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So...Chase it seems has some mental abilitys, like Lexi and yet he looks like Ace. Dose that meen are two favret rabbit got together in this little tail?

Good work A-cat

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Oooooh! This is getting good! And my hunch was correct! popcorn.gif

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Alright first off, luved what you did with Duck. It was very sweet to see him open up to somebody, though personally I thought I'd be Jess. Anyway, the whole depth of him in his current cituation(sp?) is so very great to see, since we don't get to very much.

Now, I must admit to you Akira, I was VERY excited for when Ace's decendant came up. And, sadly enough, I pretty much acted like Ree and Rita when I heard he was coming up. So... when it got to the red carpet thing I was like, "OOOH NO WAY!!! Ace may not have made it to the top, but it looks like Chase did!!" and I'm like totally wanting to get to when he comes down. Then when he mutters, "Thats what they all say." I start to think: "What? What was that?! He's not even greatful of his success? Or even of his fans?! He has no idea how hard it was before anthros were accepted, does he?!" I keep reading and it seems that he's getting a bit down to earth, when warning Felicia, but then he freezes. Right in the middle of a fight! I think: "Um, wow. Shouldn't he be... uh, I dunno... TRYING NOT TO GET SQUASHED!!! Or at least trying to help?" Now I'm  thinking... wow, I expected way too much of him. He is, after all, a DESENDANT, not the real thing. So, now I feel bad for thinking that about him; and now I think, unless he really is a stereo-typical conceded/clueless actor who just acts like a damn idiot to make himself look great on screen, does he really get on the team? With Ace and Duck always arguing in the past, it might look later on that Chase wants to 'run the show' as Duck may put it. And the fangirl screaming from the Runner twins... yeah, if that keeps up, everyones gunna be deaf by the end of the next two chapters; TOPS! And since he's shown a bit of Lexi's powers, does he have any of Ace's?

Now, I'm thinking: "Ow, my hands! Too much typing! Too much thinking! Too much goodness of a story!!"biggrin 

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Siamese: Yes they probably did. But more is to come from Chase in later chapters wink

Lovegreenandred: Thank you aww.gif .

Doggirl: Wow. What a character analysis. I'm so happy that he's made an impression on you (but then Ace is your favourite character so Chase + Ace's Descendant + Ace fan = Instant happiness for Acer). Yeah, I guess he's like a sort of conceded/clueless actor who's used to playing a hero and watch the stuntmen almost get themselves killed until he is actually faced with the real thing. I want to compare Chase's sort of conceded personality (that's the only way I can describe it so far) to his ancestor's heroic and corageous past. For now I'm not giving too much away about him just yet. All I will say is that Chase and Duck's relationship is gonna be a bumpy one.    

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Wow. Absoulutly the greatest story i have ever read. Awesome job!smile.gif

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Doggirl: Wow. What a character analysis. I'm so happy that he's made an impression on you (but then Ace is your favourite character so Chase + Ace's Descendant + Ace fan = Instant happiness for Acer). Yeah, I guess he's like a sort of conceded/clueless actor who's used to playing a hero and watch the stuntmen almost get themselves killed until he is actually faced with the real thing. I want to compare Chase's sort of conceded personality (that's the only way I can describe it so far) to his ancestor's heroic and corageous past. For now I'm not giving too much away about him just yet. All I will say is that Chase and Duck's relationship is gonna be a bumpy one.    

Heh heh, you got that right.biggrin I was pretty happy for an Ace ancester, so... yeah, probably didn't help that I had my first taste of sugar and caffine in over a week at the same time! -starts laughing at memory- Geez was I a disaster.

I just wonder how much of a difference there is between Chase and him. If so, he might wanna do a little research 'bout his past; find out about how HARD it was for his (however many greats there are) grandfather to:
A) Get a job as a stunt double
B) Work hard to keep it.
C) Try to get his voice and talent heard.
Also, if he is related to Lexi, he should do some research about her as well. Like:
A) Her powers.
B) How she used them (might come in handy if he does have them).
C) How hard it was for her to get accepted at a college.
Hopefully he'll note how painful it was when his 'species' was degraded by the humans because of their ancestry, and not of who they are.


Also, for a bumpy relationship with Duck? Uh... yeah, I think it's safe to say that we can see it coming. I mean, for hundreds (if not THOUSANDS) of years, their ancesters have been feuding over pretty much everything. To not expect that from these two, would be... um... I'm not really sure what to say, but you get my point.smile

Still, a very interesting read to all of us. I can only hope and pray that you update a chapter soon.biggrin (heh heh, possibly with the chance of a Chase and Duck argument?evileye



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I have been reading your cool fanfiction, Im liking very much how this story is going and keep the good work Akira Cat



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Sorry this has taken such a long time to put up this chapter, but here it is! Chapter 12!

Chapter 12

The giant brass machine swung it's right fist once more while Jess managed to jump out of it's way onto the road and land on her feet. She raised both of her arms in front of her as the green aura surrounded her hands, halting the robot's movements on it's left arm. The coyote gritted her teeth as she turned to Hobart, who was unleashing his giant tornadoes on the metal figure.

"Hobart!" She called to him. "See if you can push this bucket of bolts with your strength to knock it off balance!"

"You got it!" The Tasmanian devil nodded as he ceased his tornadoes and launched himself towards the android's fist. He shoulder tackled it and pushed as hard as he could against it. Neither of them was going to falter easily. Hobart growled as he heaved himself against the machine until he felt someone pushing him on his back. He spun his head around to find Ree pushing him, with her legs whirling around like her legs were rolling. But bit by bit, the robot's feet started to scrape backwards. It wasn't until they both heard a cry that that grew louder as they still held their positioning.

