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OMG!

I can't wait for more!

Somehow, I wouldn't want to be friends with Jessi!  XD

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Chapter 27


Looks like der getting along well.” Ace said as he looked over to where Duck was making conversation with Eona next to the dance floor. By the looks of it he wasn't saying any corny pick up lines that are more likely to offend then sound charming.


Still a little wired in my eyes.” Lexi replied as she took another sip from the soda in front of her. As Max said he got a few table on the upper floor. Ace and Lexi sat at the end of the table across from each other where they both could see over the edge of the upper balconies. Down below bellowed the noise of the clubs D.J., dancing people, holier of those cheering the rider of the mechanical bull, laughter, and other such commotion.


 

Why is it so 'wired'?” Ace asked.


 

Lexi gave him a look, “Even thou I haven't seen her in a wile I still think of Eona as my best friend. And well Duck is...Duck! As a person he's truly a great guy, but when he tries to come on to a girl. Well you know.


 

Ya, he can make a bit of an ass of himself.” Ace replied.


 

Lexi softly giggled.


 

So where'd your bothers go?”


 

Bull ride.” Lexi replied dully, “See who can stay on the longest. They've been doing that sens we where all kids.”


 

It looks as though you and I are da only ones not doing any t'ing.” The other loonatics had blended into the crowds not to long ago.


 

Lexi looked at Ace and shrugged, “So?” she smiled, “You not having fun?”


 

Ace smiled back, “Oh, I'm having fun. Considering dis is one of da first times you and I have been alone, with out any of you family, I can finally do dis.


 

They both leaned over into a kiss. When they separated they happened to listen to the current song playing.


 

'guess that I'm just falling deeper into something I've never known.'
'But the way that I'm feeling, makes me realize that it can't be wrong'.
'You're love's like a summer rain, washing my doubts away.'

'Seven days and seven nights of thunder,'
'The waters rising and I'm slipping under'.
'I think I fell in love with the 8th world wonder.'


 

Lexi giggled, “Are song.”


 

From that night we first kissed.” Ace said as he pushed some of Lexis stray hairs back.


 

You mean the nigh we got together.”


 

Come on.” Ace took her by the hand and led her down to the dance floor. There they dance closely as the song continued on.


 

'Seven days and seven nights of thunder,'
'The waters rising and I'm slipping under.'
'I think I fell in love with the 8th world wonder.'


 

The two danced to the next few songs after that before Ace had to excuse himself to the restroom. Lexi leaned on the one of the clubs walls waiting for his return. She glanced around. She didn't see any of her friends or brothers. Not that she gave that much thought. The club was big. She questioned if her brothers where still riding the bull.


She lifted off the wall and looked a bit better. She often enjoyed looking for friends in a maze of people. It was like a living game of where's Waldo. But her heart jumped and her eyes widened when she heard the voice behind her.


Hey Lexi.


 

Lexi quickly turned around to see a fellow rabbit Anthro. His fur was black and white. His short hair a even darker shade of black. His eyes where olive. He had on denim blue jeans, a belt with a rodeo won belt buckle, brown shirt, and brown boots. The rabbit was slightly bulkier then Ace.


 

Danny.” Lexi recomposed herself and glared at him.


 

Aww, come on, is that any way to great your boyfriend?” He said as he placed his hand on Lexis cheek.


 

She slapped his hand away and glared at him, “You are NOT by boyfriend! Your not even a friend!”


He smiled at her before suddenly pushing her against the wall. His hands firmly holding onto her shoulders. Lexi let out a grunt as her back made impact with the wall. She looked up at him in shock.


 

What is it?” He asked, as if playing a game, as he used his thumb to trace her lips, “have you replaced me?


Lexi made a movement to push him away, but in return he pushed his body against hers. Grinding his hipbone into hers. He smiled wider as she closed her eyes in pain. In the back of her mind she knew she could easily over power him, but this knowledge was lost in a forgotten fear. She could feel tears wanting to escape. She shut her eyes tightly and turned her head away from him. She refused to let him see her cry.


