The flashbacks are like the past so like school and childhood. And predictions which is the future(obviously) Who are they gonna get married to? what will happen to the earth or to them.

That would be annoying to be woken up for something so simple. X3

Chapter 2: The Memory Of The Past.

( The loonatics are back at HQ.)

Duck; Wow. That was a waste of time.

Tech: I know. I thought there was gonna be a mission or something.

Rev; But-i-guess-it-wasn't.

Ace: Yeah. But don't worry loonatics im sure a mission will come pretty soon.

Duck: Gee. Let's hope so. Im tired of waiting.( As Duck stood up.)

Lexi: Calm down, Duck. We're gonna be needed really quick.

Duck: Excuse me missy. Who said you can say anything.

Ace: Duck!

Tech: Duck! Why did you say that?!
( Lexi leaves to her room.)

Rev; Look-what-you-did-Duck?-you-made-Lexi-leave.

Duck: I...I...grr!( Duck leaves to his room.)

Ace: Man. Duck can be too hasty sometimes.

Tech: I know.
( Tweetums came on the hologram.)

Tweetums: hello, loonatics. Where's Lexi and Sir Duck?

Ace: Duck upset her and they both went in their rooms.

Tweetums: Well sorry to interupted anything but we got a.............

Ace: A what, Tweetums?

Twwetums: Nothing. ( The hologram shuts off.)

Tech: okay that was really weird.

Ace: i know. Maybe we should check and see what's goin' on.
( Ace called Lexi and Duck out of their rooms.)

Lexi: What is it, Ace?

Ace: Something's snoopin' we are goin' to Tweetums.

Lexi: Okay.

Ace: Where's Duck?

Lexi: probably in his room crying.

Ace: Poor guy. Maybe he's got stuff in his mind. Tech can you go talk to him?

Tech: Okay chief.( Tech went into Duck's room.)

Ace: Okay loonatics. Tech and Duck will catch up. Let's jet!

-meanwhile-

Tech: Duck?

Duck: Oh hi Tech.

Tech: Ace told me to come in.

Duck: Oh. Where are they?

Tech: Something happened with Tweetums.

Duck: What happened?

Tech: He looked like he was gonna say something and then he didn't.

Duck: What?

Tech: I don't know. But long story short, were checking it out.

Duck: Im not going.

Tech: Why?

Duck: Cause there is alot going in my mind right now.

Tech: Like what?

Duck: Rough past.

Tech: Is that so. Tell me about it.

Duck: Okay. Well in my childhood there was this guy who came up to me and almost killed me when i was 13.

Tech; After the orphanage?

Duck: Way after.

Tech: Tell me more.

Duck: i almost did something very bad too.

Tech: Did you kill somebody?

Duck: I guess you can say that. But i didn't kill anybody though.

Tech: That's a relief. I was about to say that Duck would never do something like that.

Duck: Yeah, well. Except it wasn't me.

Tech: Then who was it?

Duck: Somebody controlling me.

Tech: Who?

Duck: I forget his name. But i got kidnapped.

Tech; Well then. That's scary stuff.

Duck: Yeah.

Tech: Come on let's go catch up.

Duck; Tech wait!

Tech: What.

Duck; Keep this a secret?

Tech: Of course. Now you got to apologize to Lexi.

Duck; okay.

End Of Chapter 2.

Chapter 4: The Danger Zone.

( The loonatics travel on a starship to the place where Tweetums is kidnapped. The ship has equipment that has a million star power. The living room has three sets of couches and a television. The Kitchen has: a huge fridge( for obviously you know who), and a normal fridge that has an automatic system.) Ace is in the commander spot, which can look down where the driver is. Rev is driving the ship. Slam is having a good time in the kitchen. Tech is at the weapons and technology station where he makes new weapons and gadgets. Lexi is practicing combat in the virtual room which is in a hallway by the kitchen, and Duck is sitting in the living room being lazy and watching T.V.)

Duck: There's nothing on. Im tired. Are we there yet?

Rev: We-have-exacly-2-hours-left-to-our-destination.

Tech: This is gonna be a while.

Ace: Yup. Lets travel for another 20 minutes and then we will camp somewhere.

Lexi: Aye eye, captain.
( The loonatics kept traveling for 21 minutes. The extra minute was to find a spot to camp. The place where they landed is deserted with pyramids and spynxs it looked like a desert.)

