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lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Icy Memories

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

This is a good start. Already I'm wondering why Mastermind of all people would be chosen for the job. But I'm sure you can explain that one within the story. And the fox girl with the black and blue uniform, how did she know the Loonatics? I don't want to ruin your story but keep it up aww

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lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Thanks Akira! Here comes the first chapter so grab the popcorn...^_^

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Chapter 1

Acmetropolis, 2775

“Try-and-cath-me!-I-dare-ya!” Rev Runner sped in and out between the giant, mutant spider’s legs. He laughed mockingly at it as five others approached. Rev ran over to them at super speed and started weaving between their legs in an eight formation. “Check-this-out! -How do-you-like-my-infinity-maneuver?!”

An impressed voice buzzed out of a speaker above the roadrunner. “Nice. You’ve taken out forty of those spiders with this move in three minutes. Now that you’ve broken everybody’s records including your own could you come up here for a minute?

The virtual trainer was shut off and Rev zoomed up the exit. Tech E. Coyote was in the controls room looking over some sketches of ideas for his inventions he just drew up. Rev looked over his shoulder in interest. “Watchya-working-on-there-Tech?”

“A weapon that can freeze the vapor particles in the air….” Tech mumbled over his notepad. “I might need help with this one. Are you open later?”

“I-just-need-to-tidy-up-my-messy-messy-messy-room-because-I-can-barely-move-around-in-there-it’s-so-messy-and-you-know-how-much-I-hate-it-when-I-can’t-move-then-I’ll-be-up-there-quick-as-a-flash!”

“I’m sure you would.” Tech chuckled as he left the room. Rev sped out behind him and then down a couple of floors to his bedroom.

The roadrunner zoomed around his room, fixing anything out of place. After merely a few seconds the room was spotless and all Rev had left to do was put the laundry down the shaft in the hallway. The pile of laundry in his arms towered above his head, making it difficult to see where he was going. Rev suddenly stepped on a skateboard he had failed to pick up and went sliding across the room right into his open closet. An avalanche of books, toys, tools, gadgets, sports gear, and clothes tumbled out of the closet with Rev buried underneath.

His head broke free of the large pile and he spat a rolled up sock out of his mouth. Rev sighed as he looked around at the overwhelming mess but then shrugged. He could work on it when Tech didn’t need any help with his new invention. Right before he sped off again something in the pile caught his eye. It was a simple silver picture frame with a photo in it that took place before the meteor.

Rev’s eyes softened as he looked at the photo laughed to himself. It took place in the park on a bench. Tech was wearing a denim jacket , grey t-shirt, blue jeans, large brown shoes and was trying to block his face from the camera with his arm. Rev was on the other side of the bench wearing baggy tan shorts, a black t-shirt with a yellow long-sleeve under it, roller blades, a helmet, knee and elbow pads, and was waving a hotdog in the air with a huge grin on his face.

Rev laughed out loud and then his eyes turned to the figure sitting in between them. The roadrunner suddenly frowned. It was a girl fox with white fur, and black tips on the end of her big ears and tail. She had sparkling blue eyes and was wearing a blue tank, baggy blue jeans, and large white sneakers. She was holding up her left hand in a “hang loose” sign and was sticking her tongue out at the camera.

Rev sighed as a knot welled up in his stomach. It didn’t last long though. Perking up a little he shook his head. “She-was-such-a-tomboy!……I-wonder-if-tech-has-one-of-these.” With that Rev dug himself out of the pile and ran up to Tech’s lab. He didn’t bother using the elevator, it took too long.

Tech was already at his desk fiddling with the knew idea when Rev silently ran up behind him. “Hey-Tech?!”

“Whoa!!!” Tech jumped at Rev’s sudden appearance and accidentally pulled one of the wires out of the machine. A surge of electricity shot up Tech’s arm and then to the rest of his body.

Rev bit his lip as he looked down at the pile of ash on the floor. “Sorry-bout-that-Tech…” Even though Tech could regenerate on the spot, Rev knew he hated it when the circumstances allowed him to.

Tech quickly regenerated. “That’s alright. I’m used to it, though I think you should try to forget about the fact that if I didn’t have regeneration abilities you would have killed me.”

Rev waggled his finger with a smirk on his face. “I’m-not-going-to-let-that-little-trick-get-to-me-sense-if-you-didn’t-have-regeneration-abilities-you-would-have-already-been-pushing-up-daisies-a-long-time-ago-on-your-part.”

“Truce…” Tech held up his hands. “Now give me a hand with this.”

“Oh-wait-I-need-to-ask-you-something.” Rev handed Tech the picture. “Do-you-have-one-of-her?-I-found-this-one-when-I-was-cleaning-but-I-left-the-rest-of-them-at-my-house.”

Tech didn’t reply for a moment. He just stared at the picture with dull, sad eyes. “……Icy…”

“Um…yeah…” Rev knew immediately brining up Icy was a bad choice, especially when they were about to get cracking on a new invention.

Tech suddenly put the picture down and opened up a drawer in his desk. “I do have one, but it’s a little different from yours…”

The coyote pulled out a black picture frame. In the photo the Loonatics were posing for a group picture in their brand-new Loonatics Uniforms. Icy was standing at the far left with her arms crossed in her own blue and black uniform.

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 17:51, 2008-03-12

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Love the story so far!!

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

GGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENSE! THE EXCITEMENT! THE DRAMA! ......BRAIN IMPLODING............ *brain implodes*

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Thanks guys! I love the suspence, I love the excitement, I love the drama...it's just me. I'm also really good with comidies. Check out the Serenity Plays, Cassidy.

rileybunny · Beast

luv it! so far biggrin

Dragon Wing · Gone

Pretty good so far! I've always loved the stories that focus on Tech and Rev (durr).

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

I know! They're my absolute favs! I think of them as like the ultimate diamic-duo. biggrin

Second chapter will be done soon so hold your roadrunners......if that's even possible....

BlackCat · Anthros

LOVE the fic!

I_See_Your_True_Colours · MagykWire

Me: Me too!!

Spyro: So do I.

Me: Hey what are you doing here?

Spyro: I dunno what are YOU doing here?

Me: weirdface

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours at 21:53, 2008-11-10

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

*GASP* I love Spyro! He's soooo cute!
I'll try to get the second chapter in by next week but I'm kinda distracted with the Serenity play requests.
By the way Trueclours, how do you make your messages colored. I want to try that. biggrin

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 17:02, 2008-03-21

I_See_Your_True_Colours · MagykWire

You got Advanced Editor turned on?

