hehehe... spasm... XD

Anyway, ya I should watch it again. The whole series in fact. Cuz, I haven't in awhile and it's starting to bug the heck outta me... ;_;

Ace Doll: I thought they sprayed for giant spiders last week?
me: Uh... okay. Keeps squeesing ace doll to hear all the things he can say*
Ace Doll: Of course you realize this means war.
Me: *gaspz* 8D SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
the real Ace: Oh jeez... *facepalms*

Let's see * digs around* Hear we are.

Lexi Doll: It's time to through are wait around.

Ace Doll:Let's make like an atome and split.

I almost forgot...........

THANKYOUSIAMESEFORTHETECHDOLLIT'SALMOSTASGOODASTHEREALTHINGANDPLEASEUPDATEYOUREPICSTORYVERYSOON,'KAY?PLZANDTHANKYOUAGAIN!!!!

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yea plz contiune and i will also treause my ace and lexi doll forever.

Hay guys i'm back and to celebrate I bring you Updates

Chapter 17

 

“Hay! Who's up for a ride before dinner?” Joe called out.

 

“That sounds like a great idea, Joe.” Lexi replied then addressed the Loonatics, “You guys in?”

 

“Neh, I'm fine wit' it.” Ace said once again petting Spirit, “It sounds like a lot of fun really.”

 

Rev zoomed over to Lexi and clapped his hands in excitement as he said, “Oh-can-we-can-we-can-we-can-we-can-we-can-we-I'd-REALY-like-to-rid-that-red-horse-over-there.”

 

Lexi looked over at a stall that held a reddish slightly brown horse. “Oh you mean Red. Sure you can ride him.”

 

“His-names-Red?”

 

“Yup, that's his name.” Max smiled, “Lets see It looks like Duck there has made friends with Midnight, Tech with Peach. She's a really good horse. And your friend Slam has Patch.”

 

“So...I'll ask again. How's up for a ride?”Joe asked again.

 

A symphony of yes came forth from the Loonatics and Bunny kids.

 

“Well fellas, and lades, let's saddles up then!” Jay-jay cheered.

 

“Whoa! Wait!” Alex interrupted.

 

“We need to get them ridding boots. Pa's rules.” Ryan finished.

 

“You guys are right. Max doesn't Pa and Ma keep spar boots some where out hear in the stalls?” Vivian asked.

 

“I think your right Viv. Come on fellas let get you ridding worthy.” Max said.

 

After a few moments of trying to find the boots. The Loonatics where all wearing ridding boots. Which where, in other words, cowboy boots, and after a quick lesson on how to place and strap the saddle onto there selected horses they where all ready to ride.

 

The large group took a lap around horse stalls so that all of them could get the feel of ridding before staring off towards the dirt path/road they had come in on. Ace took a glance at the horses Lexi's siblings rode. Max sat tall on a copper red one, Jay-jay had a slightly yellow-peach gold colored one, Joe was on one that had a light gray coloring that looked similar to wet chalk, Alex's horse had the same color and patches one would see on a orange tabby cat, Ryan's looked similar to a pug, and lastly Vivian's was a deep gray.

 

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 22:21, 2008-10-10

i like i like

You updated!

Please continue the story is great!!!!!!!!!

*Struggles in Cassidy's grasp* can Someone get me a crowbar?

Aw, Thanks Alex. *starts to pry cassidy off*

*Is unable to cassidy off* Huff Huff hufff... Cass Do you have the arms of Iron Man or somethin'?

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 20:16, 2008-10-11

*looks at Alex* Is there a Doc in the house?

*Snort* XD

*lies still then all of sudden burst up laughing like a manic*HHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i'm so hyper rite now i just had some suger MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........*is now running in cirlces*

hahahhhAHAHSHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH............*still running in cirlces hits a pole falls gets back up and contiunes running*ahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaahaahaahhaha

*starts to slow down and calm down*okay sugar energy gone i'm okay now......plz hurry and write the next chappie

OKay ^^

Chapter 18

 

“All right, hear is the main path.” Max said on top his horse, “ Down that way. The way we came hear by is the way to town. In the other direction you'll find three paths. One that leads to a near by lake, one that leads to a nice little meadow, and the last one leads into the forest. All of them are pretty good rides, and locations.”

