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I love it! It's sooo cute! And Rev's gonna help them shop! Aaaaawwwwww....^_^

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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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Agreed with all here Siamese! Great Job! Waiting for the next chapter to come!

-- Edited by LoonaticsF at 09:41, 2008-06-18

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Thnaks you guys...

Chapter 9

Now-that-looks-good-on-ya-Tomboy.” Rev said as Tomboy exited a dressing room wearing new blue jeans that actually fit her, a red t-shirt that had a blue heart across the chest, a new pair of black sneakers, and her old white cap. Rev was out of uniform waring a red tee with a white stripe running down left side of both the front and back, and blue jeans


You're right Rev, but der seems to be one t'ing out of place with it though.” Ace said also out of uniform wearing a blue-gray sweater with the arms flaring out at the ends a bit and false patches every hear and there over a pair of blue jeans.


And what would dat be?” Tomboy asked curiously.


Dis.” Ace presented a new cap from behind his back.


You wont to replace my cap?” She asked with a shaky tone.


Well-you-know-what-they-say.-out-with-the-old-and-in-with-the-new.” Rev said. Ace started to reach for her cap, but she skidded away from him. Casing the sneakers to squeak on the linoleum floor.


Pleas not my cap!” Tomboy said in a quiet plead. Rev and Ace looked at her confused, “Pleas. M-my Mother gave me this cap, and it means a lot to me.”


All right, Tomboy. If ya don't wont a new cap den you don't have to get a new cap.” Ace stated as he put the cap back on a near by display where other hats of similar dezine sat. “All right Tomboy go change back into your close so we can pay for dat.”


Can I wear it out?”


Ace thought for a moment, “I can ask.” Ace walked over to the near by cashier lady and said a few thing before gesturing for Rev and Tomboy to join her.


Well Tomboy, She said you can we jest need to scan the tags foist.” The cashier took a small scanner and scanned the tags that stood out of the close. They plucked off the tags as she did so.


There you go Sir.” Ace handed the cashier a small card. She swiped the card then returned it.


We'll jest put Duck old close in one of da bags and get going.” Ace said as he did so.


So-wear-to-now-Ace?” Rev asked as the three walked out into the main part of the mall.


Um, good question Rev. We got some new out fits for Tomboy, got some meditation candles for me, and new video games for you Rev-”


Maybe-I-will-be-able-to-win-one.” Rev said giving a sly look at Tomboy.


She giggled, “Keep dreaming speedster.


They all sheared in a laugh. Ace looked at the time.


Wow. It's about lunch time. How a bout we head over to da food court for some milk shakes?”


Sound-good-to-me.”


Alright.” Tomboy agreed as the walked on. 'What's a milk shake?' She thought.


They sat at small red and white booth. Tomboy and Rev sat on one side of the table as Ace sat at the other. Ace when to order and came back with three milk shakes, “Hop Y'all don't mind. I got all Oreo.”


Tomboy took a sip of her. What a delicious flavor! She hap never tasted such a thing! Tomboy started to chug the drink.


Slow down der Tomboy or you'll get a brain freeze.” Ace warned.


Tomboy blushed as she set it down, “Heehee I'm sorry, but I've never had a milk shake before.”


well jest slow it down.”


Ya-if-you-drink-it-to-fast-it-wont-last-long-and-you-could-get-a-brain-freeze-like-Ace-said-or-get-a-stomachache.” Rev added.


After they finished they all headed back for HQ, where they spent the rest of the day playing video games.




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Like I said before! Sooo CUTE!!! I loved it Siamese! ^_^

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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cute! Keep up the good work...
My mind is still stuck to who the mother is though...
Conscious: *slaps forehead* or if the mother is who you think she is...
Me: Ehm... SOMEBODY MAKE MY CONSCIOUS SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sorry it's taken SO long to updat but hay I'm sure you'll all enjoy this chappie

Chapter10

 

Ace opened his eyes, staring at the darkness of his room. He looked up at the red digits of his electric alarm clock. 5: 27 they flashed. Ace sighed before siting up and rubbing his forehead. The blanket fell down his body revealing the yellow of his Pajamas. He looked around his room for no reason in particular.