Ace: This isn't exacly what i had in mind, but better than nothin' i guess.
( Ace and the other loonatics travel their sperate ways to explore what is around them. Rev and Tech stayed behind aand find out that they are in a trap or not. ) Lexi went to see if these pyramids and sphynxs are armed. Duck looks around where he is surrounded by.)

Duck; This is crazy!! Living in a desert??!!!

Ace: Duck its only goin' to be one night.

Duck: Well if you say so, Ace, it looks kinda dangerous. It's like we are in a danger zone!!

Tech: Duck if we were in a danger zone. 1. We would check it out. And 2. We wouldn't be here. Get it?

Duck: Uh...........yeah!

Ace: Hey there is a place to go!
( The loonatics go to the place that Ace found. The place they were headed seemed safe but could it? There are a few stairs that are taller than their knees. Tech who was the last one to climb the stairs saw blue stuff in front of him. He squinted his eyes and saw that the blue figure was him in a flashback. The flashback that Tech cannot controll showed him younger.)

Lexi: Tech? Tech? You alright. ( Tech woke up from his daydream.)

Tech: Yeah! Im fine. My head just hurts that's all.
( The loonatics go into some shelter( Which was one of the pyraminds.) The loonatics went into the cold and dark pyramid. Duck decided to go for a walk but the sky was dark already.)

Duck: Hey i don't remember the sky being dark quickly.

Ace; you're right Duck. Hmm we must have passed the time i guess.

Duck: No i mean when we came in the sky looked like it was 5pm but when i turned around its dark!!

Ace; You serious?

Duck; How could i ever lie?

Ace: Well you must seeing things Duck. Just set up your bed and go to sleep, okay?

Duck: Okay. ( Duck set up his bed and went to sleep slowly.)

( The next morning still looked pretty dark but it was getting lighter slowly.)

Lexi; Good morning sleeping beauty.

Duck: Good morning? Where is everybody else?

Lexi: They should be coming back.

Duck: Coming back? From where?

Lexi: They just went to explore some more. Hey there's Ace. ( Lexi and Duck see Ace coming back up the stairs.)

Ace: Okay. Everybody's coming now.
( Tech, Rev and Slam started climbing up the stairs. Tech hears a noice like a swifty noice but it wasn't Rev.)

Tech: Whoa! What was that?

Ace: What, Tech?

Tech: I heard sort of a arrow type noice. ( He heard the noice a second time.) There is was again!)

Duck: Uhhh.....i see an arrow.

Ace: Where?

Duck: Just missed Rev head. ( Rev looks up.)

Rev: Where-did-that-come-from. It-nearly-killed-me-that-was-close.
( A couple arrows were shot between Duck and Tech.)

Ace: I got an idea.

Tech: What?

Ace: RUN!!!!!!!!!
( The loonatics run as fast as they could but Slam fell down a hole.)

Ace: Slam!!!!( The rest of the loonatics fell down another hole that was a couple minutes ahead. The other loonatics scream for their lives as they fell.)

End Of Chapter 4.

Chapter 6: The Mirrior Of The Future.

( The rumbling rocks stopped.)

Ace: What is that? Construction?

Duck: Ow. Owie!!!!

Ace: What's wrong Duck?

Duck: My foot!! My foot!! It hurts!!Badly!!Ow!!!

Tech: Let me take a look at that.
( Duck and Tech sat down on the floor. Tech lifts Duck's foot up very carefully.)

Duck: Tech if you hurt me im gonna kill you.

Tech: Duck!!

Duck: Okay. I'll shut it now. Don't hurt me.

Tech: Duck, I'm not going to hurt you.

Duck: Okay. Just be carefull.

Tech: I'll be carefull.
( Tech grabs something from his backpack. He took out some painkillers which are the size of a pea and a cast that can make peoples injuries a little bit easier to walk.)

Duck: Ow!

Tech: oh! Stop it! You're such a crybaby!!

Duck: Ow.
( Tech wraps the cast around Duck's foot. He grabs a minature cup and fills it with water.)

Tech: put this in your mouth.( Tech hands the pill to Duck.) This water should help it get it down.
( Duck puts the pill in his mouth and washed it down with the glass of water.)

Duck: Wow. The swelling's gone but it still hurts and its still bleeding.

Tech: I guess we are gonna have to wait, Duck.

Duck: Are you sure? Don't you have anything that can stop the bleeding?