 

“So where would you boys like to go?” Joe asked.

 

They guys all shrugged. Ace looked at Max, “Which would you suggest?”

 

“Well like I said there Ace. All are nice. We could separate into groups. That way you can all see the different sites. Tomorrow we can all go out again. ” Max suggested.

 

“That sounds fine with me.” Alex said.

 

“Hay Rev dude you and Red wont to race Alex, Milo, Otis, and I to the Forest?” Ryan asked.

 

“Oh-ya!- Your-on!” Replied as the three took off leaving a dust storm behind.

 

“Um...Tech?” Ace said.

 

“Ya Ace?” Tech asked.

 

“Why don't you go keep on eye on them. We all know how Rev can get.” Ace said. Tech shrugged and went to catch up.

 

“Well I think I'm going to take Chalk out to the meadow.” Joe said as he started to ride.

 

“Hay wait up bro. I'll go with.” Jay-jay looked over at Slam and Duck, “You two wont to come as well?”

 

“Sure.” Duck replied for them.

 

“All right. Come on Honey.” Jay-jay patted his horse and went with his brother; Slam and Duck in tow.

 

They watched as the two groups diapered down the path.

 

“I guess the four of us are lake bound.” Vivian said.

 

“True to that little sister.” Lexi said as she gently tapped Misty's side to get her going. Ace, Max, and Vivian fallowed. They soon came to where the path split into three ways. They went down the one on the far right, and just as said came up to a lake

 

“Whoa...It's beautiful.” Ace said as he looked out over the lake. Far on the horizon he could see the sun setting as the silhouettes of trees framed it.

 

“Ya, I know.” Lexi sighed as she dismounted Misty. Ace fallowed suite, “I used to come out hear all the time before I moved to the city.”

 

Lexi tied her horse to a near by post; Ace did the same, “So Lex, why did a small town Country Gal like you move to the big bad city?”

 

Lexi smiled at him before walking up to the edge of the lake where some large rocks where, and sat down on one, “I've told you before Ace,” She looked down, “a-academic reasons.”

 

Ace looked at he a moment before siting next to her, wrapping his arm around her, and pulling her closer, “Is some t'in' wrong, Lex?”

 

She smiled warmly at him and leaned into his chest, “Nothing... Just thinking about some old memories.”

 

A good 5 yards away, where the ground rose up in a small cliff like formation, Max stood atop his horse. Keeping a protective eye on his younger sister. He looked up when he heard the soft hoof beats of his littlest sister. Vivian road up next to him and also looked at there sister.

 

“Max?” She said still looking down.

 

“Ya little V?” He replied.

 

“Do you think Lexi will get hurt again...By this Ace?”

 

He sighed and took his line of vision to the sunset, “Viv, I do believe that he can hurt her if he wonted to. But part of me thinks he wont.”

 

“I trust him two... I just hope he doesn't end up being like Danny.”

 

“Viv, Danny was a good for nothing son of a” He stopped himself and looked down at her. With one eye brow up her facial expression said 'Watch it there.'

 

He slightly snickered, “Any ways, Danny is a bad person, and I don't this Ace hear would do the same things he did.”

 

Vivian smiled and looked over the lake, “I thought you'd say somethin' like that...I think I'm going to go let MouseFur have a drink.”

 

With that the littlest Bunny went down to where Lexi and Ace where. Max's horse let out a whinny.

 

“I know Copper. We'll be gettin' soon.” He said patting his horse.

 

nice it was great chappie Siamese...i luved the little moment that Ace and lexi shared and max sounds like a great big brother

Shibby! (Awesome)

I wonder what Danny did?
Great chapter Siamese!

EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED SO MUCH AWESOME.... uh.... AWESOMENESS! XD

Keep it up, girl! You're doing great! *snugs*

doggirl2772 wrote:

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Lika Dani and the others before me, I'm really glad you decided to continue! *snugs you* I absolutely love how this is turning out.

I wish I had a big brother like Max. Maybe then my life as big sis wouldn't be so difficult. XD

Plz continue, girl! I luff this story!!

Ace doll: Saddle up, boys and girls!
me: 8D!!!! *squishes it*

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You should meet my big brothers, Mark and Matt. Mostly Matt, he's more protective of me. No offence to Mark though. He's protective of me too.

