Well LoonaticsF, I would hafe to say I love your FBI loonatics as much as you love mine.

Keep going!

Hmm... I dont really have any suggjestions, but I find it hard to imagine Lexi as a cold blooded assian for the FBI, or Ace killing more people than he could count. I just dont think they're personalities are right for it.

Wait, what does OOC stand for?

OH OK, then nevermind. I'd be scared of Lexi... then again anyone whos a completely emotionless proffesional killer should be feared.

Just noticed: I'm a beast! Yay!

ehhh pardon?

LoonaticsF wrote:

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ehhh pardon?

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Well shes a killing machine in your story, you have to be cold to be a killing machine.

 

I would update today, but i couldn't get in FF. So i will post the chapter here until i will get in... We don't want Siamese to wait now, do we?

*with flames for eyes*! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I’ve had it! I’m going to kill people in this one. No one cuts me in Math and goes away with it. Die Math teacher, DIE!!!!!!!
Ace: Uhm, I don’t think she can hear you…
Me: I don’t care! She’s going to DIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE
Ace: Calm down! She just said that she will! She hasn’t cut you… *gulps*… yet
Me: WHAT DO YOU MEAN ‘YET’
Ace: Just ignore her… R&R! *runs away*
Me: *Chases Ace* COME BACK HERE!!!!!!!!!!!

(Warning! Warning! OCs coming!) Ok… Time for…

CHAPTER 3: PARIS!

Normal POV

Ace and Lexi got in Tech’s car to find the rest of the gang grinning. “So, Lex, satisfied with your new role?” Tech teased, grinning even wider (if it was even possible…) “Tech, you really like getting red cheeks, don’t you? Even if it isn’t from your girlfriends…” she said glaring. “You could say it that way…” he replied before starting the car and heading to the airport. “Well, you know, I think your brother has to do something with it…” he continued as he sped up. Everyone looked at Lexi and saw what they were expecting to see: She was fuming. “MY BROTHER????? SINCE WHEN DOES MY BROTHER WANT ME PAIRED FOR A MISSION???? SINCE WHEN DOES MY BROTHER EVEN CARES ABOUT MY MISSIONS???” she screamed. “Whoa! Calm down Lex! I don’t know why! That you’re angry with your brother, doesn’t mean that my car windows have to crash!” Tech said laughing…
“Easy for you to say! You haven’t an overprotective brother around you every single moment of your day!” she muttered.

A quarter later…
“We’re here guys!” Tech said. “Good… I was starting to get bored…” said Danger getting out of the car and stretching. Soon enough the gang was in the airport, running to catch their flight.
They arrived at the gate only 5’ before the final announce.
“Pew… That was a close one…” Rev said as he sat down on his seat. “You said it!” Said duck. “For a minute I thought we were going to miss it!” he added.
Lexi rested her head on the seat, her cat sleeping on her lap, listening to her mp3, when Tech’s head popped out beside her. “What are you listening to?” he asked before taking her headphones and sitting beside her. “Hey! Give these back!” Lexi exclaimed as she tried to take her headphones from him. But he wouldn’t let her. He laughed “Lex, I can’t believe you! You still have these? Omg! I remember them…”
“Tech, stop screaming and give me my mp3 back!” Lexi growled. “Hey, relax! The fact that you still like listening to our music isn’t something you have to be ashamed of!” Tech said.
“What do you mean ‘our music’?” they heard a voice from the seat behind them.
“Hey Ace! Didn’t see you back there!” Tech greeted. “And as for the answer you want-” he was cut by Lexi slapping him (gently…). “Just ignore him… He doesn’t get much sleep lately and he’s saying the first thins that pop out in his mind, which means he’s saying insane things, which means that he didn’t mean a thing of what he said, which means that haha, we laughed but he was just leaving, weren’t you ‘Techy’?” she put extra emphasis at the last words. Tech touched the spot where she had slapped him and growled. “Fine, fine” he rolled his eyes. “This isn’t my seat anyways… So I pass it to its true owner… Mr Ace, here you go… I’m outta here. C ya Lex!” He said as he stood up. Lexi growled “Can’t this day get any better!” she mumbled. Suddenly Tech’s head popped out from behind her again. “Oh! And I’m taking your mp3 with me.” He said grabbing the mp3 from her hands. “Hurried to talk, I guess…” she banged her head on the back of her seat. “Can’t you just PLEASE give me my book?”
“Nope! Don’t think so… No” Tech said
“Well, you know…”
“…you hate me, I know” Just then her mobile phone started to ring.
“Message…” she sighed. She looked beside her to see Ace taking his seat, then back to her mobile phone. The message was from Tech: I give you a bet: If you kiss him in the next one week, the band is playing again. If not, then I give you a favor… So, what do you say?
She sighed. “Old Tech, old Tech…” She typed: Tech, really when you’re pissed off, you do stupid bets… So, I accept. Another favor for my collection!
She looked down at her cat. “Honestly, Madam P… What is he thinking…” she mumbled.