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours at 21:54, 2008-11-10

I_See_Your_True_Colours · MagykWire

Me: BTW I kiddnap Spyro out of the video game so he can be a Loonatic fan.

Spyro: weirdface

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours at 21:54, 2008-11-10

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Ooh!!! Can I try that! Let see....I'm gonna pull out Daxter!
Pulls Dax out from Jak 2 and hugs the air out of him...
Daxter:Whoa! Hey! What the---URGH!!!
Me: Cutie orange ferret!!!!

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 19:56, 2008-03-21

I_See_Your_True_Colours · MagykWire

Me: Maybe you can guest star him in one of your plays.

Spyro: Say what?

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours at 21:55, 2008-11-10

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Chapter 2
Tech woke up one mourning to rapid pounding on his apartment door. He sat up on the couch, placed the half finished gadget he had fallen asleep working on the night before on the coffee table, and went to go answer the door. The pounding continued and when he opened the door whoever was knocking was now knocking on his head.
The visitor took a second to see what he was knocking on and realized it was the coyote’s noggin. The roadrunner gasped. “Oops! Sorry Tech! I wasn’t paying attention.”
“Apparently…” Tech rubbed his forehead hoping it wasn’t bruised. “What did you want?”
Rev could barely contain his excitement. “Aw man Tech, you have got to come see this. Icy is playing at the park!”
“Baseball?” Tech yawned.
“No that was yesterday. She entered the Acme Talent Sing Off and is playing down at the park right now!”
“Wha-?!” Tech and Rev moved to the railing of Tech’s porch. It had a view of the park that was just a block down and they could see a stage with a large crowd surrounding it. Music was playing with someone singing along with it. Tech and Rev quickly ran off to see the show.
Down at the park Tech and Rev pushed themselves to the front of the crowd and saw a white fox on the stage singing “Grow Up” by Simple Plan. Rev jumped up and down punching his fists in the air and cheering over the screaming crowd. “Woohoo! Go Icy! Yeah!” Tech didn’t say anything but just gave a thumbs up.
Icy didn’t stop singing or turn around but winked to show that she was aware of their presence. After the song ended, Icy did a peace sign to the audience. “Thank you Acmetropolis!”

Later that evening, Icy, Tech, and Rev were sitting in her apartment watching the news. Misty breeze was interviewing Icy.
~”This is Misty Breeze and I’m here at the Acmetropolis Park where a concert was held for the Acme Talent Sing Off. I’m interviewing one of the contestants who made it into the finals. Iciana Fox, how does it feel to make it into the finals?”
Icy shrugged. “Call me Icy. It feels okay.”
“And who is your main support in this contest?”
“My two best buds, Rev and Tech!” Icy shouted. Rev was in front of the camera immediately, forcing Misty to stand back. The roadrunner waved immaturely. It took both Icy and Rev to pull Tech up to the shot and as soon as he was on he smiled nervously and started to sweat.~
Tech threw a shoe at the small TV from the couch, but only hard enough to shut it off without breaking it. Icy and Rev laughed. Tech sighed and tried to change the subject. “You guys hungry at all?”
Icy smiled. “Kinda. We could go out to eat.”
Rev jumped up. “Read my mind! Let’s go!” Rev was out the door in seconds. Icy and Tech sat on the couch glancing at each other. A moment later Rev sheepishly pocked his head back through the door. “Um…where are we going?”
It was a nice summer night. Icy lived in the least crowded neighborhood in the city. There wasn’t very many people on the streets and the noise from the active parts of the city were drowned out. They were heading toward an ice cream shop Icy had suggested. The ice cream shop was as un impressive as the rest of the neighborhood but the ice cream itself wasn’t anything to sneeze at. Rev was sipping down the rest of his rootbeer float when his mobile started to vibrate.
“Oops. Hold on guys, it’s my mom. I’m going to take this outside.”
“Meet you out there.” Icy said through a mouthful of rocky-road.
Rev stepped outside and walked around trying to get a good signal. As he passed a side alley something grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and threw him to the ground. A man was standing above with a baseball bat, a sneer on his face. “Empty you’re pockets now!”
“I’ve only got three dollars.” Rev stammered.
The mugger raised his bat. “Then I’ll just have to—DOOF!!!” Before he could finish a white blur came from the side and socked him in the cheek. The man fell to the ground and then looked up at his attacker in surprise. “A….girl?”
Icy rubbed glared at him as she rubbed her knuckles. “Leave the bird alone.”
The man got up, trying to hide the pain throbbing from the right side of his face. “Or else what?”
Tech came up behind Icy snarling, ears back, and his fur on end. The mugger backed away nervously. “Okay, sure. I’ll get outta your hair….” He turned on his heels and ran.
Icy laughed at Tech. “See? You can be scary if you waned to.”
Tech took out his goggle-like-glasses from his coat pocket and started wiping the lenses. “Not that I could have seen him if I wanted to bite him.“ He muttered. “Rev, you okay?”
Rev stood and dusted himself off. “Yeah I’m fine. Thanks guys. Man what a creep.”
Icy nudged him as they walked off. “Can’t leave you alone for three seconds can we?”

Rev opened his eyes and sat up in bed. Finding that picture of Icy had set a chain of memories running in and out of his head all day. Rev looked at his alarm clock. It was three in the morning. Rev knew he probably wasn’t going to get anymore sleep so he got out of bed. The buzzer on his communicator suddenly went off. Rev moved to his uniform slung over his desk chair and pushed the on button. “Hello?”
Tech’s voice replied. “Couldn’t sleep?”
“No…”
“Icy?”
“How’d-you-guess?”
“It’s bugging me too. I can’t concentrate on my work.”
Rev thought for a moment. “Um…wanna take an ice cream break?”
“You just read my mind….”