"In coming!"

The other roadrunner zoomed from the sky towards the other two Loonatics and pressed her hands against her sister and Hobart. This pushed the machine away and knocked it out of balance, forcing it to collapse onto the floor.

Duck meanwhile was quacking in and out of Orran's sight, as the man tried to make a decisive blow on the mallard. He roared as he swung his sword violently at the bird.

"Keep still you stupid buzzard!" Orran yelled.

"Hey! That's Danger Duck to you!" Duck corrected him as he disappeared once more.

The man stood still, holding his blue blade up ready to strike. He took a few steps to the side before he looked up to the sky to find the mallard dawning down on him.

"Head's up!" He shouted as he threw his firey orbs towards Orran.

The swordsman managed to skillfully deflect them, but didn't have the time to stop his opponent bringing him down onto the floor. The sword slipped out of Orran's hands as they both started to grapple each other on the ground. They rolled trying to gain domination over their opponents, but both of them seemed equal. Finally, Orran's back slammed onto the pavement. Duck held him down by his wrists. But then a mischevious grin crept onto the man's face. The mallard felt Orran's feet onto his stomach and was suddenly thrusted into the air. Duck spun around until he smacked himself against a wall hard and slumped onto the concrete ground. The swordsman smiled evily as he approached the motionless body.

"Finally, I got where I want you." Orran chuckled. "Now to finish you-"

"Stoooooop!"

The man froze his body as he saw Chase emerging into the scene. The robot stopped it's destructive actions, while all the other Loonatics gasped as they saw the rabbit run towards the battle ground.

"You! Stay back!" Jess warned him.

Chase stopped to catch his breath as he faced Orran, ignoring the caution from the coyote.

"Stop what you're doing and leave this city now!" He demanded.

The orange haired villain only stood and laughed.

"And what if I refuse?" He asked.

The rabbit clenched his fists.

"I'll-Ah!"

Chase suddenly bought his hands into his face covering his eyes. This made the man laugh even more.

"Aaaw... looks like I've made this bunny cry." Orran jeered.

The rabbit moaned as a sharp pain coursed through his eyes. He tried to keep back his screams by clenching his teeth together.

"I... c-can't... hold it much... longer..." He stammered as he threw his hands away from his face and whipped open his eye lids.

All of a sudden, a pair of red lasers blasted out from his eyes. Orran dodged the blast as it zoomed past him. This only made the lasers hit the brass robot on the chest. Everyone else watched the robot starting to turn bright red as the rabbit still focussed his eyes on it. The machine struggled to stay on it's feet until it's right arm broke off from it. As they all continued to watch it spontaneously combust, the limbs started to fall to the ground until it finally collapsed into a pile of metal. Chase shut his eyes tight to try and tame back the laser. When he opened them slowly, his eyes were back to his normal shade of blue in his irises. The rabbit gave a glare at Orran. This made him step back apprehensively. He slowly picked up his sword and continued to step back.

"Well this was a suprise..." Orran seethed through his teeth before running away from the scene.

"Hey!" Ree shouted out. "Come back you coward!"

"Nevermind about him." Jess told the roadrunner as she pointed at Duck's unconscious body. "We need to get Duck to the HQ fast!"

As the Loonatics approached the mallard, Chase looked at the ruins around him. He realised that he became a star alright, but not because of the premier. Fear crept into the rabbit's thoughts as he reminded himself of the lasers that zoomed out of his eyes that caused half of the damage to the city. He turned around to see the group of anthros taking their comrade away when he approached them.

"Wait!" He cried.

They all heard his voice as they spun around to see him. Jess stepped forward with a stern face.

"Sir, we appreciate your help. But right now we need to get our collegue back to our headquarters as he is unconscious." She explained.

"Look! Hear me out!" Chase begged. "I don't know what on Earth happened just then, nor do I know what I just did. What is going on!?"

"Well we were all like you when we found our powers too." Jess said.

"Hey!" Ree cut in. "Maybe he could join us!"

"That's a great idea!" Rita concured.

"You two just want him on the team because you're his fans don't you?" Hobart gave a sigh to the roadrunners.

"Absolutely not!" Rita replied defiantly.

"Well either way," The coyote turned to Chase. "You still want to know what's going on right?"

The rabbit nodded his head.

"Yes."

"Well then." Jess accepted him. "You're gonna have to come with us since it's pointless leaving you like this. You're going to have to be carried by Rita then since you don't have a jet pack."

"Yes!" The roadrunner hissed as her sister gave a glare at her.

Chase still looked confused until the coyote gave him a cold look.

"Don't worry. Everything will be explained." She assured him calmly.

Chase's blank expression showed he still didn't understand as he was picked up by Rita. As they all ascended through the air, the rabbit began to realise that his life was not going to be the same ever again.

END OF CHAPTER 12.

Sorry if it was rushed. But it's here so enjoy aww.gif


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Well, no Duck vs. Chase scene yet, but it's still only the beginning. And you updated! -falls over- Yay!

Question: Why did Jess give Chase a cold stare? He was just confused, there was no need to get mad at him for it. Also, does he have siblings? With powers perhaps? Geez, too many questions!! XD

But great chapter, Akira! Please continue!smile

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Cassidy Coyote: *Digs a hole to put and bury her alive in.*

Doggirl: Nope. Not yet. That might come... really later on.

Answer to your question: Prolly cos Chase has only just learnt about his powers and Jess feels like he's an amateur to the whole situation cos she feels that as an actor, he never really experienced "real" disasters until now. And because of that, she feels like she's dealing with a stereotypical, clueless, and conceited actor.

And the answer to your other question:

Spoiler


Thanks for the comments aww.gif . I'll try and update this more often.