Ace felt wide a wake, so instead of trying to go back to sleep he got up and headed for the door. He didn't bother to get dressed in his uniform sens the only one who would be up at this time would have been Tech, and that there wasn't really any need to get dressed yet. Ace left his room in the direction of the kitchen for some coffee to fully wake up the rabbit.


As Ace started to pass the room of which they had settled Tomboy in he heard what sounded like soft mumbles and sobs. A felling of concern flooded the gray rabbit as he stopped in front of the door. He pressed the button to open the metal door and watched it hiss into the walls. He carefully walked in to see Tomboy rolling back and forth in her bed.


He listened as he made out her mumble into words, “Mother...Mother...why are they...why are they chasing us...You said...you...help us...” Ace gently started shake her, “ Mother!.. I don't wont to be separated from you!


“Tomboy, Tomboy wake up!” Ace said.


“Mother!” Tomboy screamed as she shot up into the siting position. Her breath came is gasps as sweat fell down her face and into her pink and blue pajamas that had been given to her the day before. Her blue eyes were wide as she simply stared in front of her.


“Tomboy? Tomboy are you all right?” Ace asked sitting on the bed next to her. Tears started to swell up in her eyes. Soon enough Tomboy was cry and shaking.


“Tomboy come hear.” Ace said as he scooped the crying child up in his arms. Ace, on instinct, started to slowly rock her back and forth. She bared her face into his shirt and was holding tight to the fabric of his close.


She started to hiccup as she cried, and through the hiccups and tears Ace could hear her say, “I wont to go home. I wont to go home to Mother. To Rat-a and Kiara.


Usually Ace would of started asking questions like 'Where is your home' or 'who is Rat-a', but Ace thought it would be best if he let these questions remain unanswered for a wile. The tears and hiccups soon stopped. When Ace looked at her he saw that she had falling back into slumber. Felling that he shouldn't jest leave her in the room alone, Ace raped the blanket around her, took her cap off the night stand and placed it on her head, and cared her out into the main room.


As he set her on the couch his eyes ended up looking at her cap. He saw something, something he had never notesed before. He took the hat off her and ran his fingers accost the front of it. Feeling small bums and indents forming a pacific shape.


“It's impossible.” Ace's face had become one of confusion and shock. He flipped the hat around and searched for a possible tag. Finding one, he looked at two capital letters written in black ink on the old fabric. “A...B.” Ace whispered to himself. He flipped that back and looked at it in the same way one would look at a ghost. As if in a trance Ace walked into the kitchen, sat the hat on the table, sat down himself, and stared at it. He was so concentrated on the hat that that he barely realized Tech walked into the room.


“Morning chef.” The genius yawned as he turned on the coffee maker. Ace still jest stared at the cap in front of him, “Hay Ace, you okay?”



“Huh?” Ace looked at his team mate, “What'd you ask Tech?”


“I said morning.” Tech clarified, “Whats got you?”


“Tomboy's cap.” Ace looked at it again.


Tech gave it a glans as he sat at the table, “What about it?”


“It's...It's mine.”


Tech looked at his leader, “What?”


“It's my cap, Tech. It's mine, but I had...” Ace looked down, his face growing pail.


“You what?”


“Lexi...She was wearing it when she died!”


“Ace what are you talking about?”


“Right before Lexi died she took my cap from me. She still had it on when the land slide hit her. Sens we where never able to find her body I never got it back.”


“Ace,” Tech looked at him, “how do you know it's yours?”


“Because Tech! It was a white cap with a A on the front. If you look at this hat you can see where thread once held a A on it, and my initials are on the tag! In my hand writing!”


Tech, now looking a lot like Ace, asked, “but how did Tomboy get it?”


“I don't know. She said her mother gave it to her.”


Jest then both Loonatics jumped as they heard a bone chilling shriek come from the main room where Tomboy was.

 



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I WAS RIGHT AND DON'T YOU DARE DENY IT!!! LEXI IS TOMBOY'S MOM!!!

Ice Cream for me!

Great chapter by the way! I loved it. More! More! XD



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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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You still can't prove it! <.< >.> 

And jest to say there is ALOT more to Tomboy then you all know...

