Thanks Stylediva! ^_^

Thanks Cassidy! ^_^
Uh *lookes at fainted Cassidy* You okay?

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 09:17, 2008-06-07

EEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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.................................. She's just like Lexi!
............. Wait............
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.................................... Where is Lexi?

Where is Lexi? well I don't thing I can awnser that question at this time.

 "Ain't I a Stinker?"

Wow I'm going fast with this story.

Chapter 3

 

The pulses of a near by machine hit the soft fur in side the 8year old bunnys ears. She paid it no mind till she realized the beeping was in rhythm with her hart. She tried to open her eyes. She never realized such a thing took so much effort, for her eye lids felt like they had two tun anvils on them. When she finally got them open her vision was slightly blurred. After a few moments she was able to clearly see the celling of a room.

She turned her head to the object that was emitting the sound she heard. It was a hart monitor. She tried looking around but found that her head was a bolder and her mussels had become mush. So it felt. She let out a low moan as a pain filled her head.

“Hey, you okay kid?” She was slightly startled to suddenly see the same yellow rabbit she had saved earlier standing by her. She gave him a vacant look before trying to sit up. The stranger put his hand on her back to help her up. She pulled away from him untrustingly.

“It's okay kid I'm not gonna heart ya.” He had a trusting smile on, and something about him made her wont to trust him. He saw that she was okay with it and helped her all the way up. She rubbed her head then readjusted her cap that she realized she still had on. Her head still felt heavy so she let it fall forward.

“Don't call me kid.” She said in a dazed voice.

“I'm sorry der, but ah I don't know ya name.” He said.

The young rabbit looked at the older one as something she was once told came back to her mind. 'You can't give your real name out freely because of who you are. So only tell thoughs you know you can trust with it.' She thought for a moment. Though something was telling her that it'd be okay to trust him she decided that she'd keep her real name to herself. For now at least.

“Um...My name's Tomboy.” She said.

“Tomboy Ay? We'll dat's deferent but who am I ta complain?”

“You're” She still seemed dazed, “You're that guy from earlier. You gave me back my apple.”

“So your da little runner.”

“I guess...Wh-who are you? Why are you hear? Where am I?”

“We'll Tomboy, I'm hear cuz' I wonted to thank you. After all your da one who stopped me from fallin' arn't you?” Tomboy gave a light nod, “Dat's what I thought. Well my name is Ace Bunny and your in the med-lab of Loonatics Headquarters. You hit your head when you where running away back der.”

“Oh..”She said flatly, “S-sorry I guess.”

Tomboy held her head as pain filled it again.

“Your head heart?” Ace asked. Tomboy nodded, “Well Tech gave me dis. He thought you'd have a head ache when you woke up.”

Ace handed her a glass of blue goo. “Ug! What is that stuff?” She asked looking at it.

“It's medicine kid, I mean, Tomboy. It'll help you with da head ache.” She sighed and started to gulp down the liquid. It tasted was undesirable, but she mites well get it over with. Besides she had had worse. One time when she had gotten really sick her mother gave her something made up of squished bugs.

After sipping the last drop she nearly tossed the glass back at Ace and gasped with a disgusted face. Ace chuckled.

“Well your a smart one arn't cha? Most kids i know, and even some adults, would have spit that stuff out jest as it touched the tip of there tung. You though jest take it down.”

“Best to get it done with in stead of have ting to start all over again. Right?” Tomboy replied.

“I believe so.” Ace answered. Ace communicator made a beep and he pushed the button down, “Yes?”

“Hay Ace, Zadavia's hear. She wonts to see the child.” Came a male voice. Tomboy could hear intelligences blended into it.

“All right Tech. She woke up so I'll see if she's good to come out.” Ace pressed the button again, ending the communication. “You all right getting up Tomboy?”

She notesed that her head didn't feel so heavy and that the mush had returned to muscle. She nodded again a draped her legs off the side of the med-bed. Ace put his hands on her sides and lifted her down. She felt extremely light even for someone so young. Ace took a good look at the child. Her pants where baggy manly at the feet and lower legs but some how managed to hug the hip. Her blue shirt was tucked in and was a bit baggy as well. The white cap was tattered around the bill.

“Hey? Where's my sweater?!” Tomboy asked.

“Right hear.” Ace grabbed the black cloth from a near by table and handed it to her. She looked into the pockets and pulled something out.