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Oh. Gotcha. I just didn't really understand at first. Sheesh, sounds like we had the same first impression of him, huh?

And the spoiler, that made me LOL!!! You iz soooooo evil!!!! Getting me hyped up to know the answer until BOOM! You go and make me even more curious!!!! Curses!!biggrin I shall get the answer yet, Akira! And when I do, I be victorious!!!!biggrin

And please do update more. This is an awsome story.smile

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doggirl2772 wrote:

Oh. Gotcha. I just didn't really understand at first. Sheesh, sounds like we had the same first impression of him, huh?

And the spoiler, that made me LOL!!! You iz soooooo evil!!!! Getting me hyped up to know the answer until BOOM! You go and make me even more curious!!!! Curses!!biggrin I shall get the answer yet, Akira! And when I do, I be victorious!!!!biggrin

And please do update more. This is an awsome story.smile



Yep. I can safely say Chase has made an impression on the team. Not a positive one but oh well.

And I AM one of the most evil geniuses when it comes to literature. The only way you can get anything out of me is if I submit the next chapter to the story. So either way, I win nana.gif



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I missed soooo much awesomeness!!!!
Update!!!!!!!!
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Hiya random fan. And thank you for the comment aww.gif

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Chapter 13

Duck laid on the double bed in his room still unconscious, as the other Loonatics and Chase gazed down on him with concerned faces. Jess managed to heal the last cut on the mallard's arm and bought her hand away from him. Chase watched closely as the green, glowing aura dissolved the red cut from the bird's arm. Once it healed, the rabbit turned his head to the coyote. 

"Do you think he'll be alright?" He asked her.

"He'll be okay." She nodded her head. "I've healed all the wounds he had, but now we just have to wait until he wakes up for our next plan of action."

Chase looked down onto Duck still lying there peacefully. He felt a strange attraction towards him, one that made him wonder what sort of person he was. He questioned himself until he turned to the rest of the group.

"Uh... pardon me for this suggestion, but is it alright if I stay and look after him?" He murmured. "I know it's against your policy to do so, but... I think I need to reflect on the situation and what is going on. This is probably the most... explosive day known to me, especially with the whole laser eye thing. I... just want to know if you're alright by that."

The group at first did not know what to say. Jess gave a suspicious frown at him and folded her arms. The scene seemed frozen for a few minutes until a door bell sound played in the room. The coyote gave a sigh and unfolded her arms.

"Fine." She said. "You can stay with him. But when he wakes up, I want you to let us know."

Chase nodded his head as everybody else left the room. As the door shut behind them, the rabbit gave another worried look upon Duck and exhaled deeply. He felt like an outsider from the way the coyote seemed to have addressed him. But Chase knew that with an injured comrade, she must treat the situation seriously. He knew she must have been frustrated to deal with someone who was new to the whole idea what the proffessional were doing. He should know. He remembered it was the same for him when he first auditioned against many proffessional actors for a part in a stage production of a theatre classic of Harold Pinter; "One for the road".

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"Why did you have to be so harsh on him?" Ree inquired to Jess as everyone else apart from Rita, settled down on a set of purple sofas.

The coyote sat down in very deep thought. She began remembering her first time she discovered her powers and how scared she was of them. Of course it took Duck some while before convincing her that she could be a hero. But she also felt that she had to be firm while adressing an actor who was only used to planned explosions and stunts instead of dealing with the real thing. In her mind, the roadrunner's ramblings were just mumbles invading her mind.

"You knew from his face that he was scared of what happened tonight!" She continued. "He had no idea that he had superpowers like us until now! So you didn't have to go and make him feel unsettled!"

"Look!" Jess snapped at her. "I didn't exactly embrace my powers first time! I had to get used it! And so should he! He shouldn't just waltz around showing off his powers like some drama queen! He needs to face the 'real' situation seriously!"

"Calm down!" Hobart stopped both of them. "This arguing is not gonna bring Duck back to conscious!"

Suddenly, Rita returned back to the living room as her arrival turned all their head around.

"Um... there's someone who wants to see you guys." She informed them.

"If it's reporters, tell them to leave here." Jess waved her hand away.

"Who says I'm a reporter?"

The owner of the smooth voice step through. Everyone else stood up from the sofas and watched a female fox wearing a sexy red dress, with her curly red hair a little more frizzy than what it was at the premiere, enter the room. Jess stepped forward towards the fox.

"And you must be..."

"Felicia Fox." The stranger answered. "I have reason to believe that Chase is here."

"And what is it that you want Chase for?" Jess interrogated the fox.

"My questions doesn't neccessarily concern him." Felicia folded her arms. "I'm just curious about you guys in general, how you just came out from nowhere and just caused havoc in public places, just to save their lives from a psycho. Now I wonder just a little, how you guys came to be."

"For your information, we try not to cause too much chaos for everyone and the environment." The coyote stood defensively. "But if that's how the criminals want to be, so be it."

"But the thing is you've been chasing that criminal for sometime." The vixen pointed out. "Yet your powers combined let him get away so many times. Care to explain that?"

"Criminals just don't put their hands up and surrender." Jess continued. "They try to get away with the crimes they commit. It's just lucky for you that he's not trying to track you down, in order to get rid of a threat based on the past."

"What are you talking about?" Felicia lifted an eye brow up.

Jess hesitated before she started to speak.

"Have you ever heard the 'Loonatics'?" She asked.

"Nope." The fox shook her head. "Never heard of them. They sound like a bunch of weirdos, given the name that is."

"The Loonatics were a group of ordinary people like you, who were granted powers from a meteor that crashed onto Earth, that came from outer space seventy-seven years ago!" Jess explained assertively. "They have stopped evil villains and natural disasters from destroying the whole galaxy, let alone this planet! And we, the descendants of them, have to carry on with their duty in order to protect our home!"