Another quarter later… (Sue me! I had nothing else to write!)
Ace looked around. Everyone was sleeping. Even Lexi. He was starting to get bored. He glanced at his teammate. He saw her blink twice, before she decided to wake up. She stretched and looked at him. “What?” she raised an eyebrow. “Nothing…” he said. “How much did I sleep?” she asked him. “Hmmm… I’d say for about… 10 minutes?”
“10 minutes? Gosh, I’m turning into a sleepy-head!” She laughed.
“You’re not the sleep-in-planes type, are you?”
“You said it…” she yawned and looked down to her cat. “In contrast with someone else here…” she smiled.
“What are ya going to do now?” Ace asked
“Hmm… I can’t do much… Tech’s got my mp3 and generally my bag, so I’ll just stand by the window staring at the wonderful view of clouds… and clouds… and clouds. Oh! Look! Another cloud!” She said obviously annoyed. “This dog is going to die…” she sighed. Just then, they heard Tech speaking at his sleep: “I’m not a dog, I’m a coyote!” he growled. They both laughed.
“Did you mean that back there? That I’m not as bad as you thought in the beginning?” Ace asked suddenly. She smirked “No1: I said that you maybe aren’t that bad… And no2: Well, there is a tiny chance I did…” He smirked too “How much tiny?” he asked again “Tiny enough for you to worry…” she joked
“Don’t tell me… Now I’m scared… Help me!” He faked a childish voice
She rolled her eyes “Yeah, yeah… whatever…”
“So, if you don’t have anything else to do, care to talk?” he asked
“I’m so desperately bored right now, that I think that I could do even that…” she said making a desperate face.
“So, what about talking about your past?”
“My past? Don’t think so…I don’t like talking about it…” she said looking away
“Oh c’mon! I’ll tell you for mine!”
“What makes you think I wanna know?”
“Just guessing…”
“Why do you want to know about mine?”
He shrugged “Just thought that this would make things more comfortable…”
“Well, I don’t think so…”
“Please?”
“Nope!”
“C’mon!”
“Don’t think so…”
“Just a little bit…”
“Oh, alright, alright! But you start!” She said sinking deep into her seat
“Ok… I have not much to say… Born in Los Angeles and in my 12 I moved in NY and started my training as an agent… And in my 15 I was the top agent…Now your turn…”(note: I don’t know A THING about FBI… So I’ll just make up the whole story… And I have a feeling that it will be FAR from the truth… But HEY! This is the fanfic FBI! Since my Loonatics are nothing like the real ones, why should the FBI be?”)

Ace’s POV (errr… where did that came from?)