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 17:53, 2008-04-14

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 17:54, 2008-04-14

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Chapter 3
Tech sat outside the 24/7 store on a bench while Rev was inside getting them some soft serve. They were both out of their uniform and in some casual clothes so they wouldn’t draw to much attention to themselves. The coyote sighed and slouched in his seat, looking up at the tower that rose over the other buildings. He realized how comforting it felt to look up at it from the streets of Acmetropolis. Tech thought of the first time he stepped foot in their HQ……

Tech, Rev, and Icy craned their necks too look up at the newly build tower. It was by far the tallest building they had ever seen. Tech shook his head. “It’s a wonder the wind hasn’t knocked it over yet.”
Rev nodded in agreement. “Yeah-it-does-look-kinda-unstable-I-betchya-it-sways-back-and-forth-at-the-top-wich-would-personally-make-me-kinda-motion-sick-and-a-little-scared-outa-my-pants-at-how-high-up-we’d-be-and-the-thought-of-it-collapsing-at-any-second.”
Tech and Icy stared at the roadrunner, trying to figure out what the heck he was saying. Since the meteor hit a couple weeks before Rev’s speech had gotten faster and faster to the point he was rambling off full out speeches in a matter of seconds. And since there was no sign of it letting up the two of them realized they’d have to get used it quickly before it drove them bonkers…
Icy looked up a second time. She couldn’t even see the top from where she was standing. “Are you sure this is where that lady said to meet her?”
Tech took out a mini hand held computer in the shape of a cell phone. He turned it on and a little holographic woman with blonde hair and a dress popped up. The lady spoke in a recording. “This message is for the following three people. Tech Edmund Coyote, Rev Ryan Runner, and Iciana Elizabeth Anne Fox. You have been called to a top secret gathering of citizens that have been unexpectedly affected by the meteor’s impact. I will await your arrival on January 17th of this weekend at 6pm at the tower addressed Acme Drive, 9645. This message will self distruct…”
Tech closed his computer. “Yeah. That hurt when the original message blew up…”
Rev and Icy stared at him. “Edmund……?”
Tech rubbed the back of his neck. “Uh… I was named after my British grandfather.”
Rev laughed. “And-this-whole-time-you’ve-had-me-thinking-the-E-stands-for-E=MC2.”
Icy crossed her arms. “How is it we’ve known each other since the second grade and we’re just now learning each other’s middle names?”
“Can we just go in now…?” Tech said trying to change the subject. They walked through the automatic sliding door and into the main hall. It wasn’t very impressive. The room was wide and round with metal walls and an elevator at the other end. Other then that the room was empty. Inside the elevator Rev hesitantly pushed the button for the top, guessing that was probably the most obvious place for the meeting. The elevator worked fast and the threesome were at the top of the tower within less than a minute.
Tech, Rev, and Icy peeked into the main room. It was as round as the first floor but it was much wider. There was a large window at the far end of the room, a twenty foot TV screen, and a long curved couch. The only people in the room were four other anthros sitting on the couch. Two bunnies, a duck, and a Tasmanian devil. They turned to see who was coming out of the elevator.
The duck suddenly got up and glared at Icy. “What are you doing here?”
The two approached each other. Icy put her hands on her hips. “Hello! I got a message.”
Duck laughed. “Ha! Did it blow up in your face too?”
“Nope. It blew up in his.” Icy gestured her thumb towards Tech.
“Oooohhh! Are those two your boyfriends, cousin?”Duck asked tauntingly.
Icy blushed. “NO! For your information they happen to be good friends.”
“How good, like alone at a drive in good?”
Icy blushed even brighter and poked a finger at her cousin. “Why you little…” but she didn’t get to finish her insult, for as soon as her finger touched Duck his whole body shimmered and then got trapped in a shell of ice. Icy and the others gasped in disbelief.
The male bunny stared in shock through his sunglasses. “What the heck did you do to him?!”
Icy grabbed at her ears in panic. “OHMYGOSH! Cousin Duck! Man I did it again! Quick, Rev, go get some warm water!”
“I’m-on-it!” Rev sped out of the room with super speed, causing a strong breeze as he zipped past the others.
“Whoa!” The girl bunny gasped.
Suddenly the ice statue of duck started to glow as a ring of energy formed around it. The shell of ice stood empty in Duck’s figure. Everyone minus Rev stood around the statue of ice. Tech scratched his head. “Wha—Where’d he go?”
“Yoohoo! Up here!”
The anthros looked up. Duck was sitting on top of the giant TV screen. Before anyone could say anything Rev zoomed into the room and threw a bucket of hot steaming water on the ice duck. Everyone watched as it melted into a puddle. Rev gasped and got to his knees. “NOOOO!-I-melted-him!-Melted-him-into-a-puddle!-WHY!!!”
The others laughed as Duck teleported right in front of Rev, scaring the feathers off of him. “Glad you’re concerned.”
Icy smiled at the other three anthros. “Hey! I know why we’re here! We all have powers, right? What can you guys do?”
The male gray rabbit adjusted his sunglasses. “Toss ice in the air and I’ll show ya.”
Icy did so. It was a perfectly round, smooth and the size of a softball. The male bunny took his sunglasses off as a pair of red-hot lasers shot out of his eyes. The lasers hit their target dead on and he quickly put the sunglasses back on. He smiled. “Laser vision. Found out about it when I got ticked off at my boss. I didn’t mean it but I can’t help but laugh at the fact he won’t be sitting for a week. These sunglasses are the only things that can hold the lasers back.”
“I’ve got a neat trick.” The female bunny said excitedly. “Icy’s your name right? Icy, could you toss another one.”
Icy motioned her hands in a circular motion and shot another ice ball into the air. The bunny’s eyes glowed pink as her ears suddenly stood upright. A pink electrical zap of energy blasted out from in between her ears and shattered the ball. The others awed in amazement when suddenly a whirling sound came from behind them. The Tasmanian devil was spinning around in a fierce tornado formation.
Rev stamped his feet in excitement. “Ice-beams,-laser-blasts,-teleportation,-tornados- I can’t- hold-it!” Rev burst off, zooming around the room, laughing and shouting the whole time.
Duck raised his palms. “Oh that’s nothing!” Orbs of orange, glowing energy formed in his hands. Duck threw them at the ceiling, splattering and sprinkling sparks everywhere as they made contact.
Everyone stared anxiously at Tech, who was leaning against the wall with his arms crossed. The coyote shrugged and let a small grin curl onto his face. “Aw what the heck.” He took off his watch and threw it towards Icy. The vixen didn’t flinch but smiled expectantly when the watch stopped centimeters in front of her nose with a green energy glowing around it. Tech took out his hand held computer and threw it in with his watch and made the two float around the room with his magnetic ability.
Icy turned to the three they had just met. “So, who are you guys?”
“Ace.”
“Lexi.”
“Slam.”
“I’m Icy.”
“Tech.”
“Rev!”
“Duck.”