"And you seriously believe that Chase is one of those descendants?" Felicia chuckled.

"Well you saw him use his powers didn't you?" Jess questioned the fox.

The fox stared down onto the floor while secretly grinning to herself.

"Well... tonight was entertaining wasn't it?" She murmured.

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Chase gazed out of the window and glimpsed at the evening coloured lights, blinking and shining in the navy blue background. Silence only filled the room as the mallard still laid unconscious.

But the rabbit's thoughts were on what happened that evening. Even before all the action happened, he felt a strange sensation that he had to question himself on. He felt a surreal feeling when he touched one of the roadrunner's pens. He just zoned out while he was halfway through writing his signature. The reason being because he saw the action that happened in his mind. Almost like a vision, all the details that he saw was there; the robot, the Loonatics, and him using lasers from his eyes. He saw the scene play like a video before returning to reality. That was why he told Felicia that something else was going to happen apart from the premiere. It confused both of them, but at the end of the day, what he saw actually happened.

Chase snapped out of his thoughts when he heard a moaning sound.

"N-no... don't... le-lea..."

The rabbit turned around to find Duck finally moving his beak. But his voice sounded feverish, so Chase approached him and knelt beside him. He lifted his left arm up and slowly hovered his hand to feel the mallard's forehead. But by the time Chase's hand made contact with him, he gave a gasp as the sharp sensation rushed through his body.

All at once, random images flashed across in his mind with distorted voices saying different sentences at the same time. Nothing felt clear as all the jumbled images and sounds still continued to rage on, until one particular image flickered like a broken television screen onto one scene where a giant, khaki lizard stomped in the middle of what looked like a city with six figures in black and different coloured uniforms, floating around the creature with jet packs on their backs.

"Ace! I don't want to alarm you, but this giant lizard is a... machine! And it seems to have a bomb on it's back!" A male coyote anthro in the black and green uniform declared while holding a remote controlled device.

"What!?" Everyone else shrieked, apart from another male rabbit anthro in his black and yellow uniform. 

"Quick!" He commanded. "Get everybody out of here before-"

An explosion errupted from the lizard as everything was engulfed in an ascending grey cloud. The only thing that Chase could hear clearly was screams, with a timid sounding voice following after it.

"Mother? Are you there?"

Once the vision was over, Chase tumbled backwards while snatching his hand back into his chest. He panted as he noticed the mallard shot up from his position on his bed and gasped for air while rotating his head frantically.

"Oh no!" He cried. "Please don't tell me I've slept for another seventy-five years! Jess! Hobart! Ree! Rita! Anyone!"

As much panic as Chase was in, he had to help Duck. He rushed to his side, but avoided making any physical contact with him incase he had another vision from him.

"It's alright!" The rabbit reassured him. "You were just having a bad dream! Just take deep breaths!"

Duck inhaled and exhaled as Chase instructed him until they both finally calmed themselves down. The mallard turned to the rabbit who was obviously the nearest living being he could ask questions to.

"What year have I ended up in this time?" Duck inquired.

"Why?" Chase gave him a puzzled expression. "It's still the year 2849."

"Oh thank goodness for that." The bird groaned. "I was afraid I may have slept for another seventy-five years or so and reached the age of two hundred years old or something."

"What are you talking about?" Chase queeried him. "How old are you?"

"Apparently, I'm ninety-six years old." He told him.

"What!? That's impossible!" The rabbit exclaimed. "How can you be ninety-six when you don't look that old!?"

"Cryosleep." Duck replied. "I was just doing my heroic duties in a mission when-"

"A lizard which was actually a bomb exploded and you lost consciousness." Chase finished his sentence.

The bird glared at him with wide eyes of shock.

"Did you read my mind!?" He stammered.

Chase stared at him in suprise the same as Duck did towards him.

"Danger Duck;" The rabbit started. "Who are you?"

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O.O............................. *faints from over-exposure-to-awesomeness-syndrome*

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YAY! I was hoping that you wouldn't make Chase too jerk-ish. After all, he's totally confused! And I have a bad feeling about Felicia. Dunno why tho.

And YAY for updateness!

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I KNOW!!!!

..... She's eeeevvviiiiiillllll!!!!

Cassidy: Oh, no, she's still not over the whole "Shannon Incident."

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Wow! That was... was... so emotional. It was brilliant!!!

And, sorry bout this, another question: Why could Chase see the future and the past? Both Lexi and Ace didn't have psycic (sp?) abilities, so why does their desendant? And another thing. Who spoke in the tiny voice? Was there a child in the vicinity when the bomb went off? Or was it a younger still Duck at the orphanarium? And geez, Akira, why do you make questions pop into my head?!

Also, I think you may have made me fall in love with Chase's character. smile He seems so confused and scared and it really makes me wanna hug him.

And.... *shifty eyes* I agree with Danielle and Ruth. Felica gave me a weird feeling. Like she's up to something and that the team can't trust her...

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Cassidy Coyote: devilish.gif Hee hee hee... You're gonna have to wait until another chapter to find out what Felicia is up to...

Ruthchang: Well how can he act arrogant when he is faced with an unusual situation where he has no idea where his powers came from? You know when actors have the sense of superiority on stage or on film cos:
 
1. They're following a script and therefore know their cues and what to do?

2. Depending on the acting technique, they can take the audience through a journey into the story through their characters (Especially if they make physical contact with the audience like forcing them up on stage, or mental contact by hitting a nerve depending on what and how they say a specific line)?