I saw her twist uncomfortably. “I’m warning you… This is going to be long…” she said “I don’t really care…” I said shrugging
“Fine… I was born in NY and grown up in NY. In my 8, my parents died at a car accident…” I saw her stiffen at the word accident “…and that was the age when I started my training…”
“Woah! Hold it right there… You started training at 8? I thought that they were taking kids only from 10!”
“Yeah… Well, I was an exception…” she shrugged “…and my 13 I was good enough to become top agent… But someone was grabbing the place from just in front of my hands…”
“Oh! That would be me…” I smirked. “How did you meet Tech and the guys?” I asked
“I don’t exactly remember… But I remember that with Tech we were friends since kindergarten… We were both dreaming for a job with action since then… It was at our 5 when he found Madam P almost dead… he gave her to me…” I saw her stroking her cat, now lost deep in her thoughts. “Eh, what about snapping out of the flashback and continue talking?” I ask, trying to hide a smile. She shakes her head. “Yeah, sorry… Well we met the rest of the gang at the school for agents… You know… We became a team quickly… But we didn’t really have a lot in common… For the record, only two things…”
“Which are?”
She raised an eyebrow to me “You know, curiosity killed the cat…”
“I’m a rabbit, in case you didn’t notice!”
“Cut out the fun… Well the first is that we were all working for FBI. Duh! And the second, is something that you won’t convince me in any way to tell you…”
“Wanna try me?”
“No, thank you… And now that you heard what you wanted to hear, take my cat.”
WHAT? “WHAT?” I almost yelled. She placed a hand to cover my mouth. “Are you crazy? Just take her!” she hissed “Ok…” I eyed her suspiciously before taking her cat. I hear her dagger slip down her sleeve. She knees on the seat and turns around, to face the back. “Er, what exactly are you doing?”
“Shhhh!” she hisses again. I see her stretch her hand which is holding the dagger and driving it towards Tech. I watch in amusement to see what she’ll do next. To my surprise, she wraps the headphones’ cable, which is hanging near Tech’s neck, on her dagger. The headphones fall from Tech’s ears, as she continue to wrap the cable around the dagger. Now the mp3 appeared slowly. “Please don’t wake up now…” I hear her mumble. Suddenly, Tech blinks twice and opens his eyes. I see her freeze. “Ehm… Hi!” she smiles innocently.
“Give this back Lex” I look or her reaction. Wait a minute… IS SHE PUPPY-DOG POUTING? Omg! Yes she is! She looks really cute right now! WTH??? Where did that came from?
“Please?”
“Oh holly coyotes! Stop it!”
“Please?”
“I’m not looking! I’m not looking!”
“Please?”
“FINE! Here’s your mp3 kiddo”
“Thanx papa!”
I raised an eyebrow at them, as Lexi turned on the mp3. I looked at Tech.
“You can say whatever you want… I know her good enough, to know that the volume is on its highest level… Do you guys get along?”
I shrugged “You can say so…”
“Taken aback by the puppy-dog pout, I see…”
“Yeah, a little…”
“I’ll say you one thing: You can never be sure about her. Even I can’t say when she likes or dislikes someone… I remember in high school, her first boyfriend was someone she was really cold with. We then thought that that was how she was behaving when she liked someone… Well, we were wrong! The second one was a really close friend of her…”
Hmmm another clue about her… I have to note these…
“Tech, will you please stop talking about my boyfriends?” She suddenly said
He pouted “But it’s fun!”
“Tech!” she said with gritted teeth. Another note: Her mood can change really quickly.
Some more hours pass and I have to say they feel like years. And finally:
“Welcome to Orly, airport of Paris! Hope you enjoyed your flight and we wish you a nice stay in Paris!”
Me, Lexi and Tech stood up. The others were still sleeping.
“Tech, you take Rev, I take Duck and Ace, you can take Slam…” Lexi and Tech exchanged winks, and I saw her walking towards Duck, turning on the mp3 and placing the headphones in his ears, with an evil smirk.
A second later…
“GAH! They caught us! But Danger Duck won’t fall without a fight!” Duck exclaimed jumping off his seat. Lexi giggled. “Duck, it’s just me!”
“You’re despicable!” he exclaimed glaring ay her.
“Who, me?” she smiled at him innocently.
“Your turn Tech!” she continued snickering.
Tech looked at Rev and smirked. He walked slowly towards him and -smirking- he grabbed his beak and kept it closed so he couldn’t breath. His eyes opened wide. “Help!” he said. The others, along with Duck, laughed. Soon Rev joined them.
“Tech -laugh- don’t do -laugh- that again to the -laugh- poor birdy!” Lexi said trying to catch her breath.
“Er, where’s the funny thing in that one again?” I asked. She patted my back. “Rev can hold his breath for 10 minutes, without even taking a breath in the beginning!” She laughed.
“Are we there yet?” that was Slam.
“Oh man! You destroyed all the fun! I still had some cold water!” Tech said
“TECH! Leave him alone! No cold water for Slam this time! It was for you!” Lexi said laughing
“I have to admit… You guys laugh so loud that you could bring a dead man back to life!” Slam said. Lexi froze. “Well, unfortunately for us, that can’t happen now, can it?” She turned around. “C’mon, let’s go!” she said before heading to the exit. Walking towards it too, I heard Tech and Slam talking:
“Me and my mouth! I knew it’s hurting her! Why should I speak?” Slam said
“It’s not your fault! It’s just… She’s… It’s the day, ok? She will be a little like that all day long I guess. And her brother can be so cruel sometimes! Coming THIS time to remind her!”
