Yes, Duck brokededed the sky. That was one of the big things in the movie I thought Duck would be perfect for. You know you're the biggest screw up when you finally break the sky. XD
Notice anything about what Rev was describing?
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
I sure did!!! It made me internally lol... Which means I wasn't lolling at all... More my soul was smiling... THAT'S IT. That scene made my soul grin with unadulterated GLEE. 8D
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Andrea: ....I think my kidney laughed. Sye: Your bladder told it to stop. 83
Great! I was going for that! Considering your soul is black and a little messed up and really needed that smaile. XD
LOL! Just kidding! XD
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
MY SOUL IS MADE UP OF BRIGHT COLOURS AND PAPER CLOUDS SAFETY-PINNED TO A BRICK WALL WITH THE MUSIC OF THE NING NANG NONG PLAYING CONSTANTLY WHILE DUCK AND TINTIN DANCE AROUND AN OAK TREE AND MERRILY SING ALONG TO THE SIGHT OF 99 RED BALLOONS FLOATING TOWARD THE HORIZON.
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It’s a place of sheer beauty.
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Andrea: ....I think my kidney laughed. Sye: Your bladder told it to stop. 83
Next chapter's coming guys. It's just been a little slow cause I haven't been at hom,e as much.
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
I'm giving you a warning right now out of all the bizarness in this fic this chapter takes the cake. Icy: Oooh! Cake! Let me have a bite! Me: No! Icy! Don't! The cake is a--" *Icy takes bite and is knocked unconcious* Me: --lie.....-__-;
Chapter 9
“Yoohoo! Mr. Duck!” Tweetums called as he stuck his head and scepter through a swirly bronze door. When he saw that his scepter didn’t light up he pulled his head back in and Rev closed the door. “Not in that one.” For the past hour the Loonatics had been going down an extremely long corridor full of these swirly bronze doors which apparently each one had a portal to a different world. Tweetums’ master plan was to check every single one of them until his scepter detected Duck in one of them.
Lexi yawned and Tech leaned up against Slam, tying to stay awake. Ace grunted in annoyance. “Tweetums, how long will it take to check all these exactly?”
Tweetums held his chin. “Hhhmm…let’s see….about thwee days.”
“Three days?!”
“That’s if we work all night. Otherwise it would take about a week.”
The Loonatics sighed in annoyance. Rev opened the next door for Tweetums (which he had been doing the whole time since his majesty was too short to reach the door knob) and the canary stuck his head and scepter in. “Mr. Duck?” Rev jumped as there was a loud roar from the other side of the door and Tweetums quickly pulled his head back out and slammed the door. “Nope. Defiantwy not in thewe….”
“This is just great!” Ace huffed. “We have to look through every single one of these damn doors until we find the one that has Duck in it! This could take forever or it could take another hour! Who cares! Duck could already be dead!”
“Ooooh! Ruts dat?!” Slam grumbled from behind the others. They looked over to see what had caught Slam’s short attention span to see a red and white striped set that looked a lot like a tollbooth.
“Yeah. What is that?” Lexi asked in curiosity.
“It’s called a Phantom Tollbooth. I don’t know how it works though.” Tweetums explained as they walked over to it. “It’s supposed to be the gateway to a vewy special dimension. One that you cannot get to with a wormhole.” Just then Tweetums’ scepter started to glow with a bright purple light.
Tweetums gasped. “That’s it! Mr. Duck is in the tollbooth!”
“Great!” Ace grinned. “Now we just have to figure out how to work this thing!”
“Why don’t you have Mr. Coyote wook at it?”
Tech strode up to the Phantom Tollbooth but he jumped back in surprise with his fur on end when the megaphone at the top suddenly spoke. “Tickets please!”
“Tickets?” Ace raised his eyebrow. “We don’t have any tickets.”
To their surprise the Tollbooth had a wisecrack reply. “Well of course you don’t. They stopped making the tickets centuries ago to stop people to coming into this world.”
“So how o you get in?” Lexi asked with concern.
“You don’t.” The Tollbooth scoffed.
Ace clenched his teeth in frustration. “Well we happen to know one of our friends somehow got in there and we would like to get him back.”
“Danger Duck has been chosen to come into the world and save us.He’s been given a mission to prove himself. Until then he has no of exiting that world.” The Tollbooth replied.
Ace shook his head. “Wait! What! Chosen? What are you talking about?!”