That gives the actors some form of superiority over the audience cos everything was planned before the big night. Chase was used to this domination as an actor until the whole incident happened spontaneously and unexpectedly. This puts him less at ease because although he had the vision, he didn't realise that it was actually going to happen.

Sorry for the long analysis, I'm just like that thanks to two years of having to get used to essay writing ^^; .

Doggirl: Alright, I'll give you the explaination.

Obviously by now, people would have guessed that Ace and Lexi got it on and had children. And we all know the basics of DNA and how both the rabbit's DNA got changed since having powers.

Now lets talk about their powers. Ace's powers are to use lasers from his eyes and optical enhancement, and Lexi is able to use brain blast and auditary amplification.

When I read the article about Lexi's powers, it said that she can envision the object that she wants to destroy and when she focusses her mind on it, the target gets blasted. It can also knock out mind control waves too before I forget. Ace's optical enhancement enables him to see through walls and his laser eyes... you know what I mean. You've seen it plenty of times before.

Anyway, by using the enhanced senses of eyes and mind, I combined those powers so Chase is able to see in the past and the future (not the present). But the only way that he can trigger the vision is if he touches a personal belonging or a person themselves. This power is pretty ironic for him, because obviously actors do research in their characters in order to get the naturalistic response to a certain situation. And with Chase's powers, he can empathise with those he has visions about which would be a bonus should he carry on with his acting career.

The question about the voice: I'll leave that up to you, but I'll give you one of my theories. You know when Duck is almost about to be fried or damaged in anyway, he squeaks "Mother" before the big collision. I just want to put that reference in there for the impact.

I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It's probably one of the more complex ones I've written so far. But I think the reason why you may like Chase is because of a certain Ace Bunny that you like as well XD .

Everyone seems to have their suspicions about Felicia Fox. She's a sly one,  so watch this space! And thank you for the comments aww.gif 

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A sly fox. XD

Anyways, yaeh, I guess I know what you mean. but at least Chase still wants to help people! There's still SOME Ace left in him!

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Oh, I see where your going at now. Youre saying that, he can combine both Ace's optical enhancement and Lexi's mind powers to be able to see something from the past and/or future that concerns the person and/or object that he comes in contact with. Am I correct?

And the "Mother" thing, I totally forgot about that! Duck does seem to share that odd trait with Daffy about saying "Mother" before something happens to them. XD

But I still believe that him (looking so much as my favourite bunny) has envisioned me in seeing him scared, confused and helpless; a side of which we rarely get to see in Ace, and that may be why I seem to be desiring his desendant right now.

Yes... foxes are sly, aren't they? Hmm... I should keep a sharp eye on Felica from now on...

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MISS FELICIA FOX, YOU ARE NOW UNDER SURVALLENCE OF THREE LOONATICS UNLEASHED FANS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

I also forgot about the Mother part. Who did say that? Hmmmm*ponders*

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Ruthchang:

Felicia: furious But I haven't done anything yet!

Ruth: mad.gif Joo have been warned!!!

Now that Chase has discovered his powers, he may still have that little Ace left in him.

Doggirl: Well the power he has is just laser eyes and the power to see visions of the past and future by touching a personal object or person. But yeah, you're on the right lines.

I never realised when comparing Ace and Chase together, we get to see a side of Ace that the fans never saw, but we see it through another character. Strange but it's pretty cool.

You lot don't really trust Felicia much don't you XD ?

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*watches Felicia*

Felicia: *groans* I haven't done anything! Would you leave me alone?

Cassidy: Yeah, sorry about that, I'll have to remember to put a leash around her when she goes into the an fiction section.

Me: *is still watching Felicia*

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*watches Felicia*

Felicia: *groans* I haven't done anything! Would you leave me alone?

Cassidy: Yeah, sorry about that, I'll have to remember to put a leash around her when she goes into the an fiction section.

Me: *is still watching Felicia*



XD lolz!

And no, it seems to me that we don't. biggrin

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We don't trust her even if she did something extremely good!

*watches Felicia with Danielle and Doggirl*

Felicia: mad.gifWhat the heck is WRONG with you people?!

Tessa: Well, they DID warn you, you know.

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Chapter 14

"Danger Duck; Who are you?"

Before Duck could open his mouth, the door burst open to reveal the rest of the Loonatics, with Felicia pushing through them to finally see Chase.

"Chase!" She exclaimed. "I was searching everywhere for you!"

The rabbit stared at her blankly.

"Y-you have?" He stuttered.

"Of course!" The fox frowned. "I am your girlfriend! You were meant to check up on me as well to see whether I was alright! Some boyfriend you were!"

Duck stepped in front of Chase with his face in anger.

"What the hell is your problem!?" He shouted at her. "Can't you see that he's scared of what's going on! He just discovered that he has these superpowers that he never knew he had before until this moment! And you're complaining that he didn't check to see whether you were alright! It's the same for everyone else here! They didn't realise that they could do things that no other person can until the moment they actually did it and that made them scared as well! You'd act the exact same if you had some right now!"

Felicia just giggled.

"Ah ha ha! My, you're such a loud mouth aren't you?" She said. "But I don't really care for your feelings. I just want to take my boyfriend back to reality, to the way things were before those crazy psychos ruined our premiere, away from maniacs like you."

"That's enough Felicia!" Chase spoke out. "If you're here to cause trouble for these people, then I'll prefer it if you just leave."

"Fine then." The fox grunted as she turned her back to walk out of the door. "Lets go back to our hotel. Things will blow over in the morning."

The rabbit stood on the spot for a few seconds before lifting his head up.

"No."

Felicia spun around with her face aghast.

"Excuse me?" She questioned him. "You're not coming with me?"