“What cha got der?” Tomboy clasped her hand around it and glared at Ace.

“Wouldn't you like ta know?”

Ace chuckled again and said to himself, “She's got spunk.”

“You got that right buster!” She said opening her hand and putting on a necklace. She placed the pendent into her shirt and sipped the sweater on. Ace looked at her, confused about how the kid could of heard him. He shrugged it off and walked up to her.

“You ready to leave dis room?” He asked lending out his hand. Tomboy looked at the out reached hand before hesitantly placed her hand in his. Ace gently closed his hand over hers and started to guided her out of the med-lab.

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 20:50, 2008-06-07

Awesome!

Time for one of my spunky reviews!

First off, you're very good at creating original characters. Original characters in fan fictions have always been shaky ground for me - a lot of people can't pull really good OC's off - but you do. Tomboy is simply awesome, but at the same time very believable. This is a rather rare talent in fan fiction, so treasure it and use it to your advantage. That being said, I'm pretty sure I know who Tomboy is, having caught the parallels, but I won't divulge my hypothesis in case other people haven't.

This story is also pretty atmospheric. By that I mean it has a pretty distinct mood and setting. One can easily imagine the world through Tomboy's eyes in the context of the writing. This, of course, is another good talent.

And, as is usual in your writing, the storyline is interesting. There aren't really any dull spots, the audience isn't hideously ill-informed of plot details (something which I'm pretty guilty of a lot of the time) but at the same time there's a lot of questions out in the open still. Who exactly is Tomboy? Where's Lexi, and what happened to her? Will Tomboy become another Loonatic? What was the robot, and how did Tomboy know it? It's very intriguing.

Overall it's very worth your while to finish this story, given all of those questions that are yet unanswered.

The only thing that can improve, of course, is the spelling. I can tell you used Spell Check in writing this - there aren't really any words that are technically spelled wrong, but a lot of words are simply misplaced homonyms, and its relatively noticeable. Don't worry, though; spelling improves with practice, the natural knack for story-telling doesn't. And you have the natural knack down.

So keep writing!

Very good =D!I like it a lot, but the spelling...*shudders*Sorry.Spelling police :P.Aww Ace and Tomboy are cute.Where's Lexi?WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY THIRD er FOURTH FAVORITE?!

Nice! Keep it up! And ice cream for me if it turns out Lexi is her mom! I know I'm right!

This is so cooly-oh-so's!!!ceeep it up man!

I thank you all again for comenting

Chapter 5

Tomboy layed in the porcelain tub filled with worm soupy water, allowing it to soak deep into her clumped up fur. She only had her mouth and nose peeking out of the water. She closed her eyes. 'This reminds me so much of sunbathing back at Tides.'

“Hey sweaty hurry up.” Said the soft voice of a mother.

“I'm coming Mother.” The young tan rabbit put down the penile she had been drawing with and grabbed her white cap sitting near by before running out to meet her mother. “Where are we going to day Mother?”

She slipped her hand into the older rabbits.

“Don't know yet. I thought we could have a little adventure by hiking some unknown aria of the forest.” The little one smiled at her mother and only care giver. Every day they would go walking in the woods that grew around there house. The Mother piked up her 5 year old and put her on her shoulders.

They walked deep into the forest. The little one would point at butterfly's and birds that flew by and comment on the beautiful flowers. The mother would tell the little one about what plant you could eat and which ones where poisonous or tell her about how the butterfly's had changed from caterpillar to what they where now. How they enjoyed each others company. Jest the two of them. They felt like they didn't need any one els in the world.

The Mother let her child down and held her hand as the came up to some trees that had branches hanging low.

“It looks like a door. Huh Mother?”

“It dose, doesn't it. You think we should go and see if there's any thing on the other side?”

“Ya!”

“Ya?”

“Ya!”

“All right then lets go.” The two pushed the branches aside to find themselves in a small clearing. The trees grew high all around them and created a canopy over head. There was a hug rack formation that the tress had long ago grown around. There was a small hole in the canopy that let light hit a small water spring coming out of the rock. The spring was rather large and formed in the rock a small pool of water. A small leek in the rocks gave it it's water.

“Wow Mother look!”The excited child ran over to the water. “It's beautiful isn't it Mother?”

“It is sweaty. The water is very clear. That means it's clean...you wont to try some thing?”

“Sure!”