“What’s wrong with this time?” yeah… Very good question!
Tech shifted uncomfortably. “Sorry Slam. I can’t tell you… I promised like… ten years ago, to keep it a secret…” Tech said (a/n isn’t Tech a great friend! Ten years and he still remember his promise! Err…. Anyways. On with the story)
“It’s ok, I understand…” Slam said
“Guys, did you know we were staying at Hilton?” that was Duck
Tech chuckled “I was the only one who knew Duck!” he said
“Guys are you coming or what!” a very annoyed Lexi yelled. Rev chuckled
“Getting a little ****y, aren’t we now Lexi…” he said
“You are? Didn’t notice…”
“Oh, c’mon, you know what I mean!”
“I do?”
“CUT IT OUT!!!!!!!!!! THAT’S AN ORDER!” we all turned around and saw Duck gulping “Well… I thought about joining the game…”
“Let’s go out already!” Tech said
“Look who’s in a hurry now!” Lexi said sarcastically
“Not the time to be sarcastic, Lex!” they glared daggers at each other
“You guys really want to spend the evening in the plane, don’t cha?” I said rolling my eyes. They sighed and headed towards the door. Once more, I saved the day!
Now we’re waiting for our luggage. And it seems like we’re going to wait for a long time. I look around bored. My eyes stop at Tech and Lexi. They seem bored too. Suddenly, without any warning, Tech’s glance turns into a glare. He pats Lexi on the shoulder. She turns around to face him with a questioning look.
“What?” She asks raising an eyebrow.
“Cut out the eyebrow raising, and look over there!” He hiss
Surprisingly, she does as he says. And her eyes grow wide. “What is she doing here?” she says in shock. I follow her look, only to see the most beautiful rabbit-girl I’ve ever seen. She has white fur and blue eyes. I’m so busy staring, that I haven’t noticed Rev, right next to me. “Interested in her, aren’t you?” he says suddenly. That makes me jump.
“What? Oh! Yeah…” I say. He looks at her with disgust I can’t understand.
“Don’t worry… She saw you staring… She’ll come to you…” he said before turning around.
“Wait! How do you know?” I stop him
“Let’s just say that she’s an old enemy…” he said before leaving. Some more minutes pass, and I see her finally start walking towards me. And, what a weird thing! Everyone is stepping aside at her sight. Tech whispers something to Lexi, and she nods. Then he goes away.
The girl continues walking until she reaches Lexi. Then, she stops.
“Step aside!” She growls
“Why should I?” Lexi asks
“I’m not gonna say it again: Step, aside!” She says again. Lexi narrowed her eyes.
“Walk around me…” She replies. The girl’s eyes widen
“Oh! It’s you!” She says, trying to sound bored. “And I thought I knew that dialogue from somewhere…” she continues “Aren’t you still the rebel…”
“Aren’t you still the idiot snob…”
“I don’t have for chit chat… Step aside”
“Walk around me!”
“I’m not gonna do that!”
“I’m not gonna move!”
“I’m going to push you!” She growls. Lexi smirks.
“You wouldn’t dare… You might break a nail!” She chuckled. I decide to put an end at this.
“Lex, I think you should move…” I say
She doesn’t even turn to face me
“No1: No one asked you and No2: Who gave you permission to call me Lex?”
“Didn’t think I needed it!”
“Well rabbit-head, think again!” She said. I don’t quite remember what happened next. I think that the other girl tried to push her away, but I’m sure that she ended with a dagger an inch away from her skin. It was well hidden, but I could feel the other girl freezing.
“You wouldn’t!” She whispered
“You’re right… I wouldn’t…” she put the dagger back in her sleeve. “Just know that nothing would give me as much pleasure as that!” She whispered before pushing her and walking towards Tech and the others, waiting for her luggage.
“So, do you know her?” the girl asked me, a little calmed down now.
“Only for one day…” I replied
“Anyways… I’m Cleopatra… Cleo for short! And you are?”
“I’m Ace Bunny”
“Bunny? You have any relation with her?” She pointed at Lexi
“Nope!”
“Good! So you’ve been here before?”
“Two or three times…”
“Really? It’s my first time here… Would you like to show me around?”
“Errrr…” I looked at Tech. He glared ‘Lexi style’ at me and growled
“Leave him alone Tech! You’re not his daddy!” Huh? Who would think that Lexi would be the one to take me out of this…
Tech sighed “Lex, she is-”
“Don’t tell me what she is Tech! Let him be! Lets go!”
Tech shrugged “Fine… fine you’re the boss…”
The team picked their stuff and left, leaving me with Cleo.
“Shall we?” she said grabbing my arm and start walking towards the exit.


END CHAPTER 3

Note: I would have written more AND killed people in this one… but lets just say, that I thought that 1 week delay (or was it more?) was enough….

Because there errors and errors AND ERRORS!

Ok fellows! Next chapter up!
This is my most hated one until now... You'll find out why...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4014840/5/

-- Edited by LoonaticsF at 12:49, 2008-03-09

Hay LoonaticsF! LOOKY!!

http://siamese712.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-in-Paris-Lexi-79551991

Oh! And one more thing: Ask me something. Anything from the story! I will be more than glad to answer you! Anything you want!
Thank you again!

As soon as i write it i guess...
And i was sure that you would ask what was with Lexi's past...
Anyway, guess i was wrong...

-- Edited by LoonaticsF at 12:18, 2008-03-12

I am sooooooooooooooo goingto regret this... But i put the story on hold until i write two or three chapters... Sorry... Plz don't kill me!