"No." Chase shook his head. "Like Duck said, I've only just discovered these powers that I had no clue I had until now. And I want to find out what they are, and why I have them. And I'm not going to be able to find out if I go back with you. So I'm sorry Felicia, you're going back by yourself. Besides, I don't like that attitude of yours. It's making me feel uncomfortable."

The fox stood there in complete shock to what he was saying to her. It was then she turned around again to exit out of the room.

"Fine." She shot out. "Do what you want. We're through."

All pairs of eyes followed her out of the room as she slammed the door behind her. Jess approached the rabbit with a stern expression.

"So you're planning to actually stay here with us?" She inquired.

Chase hesitated not being able to answer her question. It wasn't until Duck placed his hand on his shoulder that the rabbit turned his head to him.

"He can sleep on the couch for the night." He suggested. "We'll explain everything to him tomorrow."

The coyote was quite reluctant to the mallard's decision, but then she nodded her head.

"Alright." She said. "But then he'll have to make his choice tomorrow as well."

As the others left the room, Chase still stood there still fazed about what happened. Duck stepped out from behind him and stood by his side.

"I know the couch isn't your type of place to sleep tonight, but we only have six beds." He told him.

The rabbit drooped his head down to the floor and exhaled out a breath.

"Oh." He murmured.

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Chase stared up at the ceiling trying to collect his scrambled thoughts. Ever since that man and robot attacked him at the premiere, everything had just been a blur for him. He was so used to being involved in problem in the films because he knew he never had that problem in real life. But now he felt like he was actually one of his characters inside a film. A character who has to face a problem like ordinary people have to, that he never actually did.

Chase gave another sigh and was about to settle himself to sleep when he heard a door hiss open. He snapped his eyes shut and pretended to be asleep. He then heard footsteps approaching to the front of the couch. The rabbit slowly opened one eye to see what was making the noise. He listened to the shuffling which was quite close to where he was. He looked down to the floor to find a figure lying on the floor next to the couch. When the figure stopped moving around, Chase decided to speak to them.

"Hey." He whispered to them. "What are you doing down there?"

The figure rolled to look up at the rabbit. Chase's expression became confused.

"Duck?" He said. "Why are you sleeping on the floor? Don't you have a bed to sleep in?"

The mallard exhaled.

"I couldn't sleep, not by myself anyway." He answered.

"Why?" Chase asked. "Are you scared of the dark or something?"

"No," Duck glared at him. "I just found it hard to sleep when I was alone in my room."

"Well what are you scared of then?" The rabbit inquired before he remembered something. "Are you afraid of going to sleep alone incase you find you can't wake yourself up until a few years later?"

The mallard sat himself up and stared at him.

"You remember that from your vision?" He commented. "You're really scaring me with what you've found out about me from them."

Chase gave a quiet laugh as Duck placed his hands behind his head.

"I suppose it's true." The mallard confessed. "I know that you already know I've slept for seventy-five years after that bombing accident, and to try to get myself asleep is almost impossible after I've slept for that long. It's scary."

"So you must have missed out on a lot of things while you were sleeping?" Chase said.

"I sure have." Duck chuckled, but then he gazed odourlessly up at the ceiling.

Chase gave a worried face to him.

"You miss your friends don't you? Slam, Rev, Tech, Lexi, and Ace?"

"Yeah." The mallard sighed. "It's kind of sad now that they're gone and I'm the only one still living. It's really... sad."

Chase felt mutual about how Duck was feeling. He couldn't believe how much of him he was finding out, even without his vision powers. He then lifted his head up and looked down upon the bird.

"Duck? I want to ask you something." The rabbit requested.

"Shoot." The mallard permitted him.

"What was my ancestor like? Ace Bunny?" Chase asked.

Duck paused to think of an answer to the question he asked.

"Well..." He started. "Ace was a smart-aleck, and a right pain up the butt. He sometimes tried to annoy everybody on purpose, and he showed off too much."

Duck then softened his tone of voice just when Chase featured his face to concern.

"But he was a great leader," The bird continued. "He always had an answer to everything whenever a problem showed up, and he was a great fighter. Sure he was gullible, but his heart was in the right place. He would never ever decide to become evil. He was always one of the good guys no matter what. He started from the bottom just like everyone else, but he climbed himself to the top and has become a very influential person in other's lives and mine."

"What was he before he became a hero?" The rabbit questioned him.

"A stunt double." Duck responded.

"Woah." Chase said. "I never thought about how he must have worked so hard to get where he wanted to be. I just had it easy."

"Well..." The mallard said. "He managed to get to the high crowd where he deserves to be. Everyone in the team did including me."

"So what were you before you got your powers?" The rabbit asked.

"Do I have to?" Duck groaned. "It's embarrassing."

"You told me what Ace was." Chase grinned.

The mallard huffed in defeat.

"A pool boy."

The rabbit burst out laughing, but managed to control it.

"A pool boy?" He giggled.

"Embarrassing as it is." The bird grumbled. "Hey! When I got my powers, I was confused. Not scared, but I tried to stay calm."

Chase frowned in disbelief.

"Okay, I was scared." Duck confessed. "I didn't know how to control them at first like yourself. But then so had the others back in my day, and the others here. They didn't know what to do."

The rabbit paused before opening his mouth again.

"Duck? If it isn't too much trouble, do you think I could become a Loonatic?"

"Well, that's up to you." The mallard answered. "Obviously we would prefer it if you didn't use it for evil doings, but I'm not the one who can answer that. If you're sure you want to be a hero, then you've got to believe you're one. You can't just join and then quit after the first mission. That's not how it works. You've gotta be prepared to fight for yours and others lives, as well as protecting your home from destruction. Would you be prepared for that?"

Chase stopped to think. In his mind, he wanted to help people and protect them. But he then questioned himself on what if he wasn't good enough to be one. He turned to Duck once more.