“Hear give me your jacket, cap, and boots.” The little one gave her mother the asked for items, “okay I wont you to step into the water.”

She did as told. The water was warm around her feet. “Now lay down on your back. I wont you to float on the water.” She layed down, her mothers hand supporting her up sens her close would way her down. “Now close your eyes. Clear your mind and don't think of any thing. Concentrate on your breathing. Let your mind take you away to a place it is most conferable.”

The child's breaths became deeper and her hole body became relaxed. “Can you still hear me?”

There was a light nod. “You know what your doing?...Your doing something called meditation, and there are many ways of meditation. If you master it you can go deeper into your own mind and find answers to things you never knew you knew.”

The child opened her eyes and stared at her mother with her crystal eyes, “Did Father teach you Me-me-medttatiustion?”

“I knew of meditation before I meet him, but he did teach me how to open my mind more. So in away. He did.”

“Can this be are place Mom?”

“Sure...What should we name it.”

The little one looked strait up and thought, “...Tides.”

“Tides...I like that name”....

Tomboy opened her eyes again and sighed. Re-shutting her eyes, she blow out the air in her lungs and started to sink in the bath tub till she reached the bottom. She soon felt her body going numb, not the numb you get from lack of oxygen, but the numb of going into ones mind.

“Run! Run sweaty!” the tan rabbit held on to her Mother's hand and tried to keep up as much as she could.

“Mother why are they chasing us!?!” The Mother pulled her child into a near by bush and clasped her hand over her daughters mouth. They watched, horrified, as men ran past them, yelling vulgar things. When the men had gone the Mother took her daughters shoulders and made her look at her.

“Listen, there after you. The Rebels are after you.”

“b-but You said they wonted to help us.”

“Forget what I said and hear what I have to say now. They will do any thing to get you, and you know why. If they get you they will heart you.” The 8 year old started to cry so the Mother pulled her into a hug, “Remember my daughter, you will meet a great deal of things that will frighten you now and when get older, but at times you'll need to over come it. There are appropriate times to let fear take you and there are times where you'll need to fight it back. Tonight I'm asking you to do both. I wont you to run into the woods as fast as you can. Oh my little Angel, if you are ever captured you must escape and go to the planet of Acmetropalic. There you can find help from the Loonatics. They will help you. I know they will.”

“But mother I don't wont to be separated from you.”

“I know baby, I know. I don't wont to be separated from you ether but I have to leave you now, and guide the rebels away. Have them chasing the wrong bunny. I wish you didn't have to go through this. Not so young.”

The Mother kissed her daughter before running into the forest.

“Mother!” The child called after. All she heard was the faded words of her Mother yelling run. So that is what the child did. She ran, and ran, and ran. Deeper into the forest, the opposite way of her mother. With tears she ran, till some one grabbed her by the back of the black sweater she was wearing.

“Lemme go! Lemme go!” She cried and cried.

Tomboy shot up into the siting position, gasping for air as water droplets fell from her fur along with a few tears. She got out, dried herself off, and dressed her self in the clean close given to her. The close where some of Ducks old laundry. Duck being the smallest of the Loonatics group was the closest one to her size. When she was fully dressed she had on a pair of white denim jeans, a white tank top, a brown belt to hold up the pants, some clean white socks, her black sneakers, her white cap that she had managed to stop them from washing, and the necklace she had from earlier.

 

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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UPDATE OMG I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN OMG I REALLY NEED TO OMG OMG OMG OMG....
*breathes* I think... i have an idea about who the father is... BUT I NEED TO KNOW FOR SURE SO UUUUUUUUUPDATE!

Every body is so sure they know who Tomboy's mother is that there now guessing the father? *sigh*

Well maybe this chapter will chang your mind

Chapter 6

 

Tomboy closed the door behind her and looked down both ways of the hall. She was unsure where she was suppose to go now. She had no direction in the tower. She looked up to see a paper arrow tapped to the wall. Sens she had no idea of where to go she mite as well fallow the arrow. The arrow led to another and another till she came into what must have been the kitchen. Delicious smells filled her nose as she continued to walk.

“Ya got super smellin' or somet'in' to?” Tomboy slightly jumped to see Ace, Tech, and Rev sitting at the kitchen table

“uh, uh no...I jest fallowed the arrows to hear then-”

“It's okay Tomboy.” Ace said with a warm comforting smile. Then he patted a empty set next to him, “Come, sit down. Would you like somet'in' to eat. We all t'ought you'd be hungry.”

