Duck: pc.gif
Rev: That was weird! He usually fights back. Well, let me try this! juggle.gif
Duck: pc.gif
Rev: okay.....................so how about this! eyepopping.gif
Lexi: disbelief.gif
Rev: Well.........This! clueless.gif
Duck: teevee.gif
Rev: shocked.gif This can't be happening!
Tech: You ain't the only one shocked! (bites pizza) chew.gif
Ace: Let me try something! sing.gif


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I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

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Hello. And welcome to the LUO Fanbase. We hope you enjoy your time here aww.gif .

And I do find this little comedy amusing. I especially like it when you used the emoticons to do some really random stuff and portray the characters emotions as you did there. Tee hee. I like this emoticon. juggle.gif


Is there a second chapter to this? Cos if there is, I hope you continue with it aww.gif . 



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Welcome to LUO, Stylediva127! And great start on a fanfiction here. Although I doubt too much T.V. could possibly do any dammage to Duck's brian cells.
Of course, hardly anything can. giggle.gif *hides from oddity*

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Good story so far and welcome to the boards! I hope you enjoy your stay, no matter how long it may be. The emoticons really add personality to the fanfic. boo.gif

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Stylediva127


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Thanks for the welcome, and I am finding this site real cool! Don't worry there will be a second chapter. I'll make it about sometime today (when I'm done with my homework!)

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
Stylediva127


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giggle.gif

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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Thanks for your nice comments guys!

-- Edited by Stylediva127 at 08:39, 2007-11-24

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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Here it is! The second chapter! Enjoy!!!

                                  Chapter 2 : Tech Remote 5000

Duck: rage.gifboo.gif I'm trying to watch my fave show!
Lexi: Well, what do ya know? He can still speak after 3 weeks of no sleep and just eating popcorn and drinking soda! popcorn.gif
Ace: And the first to fight back! hmm
(Rev goes to the kitchen to get some chocolate) hungry.gif
Tech: Finally! No one talking about making the biggest bird seed! reading.gif
Rev: reading.gif Interesting.......rofl.gif You used the girls bathroom yesterday?! rofl.gif
Tech: rage.gif That's my diary 5000! (grabs diary) And nobody saw that!              Rev: (gasp) I just remembered that found in page 42 you used to have a crush on.........
Tech: boo.gifboo.gifboo.gif Don't say it! invisible.gif How did you get this anyway?
Rev: Secret!biggrin
Lexi: giggle.gif (from Rev) whisper.gifgiggle.gif
Tech: Very funny........ reading.gif
Ace: Looks like Duck's finally interested besides the tv! popcorn.gif
Duck: What's this giant remote Tech? smile
Tech: Well, I call it the Tech Remote 5000. Installed with the latest technology and the world's genius is the one who invented the very first.....TIME REMOTE!!! I can't wait for everyone to know about this! w00t.gif ..............weirdface
Duck: yawn bored.gif sleep.gif
Tech: steaming.gif
Duck: shrug.gif
Rev: He'll get over it. (drinks orange juice) Just think about the stuff that we could do with this! evileye
Duck: Hmmmmm.........idea.gif We could use this to rewind our fave episodes and watch them again! No, no! How about we sell them! REV YOU'RE A GENIUS!!! (slaps Rev's back)
Rev: Oooff! (accidentally spills orange juice on Tech's invention) wtf.gif
Tech: jawdrop.gif Oh no!
Duck: Boy you did it Rev! ignore.gif
Rev: steaming.gif
Tech: My brilliant invention! cry
Duck: Oops. wink
Tech: That's oops alright! Now I'll have to start from scratch! This won't be a time machine! cry


-- Edited by Stylediva127 at 07:39, 2007-11-22

-- Edited by Stylediva127 at 02:58, 2007-11-23

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
Stylediva127


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Anyone still reading?

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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I am! Keep going! This is really funny!

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Thanks! I'll go on!biggrin

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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                                    Chapter 3: T.V. Trouble

Lexi: shrug.gif This is what happens when a duck and a roadrunner become two super friends.

Ace: It gets a coyote in trouble. evileye
Tech: (looks in the remote) Looks like this still works, but not to control time.confused I better scan it. (scans and checks it on his super computer.)
Rev: Oh man! To bad he'll start all over again. cry
Duck: Because someone just had to spill orange juice in it!biggrin
Rev: steaming.gif
Ace: no.gif
Lexi: It doesn't matter! disbelief.gif Just do something about it!

Duck: nirvana.gif Like what help him with his invention?

Tech: I'm so glad you want to help me fix my remote! aww
Rev: whisper.gif What a suggestion!

Tech: You two can start helping when I'm done analyzing what happened to my remote. smile
( Rev watched his show on T.V., Duck walked to the remote)
Duck: Oooh! omg.gif (about to press something)
Rev: What are you doing!? furious
Duck: What?! brushteeth.gif

Rev: Give me that remote! (grabs) nana.gif
Duck: Give it back! rage.gif
Rev and Duck: matrixfight.gif

Rev: (pushed by Duck) Oof! (falls on the sofa) nirvana.gif

Duck: Geez! I was just gonna change the channel! This may work onthe T.V. fight.gif 

Lexi: MAY! But I agree with Rev, just leave it alone. police.gif

Ace: And make it snappy! Tech might be back any second! worry.gif
Duck: Here we go! channel 527! (press buttons) biggrin
Tech: (comes in) jawdrop.gif What are you doing!!!
Duck: duh! changing the channel!wink
Ace: Tech! What's happening?! fear.gif
Slam: Aaaaah! fear.gif
( A big flash came upon the Loonatics, and they disappeared in the light)



-- Edited by Stylediva127 at 08:37, 2007-11-24

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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Okay so i jest read this and....MUST HAVE MORE!!