Then, like a miracle, Lexi felt the other body tugged away from her own. Looking up she saw Ace with one of his hands on Dannys shoulders. Ace's look, and voice, was very firm.“You know Doc, dat ain't any way to treat a lady.”


Danny glared at his pushed Aces hand away, “This is non of your business, 'Doc'”


 

Danny turned back towards Lexi, but this time Ace grabbed Dannys shirt then slammed his back to the wall. Pinning him to the wall so he couldn't move. Despite looks, Ace was obviously the stronger of the two. Ace lifted his free arm up indicating for Lexi to come over to him. Without hesitation Lexi shut the gap between her and Ace. He wrapped his arm around her. He gave Lexi a swift look of concern, before reverting his glare back to Danny.


 

If it involves Lexi it's very much my business.” With a jerk Ace shoved Danny to the ground, “If I ever see you touch her like dat again you'll be, very, sorry.


With that the two walked away. Ace giving a swift glance back to see Danny glaring at hem as he got to his feet. As Ace and Lexi walked back to there table Ace could feel Lexi slightly shaking. Once at the tables Ace looked at her. His hands gently on her shoulders.


Lex? Are you okay? He didn't hurt you?” Concern pulsing through his every molecule.


 

No, I-I'm fine Ace.” She replied.


 

Ace wasn't convinced, but the look she had didn't make him ask twice, “Who was dat guy?


 

Lexi looked up at him, “Danny. He's...He's and Ex of mine.”


Ace took notice of how between every word Lexi looked away from. She wasn't fine, but he new what ever it was she wouldn't want to talk about it.


 

If you'll excuse me Ace, I-I'm going to go to the restroom.


 

All right Lexi.” Ace watched her till she disappeared through the Womens room door. With a heavy sigh Ace plopped down into his seat.


 

What's the matter Ace man?” Ace looked up to see Jessi taking a set next to him fallowed by Max and Jay-Jay who sat in front of the two. Jessi placing a thing of French fries in the middle of the table to share.


 

I'm not sure.” Ace said looking down.


 

What do ya mean?” Max asked.


I was coming back from da bathroom when I saw some guy with Lexi. It was a little obvious, even from a distance, he wasn't treating her right.”


 

Max looked at Ace, “Did you get his name?”


 

Ya. Lexi said his name's Danny.”


What!” Ace looked up as Jay-jay was suddenly to his feet and Max 'n' Jessi where as tense as the day is long.


 

Where is he!” Jay-Jay said in anger, “I swear if he touched her this time I'm going to kill 'im!


 

Pipe down Jay!” Max said as he pulled Jay-jay to his seat. “you ain't staring any fights tonight.


 

What's wrong?” Ace asked, “who is he?


 

Max looked at Ace then at the table and back again, “I'll tell you later. In privet.


 

Ace looked at Max. He wanted to know now, but agreed to wait.


 

 



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poor lexi that was so sweet of ace 2 come to her resuce

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OMG, Danny is such a.....Darn, I can't think of a word that would justify what Danny is!!!

Anyway, grear chapter, It makes me feel sorry for all of them, except Danny.
Y'know, Lexi, coz of what happened, Ace, because that was his girlfriend who was being...mistreated, And her brothers and friends because they didn't know about it until after it had happend!

And Eona because she's with Duck!   =P

 

I'm interested to find out what Max is going to tell Ace. 

I can't wait for more!   biggrin



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Me: sprint.gif

Ace: She really likes the story and wants you to update.

Me: popcorn.gif Popcorn, anyone?

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That freaking *bleep* *bleep*. Ace should have….. He should have…. Okay, I don’t know what he could have done to that *bleeeep*

Sapphire: *twitches*

Great chappie by the way Siamese *snugs*. *sits down patiently to know what Danni actually did*


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Thanks guys and PG I think Eona is happy to be stuck with duck ;P

In the next chapter all shall be reviled!!

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XP

Stuck with Duck, it Rhymes!   

Oh, I do like Rhymes, that's why Dr, Suess is A-MAZING!!!   (E.g. 'The Cat In The Hat)



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Chapter 28

 

:Warning: This chapter contains mature content:

 

:reader discretion is advised:

 

Ace bolted up right in a cold sweat gasping for Air.

