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I-i'm speechless.....................................................................................cry

Yeah right! XD

There you go! Your making me cry again, Angela! Damn you!

Rev! It's Rev! Pleeeeze oh god pleeeeze let it be Rev!!!! And it's very hard to get an athiest to say please to god just to let you knowevileye


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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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devilish.gif Something tells me you've put a twist in the story... I'm not gonna give it away though incase I'm wrong. But this chapter is so adorable aww.gif ! Keep up the good work.

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*snuggles Laenna again* I adore her. and her nickname. 'Sprout!' That's tooo cute!

*faints from over-exposure to cuteness syndrome*

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If I write more LU fan fiction after this I definitely want Laena to be a part of it. I already love writing for her.

Thanks everyone!

One more chapter left to go... when it gets released depends on... a few factors...


Rye I think you should read this >:D

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Rye I think you should read this >:D




Read what? Read what? -looks around- Oh my goodness, I need to catch up, don't I? GAH. -slaps self- I'm sorry. I really suck at keeping up with this story, don't I? XD



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Slightly, yes. I do not even know where you would be in this story D:

But I do not and would not hold it against you Ye Almighty Traveler. :3

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Dragon Wing wrote:

Slightly, yes. I do not even know where you would be in this story D:

But I do not and would not hold it against you Ye Almighty Traveler. :3




Two chapters left till I catch up! =3

OH! OH! I GOT THIS ONE. I DO, I DO. Ye... ye... WHAT WAS IT? -thinks- Um, um, um... Ye Glorious Almighty Duchess of Fermented Grape Liquids. IS THAT RIGHT? DO YOU REMEMBER? I'm not sure if that's right... -ponders- I'm too lazy to check MSN history. xD



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Rye wrote:

 

Dragon Wing wrote:

Slightly, yes. I do not even know where you would be in this story D:

But I do not and would not hold it against you Ye Almighty Traveler. :3




Two chapters left till I catch up! =3

OH! OH! I GOT THIS ONE. I DO, I DO. Ye... ye... WHAT WAS IT? -thinks- Um, um, um... Ye Glorious Almighty Duchess of Fermented Grape Liquids. IS THAT RIGHT? DO YOU REMEMBER? I'm not sure if that's right... -ponders- I'm too lazy to check MSN history. xD

 




That is completely right! You remembered in a way that even I didn't! =D! *hug*

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OH! OH! OH!

I'm so totally plotting to steal Laena. Like, seriously. XD

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You can't HAVE her. She is mine. Except not really D:

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*steals her anyway*

\8D/

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Dragon Wing wrote:

That is completely right! You remembered in a way that even I didn't! =D! *hug*



I can't believe I got that right. XD I was so sure I was gonna forget that. MY MEMORY IS NOT A COMPLETE FAIL AFTER ALL! Hehe.



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Final chapter tomorrow. I know I've put it off now, but I'm serious. I have to, anyway. I leave Monday for Cali.

So YEAH.

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popcorn.gif I can't wait for the next chappe!

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I wish upon a star
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You set my world on fire
Babe I got a crush on you
I wish upon a star
Can't you see how right we are
We should be together
Babe I got a crush on you


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And here it is guys.

Because I am a critique whore, if you have any comments on the story as a whole, please share them! I love hearing people's input.

Anyway, I hope this was an enjoyable read for you all. And now, the final chapter.




Epilogue

Chapter 25: Blood Brothers

Tech gripped his hand on the knob and turned it like it was nothing. But as soon as he pulled the door open and revealed the visitor, his whole body froze as if in a catatonic state.

“Yeah I thought I heard your voice so that means that I did get the right address! Jeez let me tell you for the 28th century address directories sure are confusing!”

Tech still stood wide-eyed - practically paralyzed.

“Whoa is there anybody in there? I’d hate to think you’ve gone brain dead on me,” the visitor said smiling, tapping Tech on the head with his fist. This seemed to jolt the coyote to life a little, but he was still speechless.

“You.. why are you – the wormhole – how?”

“Ah yes I imagine you’re probably surprised to see me and frankly I didn’t think I’d ever be here again either but hey I’m here you’re here and everyone’s happy!”

The coyote still looked utterly confused but his tail wagged like crazy, generating its own air current.

“Aww Tech I never saw you wag your tail like that before either you’re happy to see me or you’re trying to put out a fire somewhere back there because let me tell you that thing is wagging like mmph”

Much to the visitor’s astonishment, Tech practically leapt out at him and drew him into a bone-crushing hug. The visitor was taken aback at this unexpected display of affection, but returned the hug after a few moments.

“Wow Tech… didn’t know you had this in you… I missed you too but… please… I can’t breathe!”