"And what if I'm not good enough?" He asked.

"And what if you're not?" Duck replied back. "What would you do? I see you can be just as heroic as your ancestor. I know it."

The mallard then yawned and laid back down onto the floor.

"If you don't mind, I think we should get some sleep." He groaned. "Good night."

As soon as Duck dropped off to sleep, Chase gave a smile upon the mallard.

"Good night." He whispered as he rolled his blanket around himself and drifted of into his sleep.

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Ha! Felicia sooo deserved to hear that in my opinion! But, I'm still watching her!

*watches Felicia*
Felicia: *glares at me* I have the feeling I'm going to need a restraining order very soon...

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Duck opens up to yet another descendant of his friends. YAY!

I like how you made Chase so unsure of himself. Me has a HUGE soft spot for nervous guys.

And YES!!! WAY TO GO, CHASE. SHOW THAT FOX SHE'S NOT EVERYTHING TO YOU. SHE'S EVIL AND YOU KNOW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tessa: Do you really have to push it that hard on her?

Me: What do you mean?! For all we know, she might turn to...what'shisname...oh yeah....Orran. She might turn to Orran and become Permanently Evil!!!!!!!!!!*glares with Danielle*

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I hope Duck's gonna tell all of them bout their ancestors. Ok, so maybe bout Lexi to Chaseaww since he seems to be more confused, unsure of himself and and and....
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Alright, i first gotta get this said and outta the way...

ATTA BOY, CHASE!!! YOU SHOW THAT GIRL THAT YOU AIN"T SCARED OF HER!!! KICK HER TO THE CIRB, SHE AIN'T WORTH IT IF SHE CAN'T SEE IT FROM YOUR SIDE AS WELL AS HER OWN.

and...

BRAVO DUCK!! TRUELY INSPIRATIONAL!!

Now, -flops to the floor- I can say, thank you for updating. Although, when I found out you did, I was at my grandparents house and not allowed to go on here; alas making me want to cry; but it was well worth the wait, I say!!I absolutely L.O.V.E.D. it when Duck stood up for Chase when pretty much nobody else would. I also thought it was great that the two had some time to talk alone (and to see Duck's thoughts on Ace! XD). It was soooo adorable to see the two of them bond, and Chase be interested in one of his ancestors, and see bunneh boi so un-self-confident and unsure of himself.

And, strangely enough, I don't have any questions!! Weird, eh?biggrin

me: *continues to watch Felica* Grrrr...
Felica: *trys to be sweet* I didn't do anything! Why be so hasty to me? *smiles sickiningly sweetly*
me: bleh Ewwww... False niceness!!!

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As sunlight ray lit up on top of Chase's face as the rabbit lifted his arm to protect his eyes from the light. He sat up on the purple sofa and rubbed his head. He glanced down at the bottom of the sofa to find that Duck had already gotten up way earlier than he did. He stared at the end of the sofa to find a new set of clothes sitting on the arm of it. Chase crawled forward to inspect the garments. He picked up a black uniformed jump suit with a yellow triangle placed on the chest. He then noticed a piece of paper underneath the uniform, which he picked up and unfolded it.

"Sorry, but this was the last one we had. Hope you don't mind the colours."

The note didn't say who it was from, but Chase felt a sense of acceptance as he held the uniform in front of him.

It was a while later before he came out into the living room after he was finished with the bathroom. He pulled his gaunlets down as he watched the others preoccupied in their activities. He then felt that feeling of acceptance disappear as he observed everyone else. He felt like the odd one out, like the new person coming to work with his colleagues who had much more experience than he ever did in their job. Just when he began to worry, he heard a shriek from Jess, who sat at the table near the kitchen.

"What!?" she cried. "How dare they say that about us!?"

"What is it Jess?" Duck inquired, as everyone else was drawn in to look at the holographic news article on the table.

"This is rubbish they're feeding to everyone else!" The coyote exclaimed in anger.

"Loonatics brave but messy." Ree started.

"An anonymous source has claimed that the local Acmetropolis heroes that call themselves "The Loonatics", maybe the life savers of many citizens in Acmetropolis, but they can't seem to find the time to clean up their destructive mess of rubble from ruined buildings after failing to catch a wanted criminal that is still on the loose." Rita read.

"We're trying our best!" Jess slammed her fist on the table.

She then suddenly glared at Chase and pointed an accusing finger at him. The rabbit flinched stepping backwards, only to see anger on the coyote's face.

"You!" She shot at him. "You were the one who told the news crew about us, but twisted it to make us look bad!"

"I... didn't..." Chase stammered.

Duck then stood in front of the rabbit and placed his fists on both sides of his waist.

"That's enough Jess!" He demanded. "He was with us the whole time, so how could he have done it?"

"Maybe he had his cell phone with him and told the journalists everything through that!" Jess told him.

"That's impossible, because I was with him all night!" The mallard objected.

"What!?" The coyote snapped. "And what were you doing with him all night?"

"I thought he'd be scared so I decided to keep him company!" Duck answered.

"And just because he has superpowers, you've accepted him!" Jess argued. "He's not even worthy of wearing the uniform of his ancestor!"

"Now that was out of order!" The mallard thrusted his arm towards her. "I demand you take that back now!"

"Please stop fighting!" Ree shouted over the top of both the arguing anthros.

Everything fell silient after that sudden outburst. Hobart then stood in between both Jess and Duck.

"I am appaulled at both your behaviour!" The Tasmanian devil glared at them sternly. "Jess, what you've said was out of order and you should segregate Chase like you have done. And I can't believe you're so immature for a superhero Duck. I am very dissapointed in you. Now I suggest both of you come to an agreement and apologise to each other."