Tech: Im sure you're just gonna have to wait.
( Tech helps Duck up on his feet.)

Ace: Good job, Tech.

Tech: i'm no doctor but i still did it. Ur welcome.

Ace: Slam, you can carry Duck when were in trouble.

Duck: Ace i got a question.

Ace: Yes. Duck?

Duck: How am i going to walk?

Ace: Find a giant stick. Unless Tech has one.

Rev: Nope! i-have-one!

Duck: Where did you find it anyway?

Rev: Back-in-the-tunnels.
( Rev gave the walking stick to Duck. The loonatics looked at the ritual.)

Ace: Who do you think ruled this place?

Tech: Who knows.

Rev: The-people-that-probably-ruled-it-were-kings-pharohs-leaders-and-
( Just when Rev knew Ace's hand was on Rev's beak.)

Ace: Not too much info there, Rev.

Duck: Hey the cast is actually working! Luckly its clogging the bleeding.

Lexi: Yeah. Hey! I found a mirrior! ( Lexi turned the mirrior towards the way they were facing. The mirrior looks silver on the rims and on the inside showed a reflections of themselves and the mirror was skinny and a little wide.)

Ace: Now that's intresting.
( Tech and Ace started to feel very dizzy and when they looked in the mirrior, they saw themselves in the future but they weren't 19 or 20 years old, they looked about 30 years old. It is in the year: 2804.)

Lexi: Ace? Tech? You guys okay?

Duck: Hey! What going on with them? Are they become deaf?

Lexi: i don't think so, Duck.

Rev: Tech? Ace? There-not-answering!
( What Ace and Tech are seeing is totall distruction of the planet Blanc which is in the year 2814. In the year 2804, Tech and Ace see them at a funeral, but who's funeral? It didn't looked like any other peoples funeral, it looked like an anthro's funeral but could it be one of them? No, it can't be. The mirrior's image came to a end. Tech and Ace became sad.)

Lexi: There back!! What's wrong, guys?

Ace: We saw......

Tech: Something terrible.

Lexi: What?

Ace: Long story short. Tech and I keep getting these flashbacks and predictions and stuff.

Tech: And we just saw something really wrong.

Lexi; What was it that you saw?

Tech: Somebody's funeral.

Rev: Who's?

Ace: One of..........ours.

Duck: What? Is this true?

Tech: Yup.

Lexi: What year was it?

Ace: The year 2804. Then it showed a clip of the year 2814 as well. All the universe destroyed.

Duck; The universe is gonna get destroyed in 40 years?! Oh no!! I'll be 40!!

Lexi: Anyway....which one of us was it?

Ace: Not sure. I couldn't tell. Did you Tech?

Tech: nope.( Just then the walls start to come forward toward the loonatics closing in on them.)


End Of Chapter 6.



-- Edited by steve123 at 19:52, 2008-07-05

Chapter 8: Ridin' The Ark.

(Ace came on the ark very slowly as Tech and Rev helped him up.)

Ace: Whoa. That was a close one!
( The ark started ascending upward out from underground as it rose out of the hole as they see the dessert sand go into their eyes.)

Duck: Are we dead? We're doomed arn't we?! Doomed!!! No!!

Tech: Duck! Get a hold of yourself!( He said as he puts both of his hands on both of Duck's shoulders.)

Duck: We're Alive!! Yay! Not Doomed!!

Ace: My gosh. ( As he shook his head.)

Tech: Hey what's that?( As he pointed at the sand that they are riding on.)
( The other loonatics noticed that it wasn't sand that they are traveling on.)

Rev: What-is-that-Ace?

Slam: Yeah. What is it?( Mumbles.)

Ace: I....I don't kno- huh! ( As soon as Ace touched the weird-looking black sand. He and Tech got on their knees holding their heads like a huge headache just came.)

( Ace has a flashback that he walked on this sand before. The flashback shows Ace walking on the sand alone when he was fifteen. Then he fell down a hole that was created by the sand. He was trapped. Then he was rescued 2 days later without food or water. He woke up in the hospital very hungry and thirsty.

Ace: What happened?
( A doctor that is 19 years old with spiky green hair and a doctor's coat on.)

Doctor: You were unconcious for two days.

Ace: But i could've died.

Doctor: Someone likes you up there Ace.

Tech's flashback was a little similar but he didn't fell. He remembers the stuff on him while he is sleeping.