“Hey, look pal! I didn’t choose the hero. If I had my way I would have gone with that cool fox girl that freezes stuff but nooo. The princesses said it had to be the duck. Jeez…I am not getting paid enough to do this. Listen, if you’re really that worried I’ll tell you this. As soon as he’s done with his mission he will come out right here threw his tollbooth.”
Tech crossed his arms. “In one piece?”
“Safe and sound and most likely with a better attitude…”
Rev rubbed the back of his neck. “Well-that’s-good-I-mean-it-could-have-been-worse-if-all-we-have-to-do-is-wait-here-till-he-comes-out.”
The Phantom Tollbooth continued. “…unless he can’t get past the demons….”
“Get it started!”
“I’m trying!”
“This is really ticking me off….”
The toy car had gotten itself stuck in the mud and Duck and Tock were in the back pushing as Humbug sat at the driver’s seat trying to get it in gear. The bug suddenly floored the gas and the wheels spun in place, splashing mud all over Duck and Tock. The car shot forward with a huge jolt and crashed hard into a large jagged boulder. The two of them gasped and ran over to the car, still sopping with mud.
The front of the car was completely smashed and steam was spilling out of it in large clouds. Duck yanked the driver’s door open and pulled the bug out. “Humbug! You okay?!”
Humbug swung his cane up in the air as his eyes rolled around. “You! Cake or death?!” With that he stood up, swaggered, than fell flat on his back in the dust.
As Tock tried to wake him up Duck checked the car. “Shoot! We’re gonna have to go by foot from now on. This thing is totaled! We have to climb up the mountain, in the dark, with no food, creepy goblin like things probably chasing after us, and why am I doing this again?!”
Tock and Humbug exchanged glances and then looked back at Duck. “You are a hero aren’t you?”
Duck paused, taken aback by the truth of those words. This whole time he had really taken being a hero for granted. In Acmetropolis he had thought of it as a good way to earn glory and respect for once in his life. Now there was a whole new world that really needed his help. He hadn’t volunteered for the glory this time. That would be gone as soon as he left this world. If that wasn’t it…..why did he want to help?
Just then a sudden un-familiar voice creeped itself from behind them. “Hello, gentlemen.”
The three of them swung around to see a tall man with a suit and hat leaning up against a bare, dead tree. He seemed like a very casual, well kept person all except for one thing. He had no face. No eyes, nose, or mouth. His hands didn’t seem like they were attached to his body either. Duck looked at his them and immediately pictured a Rayman cartoon. The man strode towards them and politely shook their hands (paws). “I’m glad to see some friendly faces around here.”
“How can he see anything?” Duck retorted to the other two and they snickered.
“I was wondering if you could help me with a few small tasks…” The man cooed. Duck looked at the blank face and listened to the politeness of his voice and suddenly felt drawn.
“Sure dude, whatchya need?”
The man suddenly handed him a pair of tweezers and pointed to a heaping pile of sand. “See that pile? Could you move that pile of sand from there to over here please.”
Duck crossed his eyes in confusion but felt his legs take on a life of their own as he moved to do what he was told. Tock suddenly chomped down on his shirt and pulled him back. “What are you doing? We need to get going. We’re wasting time.”
“This will only take a minute. Besides, we need as many friends as we can get up here…”
The man then handed Humbug a needle. “Would you be a kind gentleman and prick a hole in this cliff with this needle?”
Humbug was blushing beet red from the gentleman compliment. “Why sure thing my good fellow! I shall get on it straight away!” With that he turned to the cliff and started poking at it with the pin.
Tock growled. “Don’t be a fool! I think this guy might be the—pop!” The man stuck an eye dropper into the watchdog’s mouth and pointed to a well. “And lastly could you be a nice doggy and move the water from that well to the one way over there?”
“Doggy?!” Tock snarled.
Duck suddenly stopped. He had never been one for doing chores so why the hell was he doing this?! “Exactly what’s the point to all this?”
The man turned on him, the expressionless features in his face suddenly dark. “Point? There is no point! If you stop to do the useless, worthless jobs you’d never have to worry about doing the important ones.”
Tock pulled the eyedropper from his mouth. “Now I know who you are! You’re the Terrible Trivium!”
“Correct!” The man shook his fists dramatically in the air. Duck rolled his eyes. “I am demon of petty tasks and worthless jobs.”
Duck crossed his arms and raised his eyebrow. “When you guys mentioned demons I was thinking more along the line of monsters and goblins. This guy isn’t serious is he?”