Jess and Duck squinted at each other and grumbled their apologies. Suddenly an alarm sounded around them. Alert, everyone entered the meeting room where they saw the television screen fizzing black and white until an image of a red haired man appeared with an evil grin on his face. They all immediately recognised the figure.

"Orran!" They all called out.

The man gave a chuckle.

"Greetings Loonatics." He started. "I hope you're all doing so well, considering that we have our disagreements."

"What do you want?" Duck said apprehensively. "Have you come to surrender?"

"Oh, quite the opposite." Orran replied. "I have someone who wants to talk to you."

He then stepped backwards, revealing a young, female, anthro fox in a red dress, struggling to dettach herself from some ropes binding her together. Her voiced was muffled thanks to a piece of white cloth that gagged her mouth. Chase gasped.

"Felicia!"

Orran put himself back on the screen.

"I can certainly say she's a good looking woman." He continued. "It would be such a shame to lose such a beautiful actress such as herself. So to keep her alive, all of you Loonatics must come to the abandonned warehouse not so far from the city at eleven 'o' clock this evening. If you do not oblige to this, Felicia Fox will die."

He began to laugh as Felicia tried to release herself from the ropes as the screen turned blank. It was then Chase pricked up his face in realisation.

"Of course!" He slammed his fist into his other cupped hand. "Felicia was the one who told the journalists about us! She was the only other person who was here last night!"

"But why Felicia out of all people?" Rita asked. "Apart from her being a well-known actress, and being Chase's old girlfriend-"

"He must have read the article about us to try and find some of our weaknesses," Chase explained. "But somehow he knew about me and Felicia being together. But once I used my powers in front of him, he figured that he could use her against me in order to do what he wants. But he also wants to use that tatic, in order for the rest of you to do as he says because, we don't want anyone to lose their lives."

Everyone stared at Chase's detailed theory.

"Wow." Jess said. "You're learning."

"Okay." Duck declared. "Now that we know what Orran is doing, we need to hatch a plan of attack against him, and save Felicia from sudden death. ANy bright ideas?"

No-one said anything until Chase piped up.

"Um... if it isn't too much trouble... I have a plan." He suggested.

Everyone else looked at each other in hesitation until Jess approached.

"Okay," She said. "What did you have in mind?"

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*LIGHTBULB* This is such an epic story, it deserves............ *drumroll*...... FAN ARTS!!!

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Wow. Jess can have an attitude when peeved off enough. Cool!

*LIGHTBULB* This is such an epic story, it deserves............ *drumroll*...... FAN ARTS!!!

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Really? It deserves that? Oh well. aww.gif Go knock yourself out. I can't wait to see what you come up with.



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*resurfaces* Crap. I forgot something...... RESEARCH!!!! 8D

*rereads whole story*

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*pokes my head out from under bed covers. hobbles over to the computer and starts to read*

Wow! Another great chapter! Looks like Chase is his ancestor's relative, ain't he? XD

And holy crap, Jess got a baaaaad temper. Course, she's just under a lot of stress and that happens to everybody, but she didn't have to put the blame on poor lil' Chase! *glomps Chase*

Chase: Uh... thanks?

Yayz for Duck! He is actually being a good leader, maybe this future thing is what he needed to find himself.

Only 3 questions though: now that they got the uniforms red, green, orange, purple and yellow outta the way, what about the pink one? Can ya give us any hints on that? And also... WILL THEY SAVE FELICA USING CHASE'S PLAN?

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Cassidy Coyote: I'm glad you're liking the story. Can't wait to see what you come up with aww.gif .

Doggirl: Jess has become a little tempermental throughout the story. I guess she still hasn't accepted Chase into the group. But now she's putting her trust in him to see whether he can prove himself worthy. About the uniform, if you've read chapter 9, you'll read that the two roadrunners were fighting over the red and pink uniforms. Ree is wearing the pink one while Rita is wearing the red. And about Chase's plan... I haven't invented one yet. But as soon as I have a plan, I'll hopefully post the chapter up.

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Um...Akira? Don't you mean Doggirl instead of Siamese?

I still think Felicia has turned to Orran. X(

I'm really starting to like Chase. He's so unsure of himself yet he can come up with all the strategies and plans, looks like Bugs's and Ace's bright mind runs in the family. =)

Chase reminds me of my favorite character in another fandom. =D

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I totally love Jess! She's my fave character from this story!

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Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3
Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

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Why? Besides the obvious fact that she's Tech's descendant, that is.

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I don't really know. I think it's because she seems like a girl who just won't give up and she's extremely hard-headed. I like characters with a personality like that for some reason. True, the attitude she pulled with Duck surprised me, but I still like her. 'Specially how she's mis-trustful towards Chase. *is maul'd by Lisa* But, if I was in her situation, I wouldn't trust him either, yet that is.

Anywho, that's my two cents..... *dives into notebook*

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Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?!
Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3
Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/



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Akira: Oh ya, now I remember! ^^; And the plan is still in the works? Hmmm... *turns to felica* I don't thonk you'll be escaping any time soon.
Felica: mmph?
me: Cause a brilliant mind needs time to figure one out, silly!

*chases Danielle but she dives into her notebook* Curses!!
Me: *sees the notebook. grin comes on my face. walks over. picks it up. is about to look inside when...*
*SLAP!*
me: OW!!!! *is holding injured hand*
Cassidy: No peeking! *takes notebook away*


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I've got some bad news for you guys. I'm afraid due to circumstances that can't be avoided like getting ready for college and other things, I am unable to finish this story immediately. When I have lots of time and when I can be bothered to do it, I'll do my best to put up the chapters ASAP. But for now, the story will be hanging there.

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