( The scene switches back. Seeing them both in pain.)

Lexi: Ace! Tech!! Are you guys okay?!

Ace: yeah...Were.......fine.....

Rev: Hey-we-got-that-map.
( Rev pulls the map out of Tech's backpack and opens it up. Then,all of the sudden the map started glowing bright white as two beams went out of the map and into Tech and Ace's left ear.)

Ace: ow! Somethin' just went into my ear!!

Tech: Me too!
( Tech and Ace lean their heads back and their eyes turn the colours of their uniforms.)

Duck: Whoa. Rev? What did you do?!

Rev: I-didn't-do-anything!! All-i-did-was-that-i-opened-the-map!
( They watched Ace and Tech as if they were under a spell. The beams stopped and their eyes turned normal.)

Ace: Hey i think the flashbacks stopped.

Tech: Yeah. That hurt but i guess the beams made us better.

Ace: Good job, Rev.

Rev: Uh.............Thank-you?

Duck: Where are we going?
( Rev looks at the map.)

Rev: Looks-like-some-sort-of-door.

Ace: No building?

Rev: Just-a-door. That's-it.

Ace: Alright let's continue our mission. Onward to save Tweetums.

End Of Chapter 8.



-- Edited by steve123 at 20:43, 2008-08-04

Thanks, Rye. I'll edit the 8th chapter before i go on.

Chapter 10: The First Battle.

( The loonatics look left and right to see what is surrounding them.)

Ace: Attack!!
( The other loonatics follow Ace's command.)

Tech: Come on! Give me your best shot!!
( Tech grabs the sand in his pocket and threw it in the statues' face. The statue ducked his head in pain and then he continued to go attack Tech. Tech gasps until the statue crumbles to a pile of sand.)

Tech: Ya!

Lexi: Come on piece of junk! Bring it on!
( Lexi hopped over the statue she was battling. As she jumped, she also did a flip and as she was upside down, she used her brain blast. The beam drew closer and closer to the statue. The statue has holes in him.)

Duck: looks like swiss cheese, Lexi!

Lexi: Ya!!
( The statues' holes filled up with the rest of the sand it has left.)

Duck: Looks like we spoke two soon!
( They heard a bang as more statues come out of the damaged wall to attack the loonatics.)

Ace: Oh great. Reinforcements. Slam heads up!!
( Ace kicks a rock over to Slam. Slam tornadoes over to the statue and uses the rock to perminitely destroy it.)

Lexi: Thanks for the help, Slam!

Slam: no problem!

Ace: 5 more to go, Loonatics!!
( The loonatics see the 5 statues crowding around the pile of sand. There was a yellow light. The statues moved out of the way as four people appeared. The first person looks like a guy in a business suit with helmet red hair but he looked like he was some secret agent. The person next to him was a woman with an empress uniform and blonde long hair. The third was a half person/rock guy. He has a turban on. And finally they see Tweetums captured in a cage.)

Tweetums: Loonatics! Help!

Ace: Hold on Tweetums! Introduce yourselves you birdnappers!!!

Woman: My name is....Zira.

Man: I'm her twin brother....Orlos and this is our assassin, Gorlum.

Ace: Were the loonatics! Now let Tweetums go!!

Zira: How about NO!! Loonatics!!
( She takes out a sword that was hard as a rock, but long. She used it on a rope. The rope was sliced completely.)

Zira: Goodbye, Loonatics!!( Evil laugh.)
( The bad guys left with Tweetums and went through the giant door without a key.)

Ace: We need an idea?

Rev: I-know!

Tech: What is it, Rev?

Rev: The-key-and-Ace's-sword!

Ace: What about them?

Rev: One-of-us-will-use-the-key-and-fit-it-in-the lock-right? And-Ace-can-use-his-sword-to-get-rid-of-all-of-the-statue-soldiers-that-are-left.

Lexi: What about the rest of us?

Rev: Distract-them-as-much-as-you-can.

Tech: That's brilliant! Let's do it!

Ace: Good idea, Rev.

Rev: Thank-you.
( They did Rev's idea. Rev grabbed the key from the door that is was on and sped to the big gigantic door. He put the key in and turned it. The statues started to shake as if they were going to fall backwards.)

Rev: Now-Ace!!
( Ace took out his guardian strike sword and uses it on the wounded statues.)

Ace: Guardian strike sword Attack!!!!!


End Of Chapter 10.