Hay! I've come with the next chapter and...*hold up bucket* A new bucket of LU dolls!

These ones are packed full of lines from are own FanFictions  on the site

*pulls out dolls and squeezes*
Ace doll:Sneaking off? (from Whan it strikes)
Lexi doll: Smart ass (from Top Flight FBI)
Tech doll:Not quite, it tricked the computer's power control to believe there was a lightning strike....(Time Race)
Rev doll:I-honestly-don’t-know-Tech.-Something’s-messing-up-my-GPS-and-to-tell-you-the-ruth-I’m-kinda-getting-goose-bumps-all-though-I’m-a-roadrunner-and-I-guess-I-should-be-getting-roadrunner-bumps-but-then-again-humans-get-goose-bumps-so-maybe-I-should-be-getting-human-bumps-but-then-again-I’m-not-a-goose-so-maybe—UMPH! (in the cold)
Duck Doll:How the hell did I manage to grow that old!? The last time I checked my age, I was 21, and the year was 2774! (Loonatics Unleashed G)
Slam doll: Grabula! (um..?)

Chapter 19

 

Every one could hear the dinging of the dinner bell from the stables.

 

“Well boys, and gals, that would be the signal for us to all retreat by to the house for some supper.” Max said. They had all finished there rides and had been hanging out in the stalls. The large group of 12 walked in and soon sat down at the large dining table.

 

At the head of the table sat Russ siting to his right was Lexi. At her side was Ace, Jay-jay, Rev, Joe and at he end Vivian. At the end opposites of Russ was Linda. At Russes right it went Max, Tech, Alex, Ryan, Duck, and Slam.

 

For dinner it was stew and it was hardy and very filling.

 

“Mmmm. Great stew Mrs. Bunny.” Ace said. The rest of loonatics mumbled an agreement through full mouths.

 

“Thank you Ace, dear. If any of you boys want, there is more.” Linda smiled.

 

“Thanks, but I'm sure one bowl should fill us up. It's very filling.” Tech said.

 

“Ya, these guys are used to eating small Pizza portions most every night.” Lexi said, “Of coarse I'm sure Slam would love some more of your dinner Ma. Huh bud?”

 

“Surebla Ya!” Slam grumbled as he swallowed the last of the food in his bowl, which had been ruffly half of the total. Linda put her hands together happily.

 

“It's nice to see a young man with a apatite. Makes it that nothing gos to waist. Let me refill your bowl, dear.” Linda got up and took Slams bowl.

 

“Mhmm! Ma, us to pleas!” Ryan said as he and Alex lifted there empty bowls.

 

“Hear, Let me help you ma. I'm done eating.” Lexi said as she got up. Taking hers and her two brothers bowls with her.

 

“Oh, thank you sweety.”Linda and Lexi went into the kitchen.

 

As Lexi got up and left Ace trailed her with his eyes. That is, until he caught site of her father watching him. Sing that, Ace retreated his eyes from the mans daughter and back to his food.

 

“So Ace.” ace looked up at Russ.

 

“Yes Sir?” Ace asked.

 

“What where you before the meter?”

 

Ace straitened up a little, “A Stunt Double.”

 

“That was it.” Russ said sternly, “No schooling, like collage?”

 

Ace wasn't going to lie, even though he wished the truth was a little different, “No, Couldn't afford it, and was never offered a scholarship. I was savin' up though. If dere was one t'ing my father taught me, dat would be da importants of learning and ejection.”

 

“I thought you said you where raised by foster parents?”Max said from across from him.

 

“Ya, but my parent where alive till I was ten, and you can learn a lot from a man in ten years.” Ace replied.

 

“Well spoken, Ace.” Russ complemented him.

 

“Thank you sir.” Ace said with a small smile.

 

Lexi and Linda returned and the dinner continued with lively conversation till they disbanded to there rooms for the night.

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 21:47, 2008-11-19

Awesome work Siamese...... Hmmm, I wonder what Danny did till Max called him a son of a .........

* gets wack in the head by Vivian *

Owhhh =(

Yah new chappy!!!

Alex: Thank you. i hope to have the next chapter up soon
Sapphire: Danny shall a peer in a couple of chapters to come, along with a surprise character.
PG: Well...Lets jest say, Russ has his reasons.
Lily:Thanks.
Danielle: Um....