 

Ace? Ace are you okay?!” Lexi quietly yelled on the bed next to him.

 

Ace took a dry swallow and placed his hand on his head, “I-I must have had a nightmare.

 

Lexi looked at him in confusion, “You say that like your not sure.”

 

Dats because I'm not.” he looked at her, “I don't remember what was in the dream.

 

Both bunnies jumped when the door suddenly opened and Max came in. Sudden fear built up in Lexi. Max, her eldest brother, only older brother, jest came in to see his kid sister breaking one of the houses most strictest rules. The separation of family and guest, of girls and boys. Though it seemed harmless Lexi knew her father. He was a kind man, but he could also be a scary man.

 

And the fact that Ace slept shirtless, was now covered in sweat, and on this particular night Lexi decided to ware her favorite pajamas, an old shirt of Ace's and a pair of short-shorts, didn't help the situation.

 

You,” Max said pointing to Lexi, “Get to your room. You,” this time he pointed to Ace, “Get dressed your coming with me.

 

Lexi gave Ace a kiss before reluctantly getting out of the bed and heading to her and her sisters bed room.

 

Ace covered his mouth as he released one extra large yawn. Having a restless night by a forgotten nightmare, plus being separated form the warmth of his girlfriend, plus being dragged outside onto a horse to ride around in the dark equaled one tired rabbit.

 

So what's up wit' you and your sister waking up so early?” Ace asked as he had Spirit speed up a bit to catch up to Max and Copper.

 

Max laughed, “Lets jest say when your raised on a farm with as many siblings as we do the early hours are the best time for alone time.”

 

Ace nodded, “Look Max, what ever you saw in da bed room jest now. I want you to know I didn't-

 

That's okay Ace. I know y'didn't do anything. And I didn't drag you out here to talk about you and my sister.”

 

Den why did you drag me out here?”

 

Max stopped his horse. Ace mimicked the action. Max got of Copper and walked the horse over to a tree ware he tied the horse. Ace again mimicked and took a look around. Even in the dark Ace new they where at a small clearing next to the path up to the lake. The two sat down on a couple of large flat boulders.

 

Yesterday Ace you asked me who Danny is and why we all got tens when you said he had touched Lexi.”

 

Ya... I did.”

 

Max gave a half hearted smile and looked up at the sky, “You know, Lexi, Joe, and I are the oldest three in are family. Growing up all the younger ones looked up to us. Piked one of us to be there idol. Jay-Jay looked up to Lexi. Still dose actually. Lexi looked after Jay-jay. Stuck up for him at school. She even fought a few fights for that kid. On a farm you literally need to pull your own wait, lets jest say Jay-jay is a very light boy.

 

They where close. Very close. Even when Lexi got into Jr high and started getting her crushes and becoming more girly then the tomboy she was. She had the occasional boyfriend. Non of them any thing serious. Till Danny. She was Six-teen he was seven-teen. Both Juniors in High school. Well they started dating as sophomore. He seemed like a fine young man. Good grades, Football team, son of the Sheriff. Looking back do we all finely see jest how much a womanizer he was.

 

They'd been together for a year and like any other teen age boy Danny wanted to be with Lexi physically. But Lexi always believed in love. I remember her saying that the day she lets someone that close to her she wanted to make sure she was in love and he as too. She didn't think Danny loved her. At least in the way she was talking about. He got pushy and started to pressure her into it, but still she denied him. So he dumped her for it. Broke Lexis heart.

 

Is dat why you guys are so protective of her?” Ace asked.

 

Nah, getting ones heart broken is part of dating. We all new it would happen sooner or later. We weren't happy with the reason why, but new it would happen. We're protective of her for a hole other reason. You see about a month after there break up...” Max sighed. “ The guys and I where out doing are chores, Vivian was with us. Watching sens she was still to young to have any of the larger chores, but Lexi was inside. She'd done hers all ready and was studding for a history exam. Ma and Pa where out. We needed groceries.”

 

Jay-jay and I where walking by the house going from the filed to the horses. Jay-Jay was only nine, and he heard it.”

 

Ace watched as Max's face became saddened and angered, “He heard what?”