The demon suddenly lunged forward and grabbed Duck by the collar, lifting him above his head. Duck gasped and tried Quacking but it again failed. Tock rushed up and barked at the top of his lungs, his alarm ringing uncontrollably, making the demon drop Duck and shoot comically up a tree. Duck rubbed his rear, quickly scrambled up, and ran. Tock bit down on Humbug’s coat and dragged him off. Unfortunately the bug seemed mentally gone and was still holding the needle pocking at a cliff that was no longer there.
“What the heck is wrong with him?” Duck called over his shoulder.
“I ron’t row! Shust eep runnin!”
With the demon still in pursuit they ran up the mountain. A crevice that shot down into a canyon came into their path and Duck was just barely able to jump over it to get to the other side. Tock attempted to leap while still dragging Humbug but fell short. Tock was able to make it to the other side but he leaned over the cliff with Humbug’s coat clenched in his teeth and the bug dangled over the canyon, still pricking.
Humbug’s eyes widened as his mind suddenly decided it wanted to come back to reality. He gulped when he saw the dizzying height bellow him, screamed, and then shot like a bullet up the mountain. Tock shook his head and ran after him. Duck was in the lead but became wide-eyed as a blue blur zoomed past but then disappear right in front of him. Duck gasped as he realized he was about to run into a pit and slammed on his heels, only to be knocked in anyways as Tock crashed into him from behind.
Duck, Tock, and Humbug lay at the bottom of the pit in a heap. They shook their throbbing heads but then jumped as rumbling laughter echoed down into the hole.
“MWAHAHAHA!!!! Thought you could escape from the demons didn’t you?! Well you can’t escape from me! I’m the most ferocious demon of them all! For I am the long-nosed, green-eyed, curly-haired, wide-mouthed, thick-necked, broad-shouldered, bowlegged, round-bodied, short-armed, big-footed monster! And if you come out of that pit I’ll chomp your heads off!!!”
“S-sounds bad.” Humbug shivered.
Tock just sat on his haunches and tried to fix his out of control alarm clock. “You know if I keep falling down like this I really am going to bust my main-spring. So how do we get out of this mess?”
Duck listened to the loud laughter of the monster above them and then scoffed. “Pfft! Ferocious my feathered tail! If there’s one thing I’ve learned in this insane-asylum it’s that nothing is what it appears to be, as corny as that little bit sounded.” Duck grabbed onto the roughest part of the pit and started to climb. He reached the top and pulled himself half way up so that his arms were resting level with the pit and the ground. The voice spoke louder this time.
“Didn’t you hear me!? Get back in there before I bite your head off! For I’m the long-nosed, curly-haired, wide-mouthed…. Thick necked……” The voice trailed off with embarrassment as Duck looked at the so called “monster” in the eyes. Duck grinned coyly and whistled un-impressed at what he saw, making the demon blush. It was barely the size of a hamster and it was round and fluffy with little arms and legs. Tock and Humbug poked their heads out of the pit with the same coy expressions on their faces. The demon kicked at the dirt. “You just had to peek didn’t you? You’ve spoiled everything! Now I’m going to tell the other demons on you, you big meanies!” The little fluff ball then ran away, crying hysterically.
Humbug snorted. “Well, if he’s the typical demon you’d find around here then we have absolutely nothing to worry about…” Just as the words slipped from his mouth, the three travelers suddenly were clasped tight by some unknown force and lifted into the air. They found themselves lying in the large palm of a giant that blended perfectly into the mountain.
Duck glared at Humbug. “You just had to jinx it didn’t you?” The bug shrugged and smiled sheepishly.
“OOOOHHH!!! DINNER!” The giant rumbled. But as he was opening his mouth Duck raised his hand.
“Woah! Hey! Wait! I have a better idea!”
To their surprise the giant suddenly started to shake. “An i-i-idea?! No! No ideas!”
Duck huffed and threw his arms in the air. “Oh come on! Why does everyone freak when I suddenly come up with an idea?!”
“No ideas! I can’t handle ideas!”
The giant’s palm suddenly became mush under their feet and they could see that its whole body was melting. The greenish glop of a giant sated to spill down the mountain with the three travelers still in hand. Duck, Tock, and Humbug tried running only to have their feet stick in the goo.They saw the goo head for the edge of a cliff and the three of them tugged even harder to try and get away. When they figured they weren’t going anywhere but down they clung to each other and screamed as they went over the side of the cliff.