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 23:57, 2008-06-25

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Great chapter once again ^__^

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Thanks Nat ^_^

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

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*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Siamese712 wrote:

Thanks Nat ^_^







your welcome X3

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*runs into room panicking* I ONCE AGAIN CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED SO MUCH AWESOMENESS PLEASE FORGIVE ME SIAMESE! *trips over random lamppost*

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tis forgiven. Thanks for comenting Cass

*looks at Cassidy on the ground* You okay?

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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*me pokes Cassidy with stick*

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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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*is pok'd*......... *twitches*

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

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*Icy splashes bucket of ice cold water on Cassidy*

Cassidy: GAH!!! I'M AWAKE!!!!omg.gif

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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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lovegreenanred wrote:

*Icy splashes bucket of ice cold water on Cassidy*

Cassidy: GAH!!! I'M AWAKE!!!!omg.gif



biggrinHeehee

Cassidy: *trips, falls, is out* 

Me: *sigh*



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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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LOL, that's totally me!

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I know X3!

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*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Sneek peek
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“Not so fast princess!” He yelled, placing a glowing blue-ish green band on her. Though she new it would be futile, she tried ghosting away but failed to do so. The band some how neutralized all her powers rendering her a normal child. “Raoul has been try to get his hands on you for some time little princess. Who knew how much trouble a small child could bring.”

The stranger was suddenly his by a flash of red lazier and was sent flying back into the wall.

“You leave dat kid alone!” Ace yelled at him as Rev zipped by grabbing Tomboy and returning to the rest of the loonatics.

The man made a sound of frustration as he saw that he was clearly out numbered. He pointed at Tomboy, “You may be protected for now, brat! But at one point we'll get you princess!” With that said he pressed a button on his armor and teleported away.

The Loonatics all looked at each other and at Tomboy. Not really knowing what jest happened.

“I think we should give Zadavia a little buzz.” Ace said.
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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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*faints from awesomeness*

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

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Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
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CassidyCoyote wrote:

*faints from awesomeness*


*sigh* 

Heehee biggrin

 



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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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LOL XD That's just me!!!

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
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Icy: Be right back. I have to get a bigger bucket...sprint.gif



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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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me:get a fire truck insteadbiggrin

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Hurry up with next chapter I can't wait 8D

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Hum... 2 post or not 2 post that is the questionidea.
Maybe I'll be evil and wait a week till posting the next chapterevileye
What do you guys think?


-- Edited by Siamese712 at 17:44, 2008-06-28

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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NNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints again* XD

(I'll keep fainting if you keep putting me in such suspence!)

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

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Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
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me:does anyone have a spray bottle?

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
don't make us suffer DX
what have we ever done to you??? please post it!!!! XD

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Wow, Siamese. I didn't even know you started this story!

Just as always, you are awesome. Your spelling's obviously improving, too!

And don't you dare make us wait a week! If you do that, then I'll...I'll......I'll stop helping you with IMACG and TFFBI!

Tessa: -shakes head- Don't take her seriously. She's just bluffing.

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CassidyCoyote wrote:

NNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints again* XD

(I'll keep fainting if you keep putting me in such suspence!)



Icy: Back with that firetruck! Let it rip boys!!!
*Firefighters spray Cassidy*
Cassidy: *sopping wet* MADE YOUR POINT!!!!!furious



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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!!
Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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You all can come down X3! I 
woulden't be that meen. I'll post it as soon as i finish adding alittle bit to it. Wich hopefully will be by the end of he day ^_^

Ps. ruth jest Wright Contry Gal as CG and Top Flight:FBI as FBI. I'll know what your saying.

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 16:08, 2008-06-30

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Chapter 11


“Let me go!” Tomboy yelled at her attacker. She glared up at tall human who wore some kinda armor making him look robotic. One would of thought it a robot if they couldn't see the eyes coming out of a small slit in the metal. The metal was black and on the forehead was a red K on it's side.


The loud shriek had woken up the rest of the loonatics. So jest as all 5 loonatics came running into the room Tomboy's coloring faded as she became translucent and was able to 'Ghost' her hand out of her attachers grip. Her colorer returned and she headed for one of the loonatics, but before she could get to far the strange man grabbed her wrist again.