Tech flinched at the memory……

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Chapter 4

Duck got out of bed the next morning with a bad temper. He guessed his moody awakening was probably from staying up too late with Ace in the virtual trainer. Ace was used to it but thinking he could catch up with the leader Duck took his first swing at it. Never again…

The extremely irritating sound of his mobile’s ringer went off. Duck rolled his eyes. He hated to admit it, but Tech was probably right about changing it. Duck answered and then started to sweat when her heard who it was. “Um…Mum? Uh, yeah, hi. Yeah it has been a while, but, you know…being a superhero keeps you pretty busy. So how’ve you been? You guys got a condo by the beach? Good for you! I’ll try to come and visit…” Duck froze on his mom’s next question. “You want to talk to who?! Uuuhhh….Cousin Icy’s got bronchitis at the moment. It’s a real strain for her to talk…Yeah, I’ll tell her you love her. Love you too Mummy. Bye…”

Duck hung up and sighed in relief. “That was close.” He hadn’t told his parents that Icy had been missing for three years. He thought it was a good thing his aunt had died or she would have been hard to keep the truth from that long. But…what was he going to say if his parents dropped in un-expectedly like Rev’s did?

He was used to “Quacking” out of situations. There was no way he was going to Quack himself out of this one….

            Duck headed down stairs and as soon as he stepped into the kitchen he knew Rev had been cooking….the place smelled of burnt eggs. One time the speedster had managed to burn water. The only thing that he made that was actually edible were his special made protein shakes, which he drank a lot of considering he had to eat every two hours. Rev’s metabolism was as fast as his feet….
Duck sat down next to Icy at the breakfast nook. She was twirling her finger in some orange juice, turning it into a slushy. Ace was pocking at his black scrambled eggs, Lexi was brushing her hair, Tech was reading a newspaper, and Slam was eating everything thrown at him no matter how burnt it was.
Rev zipped up and set a plate in front of Duck. “Morning!-Sorry-if-it’s-a-little-over-done-but-I-made-your-favorite!-French-toast!”
Duck stared at the black mast on his plate. It looked more like a volcano then anything. Duck was about to make a snappy remark when the roadrunner’s big eager green eyes cut him short. Duck gulped and took a bite of his food, smiling half-heartedly up at Rev. That’s all the speedster needed and he went to make one of his shakes.
Ace looked over at Duck. “The eyes get ya?”
Duck nodded. He shoved his plate over to Slam when Rev wasn’t looking.
Icy sipped at her slushy and then giggled. “He actually used to be pretty good at cooking. But that was when he took his time and didn’t speed through everything.”
Tech scoffed. “Oh yeah? Like that mud pie he made for me on my 9^th birthday?”
“It wasn’t that bad.” Icy shrugged.
Tech raised his eyebrows. “It was real mud….”
A beeping sound buzzed from the speakers. “Loonatics! I have your first mission!”
Ace shot up and slammed his fist on the table. “Finally!”
The newly found Loonatics sat around the meeting table, still in their pajamas. Zadavia stood before them as a hologram. She spoke sternly and sincerely to them. “As you know the meteor had some unexpected effects on the environment as well as citizens.” A video clip came up on a screen and the soon-to-be heroes gasped at what they saw. A skyscraper-sized mutant octopus was causing havoc at the bay. It opened its beak-like mouth as lasers shot out of it. It’s hundreds of tentacles flailed in the air, crashing into buildings and bridges near the bay’s edge.
Zadavia continued. “This was the same bay the meteor crash landed in. The particles from it must have caused the mutation to occur.”
Icy flicked her tail. “Now that you mention it, I was walking along the beach when the meteor hit. I was swept up by a tidal wave and swallowed a lot of the water.”
Rev gasped. “Is-that-what-happened?! Gee-Icy,-why-didn’t-you-tell-Tech-and-I?-You-were-coming-out-of-a-two-day-coma-when-we-went-to-pick-you-up-at-the-hospital…”
“Sorry. I guess I was in a little shock.”
Zadavia got the main subject back on line. “This is your first mission, so keep in mind that the fate of this planet rests in your hands. Good luck.” The hologram disappeared and the anthros blinked as the lights came back on.
Tech rested his chin on his fist. “Talk about pressure…”
“You heard the boss lady! We need to get strait on this! Let’s go kick some tentacles!” Duck stood up in a heroic, yet comical, pose.
“In your PJs?” Lexi pointed out.
“Yeah!-We-need-like-a-super-hero-costume-with-a-cape-and-bright-colours-and-cool-boots-and-masks-and—”
Icy interrupted Rev before he started rambling off again. “They don’t have capes, but I might have a little something…”