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Stylediva127


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giggle.gif I'll get on it!

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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                                                 Chapter 4: T.V. Trouble
( The Loonatics wake up )
Lexi: nirvana.gif Uh! What happened? confused
Ace: No idea! But all I know is that we went from superheroes to newscasters!hmm
Rev: What!!!!! steaming.gif Duck!
Duck: fight.gif What? It's not my fault we got sucked to (voice becomes softer and softer) the T.V. weirdface jawdrop.gif
Tech: That's right! Because of the orange juice, and your addiction of T.V. we teleported from reality to T.V. reality! furious
Slam: Here comes the news guys!ashamed
Newscaster: Welcome everyone! To Acme News at 6! biggrin My name is Penelope Cat! And here's our guests, the Loonatics!

ALL: fear.gifjawdrop.gif

Penelope: But before that, remember parents! Don't let your kids watch too much T.V.! Too much T.V. rots your brain! aww
Lexi: Told ya. blankstare
(channel changed)
( A bunch of clothes float everywhere )
Lexi: Wow! We're in the Shopping Channel 24/7! w00t.gif (gets a hat and tries it on)
Rev: And I thought Duck knows all the channels! biggrin
Duck: Could we focus on these girls making me wear this dress!! steaming.gif
Ace: Never knew you look good in pink! giggle.gif
Tech, Rev and Slam: giggle.gif


(channel changed)

( A football is thrown to Lexi's hands )

Lexi: (catches it) blankstare Nice.
(football players jump on her all at once!)
Duck: Ooh! That's gonna leave a mark! doh
Tech: Yeah think! evileye
Lexi: nirvana.gifdead.gif



-- Edited by Stylediva127 at 06:52, 2007-11-27

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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nice fic, StyleDiva127! This is real funny!

and welcome, i say, welcome to the boards of LUO. Please keep your hands and legs inside the ride at, well, almost all times. Otherwise, have a, i say, have a ball of a stay here, fun that is.

*is brick'd for imitating Foghorn Leghorn*

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nice fic, StyleDiva127! This is real funny!

and welcome, i say, welcome to the boards of LUO. Please keep your hands and legs inside the ride at, well, almost all times. Otherwise, have a, i say, have a ball of a stay here, fun that is.

*is brick'd for imitating Foghorn Leghorn*

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giggle.gif I work on the next chapter soon!!! When I get home from shopping!

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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Sorry for a no show here on this fan fic! Christmas shopping doesn't do itself you know! Anyways here it is! the long time no see chappe 5!

Chapter 5: Separated

(Ace and Rev help Lexi out of the pile)
Lexi: This is the reason why I hate sports! steaming.gif
(6 portals open up and sucks one loonatic in one of them)
Loonatics: AAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!!!! fear.gif

(Ace teleports into the cooking channel, Lexi into the Extreme Channel, Tech into a gameshow, Rev into a kids show, Duck into a water skiing channel, and Slam into a Weather Forecast Channel)
Ace: I told you, I don't have time to chop the chives!
Host: Oh please! You've gotta stop kidding!
Ace: angered.gif

Lexi: Like I'm suppose to be scared!bleh
Host: Here we are on top of a 6-story building. Where Lexi Bunny is going to bungee jump 3 times! biggrin So, Lexi are you scared?
Lexi: Not reallyyawn
Host: You'll be doing it 3 times doesn't that scare you?evileye
Lexi: No. Shouldn't you?evileye
Host: Why would I?confused
Lexi: Cause, if you don't keep your mouth closed I'll make sure you join the bungee!furious

Tech: I told you I'm not a contestant!furious
Host: Isin't he a kidder! giggle.gif

Cartoon Character: Have you seen my duck? We are playing, he is hiding and I am seeking!
Rev: Actually I'm looking for one myself!

Duck: Aaaaaaahh! How many times do I have to tell you! I'm not good in water skiing?!
Host: Nonsense!

Slam: Uh.........(sweating).......Today, we'll be having hail the size of mini vans, and um......we'll have a massive earthquake! Then a lightning storm, but it will clear up! blahblah.gif


END OF CHAPTER 5
If you want me to continue, please leave a comment so that I'll know if people are still reading!!!
Thank you!



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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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*falls over laughing* That was awesome! I especially liked Lexi's part.

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
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Thanks!! giggle.gif



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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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*laughing fit*
Great work Stylediva127! its going fab!


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Thanks to all! And Merry Christmas!

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Jamming to mah stereo

I wish upon a star
Wanna be right where you are
You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you

So if you feel the way I do
Would you fancy to
To take a ride beside me?

Me and you, you and me. Living a life in harmony
It's magic(oh it's magic) babe I've got a crush on you [x2]

Crush on You by Tata Young
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