“Not so fast princess!” He yelled, placing a glowing blue-ish green band on her wrist. Though she new it would be futile, she tried ghosting away but failed to do so. The band some how neutralized all her powers rendering her a normal child. “Raoul has been try to get his hands on you for some time little princess. Who knew how much trouble a small child could bring.”


The stranger was suddenly his by a flash of red lazier and was sent flying back into the wall.


“You leave dat kid alone!” Ace yelled at him as Rev zipped by grabbing Tomboy and returning to the rest of the loonatics.


The man made a sound of frustration as he saw that he was clearly out numbered. He pointed at Tomboy, “You may be protected for now, brat! But at one point we'll get you princess!” With that said he pressed a button on his armor and teleported away.


The Loonatics all looked at each other and at Tomboy. Not really knowing what jest happened.


“I think we should give Zadavia a little buzz.” Ace said.


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“Some kinda teleportation devise was most definitely used.” Tech said looking at some scans of the main room. All the loonatics where dressed in there uniforms and Tomboy was now dressed in baggy overalls, a white shirt, and her cap. Zadavia and the Loonatics all stood around in the main room as Tomboy sat quietly on the couch.


“That explains how this stranger got in.” Zadavia added.


“Ya, but did any one els see the symbol on his head?” Duck asked, “It was the same as the robot we battled the other day.”


“Ducks-right.-They-both-also-had-black-metal-with-the-symbol-being-red-there-obviously-connected-but-what-would-they-wont-with-Tomboy-huh?-Tomboy-is-jest-a-sweet-little-girl-I-mean-ya-she-has-powers,-but-why-” Tech reached over and clamped down on the birds beak.


“Duck and Rev do have a point hear, guys. Why are dese t'ings after Tomboy?” Ace asked.


“Maybe this is something we should ask her about.” Zadavia suggested. All eyes went to the young child siting quietly on the couch with her head down.


“Tomboy, who's after you? And why are dey?”Ace asked softly.


“Stop calling me dat.” She said softly.


“Huh?”


She looked up at all of them, “Stop calling me Tomboy! Dat's not my name!


“What? If that's not your name what is it, and why didn't you tell us before?” Duck voiced the question.


She sighed and slid of the couch. She stood with prober poster and her hands behind her back. So suddenly she didn't look like the scared, naive, child they had been taking care of. Now she had a majestic and wise look to her. Like that of royalty and upper class.


She walked to the window and stared out at all of Acmetropalis, “I didn't tell you my real name because I didn't know if I could trust you. Where I am from my name means allot to people. My name is who I am, and who I am had to be kept a secret from certain people. My mother told me to be careful with who I tell my name to. To tell it to only though's who I knew I could trust, and now...Now I feel I can trust all of you.”


She terned around and did what was between a bow and a curtsy, “By birth my full name is Angel Lexina Bunny.” She stood back up with her hands behind her back, “Chosen air to the Kingdom of Fruten”


“Your part of a royal family?” Duck asked.


Angel looked down, “Sorta.


“What do you mean Tom- Angel?” Ace asked her.


“I'm the chosen air. I am from the very small planet Fruten, far away from hear. The planet is ruled by one power. One kingdom. But unlike most kingdoms, where the crown is passed down to a first born, on Fruten the queen or king of the time choses one of non royal blood to take the thrown. Some one they think will be a fit ruler. Are Queen right now, Kiara, piked me.”


“If you are to take the thrown what are you doing hear in Acmetropalis, and who was it trying to take you earlier?” Tech asked.


Angel looked at the coyote then at everyone els, “my planet is in war with it's self. Compared to Acmetropalic, Fruten is technology impaired. You see, are planet doesn't have wars. At lest rely dose. The last war was almost a thousand years ago. Fruten really doesn't gets disease ether. And it one way or another War and Diseases is what cases technological advances. After a wile advanced technology was , in away, out lawed. The people saw no reason for technology and more often then not destroyed any advancements. Some believed it would bring war and destruction


“It did. For years, secretly, some of are people has invented and and advanced. They called them selfs the Kuton Army, which in a lost language of are people mens Advanced Army. They have become so advanced that they are most likely equal to Acmetropalic, but the only problem is that they have mostly made weapons. In only resent years they decided show them selfs. They meat a lot of resistance. The only way they could get the people of are planet to accept technology was to take the kingdom. My mother and I used to live in the pales with the queen. My mother was a top guard and protector of the lands.