            The Loonatics looked themselves over in their new black uniforms. Each uniform was taunting jet black with a personal color that matched the wearer’s personality. In the center of the uniforms was the team’s symbol; an upside-down triangle.
Lexi smiled at Icy as she tied her ears up with a long green ribbon. “These are awesome, Icy!”
“Thanks. It still needs some work though. I’ve been working on them for three weeks.”
“Oh that’s why you wouldn’t come out of your room for four whole days.” Duck scoffed.
Tech looked at his uniform’s arm piece thoughtfully as he and Rev entered the room. “Hhmm…Maybe if I put in some upgrades like a communicator.”
This caught Icy’s attention. She looked up at Tech and Rev and nearly gasped out loud. They both looked completely different. They weren’t the same friends she knew since the second grade. Tech looked sharp and menacing in his black and green uniform, not so dopey and timid anymore. His hazel eyes were sharper then his uniform if that was possible and he had a permanent smirk at the corner of his mouth. Rev on the other hand finally looked like the speed-demon he always wanted to be with his black and red uniform. His tail and head feathers looked as if you could cut yourself on them but. Rev smiled and Icy noticed a flash of maturity in his eyes she had never seen before.
Icy felt herself blush. She looked at the thermometer on her uniform arm piece in confusion. Huh? It was normal room temperature, why was she all of a sudden so feverish.
Ace broke through her thinking. “Okay, now that we have the whole uniform situation down, how are we gonna get there. I doubt all of you are gonna fit in my hand-me-down Mercury.
“Take a gander at this, guys.” Tech held up a metal backpack.
Lexi gasped in excitement. “Is that…?”
“Yep. A jetpack.” The pack made a whirring mechanical sound and two large wings jutted out of the sides.
Tech’s teammates awed. “Oooooooooh……”
Ace clenched his fists. “Alright! Now we’re rolling! Slip ‘em on and let’s jet!”
Now it’s not to go without saying Tech’s jetpacks had a few minor bugs. And it didn’t help that the Loonatics had no clue how to use them. Duck’s kept failing and then starting back up, Ace uncontrollably went up, Lexi uncontrollably went down, Slam and Tech flew into each other, Icy’s went backwards, and Rev flew strait into a skyscraper.
After many failed and comical takeoffs they finally got the hang of it and were on their way to the bay.
The bay was in dinosaur-raiding-Tokyo-type chaos. The Loonatics flinched in dismay as the giant mutant octopus picked up a deserted monorail with one of its tentacles and started chewing on it.
“Okay, we need a good plan and pronto.” Ace explained. “We don’t have a chance with this thing if we go full at it without putting our heads together.”
“And that’s why we’re hiding?” Duck scoffed as he extended his arms at the wall of messed up cars the octopus created.
Ace smiled wryly. “We’re taking a coffee break. Now any suggestions?”            Tech nodded. “I’ve got a couple. See that bridge over there? We could form it into a cage. Rev and Duck will be in charge of distracting it. Slam and Icy will secure the octopus by freezing the water around it and tying its tentacles together, and then Ace, Lexi, and I will build the cage.”
“You got that gang? Listen to the coyote. And break!”Ace leapt over an overturned car and took off with the others following. The bunny had naturally gotten into the flow of a born leader and the other Loonatics were willing to follow.
Rev turned on his jetpack and flew into the air. He swirled around the mutant’s head, laughing and shouting out mocking remarks, trying to get its attention. Rev stopped for a moment to make a face at it. He puffed out his cheeks, waggled his fingers, rolled his eyes, and stuck his tongue out. While he was amusing himself, Rev didn’t notice the giant tentacle coming at him 90 mph. The roadrunner felt the air get knocked out of him as the tentacle made contact with his gut. Rev was knocked into the air as his jetpack plummeted for the ground.
“Rev!” Icy screamed. “Guys! Look!”
The others turned to see Rev falling like a brick out of the sky. But before any of them could move to catch him, he suddenly opened his arms out wide. The Loonatics stopped in their tracks and stared in shock at what had just happened.
Rev slowly opened his tightly shut eyes. He was hovering less than a foot above the ground. Blinking owlishly he looked over at the other anthros. “I….I-I-was-hoping-one-of-my-powers-would-be-flying.......”
The others nearly fainted in relief.
Rev and Duck flew up into the air. Rev flew around faster than any jetpack while Duck threw energy orbs at the beast’s face. Slam grabbed at any tentacle in reach and tied them into knots. Ace, Lexi, and Tech got busy on the bolts in the bridge, removing them so that moving it would be easier. Icy stood at the water’s edge watching the scene. She dipped her hands into the water and willed her ice power to seep into the sea.
The octopus and half of its tentacles got trapped in the mass of ice. Rev and Duck stopped for a moment to laugh at Icy, who had accidently froze her own hands in the ice.
Icy blushed. “Ooops…My bad. Slam? Can you give me a hand?”
The Tasmanian devil whirled over, snickered at her situation, and broke the ice around her hands with a mallet sized fist.
“Thanks, Slam.”
“Ro roblem…” Slam took back off to tie up the monster.
Icy noticed the devil was having trouble grabbing at the flailing legs. She waved up at the red blur circling above her. “Hey! Rev!” The roadrunner hovered over to her. “Remember in dodge ball we would run around in an eight formation. Well imagine using that maneuver with super speed…”            Rev caught her drift. He immediately went to work running in and out of the octopus’ tentacles in the eight formation. Duck found the opening and sent a fury of orbs hurtling at the octopus’ face. The giant became flustered between the two attacks and after a moment became to dizzy to move. Slam tied the tentacles up into knots as Ace, Lexi, and Icy came over to join the attack. Tech finished up the last of the cage and with some effort, moved it above the beast with his magnetic ability.
The cage was dropped over it, trapping the monster. The Loonatics looked at their handy work very pleased with themselves. Tech took out a walkie-talkie and motioned to the others. “This cage should be able to hold it until the military comes by to pick it up.”
But before Tech could call the military up the octopus opened its beak-like-mouth and shot a laser at him, causing the coyote to yelp in pain as he was reduced to a pile of ash. The Loonatics gasped in horror. Icy angrily shut the mutant’s mouth with an ice beam as Rev kneeled next to the heap of soot. “Tech!-Come-on-buddy-don’t-die-on-me-now!-If-you-live-I-swear-I’ll-never-use-the-water-baloon-and-bleu-cheese-prank-on-you-ever-again!”
The ash suddenly glowed bright green as it moved around and started to regain figure. Tech rubbed the back of his head as the strong energy disappeared. “Man that hurt! I’m gonna hold you to that swear, Rev, because it took me two weeks to get that bleu cheese out of my fur.”
Ace was the first to come out of his shock and stutter a few words. “Wha— How did you…
Tech turned to make sure his tail was still there. “Don’t ask ‘cause really I have no clue.”
The Loonatics stared. Suddenly Icy started busting up in uncontrollable laughter. The others raised their eyebrows but soon found themselves laughing along with her. They had just won their first battle…

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-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 18:05, 2008-04-14

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 18:06, 2008-04-14

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

I lost internet for almost two months and in that time I was able to complete these three chapters and half way through the next. I was so excited I got internet back I decided to post all three. ^_^ The things you can do when you have the time...
Rev: CORNY!!!
Me hits Rev with brick: Anyways, tell me what you think.

I_See_Your_True_Colours · MagykWire

Your back YAY!!

More chapters please!

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours at 22:16, 2008-11-10

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

MORE! MORE MORE!

Hehe... I am officially in love with this story! Please keep going!

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Thankooos! The next chapter will be done soon so hang tight. Chapter five is the last chapter for this one but there's going to be a sequal. Can't think of a title though, all the ones I come up with are lame, stupid, or in some cases random...-_-

techfan979 · MagykWire

I'll definitely be following this one.