Tomboy opened her moth to say yes but instead a loud gargling came forth from her stomach. Ace chuckled, “I'll take dat as a yes.”

Tomboy slightly blushed as she, literally, climbed into the empty chair. Rev set a bowl of soup in front of her and some kinda fruit drink. “There-ya-go-Tomboy.-a-nice-bowl-of-Broccoli-Chess-soup-and-my-special-super-doper-pick-me-up-shake.”

Rev handed her a spoon. Despite how hungry she was, she didn't tear into the food like a slob. She first took of the cap and set it on the table then she ate. She consumed the meal quickly but still showed manners while doing so. No food or drink got on the table, her close, face, or floor. When she had finished the dishes where taken away and Tech came over with a small rectangular device.

“May I see your hand, Tomboy?” The coyote asked.

Tomboy looked at him hesitantly before lifting her hand up. Tech was about to place the palm of her hand on the device, but she tugged her hand away.

“What is that!?!” She looked scared.

“It's okay Tomboy.” Tech reached for her hand again but she jumped out of her set and into Ace's lap, like a child clinging to there father. Ace looked at the kid a bit confused.

“Tomboy it wont hurt you. It's perfectly safe. Hear I'll do it.” Ace signaled for Tech to come over. Tech did and Ace put his hand on it a small light ran accost it, scanning Ace's hand, and went off.

“See. I'm all hear.” Ace wiled his hand around. Tech held it up now for Tomboy. She put her hand on it allowing to do it again. It scanned and she was still all there. Tech left and she sighed with relief.

“Hey-Tomboy-You-wont-to-play-some-games?” Rev asked.

“What kinda games?”

“”Well come on and we'll see.” Ace said lifting her off his lap. The three walked out into the main room. Rev and Tomboy sat on the couch while Ace pressed a button on a small black box sitting on the table. It released a holographic image. He pressed another button and the image changed. He looked through the images till found one.

“How bout we race?” He asked.

“Yes!-A-race,-a-race,-a-race!” Rev said excitedly, clapping his hands together like a little kid. Ace handed Rev and Tomboy a controller as the TV came on with a car racing game. Tomboy looked at the controller seeming frightened by it.

“What's da mater?” Ace asked her.

“I've, I've never used one of these. I've never played on a electronic.” She said with all honesty.

Rev and Ace looked at her then each other, “Well...Dat's okay. We'll teach you how to play.”

After they thought her the basic controls she caught on quickly and was soon in the lead leaving Ace and Rev's cars behind.

“Ne, are you sure you've never played?” Ace asked avoiding hitting a wall.

“Eh, positive.”

Duck walked in and stood in front of the TV, “Hey! It's my time for the TV!” He looked at Tomboy, “Hum, well kid don't you look like a doll in though's close.”

Tomboy glared at him and pushed off the couch landing on his foot.

“YE-OUCH!!” Duck screamed as he started to jump up and down holding his foot.

Tomboy glared at him again, “Don't call me KID and don't call me DOLL!”

Rev watched the duck jumping around, but Ace looked at Tomboy with a face of utter confusion. Jest then Tech walked in and came over to Ace.

“Hay Ace I need to talk to you.”

“Ya. I think I need to talk to you to Tech.” Ace said still looking at Tomboy. The two got up and left to Tech's lab.

“What's up Tech?”

“It's Tomboy. I took that scan of her hand to match it up with the hand print on any Acmetropalic records.”

“So what came up?” Ace asked.

“That's the thing. Nothing did. According to all records she doesn't exist. No birth records came up and no passport file, encase she's not from the planet.” Tech explained.

“Dat's odd. You know she also seems to be afraid of technology.”

“Speaking of technology, I found this attached to her jeans when they where sent to be washed.” Tech handed a small bullet sized idem to Ace.

“What is it Tech?” Ace handed it back.

“I think it's some kinda tracker, but the weird thing is that it has the same symbol as the robot we battled earlier.”

“You t'ink da kid is some how evolved with da attack?”

“Yes and No. Ace I think the attack was meant for her. I think the robot was tracking her.”

“But why?”

“I don't know.”

Ace sighed and rubbed his fore head. “Dis is all jest to confusing.”

“What do you mean Ace?”