“When the Kuton showed them selfs we knew they'd be after any one who had rightful clam to the crown. My mother took me away to a small village. In hopes that I'd be safe. I was 4 when she took me away. In the end they found me, and captured me. I don't know why but they took me they took me to a different planet. I manged to escape and hitch a ride on a ship that came hear.”


“Angel,” Zadavia asked, “who is your mother?”


“She knew about you. All of you, and she also knew a lot about dis planet. Which has made me believe dat you all know her.” Angel pulled a necklaces out of her shirt and opened the pendent that was a locket. She handed it to them, “My mother's name is Lexi Mari Bunny.”

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All right Serenity Choclet or Vanila?


 



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..................................... HOLY CRAP SHE WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!

*faints*

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Rocky Road please! ^_^

Great chapter Siamese! I loved it! Some spelling errors but other then that very well written! Can't wait for the next chapter! SO HURRY! XD XD XD

I like how Angel took up some of Ace's boston accent. ^_^


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Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
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XD OHHHH please don't stop it here!!!
AWESOME CHAPTER BTW!! X3
BUT I WANTZ MOAR :3

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Lexi's really her mother?!?! Wow!......

Wow!......

WOW!!!!

Tessa: Please stop saying that.

-is all hyper and jumping around while waiting for the next chapter-

PS- You know, I won't mind editing a third story, since you're obviously not working on CG and FBI right now. PLUS I have lots and lots of spare time since summer's started. Yeah, I blame my past lateness on school!

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Cassidy: Um....*pokes* weirdface
Serenity: Hear is your Ice cream *hands ice cream*
Naty: Sorry, but hear is ware it must stay for now. I have some family bissnes that will keep me away from wrighting for a wilehmm.
Ruth: Yup lexi is Angels mom! And I think for this storry i'm going to try it with out a bata reader. For my own resons. 



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Yay! I gets ice cream!!! XD XD XD XD *eats in one gulp* I am un able to get brain freeze. ^_^

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It's okay, I don't mind!

-screams because you can't update for now-

Tessa: -Hits me with a brick-filled pillowcase- Ah, quietness.

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Cassidy: Good move there, Tessa. I use it on my maker all the time, too. Keeps her under control...

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My gawd. I am so sorry for not being able to review earlier. I now know how much awsomeness I have missed, and I will hit mahself for doing so. *wacks mahself upside the head*

Wow. thats all I can think of. Wow. This story is truely brilliant, Siamese, I can not believe my eyes. Seriously, some of your chapters were so... emotionally driven, that I came to tears reading it. As well as how Ace is acting all fatherly to Angel, I am in absolute adoration of the bond they share. Reading how Lexi 'died', Angel's past, and the finding of Ace's old cap is all but a few of the things that you wrote that made me gasp out loud.

A couple things though. Where is Lexi now? Is she still alive? Who is Angel's father? Can it be Ace? Di Lexi fall in love with another man-er, bunny? Is somebody else Angel's father? Ah... the questions of great stories. I realize that you cannot release the information at the moment, but sometimes waiting, hoping and thinking of what will happen next (mystery in other words) makes stories even better.

I shall await your next chapter in super-hyper-excitedness starting... NOW!!!

Me: *hyperventalates* OMG! OMG!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!!! I CANT WAIT!!!

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CassidyCoyote wrote:

Cassidy: Good move there, Tessa. I use it on my maker all the time, too. Keeps her under control...



Icy: Hhhmmm...Maybe I should try that! Serenity! Prepare to meet your maker!biggrin
Me: Wait.....but I'm your maker....weirdface
Icy:......................*eye twitches*.... You're still going down!rage.gif

Me:sprint.gif



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Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat?
Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8

 I support the ants. =3



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Hay guys! I'm back and will now be able to continue wrighting ^_^
It still mite take some time till my next chapter though.