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Woohoo! What a concept! I finished the fith chapter. I think I need one more to go though. Sorry its been a while but again I had a really bad case of writer's block. My apologies *bow* Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 5

It was Ace’s turn to cook dinner that night. He hated cooking but they all had to pull their wait around there. He wasn’t good at cooking but he wasn’t bad either. He was probably just going to make a few cheeseburgers. It took Rev months to control his own speed and after he succeeded in that he became the best cook in the group, plus the one most willing to cook. Everyone stayed away from Tech’s cooking though. It usually ended up looking like one of his experiments.
Ace set the cheeseburgers at the breakfast nook with the others just coming into the room. Slam ate up his ten burgers in a second and then sat back and cleaned his fangs with a toothpick. The others rolled their eyes as they scooted their plates away from the devil. Duck was pocking at his burger, his face resting in his other hand. The Icy subject from that morning was still bothering him when he realized he didn’t really know how she disappeared. He and the others were absent when it occurred. There were only two of them that had been around when she disappeared, and they had refused to talk about it…but he had to know.
“Rev, Tech, what happened to Icy?” The mallard demanded.
The others froze and Rev nearly choked on his burger in surprise. Tech slapped his back and the piece of meat went flying out.
Ace stared at Duck with concern and confusion. “Gee, Duck….what…I mean…why bring that up all of a sudden?”
“I don’t know. She’s my cousin. We may not be blood related considering we were both adopted, but I need to know. We haven’t talked about her in the three years she’s been missing. My mother called this morning wanting to talk to her and I had to make up a quick excuse to why she couldn’t.”
Tech and Rev glanced at each other, considering the situation…and puzzling over the irony of it. They had just been talking about Icy the night before and then Duck suddenly brings it up. It was true they hadn’t told the others everything that had happened that night…..time to let the fox out of the bag.
Tech made a deep sigh as the others looked at him and Rev anxiously. “We’ll tell ya…but you’re not going to believe us….”

“Happy Birthday Icy!!!”
Icy blushed as she was handed her first present. The Loonatics were gathered in the living quarters of their HQ celebrating Icy’s 17th birthday. Icy ripped open the pink wrapping paper. Inside was a CD of some of her own songs. She gapped and hugged Lexi. “You made me my own album!? Thank you Lex!”
“It was easy, as soon as I learned to break into Tech’s lab and use his computer.”
“What!”
“Chill-out-Tech,-I-made-sure-she-didn’t-snoop…”
“Oh, so it was you was it!?”
Lexi and Icy giggled. The fox opened Slam’s gift. “An all you can eat ice cream gift card. Thanks big guy!”
“Ruur relcome.”
Ace tapped Icy on the shoulder from over the couch. “Hey, I didn’t really know what to get ya but I know you like ice skating so...I had Zadavia help me out with this one. Did you by any chance notice the big blue dots on your uniform’s shoes?”
Icy looked down at the feet of her black jumpsuit and found one big blue dot on each of her feet. “Huh, how did…”
“They’re buttons.” Ace pointed out. “Try ‘em…”
Icy pushed them in and two silver blades jutted out the bottom of her shoes. “Whoa! That’s awesome!”
“You like them?”
“Yeah, thanks Ace!”
Rev jumped up and down excitedly. “I-can’t-wait!-Open-mine!-Open-mine!”            “Okay! Okay! Hold your tail feathers.” Icy ripped open the red package and laughed. Inside was a plushy of herself. She pressed the button on the and it spoke up in a squeaky voice “Chill Out!” She pushed it a few more times and it did other catch phrases like “Cool!” and “Ice One!”
“You-like-it!?”
Icy laughed. “I’ll love it until it decides to kill me in the night!” She hugged the plush and put it down to open Tech’s present. She looked at it in confusion. “Plastic?”
Tech chuckled. “It’s what I call an Ice Suit. You slip it on over your uniform if it gets too hot out. It keeps your body cool at twenty degrees for about two hours.”
Icy smiled up at him. “And just in time for the summer. Thanks Tech!” She looked around and noticed she had opened all of her presents. There was one missing…..actually the counted heads was short one person too.            “Eh, anyone seen Duck?” Ace asked.
“Not since breakfast, and he was in a hurry to get out the door then.” Lexi said.
Icy’s ears drooped a little disappointed when suddenly the Loonatics’ communicator’s buzzed. “Hey, um, Icy, can you meet me down stairs. I’ve got something for ya…”
The others glanced at each other and made their way to the elevator. In front of the HQ near the entrance, Duck stood there with his hands behind his back. Icy approached him but before she could talk he shoved a thin orange wrapped package at her. “Here…”
Icy opened it to find, big shocker, a picture of Duck. The other Loonatics rolled their eyes. She smiled at him. “Thanks. Um, why did you want us to come down here just for this though?”
“Well…..” Duck looked around at the others bashfully. “It’s just….ahem… I also got you this….” He turned Icy around and the fox gasped.
“You didn’t!”
“Well I felt bad for wrecking your old one…”
Parked next to the sidewalk was a brand new hover scooter with a big blue bow on it. Ace applauded. “Wow Duck, I’m impressed.”
“I had my connections. So you like it?” Duck asked but then chocked as Icy gave her cousin a bone crushing hug. “UuuG!—Okay, yeah, uh Ducky—oof--Ducky needs to breath….”