Tech let go as suddenly as he had started it. He brushed himself off and regained his composure. He looked somewhat embarrassed.

“Sorry,” Tech said quietly, clearing his throat. “That… won’t happen often.”

“Ah maybe so Tech old pal but I never thought it’d happen at all so just admit that you missed me like crazy!”

The coyote held in a chuckle. “I don’t need to answer that. I think I’ve already lost enough dignity in the last two minutes. But, Rev, how did you make it back?”

“Ah I knew that’d be one of the first questions you asked and it was actually your first question so there we go actually I think I heard you ask it earlier when you were shell-shocked so it was really one of the first mmph-“

The coyote clamped Rev’s beak shut with his hand. “Now that I’ve missed,” Tech said, “I see you haven’t lost your superspeed.”

“Nope I didn’t but you asked how I got back and I think I should answer that now,” Rev said matter-of-factly, and straightened himself up as if to tell a story.

“Now okay remember a long time ago how you said you didn’t know ‘diddly’ about wormhole technology?”

Tech scratched his chin. “Hmm, yes, actually, I do recall saying that.”

“Well it turns out you still don’t know diddly about it!” Rev exclaimed, jokingly punching Tech in the arm.

Tech looked confused. “Why? What happened?”

“Well I remember you saying you set the wormhole up to take everything it sucked in no less than 500 billion light years away from the epicenter each object or person in this case going somewhere else. But apparently something got screwed up and it actually transported everyone no more than five light years away which is really nothing in terms of the vast expanse of the universe.”

“Whoa,” Tech said quietly.

“Yeah it was a pretty big difference and admittedly it took me a while to figure out I wasn’t that far from Acmetropolis since my GPS can only read things so far. Well I had landed on this space station actually and it was full with a bunch of weird bug-eyed aliens who didn’t speak any of our languages. Well let me tell you they thought I was fascinating actually maybe a little too fascinating they seemed to be monitoring every move I made. I think the only reason why they let me stay was so they could monitor me.

“But anyway after a few months of that I was really kinda bummed out because I missed everyone and life wasn’t exactly peachy there so one day I tried to find out if there were other places I could escape to nearby so I did a search on nearby civilizations and wow there it was! Acmetropolis was actually listed as the nearest inhabited planet and it was only 4.2 light years away! I thought it was a mistake at first since I was confident I was billions of light years away but it slowly dawned on me that you very easily could screwed up no offense but wormhole technology is complicated as you said.

“Anyway so I found out all I could about where Acmetropolis was relative to where I was and I eh heh kinda sorta stole one of the ships off of that space station. It only fell 50 miles per hour short of the speed of light and I couldn’t help it I wanted to get out of there fast! Oh I know it was wrong but I figured I’d get it back to them somehow but then I sorta crash landed the ship so there goes that. Thankfully I still have my flying powers huh? Well I don’t know what I’m going to do about that and frankly I’m surprised they didn’t try to follow me maybe they couldn’t track me I don’t know but the point is I’m here now and I’m ninety-seven percent sure no one followed me here.”

“And I guess, in the end, that’s what matters,” Tech said kindly, nodding. “But wait, it’s been about seven years, and you said the space station was on 4.2 light years away. What kept you?”

“Oh well as I said it took me a while to realize that I wasn’t in fact a trillion light years away from everything and second the ship wasn’t exactly packed with food so I kept having to divert away to the nearest space stations to find some food. They all wanted something in return of course and the ship had all these boxes of I don’t know what but everyone on the space stations seemed to find them valuable so they gladly traded jeez I hope I didn’t give a bunch of bad guys weapons or something oh Tech maybe this wasn’t such a good idea!”

“Relax, Rev,” Tech said smiling, “if there are any problems, I’m sure we can handle it.”

“Oh and speaking of trouble,” Rev began, grimacing, “when I was only transported that short distance away well that means all those villains aren’t that far away either.”

“Oh… oh yeah.”

“And also I think most of them landed on various space stations too since wormholes automatically move towards places with some sort of life and from what I’ve heard from transmissions not many people are too happy about that.”

“Wow, that’s… not good.”

“Yeah so if you see any trouble in the near time future that’d be why.” Rev looked slightly more glum now.

“Yeah, I suppose it will…”

“But hey let’s change the subject how’s the team been going since I’ve been gone I was really surprised to find out you weren’t on the team anymore why’s that?”

Tech involuntarily smiled. “Oh, I’ve been kind of preoccupied.”

“Ooh with what Tech with what?” Rev was bouncing between his two feet.

“Oh, just a little somebody who you’ll probably meet very soon.”

“Oh my gosh Tech don’t tell me you found a girlfriend?”

Tech laughed. “No, not in the slightest, actually. But yeah, she’s pretty special to me.”

