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 Prolouge:

It's morning, Rev and Jewel are waking up after their first night together.

Jewel:Morning
Rev:Morning-beautiful.
Jewel:(giggles)Flattery will get you nowhere.aww
Rev:I-know-but-this-might.

He kissed her fore-head.

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Chapter 1: Dating

Jewel:(thinking) Finally he takes me out. We've been together for three months and the most we've gone to get was an ice cream.

She sighed as she recalled sitting in the park with him sharing an ice-cream cone that had extra sesame on top,but is was'nt the topping she enjoyed.No, it was the bird she was sharing with.Jewel loved how when she got a little on the side of her cheek he would lovingly lick it off,making her giggle. Now he taken her to some resturant that had such a bizzare name that Rev could'nt even pronounce it.

Rev:So-how-do-you-like-it?

He stared at Jewel in her best strapless evening gown.Rev could'nt help but notice how exposing her dress was. She gazed at him for a while before answering.He looked so handsome in his best suit.

Jewel:I love the food it's just so,so...
Rev:Perfect?
Jewel:Not as perfect as you.
Rev:Should-we-get-secounds?
Jewel:Sure.

There was no rush in evening. The waiter comes by with some boiling hot soup. Jewel gets up to go to the ladies room only to bump into the waiter spilling the piping liguid all over Rev.He yelps.

Rev:AAAGGHHH!!!
Jewel:Oh my goodness Rev! I'm sooo sorry!
Rev: No,no, Jewel-don't-be-sorry.It-was'nt-your-fault.
Jewel:Maybe we should go home.

He nods,eyes watering from the pain of the soup spilling on him.
They pay and leave.

Scene:Rev and Jewel are entering his room.

Jewel:Let me get you a moist towelet.

Jewel leaves as Rev strips of his shirt. She comes back only to be shocked at the sight of Rev shirtless.Jewel pauses hesitantly studying his muscular build before applying the towel to his bare chest. He chuckled.
evileye She paused as he jerked slightly,in pain. Carefully she parted a few feathers to find that the broth had turned the flesh red under his blue plummage.

Jewel: I'm going to see if Tech has some ointment for this.
Rev:Okay.

Jewel comes back with a white bottle and rubs the cream into his upper-body.He liked her touch better than the towelets'.





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I assume Jewel is your OC?
Great first chapter. A few spelling mistakes, but nothing that anyone bit a nit-picker like me will really notice.
Flexa: Z_S, you're such a nerd.
Me: Meanie face.

-- Edited by zadavias_spirit at 19:40, 2008-01-23

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Yep she is my OC.aww I have three other fanfics with her in them.

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Chapter 2: Inner struggle

Another month passes. Rev is beginnig to wonder if this is the right time to ask her,and if it is,how should he ask her, where should he? He glances at the sleeping figuer of Jewel next to him.

Rev:(thinking)What if she says no? What if it ruins our relationship? Does Jewel really think i'm the guy for her?

In the end Rev decides he would ask her tomorrow if he had the quasarlineum to get what he needed.

What does Rev want to ask Jewel? Lets find out.


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um look you need to write longer,desides should be decided,ya work on spelling ok.

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I KNOW! I KNOW! I KNOW!

Rachelle: *glaring daggers at Jewel*
Me: *confused* Rachelle? But, you're not supposed to come back until "Duck's Christmas Wish!"
Rachelle: *ignores me and continues glaring*



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CassidyCoyote wrote:

I KNOW! I KNOW! I KNOW!

Rachelle: *glaring daggers at Jewel*
Me: *confused* Rachelle? But, you're not supposed to come back until "Duck's Christmas Wish!"
Rachelle: *ignores me and continues glaring*



Me:Oh-no, Quick Cassidy! I get the crowbar,you get the wrench!

 



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Okay! I'm on it! *runs to get wrench, runs back into room, but trips over random lamppost and goes flying across room*

Ow.... *faints*

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Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3
Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/



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Your Fan Character is dating Rev! crying.gif Mine is too! Well, this is weird. at least this is only our imaginations, imagine if it was in the show!laughing.gif

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