Cassidy:....... Don't worry about her. Great story!
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Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?! Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3 Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-
Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3
Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
That was a really well formulated story Akira, the plot and everything was great. It was written in a way so you could usually get a pretty good mental image of whats happening in the text.
Cassidy Coyote: Yes I'm afraid. It's over. But at least they have a new beginning where they'll be happy. And as someone else said; One door closes, another opens. I'll be getting on with another story very soon. That is until after I go on holiday with my family.
Techfan: Wow. Really? I do try to get the reader to visualise the scenes going on. Thank you very much.
Thank you for the comments guys. I won't be able to submit anymore stories this week cos I'm gonna be on holiday for a week. From Monday to Friday, I will be gone. But don't panic! I'll return!
Cassidy: *feels my forehead* Are you sure you don't have a fever?
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Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?! Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3 Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-
Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3
Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
My god Akira, you are awsome at writing!Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees make a sequal! Animanics was my favorite show when I was a kid. You know what I'm gonna do right now. I'm gonna go lock myself in my bedroom for hours working on an art work for this story
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
My god Akira, you are awsome at writing!Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees make a sequal! Animanics was my favorite show when I was a kid. You know what I'm gonna do right now. I'm gonna go lock myself in my bedroom for hours working on an art work for this story
Really? Um... thank you . It would be an honour.
But I'm still thinking about the sequel as in in whether or not I should leave it at that. I'm still thinking about it.