“And when can I meet this someone?” Rev’s eyes met Tech’s with a mixture of determination and excitement.

“How about tomorrow afternoon? There’s a little coffee joint just on the other side of the street. We could meet you there, as long as you promise not to have Espresso.”

“Heh heh I got you Tech sure it’s a date or whatever it is it’s established oh man it’s going to be great catching up!”

“Yep, it is,” Tech said almost dreamily. “You know, the whole city going to go nuts when they find out you’re back. They had a memorial service for you with fireworks and everything.”

“Oh did they haha the city council’s always going over the top well it’s a good thing I’ve been keeping a low profile because I just want to catch up with a few select people before the paparazzi invades my life and where better to start than with my best friend?”

“I’m… your best friend?”

“Sure you are Tech I mean one of the first things I thought about when I was up there was how much it sucked that I couldn’t get to hang out with you anymore but hey here we are! Well anyway I was mostly stopping by to let you know of my existence I have to go over to the tower now to let the rest of the team know I’m back but hey I’m looking forward to tomorrow no espresso for me I promise see ya Tech!” And the roadrunner was gone within a blink of an eye.

“Hasn’t changed a bit,” Tech said to himself. As he went to shut the door, he turned around to see Laena up and at it once again.

“Daddy, I heard more noises. Who was that?”

“Oh,” Tech said, smiling, thinking back at the days of the Acme Institute, “just some delivery boy who got the wrong address. Hey, sprout, after school, do you want to meet an old friend of mine?”

“Ooh that sounds fun!” Laena exclaimed triumphantly. “Who is it?”

“Someone I may have told you about a few times. You’ll see. Now get back into that bed before this big ol’ coyote has you as a midnight snack.”

Laena looked at Tech blankly. “Daddy, you could barely touch an ant.”

“Get to bed,” Tech said authoritatively, repressing laughter.

Laena scooted off back to bed, and Tech moved towards the living room window, gazing out at the tower beyond. Everything was back together now, and Tech felt fuller than he ever had before. Everything, for the first time in his life, was right where it belonged.






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Excellent job, a nice ending to a nice story. Keep up the good work.

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I WILL read this later. I will... -nods-

YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL.

The... Invincible. XD

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END! THERE IS AN END! AND REV CAME BACK! AND I AM EXCITED! AND LATE FOR CLASS! BUT MOSTLY EXCITED! OMIGAWD I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!

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I added your pic to the beginning! =D

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*squee* IT LOOKS FANTASTIC AND PROFESSIONAL NAO!!! 8D

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I knew it! Rev is back! w00t.gif Yay! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!

*Glomps Dragon Wing.*

Jokes aside, this is very proffessional story you wrote. You had us hanging off our seats at the end of every chapter and the fact that it all ended happily ever after was so... aww.gif fuzzy. I can't wait for your next fan fic if you are thinking of writing another one aww.gif . Good Job thumbsup.gif

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0.o.... I'm so overwhelmed....... REV IS BACK!!!! Amazing story, Dragon Wing! Very climatic and cliff-hangers galore!

And this was the second best line in the story:
“Now get back into that bed before this big ol’ coyote has you as a midnight snack.”

Laena looked at Tech blankly. “Daddy, you could barely touch an ant.”

“Get to bed,” Tech said authoritatively, repressing laughter.

CUTENESS FOR THE WIN!


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Brilliant! Rev never changes! Though I would guess Tech's little girl would be one of the few things in this world that would put him in complete shock.

Sequal pleeeeeaaaaze! XD


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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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Thanks everyone! =D

I would say more right now, I really would, but I'm kinda bummed out because my awesome trip to California is all over now and I have to start shopping around for car parts tomorrow because my car kinda broke down on the way home from the airport. So now I must sulk listening to my doom rock V_V

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Just be glad you missed the heat wave by like a day.......-_-

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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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OK now I will say moar.


Akira: Thanks, as usual. =D I was actually really unsure of the ending for a long time. My stories almost always end unhappily, and, well, this one was obviously a big exception. I didn't know if it would be a cheap move just to bring Rev back (although I had planned on it from the beginning), but most people seem to be taking to the idea nicely.

Cassidy: And thank YOU! Yeah, I kinda wanted to end the story on a note like that, haha. It had actually just occurred to me in that moment that Laena was technically Tech's nature prey (even though I made a hint at that sentiment in chapter 23). So I threw that comment in, but let's face it, this is Tech.

Serennittty: Yeah, I was considering having Rev come back older and withered from his former self, but then I realized that probably would probably be even more depressing than if he were just gone altogether - and no, I don't think he'd change.


