This is my first fanfiction,so please be gentle when commenting on it...
(==Edited after first try==)

=Inside the Loonatics tower=
So far,its been a slow day with little activity.Ace is in a training session,Rev is playing ping-pong by himself(for the fifty-eighth time

today!),Slam is digging through the refrigerator,Lexi is reading a magazine,Tech is experimenting in his lab and Duck is playing with a ball

and paddle.
Suddenly the ball from Ducks paddle comes right off the paddle falls squarely on Lexi's head.
"Ouch!Watch it Duck!"-Lexi
"Well maybe if you hadnt got in the way of my ball then that wouldnt have happened!" - Duck
"What!That's just stupid!"-Lexi
"Coming from my mouth,its genius" - Duck
"Fine,you want your ball?-Lexi-Lexi hurls the rubber ball out the window
"HEY,DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THOSE COST?!" - Duck -Lexi huffs loudly and leaves the room
"Feh,how dare she think that she can best me in a battle of wits" - Duck
"Duck,da' reason she didnt fight ya' was because she doesnt like to fight unarmed oppenents"-Ace
Suddenly,a sound comes from outside.The remainder within the room rush to see a small burning object falling into Acmeptropolis.(Of course

Zadavia sends them to the situation).

=Inside the UFO ****pit=
"Mayday,Mayday,this is M014319.Currently crashing on a UP,emergency transponder activated.I have been hit by an extremely heavy meteor storm

and my main fuel tanks are on fire.Contained,but causing damage to the main structure.ET to crash,30 seconds.Injuries estimated will be

severe and may require medical aid...out"

=In a small patch of park=
The small ship comes crashing down into the park,snapping trees and going through brick walls,Finally coming to rest halfway inside a

building.The loonatics quickly arrive on the scene and clear the rubble before opening the ****pit to find a strange form of armoured space

suit with someone inside.They bring him back to their HQ.

=Back at the Tower=
"Geez,has this guy got anvils in his suit?he must weigh a ton" - Duck
"Just a bit over a ton actually"-Tech
"Well,whatever 'e weighs lets just drop 'im somewhere"-Ace-Ace looks around and motions towards a couch"Jest' there should do fine"
They plod over and drop him on the couch.
"What is that he's got on"-Ace
"Its a strange active-texture metal-polymer-alloy that is pressurised on the inside to allow separete interaction with object both within and

out of the vaccuum generated by space"-Tech-Naturally,the rest are puzzled beyond imagination
"Its-a-pressurised-space-suit-designed-for-the-vaccum-of-space-as-well-as-impacts-from-explosions-and-projectiles-A-pretty-good-combination-i

f-you-ask-me"-Rev
"So?"-Ace
"Here look at this on his shoulder.It looks like this is a product-number"-Tech
"Meaning what,someone bought him at the store?" - Duck
"No,it means there's likely more of them"-Tech
"Hold on,it looks like you can take the helmet off"-Lexi-Lex twists the helmet a bit and pulls off,revealing a young Raccoon with a scar

under his left eye,next to his nose.Besides that he also has a cut forehead,a black eye and bruises all over.He begins to stir.He sees Lex

but behind her he sees blinding light,which makes her outline acute and her ears appear to form a halo.He has a sad smile on his face.
"Ah......Empress" he chokes out out,but collapses back down.Everyone looks at him,then Lexi.She looks surprised at him and the faintest signs

of red can be seen on her cheeks.She puts the helmet on the ground.
"Well,I wasnt expecting that"-Tech-Everyone nods there head in agreement.Zavadia appears on the hologram and everyone walks over to it.
"I take it you have inspected the crash site?"-Zavadia
"We did a little more then that,we found the driver"-Ace
"You did?I take it they are under your control"-Zavadia
"You got it boss lady,I will personally ensure his security" - Duck
"Oh great,now he's going to break a record by allowing an unconcious person to escape"-Lexi
"Such disrespect coming from such a large mouth" - Duck
While they are listening(and arguing) the raccoon stirs and sees that he is in an unknown location,he looks over to them and quickly gets

up.He pulls out his pistol,slips his helmet on and backs away from them.
"Freeze!"-Raccoon-The Loonatics turn around to see the Raccoon holding his gun at them
"Put your arms behind your heads!"-Raccoon-The Loonatics react by quickly jumping out of the way,with Lexi shooting a quantum ball at

him,knocking him over.He reaches out to grab it again but is rushed by Rev and thrown against the wall.As they close in he pulls out another

gun.They stop dead in their tracks
"I SAID FREEZE!AND IM WATCHING PINKIE"-Raccoon-He aims at Ace
"NAME?"-Raccoon
"Ace...Bunny"-Ace-The Raccoon looks confused for a minute but regains concentration and aims at Lexi
"NAME?"-Raccoon
"Lexi Bunny"-Lexi-The Raccoon looks frightened but regains control
"WHAT IS YOUR NAME?!"-Raccoon
"I just said it,Lexi Bunny!"-Lexi-The Raccoon is now terrified and begins to shake,he brings his gun down and faces an open palm towards her.
"Verumi...Ut tu!"-Raccoon
"What?"-Tech-The Raccoon clicks a button on his gun and the magazine falls out,he then drops his weapon and in a kneeling-crawl moves up to

Lexi and with his with his hands cupped on her foot he begins saying repeatedly.
"Garovef le,yem Empress,garovef le,yem Empress..."-Raccoon
"What are you talking about?"-Lexi
"Forgive me,my Empress!I am a humble soldier and have been sent to find you!Garovef le,yem Empress!"-Raccoon

Thanks for reading,and if you like it,I'll post the next chapter.