Just a dream I had,so I thought i'd share it with you guys.I'm in it.
Chapter 1:A new exhibit
scene:Me,my mom,and lil'sis are walking through the zoo.I was very excited to see the new exhibit that was said to contain rare and powerful creatures.I was shocked to see that the Loonatics were in the cage.All had depressed expressions on their faces,but one was even more upset then the others,Rev.People were laughing at and making fun of them,calling them freaks and such for being anthromorphic animals. Everyone of them hung their heads in shame,Rev had tears in his eyes and was sniffling.I pitied him and leaned over the railing,stuck my hand out and cupped his chin in it.He stared at me with big glassy eyes.I used the thumb on my free hand to wipe away a tear.He was still upset so I embraced him.
My mom:Why in the world are you hugging him? Me:Ma! Don't you see how sad he is?
I kept holding him saying that everything was going to be okay. I did'nt know how but I was going to help them escape!
end of chapter. Weird dream huh? It gets weirder.
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Why can't we get along?
The time is always right to do what is right. You can stand tall without standing on someone elses head.
I agree with kari, as in you should make the chapters a bit longer on this. Unless the story was, like, super short, in which it should be put in one post. Poor Rev. *huggles*
Write longer,put it
