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steve123


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This is gonna be a good one too. It is a continuation of The New Planet.





-- Edited by steve123 at 17:45, 2009-01-20

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The loonatics are celebrating Rev's birthday until he is in for a big suprise.

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Huzzah, Rev! ^___^; -excitement- =3

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Yay! Okay im gonna do two stories, this one and Zadavia has returned so everybody is happy. When im finished both stories, i'll be ready to do the finale.

-- Edited by steve123 at 17:43, 2008-08-10

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Prologue:

( The next day at 10:30 a.m after the shocking surprise. Steve came into the kitchen very slowly but he was very happy. He slept with Kylie, he slept with her. He put his hand on the fridge and looked around with his eyes squinting to look for something to eat. He sees yogurt and he reaches for it as he hears somebody come in.)

Ace: Good mornin' Steve.

Steve: Oh mornin' Ace. ( As he grabs the yogurt and pulls it out and closes the fridge door.)

Ace: So, have you noticed that i kissed Lexi?

Steve: Yeah. Why?

Ace: Nothing. Are we gonna become more than just friends pretty soon?

Steve: Probably.

Ace: What about you and Kylie.

Steve: We are ahead of you a bit.

Ace: Oh. Did you know that its Rev's birthday in a couple of days?

Steve: Really?

Ace: Yeah. He's turnin' 18.

Steve: Good for him!

Ace: Not so loud.

Steve: Sorry.

Ace: We are gonna pretend that we forgot okay?

Steve: Ah. I get ya.

End Of Prologue.

-- Edited by steve123 at 19:05, 2008-08-20

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Chapter 1: The Surprise For Rev.

Steve: Rev's birthday?

Ace: Yes.

( Once Steve and Ace were done their conversation. Lexi and Tech walk in at the same time.)

Steve: Mornin' "Bro"

Tech: Bro? Oh yeah. That's right, you are my brother now. What were you and Ace talking about Steve?

Lexi: I know. They are planning a surprise birthday for Rev.
( Steve looked at Lexi surprised.)

Steve: How did...

Lexi: Super hearing remember?

Steve: Wow. I'm shocked. You should have a warrant for using those things.

Lexi: That's what Duck said.

Steve: Oh noes!!! Im becoming Duck! NOOOOOOOOO!!!

Lexi/Tech/Ace: SSHhhh!!

Steve: Sorry.

Lexi: Where's Kylie?

Steve: Still in bed.

Lexi: She is such a sweetheart isn't she?

Ace: Yeah. Nice goirl.

Steve: i'm glad you guys think that. She is going to like that compliment.

Lexi: I bet she will.
( Duck comes into the kitchen and joins the conversation.)

Duck: What's all the rackin' about?

Steve: We are just talking about Rev's surprise party.

Duck; You know. I wouldn't be talking about it.

Lexi: Why?

Duck: 'Cos mr. speedy is gonna be awake in a few seconds.

Steve: Oh crap. He is goin' to reach the fridge!

Tech: So.

Steve: So? One of his presents are in there!

Ace: Here he comes.
( The loonatics hear footsteps coming closer to the kitchen. But the people who came through the kitchen was Kylie and Slam.)

Steve: Phew! Oh good mornin' Kylie.

Kylie: Good mornin' Stevie.

Duck: Steve. Your girlfriend is up.

Steve: I see that, Duck. Why didn't you tell me 5 minutes ago.

????: Hey-guys!

Steve: Rev!

End Of Chapter 1.



-- Edited by steve123 at 20:21, 2008-09-09

-- Edited by steve123 at 17:46, 2009-01-20

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Chapter 2: The Letter.

TBA


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