And Doggirl thanks for reading ^_^. i'm glad you've enjoy so far. And you are right, I shall not give the ansers to thoughs questions. (at lest not yet)

Thank you all for reading, I hope to get the next chapter up in a few days (if i get the time)

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The Loonatics looked down at the open locket that now rested in the palm of Ace's hand. They all gasped as the looked at the small photograph in side. There stood 5 Anthros forming a group photo. One of the Anthros was a young infant of 2 being held in a blanket. One of the two on the right was a elderly, orange, fox with brown eyes and she stood the furthest on the right. The other one on the right was a mouse type anthro. Her fur was gray and light gray with the inside of her, rather larg, ears a pale pink, and her eyes a hazel. The Anthro on the far left was a dark brown-red male Hare with light blue eyes.


But all eyes where on the one who stood on the middle left. She held the infant in her tan furred arms as her emerald eyes glowed happily, and some of her blond hair covered up some of her face.


“L-Lexi?” Ace shuddered, more confused then ever.


“But it's impossible!” Tech added.


“We saw...saw her...” Duck couldn't finish what he was saying.


Ace let his hand drop. Clutching the locket in it. A smile cracked across his lips. “She's alive! She's alive guys!” Ace basically cheered to all of them. Realization showed it's self on the faces of all of them as the idea of one of the closest friends thought to be dead was indeed alive.


“Pleas,” Angel walked up to Ace, “will you help me go home to my mother? Will you help all of us with the Kuton army?”


Ace glanced at the child then looked at Zadavia. In the end he could only do what she agreed to. The other loonatics soon fallowed his gaze, all asking the same question.


Zadavia thought a second, “As far as I can tell as long as Angel stays in Acmetropalic she will bring people hear who will destroy anything to get her. So with out a doubt you have to take her home. In order to fulfill your duty of protecting Acmetropalis. And if you where to run into any old friends who needs help you'll have to oblige.”


The Loonatics all smiled with happiness. “All right den. Zadavia, Tech, is dere any planet on record dat goes by the name of Fruten?”


“Dose this mean you'll help?” Angel asked. Ace smiled at her and piked her up.


“Yes. It dose mean we're helpin' ya.” He looked back at his boss and the coyote, “So do you guys know any planet dat gos by Fruten?”


“Well I know for a fact there is no planet on Acemtropalics records that are named Fruten.” Tech replied saddening a bit.


“Zadavia?”


“Well I'd have to check, but the name Fruten dose not sound familiar.” All the Loonatics slumped a little, “But...Freeling has come in counter, scanned, and recorded many planets with out knowing the name of the planet. It's highly possible that Fruten may be one of these planets. If only we had something that could single out the planet. In order to make it that we wouldn't be shooting in the dark.


“I actually may be able to help on that Zadavia.” Tech perked up, “You see I took a mineral sample of some of the dirt that was on Angels close when we first meet her. It had a rare isotope in it that is extremely heard to find on Acemtropalic and most of it's sister planets. It's possible that the soil from Angels planet is rich in the isotope. If I got a better sample of it I could put it in the computer and compare it to the planets on the Freeling data base.”


“But-Tech-where-are-we-going-to-find-more-of-it?” Rev asked.


“Um..”Tech thought a second but shrugged in response.


“Hay guys?” Duck asked, “If Angel had it on her close is it possible that more of the mineral may still be where ever Angel was staying before she came to us?”


The Loonatis all gave Duck surprised looks.


“wheger didgder ou gerett smart?” Slam asked.


“Ya Duck? When did you get so smart?” Ace asked.


“Well...”Duck looked down, “I jest...I miss Lexi Okay!So maybe I'm thinking clearer in order to help find her!”


“Dat all right Duck. For you jest gave us a sours to find more of the mineral.”



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-runs around the room screaming "LEXI'S ALIIIIIIIIIIIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"-

Tessa: In other words, she really liked it. Oh yeah, Cassidy? Isn't it strange that we are often more sane than our makers? But oh well, it won't do us any harm. Heck, we can also have some fun!-smirks evilly-

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....................... *faints*

Cassidy: Yeah, she liked it. A lot. And Tessa? I think this may be the start of a great freindship! *evil smirk in direction of me and ruth*

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