Icy opened her bedroom door and placed her presents on her desk. Turning up the AC she flopped down on her bed. Laying there listening to some retro Avril Lavigne music she turned her head to the side and suddenly noticed a small silver and blue box on her night stand. Sitting up she took the box and read the tag. “To Icy, from your two best friends, Rev and Tech. P.S, squeeze twice to activate…”
Icy smiled. “Squeeze twice to activate? Must be another invention of……theirs’…..” Icy looked wide eyed at the beautiful necklace lying inside the box. It was a simple, but pretty, blue glass orb attached to a silver chain. Icy took it out and awed at it. Coming out of her daze she decided to follow their instructions and squeezed the orb twice. It suddenly made a whirring sound and it expanded into a little silver and blue oval.
The oval had two triangle shaped ears, a triangle nose, and two large eyes. Icy giggled at the realization that it resembled herself. The little mechanism blinked at her, smiled, and made a cooing noise. “Kiki!”
“Aww!” Icy rubbed it’s head as it sat in the palm f her hand. “Hi!”
“Kiki!” The little robot levitated and then made another whirring sound, this time turning into a microphone.
Icy gapped. “Whoa!” She tickled Kiki as it turned back. “This is amazing!” Suddenly the alarms in the tower went off. Icy smiled at Kiki. “Okay, change back to a necklace and you can come with me.”
“Kiki!” It whirred and went right back to the silver and blue necklace. Icy slipped it on and ran upstairs to the meeting room.
Zadavia came up out of the middle of the table as a hologram and looked sternly at the Loonatics. “Sorry to end your birthday this way Icy, but I have a mission for you all.”
“What’s up Zadavia?”Ace asked.
“My readings have picked up supernatural activity underground on the outskirts of the city in the desert. There have been off and on earthquakes in that area for two days now. The source is unkown but I found that it is resting in a maze of underground tunnels. I want you to check into it and see if you can find what’s causing this disruption before it gets out of hand.”
“Priority number one on our list, boss.” Ace exclaimed confidently.
Duck yawned. “Even if we do miss a few Zs over it…”
Fortunately, Tech had recently built jet motorcycles so the Loonatics could ride them through the underground tunnels instead of walking. The tunnels curved and split into different chambers and passages and if it wasn’t for Rev’s GPS they would have all ended up hopelessly lost. The Loonatics suddenly saw a faint glow of red in one of the tunnels and decided to park their motorcycles until they could check it out.
As the ventured further down the passage the temperature in the room began to rise. Sweat started to form on the heroes’ foreheads and Icy started to feel slightly dizzy. She had thought about bringing her new ice suit but guessed she wouldn’t be needing it. She wiped her brow and stopped. “Hey, guys, I’m going to go wait by the motorcycles. You go on ahead, it’s getting too hot for me.”
Ace grinned as he nodded. “Try brining that ice suit of yours a habit. Okay, we’ll meet ya there as soon as we’re done investigating.”
The other Loonatics continued foreward as Icy headed back to the bikes. Further down the tunnel opened up into a large chamber filled with lava pools and guysers. Ace shook his head. “Well, mystery solved. There’s an active volcano around here…”
Tech nodded. “That would explain the earthquakes but Zadavia said that there was something supernatural about her readings.”
Rev shrugged. “Maybe-the-under-ground-volcano-was-messing-up-the-reseption…”
“Whatever the case we should go report back to Zadavia—“
The Loonatics started to depart when Ace noticed Rev had slowed up and faltered behind the group. “Huh? Rev? What’s up?”`”Hm? Oh-nothing.-Just-got-a-bit-of-a-headache-Probably from-the-heat,huh?-I’m-okay-now-though…”
“Okay, nothing to lose our heads over. Lets get movin…”
Just then an earthquake struck.......

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 00:26, 2008-06-08

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 02:45, 2008-06-08

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Sorry if its kind of hard to read but I tried editing it like twenty different times and this was the best it came out....-_-

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

GGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! EARTHQUAKE!!!!!!!!! *hides under bed*

Cassidy: 0.o...... you do know that you can't fit under your bed, right?

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Yes! Earthquake! I live in california so we get a lot of them. Not such a big deal for me. ^_^

Workin on last chapter. Just need to figure out a way to get it down -_-

Dragon Wing · Gone

Just read... pretty much the whole thing. I'm not usually too taken to LU fan fiction that have original Loonatics in them, but this definitely works. It helps, of course, that Icy's best friends with Rev and Tech. ;)

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Of course Rev and Tech! I luvs those two! And what do you think of her being Duck's cousin. I think I'm the first person on here to use that idea. And the fact that she was a Loonatic before the episodes in the series. Anyone used those yet? confused

Stylediva127 · MagykWire

Your real good with fan fictions! Wait! Everyone is!

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

*blush*

Soupapowah · That's what SHE said

*gasp* The tale of Icy! I like it! But how did she get captured? what happened? I need to know! Serenity I need to know!!!!! ....sorry had a bit of a moment there

ruthchang93 · Martian

I just read the whole thing and *takes deep breath*....

SERENITYYOUAREAWESOMEILOVEYOURSTORYANDIWANTYOUTOUPDATEUPDATEUUUUUUUUUUPDATE! *gasps and pants, then faints*

Tessa:That....is just a fraction of excitement she's showing...

-- Edited by ruthchang93 at 00:21, 2008-07-22

-- Edited by ruthchang93 at 00:23, 2008-07-22

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Shoot! People are still paying attention to this story. Okay, I'll try to get it done. ^_^

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

YAYS! *glompsSerenity*

Soupapowah · That's what SHE said

Yay! You must!! :D I need to know Icy's story! *glomps Icy*

ruthchang93 · Martian

This is Tessa. Ans as in my maker's previous post you can tell that she really wants you to continue this story. Where is she, you ask? Well, since she got a little over excited, I decided to take care of her....

Maker: *bangs on door* LET ME OUT OF THIS CLOSET TESSA! I NEED TO SEE IF SERENITY UPDATED YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dragon Wing · Gone

I recall this being a cool story. It seems like its been a long time now D:

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

IT'S DONE!!! IT'S EFFIN DONE!! Finally my OC's first story is done after...what...five months? XD