“Well.” Ace looked at Tech. “Some of da t'ings Tomboy dose, how she dose dem, and even da way she looks reminds me a lot of....”

“Of what? Who?”

“Lexi.” Ace and Tech looked at each other. Sadness filling there eyes. “Tech do t'ink Tomboy could be. I don't know. Could-”

“Ace I know where you're going with this, and you and I know it's impossible. There was no way anyone could have survived that. Lexi was no different. If she wasn't crushed she would have suffocated to death. Ace I do agree that Lexi and Tomboy have very similar traits like in a mother Daughter relation, but Lexi's been dead now for almost 10 years.”

“You don't think I know dat Tech! You don't think I remember! Or do you forget dat she was running by MY side! RIGHT at my side! Do you forget how I was unable to save her by only a few minuets! How I didn't realize she had fallen!”

“I'm sorry Chief. I didn't mean to get you upset.” Tech quickly apologized.

“No, no. I'm sorry Tech...I guess I'm still a little sensitive to da topic. I'm going to go check on the kid. Then maybe some meditation could do me good.” Ace said as he left. When Ace returned to the main room he found Rev racing Duck on the game, Slam cheering them on, and Tomboy asleep on the couch. Ace looked at her, she had her hat back on and was curled up into a ball. Ace piked her up in his arms.

“What are you going to do with her?” Duck asked still racing Rev.

“I'm gonna go put her one of the guests bed rooms. With out us knowing where her parents are or where she comes from we're kinda stuck with her.”

Duck set down his controller and looked at Ace, “Why don't you go put her in Lexi's room?”

Rev and Slam stopped to and looked at Ace, still holding the child, “You see it to, huh? How similar dey are.”

“It's kinda hard not to. They look the same and share powers.” Duck said.

“They have the same altitude. We saw what she did to Duck.” Rev added, speaking slowly.

“Ya, and there gaming ability's.” Ace and the others slightly laughed. “But we all saw what happened. Lexi's dead.”

Ace turned around and when to one of the guests rooms.

D8 ........ *sobs*

Oops! No ice cream for me. Time for my next big guess....

REINCARNATED!!!! XD XD XD

whoa that was S.A.D

Okay, I'll update...

Chapter 7

 

Ace gently layed Tomboy on the neatly made bed and covered her up with the white blankets. Ace pulled off her cap and set it on the night stand next to the bed letting her blond hair scatter around her head. Ace watched her for a moment.

'She looks so much like Lexi' Ace sighed, 'Oh Lexi, my love, how I miss you. If only we had had more time together.'

Ace turned around and left the room. As he closed the door he gave one last look at it. Some how Ace felt connected to Tomboy. He couldn't figure out why. Ace shrugged it away and continued to his quarters .When he entered his room he changed out of his uniform into some white cotton pants. He light a few candles and sat on a pillow on the floor. Ace closed his eyes and soon started his meditation.

“All right-e gang we're hear!” Ace said as he parked the Loonatics Jet in a peaceful meadow lined with trees. Some of the trees growing on a small hill.

“Nice pickin's Ace. This place looks great for a picnic.” Lexi smiled as she lend on his seat to get a better look of the aria. Non of the loonatics where in uniform. Zadavia had told them to take some time off for a while in order to get some much needed R 'n' R. Sens they didn't wont to chants there Vacation turning into a mission, like so many of there past 'vacations', they decided to not go to some resort but rather jest do something fun and relaxing every day. Today was picnic day.

Ace was wearing lose blue jeans, a yellow tee, and a white cap with an A stitched onto it. Lexi had on more snug blue jeans and a pink tee. Tech was wearing green shorts and a gray tank top. Rev had on a red tank top and shorts that had a flame pattern. Duck was also in shorts,orange, and a brow tee. Slam had on blue jeans and a white tee.

The Loonatics all got out of the jet, layed a large blanket on the ground, and set two picnic baskets on it.

“So, do we wont to eat first or have some fun first?” Lexi asked.

“Fun first then eat. Beside we all don't wont to get stomach-aches and cramps when we go to play a little. Hey who's up for some frizzbe?” Tech asked holding up a blue plastic disc.

“I'll-join!” Rev said happily.

“Ibec plalsy a roynfdsja!” Slam agreed.

“All right, any other takers?” Tech looked others.

“No thanks,” Duck lifted his hand up. Gesturing for them to go on with out, “I'm going to take up some sun.”

Tech looked over at Lexi, “How bout you Lexi?”