As far as a sequel goes... well, I was planning on it, but now I'm not sure. This story itself was a large commitment, and with me starting college in less than 2 weeks and with my band finally starting to go places I'm not sure if I'll have the time for such a commitment. Plus, I still don't really have any ideas for a sequel. Vague, general things, but not nearly enough to put together a story.



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Say moar to ME. TT__TT

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If you say moar to me >:@



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"Moar".

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I managed to do a sort of story based on this if you're interested Dragon Wing. It's called "I hope you find it".

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=D Of course I'd be interested! In fact, a spin-off story written by one of the best writers on these boards would probably be just the inspiration I need to continue on with (what could be) this saga. I am, admittedly, lacking in inspiration. So yeah, I'd love to see that!

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Here it is! I hope you like it aww.gif

http://www.activeboard.com/forum.spark?forumID=84895&p=3&topicID=18270126

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That was a really sad but really good story!!

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-snaps fingers- I knew I was forgetting something! I still have to read the last couple chapters of this. Oh my goodness, I have too much to do. I need... a to-do list! -goes to make one-

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Steve: Thanks! :D But, hey, at least it ended happily, right?

Rye: I'll make a to do list FOR you. Mostly because I would put reading this at the top of your list ;)

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Dragon Wing wrote:

Rye: I'll make a to do list FOR you. Mostly because I would put reading this at the top of your list ;)




At the top? My entire to-do list would be filled with reading this. XD

"Rye's To-Do List (By Angela)"

1) Read the last chapters of The Fragile.
2) Reflect on the last chapters of The Fragile.
3) Review the last chapters of The Fragile.
4) Re-read The Fragile all over again to refresh memory on beginning.
5) Reflect on refreshed memories concerning The Fragile.
6) Review the entirety of The Fragile.
7) Get The Fragile tattooed over entire body, making sure that everything is written backwards so as to be read while looking at a mirror.
8) Re-read The Fragile AGAIN... just to make sure no details have been forgotten.
9) Recommend The Fragile to Warner Brothers as a potential Loonatics Unleashed movie.
10) Worship Angela for writing The Fragile.

-dusts hands off- That about does it, no? XD



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Not quite. I would at least add SOMETHING about doing your laundry. But that's negligible.

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I think Rye's to-do list needs a slight mention of IAWT. *shiftyeyes*

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Angela: Alright then! Note to self: Do laundry while re-reading The Fragile a third time (for good measure).

Emily: I'm completely stuck with writing right now. I'm out of touch with my love for English. ;-;

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Mental note to self: Do not re-read stories like this while listening to "Could It Be" continuously through out it. XD It was too much awesomeness, I think my brain exploded. .>

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me:I WANNA SEE WUT HAPPENS!*runs around and crashes into wall*

rev:its ok shes just a little over excited....

me:hehehe wall is going curvy....

rev:*blinks*WHO GAVE HER THE CHEESE?????

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I was going to upload this on dA BUT I just now realized that all of the text files were on my other computer which is gone now.

MEH MEH MEH.

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Uh...You can copy and paste the chapters here? XD

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That would be pretty logical, yeah, but you see, that would require :effort:. XD

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Oh, you mean like going through all 10 pages and skipping through all the comments that we wrote out of boredom while waiting for the next chappie? =P

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HOLY CRAP! O_O

This was quite simply one of the best Fanfictions I've ever read for ANY subject. You wrote it so well. X3

WAI DAN? D:

Had to say it. He was just such a wonderful character, even if my affection for him was only truly reinforced before his brains said hello to the outside world. D: All my favourites die, and Rev was almost there! D8

But yeah, I had a feeling Rev would come back, but I thought it would happen differently. Y'know, like Vincent gets captured and his plot in the warehouse is exposed, which leads the Loonatics to finding out about the teleporter... thingy. That was what I was banking on. Xd

Never before have the words "Seven Years Later" made me feel so emotional. I was like "HOLY HELL THAT'S TOO LONG [/weep]". The part where Laena asked to hear Rev's story is what set me crying, though. I'm still crying right now, actually. But it's so worth it. X3

So, in short, thank you for a beautiful story. I hope one day you come up with a sequel to it, although I think that this was ultimately satisfying enough.

*+Fave*

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FINALLY. I HAVE FINISHED. AND IT WAS AWESOME. AND I'M SORRY I TOOK SO LONG TO FINISH IT. -squish- =D

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BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

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YAY! RYE HAS FINISHED IT! AND SHE THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME!! ALL IS RIGHT WITH THE WORLD!!!!!! \8D/

*wanted an input*

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Stickied. For great justice.

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BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

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It's beautiful, really.

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That's what SHE said

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Yes,
Good move my newly Mod..ed' friend....nod.gif good move 83

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