Chapter 6
                Icy looked up at the tunnel ceiling owlishly as the earth around her started to rumble. “Huh?” She lifted her arm to talk into her communicator. “Guys? You feel this right?” But when she released the button only the sound of static replied. She rolled her eyes and took out a notepad and pen from her pack. Writing a note down saying she was still getting too hot and that she’ll meet them back at the entrance she placed it on Ace’s bike.
Icy mounted her bike, slipped on her helmet, and sped down the tunnel. As her bike went into auto with the map of the dungeons in the programming, Icy clutched her new necklace and gazed at it admiringly. It was so pretty… She felt her cheeks warm up all of a sudden. Shaking her head violently she tried to brush it off. Man was it hot down here…
Finally the mouth to the cave came into view and Icy felt the sudden rush of cooling, fresh night air. Stopping her bike she pulled off her helmet, shook her ears, and then inhaled a deep lung-full of the refreshing breeze. She never did like being closed up for too long. Even when reading she eventually would end up taking the book outside with her, which she did often.                There was a sudden sound like rushing wind and Icy turned around smiling, expecting to see Rev. Instead what was approaching the vixen made her choke over her own gasp in horror…
Ace read the note o his bike and nodded. “Okay. That’s understandable. I have a job for her and you two back at HQ anyways.” Ace gestured to Tech and Rev.” Lexi, Slam, Duck, and I are gonna look around a bit more but I would like you three to go back and contact Zadavia. Tell her we got most of the map made out and that the only thing we’ve found so far is a lava pit. We’ll meet you back there in a little while.”
“Will do chief. Man did this mission turn out to be a bust.” Tech got onto his bike and drove off, Rev running alongside him. The two made it out of the tunnels and looked around for Icy. When they found her bike but not her they started to get a little worried.
“Icy? Where’d you go?” Tech asked through his communicator. Static. He tapped it and huffed. “Okay, Runner. Where’d she go now?”
Rev closed his eyes and put his fingers to his temples. His eyes flew open and he blinked broadly.”That’s-really-weir-because-my-GPS-just-isn’t-working-out-here-for-some-darn-reason…”
The two heroes jumped at the sound of explosives on the other side of a rock formation. They hurried toward the area and peeked around the rocks. What they saw made their fu and feathers stand on end. There was a giant tornado of fire spiraling uncontrollably around the formations. The two stared with jaws dropped and they both yelped when something suddenly pulled them down by their collars. They fell in the dust and saw Icy on her knees with a finger to her lips. She gestured to follow her and she crawled off. The other two shrugged and followed after her.
“What-is-that?” Rev whispered as loud as he was aloud.
“I have no clue.” Icy said as she looked over her shoulder. “It came out of nowhere. It attacked me but when I tried fighting back my powers just didn’t work. Ice + Fire = Do the math.”
“How are we gonna get rid of that?” Tech asked.
Icy shrugged. “I was thinking I’d hide until you guys got up here to help me out.”
Tech turned to the roadrunner. “Rev, run back down there and tell Ace we have a situation up here.”
“You-got-it.” Rev was gone in the blink of an eye .Icy and Tech gave a sigh of relief when there was a sudden thud and a groan from the other side of the boulder. They peeked over. Rev had tripped over a rock and landed flat on his face. Unfortunately this grabbed the fire tornadoes’ attention.
It swerved toward Rev at full speed. The roadrunner looked up for a split second and gasped when he realized the tornado was on him. A figure jumped in front of him, shielding the two of them with blinding blue light. Icy dug her feet into the rocky earth, trying to keep her balance as she let out a shield of powerful ice beams. Rev’s eyes widened in dismay. “Icy!”
“Get the others!” She grunted.
Rev nodded and tried to stand, only to find a searing pain in his ankle. “Urgh! What-the-heck…”
“Rev?! What’s wrong?!” Tech called from over the boulder.
“You-guys-aren’t-gonna-believe-this-but-I’ve-actually-brocken-my-ankle…”
“I’ll get the bikes and drive down to them!” Tech made a run for it while Icy kept the tornado occupied. The coyote stopped short and gasped in sheer horror. The tornado had burnt his newly made bikes to a crisp. “Aw come on! I just built those!”
Icy opened one of her tightly shut eyes and gasped when the tornado suddenly started to split in two. They moved around the fox and swerved toward Tech. “Tech! Look out!”
The coyote spun around, quickly dodging the two fire tornadoes. One went after him while the other moved for Rev. Icy tried to recover from her last attack when she realized what was happening. Shacking off her fever she ran for the tornado head on. She ran past the tornado after Rev and shot an ice beam at it. It swiftly turned away from the roadrunner and swerved toward her. Icy ran, hotly pursued, for the other tornado. Grabbing its attention she ran in the opposite direction. Coming to an abrupt stop the two tornadoes coming from opposite sides clashed together. Icy shot another beam at it and fled.                Icy aimed her ice at the ground, creating a path of frozen ground. Quickly pushing the buttons on her shoes she skated onto the ice, creating more of a path as she went. Though she was going twice as fast now the tornado was still hot on her tail, and bigger than before. She called over her shoulder to Tech. “I’ll keep him busy while you get help!” But the moment she focused her eyes back on where she was going she tripped over a rock at full speed. Icy went somersaulting head over tail a have dozen times before skidding to a stop.
Icy shook her head and then looked up wide-eyed. The tornado was upon her with one great swoop and she found herself in the heart of it, completely engulfed.
Tech had been helping Rev to his feet and the two watched helplessly. Looking around Tec’s eyes fell upon the bikes. He let go of Rev and lifted the three of them off the ground with his magnetism. With all his might he tossed the scraps of metal at the tornado. The fire seemed to screech and break apart. There was a blood curdling scream from the base and then with the blink of an eye the tornado broke and disappeared from existence.
Rev levitated off the ground, his ankle throbbing with pain as he did so but he ignored it. The desert around him was nothing but fire and ice. Scorched ground and frozen sand. But there was no trace of Icy. Tech ran over out of breath. He looked around.
The two looked at each other with dismay. Rev tapped into his GPS. There was no trace of any life anywhere. The roadrunner shook his head as he tried to hold back tears and flew into the sky, looking around. The only thing besides desert was the far off skyscrapers of the city. He cupped his hands over his mouth. “Icy!”
While his partner called several times from over head, Tech only stared at the ground. Something had caught his eye. Leaning down he picked up the silver chain necklace with the round blue jewel at the end of it. Tech then did something he promised himself he would never do. Something his grandfather tried to teach him but he had never felt comfortable doing it…until now. Now that he had a reason for it.
The coyote clutched the jewel, threw back his tears, threw back his head, and howled to the full moon with deep sorrow in his heart…

-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 03:23, 2008-07-30

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

NNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The ending was so sad! It made me cry! D: Poor Tech, Rev, and Icy! What exactly happened to her? Where did she go? GAH! SUSPENCE!!!

UPDATE REALLY SOON, 'KAY? PLZ!!!!! 8D

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

That was the last chapter.

You're gonna have to wait for the sequal. evileye

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

NNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

*cough*

START SEQUEL SOON, KAY? PLZ! 8D

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Already have the first chapter done but I won't start posting them till I'm at least half way through the story.

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Oh, 'kay.

*is still excited* 8D

Soupapowah · That's what SHE said

*mouth hanging open* ............................AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
NOoOoOoOoOOOOoOOOoOooOOOoooooOoooOoOooOO!!! I...I..I can't believe it...That was so sad!!

And Tech howled at the moon!!!!

I was so distraught I even failed to notice how cute that was for at least 5 secs (

)

OOH That was good though!!

*chants* Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel

Yeahhhhhh that was an awesome ending!

I can barely wait!

-- Edited by Soupapowah at 00:42, 2008-08-01

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

Thank you soooooo much! ^_^

And yurr gonna havta waaaaaaait.... evileye

ruthchang93 · Martian

I can see that I'm......late.

OH NOES!!!!!!!!! Icy has to make it!!! I mean, she's on that ship with the whole "hero collection" thing, right? And what does Mallory has to do with this? Why did that person with the collection only want Icy? GAH, THERE'S SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!!!!!!

lovegreenanred · Avril lover

The mind boggles...^_^

I'm glad I have you lot on edge though. biggrin