 

The scream.” Max said. He looked down, “It was soft and muffled and even after Jay-Jay said something I still didn't hear. He became edgy when he realized it was coming from the house. To make him relax I thought we'd go in, find nothing, have a laugh and go back to work. But when we got closer we both heard it. We rushed in. fallowing a continues stream of muffled screams. It led to Lexi's bed room.”...

 

I told you I heard a scream Max!” Jay-jay said as the ran through the house.

 

I know!” Max replied as they heard another one. They burst open the door to the bed room there sisters shared.

 

For a second they stood in the door frame in shock. There sister had always been brave and the only time they ever saw her in tears was when she was in emotional of physical pain. These tears where of fear. Her eyes wide and lip quivering. Her arms forcefully held above her head. Her shirt torn at the shoulder. Her shirt covered her body asher pants had been pulled to her knees. And above her. The cause of this seen that would forever be imprinted to the two brothers brains. Danny.

 

Get off my sister!” The small nine year old yelled. In one jump Jay-Jay had slammed Danny into the wall. Max quickly when for his sister. Getting slapped at as Lexi remained in a state of shock, but he managed to get Lexi over to the other bed. Looking over Max bore witness to Jay-Jay sitting on Danny's chest and swinging each fist with out letting out any restraint.

 

Max quickly grabbed the boy off. Pushing him back toured Lexi. Max then grabbed the now bloodied up Danny by the back of the shirt and dragged him out of the room. The Jay-Jay lifting his arms up and being a wall between Danny and Lexi.

 

Get the hell off are property!” Max yelled as he shoved Danny down the front steps landing him in the dirt. The other bunny children, now done with there chores, saw this and quickly ran over to there older brother.

 

Your little brother will pay for this!” Danny yelled back holding a very bloody noise.

 

Joe get me the shot gun. We have a trespasser to shoot.” With a final glare Danny ran off.

 

Max what happened?” Joe asked.

 

go call mom and dad. Tell them to get home.” Max ordered.

 

But there at the store and they don't have there cell pones.

 

Then call anyone and everyone! We live in a small town the news in bond to reach them!” Max yelled as walked back in.

 

What do I say? What's happened.” the elven year old asked.

 

As Max walked in he saw Lexi laying on the sofa, her head laying in Jay-Jays lap. Jay-Jay had his arms around her in an awkward hug. She had righted her clothing, and now laid quietly crying. Max went to her and stroked her cheek.

 

Max!” Joe yelled still looking for an answer as he pulled out his cell.

 

Lexi's been attacked.” Max said looking at Joe then back to Lexi, “you'll be okay sis. You'll be okay.

 

He looked at all hi frightened siblings. Non of them could understand. Non of them new what Sex was let alone what Rape, and, in there sisters case, attempted Rape was. Max looked at Jay-Jay. Jay-Jay now knew.

 

You'll be okay.”...

 

Because his father was the Sheriff Danny got off Scott free.That's why we're protective.

 

Ace clenched his hands. His face twitching between anger and sadness. He didn't know how to feel. He was angry, yes. The knowledge that something like that happened to a great gal like Lexi, his girlfriend. He was sad, the fact that it happened, and that Lexi never told him.

 

That sunk in. why did she never tell him? They've been friends for years, a couple for a year, “She never told me.

It's hard for her to discuss.” Max stood up and looked at the horizon. The sun was rising. “The reason we are all hesitant to trust you Ace is because sens Danny only you've been a major boyfriend. I don't know how far in your relationship you are, nor am I going to ask, but think about it Ace. The two of you share a bed every night, despite rules, you clam to love her, she clams to love you, Lexi wants her first time to be an act of love... We're afraid she'll get hurt again.



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Whoa, wow, Jay-Jay is definitely a good brother, as young as he was, he still had the guts and the brains to help.

And Max certainly is smart, and respectful.  He'd be such an awesome older brother!

And I wonder what's gonna happen now?!

-- Edited by PurpleGirly on Sunday 28th of June 2009 01:29:23 PM

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poor lexi....maz and jay-jay are really great brothers

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whoa very intense chapter! awesome job! can't wait for more :)

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