“Maybe later Tech. Ace agreed to look around with me.” She looked around, “Where did Ace go?”

“You-wont-me-to-find-out?” Rev asked.

“No, you guys go ahead and start playing. Besides Ace is probably jest on the ship still.”

The guys did as suggested. Tech, Rev, and Slam all stood some distends from each other as the tossed the plastic disc around. Duck layed down on the blanket, putting on a pair of sunglasses. Lexi wondered around the out side of the Jet till she was out of site from the others.

“Got cha!” Ace said as he pounced on the surprised female. Raping his arms around her he puled her close to him.

“Ace!” Lexi squeaked it surprise, “Oh very funny.”

She turned around to face him. Ace still didn't relies her from his arm lock. She pushed agenst him till his back was agenst the jet. She then gave him a pretend look of anger. “What's the big idea laser boy?”

“Hum... I don't know, maybe dis.” Ace looked at her, hungrily, before pressing his lips onto hers. Lexi rapped her arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. They broke apart and smiled at each other.

Lexi sighed deeply and happily, “Ace, I wont to tell they guys we got together last night.”

“Really? You wont to tell them that all we did was play a friendly game of 'Guess Who'?” Ace questioned.

Lexi softly slapped his arm, “Ace you know what I mean. Besides all that kissing was a lot more friendlier then you make it sound.”

“You rely wont to tell dem?” This time Ace was being serous. Lexi smiled at him and nodded her head, “All right den when we start to eat we'll tell dem deal?”

“Deal.” Lexi said taking his hat and putting it on.

“Hey, give me dat back.”

“Um...NO!” She giggled as she went running.

“Hey no fair! You got a head start!” Ace called as he chased after her. They went running past the others and ran towards the forested hill. Lexi suddenly stopped as she heard something strange.

Ace ran up to her and rapped his arms around her, “You know stopping jest makes it easier for me?”

Lexi pushed him away, “Shhhh! I'm hearing something I don't like.”

“What is it?”

“I don't kn-” Suddenly the ground started to shake ferociously. Lexi looked up the hill to see layers of earth falling down.

“Land slide!” She yelled pointing at the hill.

“Run!” Ace yelled over the noise. He grabbed Lexis hand and started to run toured the jet. “Guys get to the Jet!”

The others looked to see the land slide coming at them. Doing as ordered they all started for the jet. As Ace came close to the jet he looked beside himself expecting to see Lexi, but saw no one. He looked back to see that Lexi had tripped, got her ankle tangled around some kinda vine, and was having a hared time getting it off.

“Lexi!” Ace terned around and headed back for her. Another ferocious shake knocked Ace off his feet. He, and the others, looked up only in time to hear there good friend, team mate, and second in command let out a shriek of terror as the earth engulfed her.

“LEXI!!”

Ace jolted up, breathing deeply. He was shaking and felt his eyes getting hot with tears. When Ace cammed down he got up and sat down on his bed. He pulled out an old photograph from his night stand and looked at it. It was was a photo of him and Lexi. It had been taken years ago. In it they both glared at the camera. Rev had taken the pitcher after playing a little prank on them. Rev had thought it would be funny to glue there hands together with a new sticky subsistent Tech had made. They were stuck together for 5 days.

Ace chuckled at the old memories from the little disaster before putting the photo back. He sighed and layed back on the bed.

'Why do I still constantly think about her?' He thought,'It's been almost 10 years. I need to get over her. Don't I? But part of me...Part of me still feels she's out there, but it;s impossible. I saw it at close rang. She couldn't of survived.'

 

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 19:10, 2008-06-12

That's what I was aming for Ri, and thank you for comenting ^_^

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 20:32, 2008-06-12

Aaaww...poor Lexi.....she go squash........
Icy: She go squash?! Yikes, Serenity, the stuiff that goes threw your head......

Ditto. Major heart-string puller....

your welcome ^__^
like I wrote before this is an amazing story filled with feelings and I'm really enjoying it XD
please continue :)

Aw... She's dreaming of her mother Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor girl...
OK... Last chapter review...:
SHE'S ALIVE LEXI'S ALIVE I CAN FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL IT!
Conscious: THat's not logical...
Me: Pffft Who's logical here!
Conscious: Try taking this out of her mind now...
Me: ^^ Waiting for the next chapter ^^

^__^ Cool chapter Siamese