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?! Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3 Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-
Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3
Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
Yes! He had an idea! And it scared the crap out of that demon!...........not uncommon with him....XD
-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 15:59, 2008-07-14
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Well I'm done with the 10th chapter since I was bored silly today but I'm wondering if I should wait to put it up for a couple more days to raise the suspence....
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Then everything exploded. Except for Duck, Tock and Rev, who miraculously found each other amongst the debris of the shattered universe. Oh, and Slam lived too.
They soon found a relatively pieced-together bit of planet and rebuilt a life upon it, wherein Duck constructed Rev a white house with a red-tiled roof and trim little garden and Rev cooked Duck a meal every evening after a hard day of landscaping and hunting with Slam. Tock became their pet and slept at the foot of their bed each night while they reminisced about Acmetropolis and how lost they were without realising how much they truly loved one another.
Then somehow Rev and Duck had cute little Roadrunner/Duck babies and Slam had a mansion full of whores for him to rule over. They all lived happily ever after.
\8D/
-- Edited by XtreamCrazy at 19:42, 2008-07-15
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Andrea: ....I think my kidney laughed. Sye: Your bladder told it to stop. 83
Okay, I can tell you like Tock since he servived. But what do you guys think about Humbug? Chuck Jones managed to make him self absobed and a total...well...humbug....but really likeable at the same time. Did I capture any of that at all? It's been a bit of a challenge.
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Told you I'd have it in before Thursday. It's thirty minutes until it is here. ^_^
Chapter 10
Duck held his throbbing head as he became conscious and sat up. He looked around and realized the goop that had gone over the cliff had cushioned their drop but now it had completely vanished. The Loonatic looked up groggily and his eyes became wide at what he saw. Before him, up the next ridge, floating in the air, was a beautiful crystal castle with bright colored lights illuminating it with a spiral of glass stairs reaching towards the top. He awed at it for a little longer but then turned to his partners. He shook Tock. “Hey! Wake up! Look!”
The dog yawned as he and the Humbug woke. The two of them looked up at the palace and fell into the same awe as Duck. “The Castle in the Air! We made it!”
The three of them got up and dashed for the staircase, not realizing the shadowy figures creeping over the side of the cliffs towards them. Their excitement suddenly drained from them as the demons jumped from the mountain tops down to their level, blocking the path to the castle. The threesome backed up nervously, only to find that they had been surrounded on all sides.
Duck gulped. He stared down at his hands and closed his eyes. “Please. Please! If there was ever a time I really needed just one of my powers this would be that time. Pleeeeeeaaaassssee……..” He opened his tightly shut eyes and grinned silly at what he saw in his palm. A full, glowing, orange, orb of unknown energy that only he could summon. His now fully appreciated, unique, amazing power that he would treat like his life now that he knew how important it was.
Tock and Humbug stared at his glowing hands in awe as the hero suddenly threw the orbs at the surrounding demons. Duck punched his fists in the air. “Woohoo!!! Oh yeah!!!” e charged at the demons, throwing orb after Egg after Egg at them.
Tock was chased up a ledge and was surrounded by about ten demons. The watchdog backed up into a rock. He looked up at the huge boulder and then got a huge grin across his face. He slinked behind the boulder, wedged a branch under it, climbed a little further up the ridge, and then pounced on the branch. The huge boulder rolled off the edge of the ridge along with other debris and down ono the unsuspecting villains.
Humbug ran madly away from the demons as a dozen of them chased after him. The bug ran straight for a cliff without hesitation and jumped off it. The demons were too stupid to stop and at their speed weren’t likely to and went over the ledge after him. Humbug watched from a small ledge under the cliff as the demons dropped out of the sky. He hid a smirk behind his hand, twirled his cane, and then climbed back up the ledge whistling.
When his head came over the top he gasped. There was a whole horde more waiting for him. Humbug flinched as they dashed to grab him but a blur of orange and black back flipped down from the sky, tossing glowing orange orbs at the enemies. Duck swung his arms fast several times like a softball pitcher and then let his powerful Eggs fly, eliminating every demon in close range. He helped Humbug up and then the two of them went to fetch Tock, Duck throwing Eggs and Humbug trying to beat them off with his cane.
The creatures became enraged and suddenly did something completely unexpected. They all came together in one big mass and formed together to create one, giant, powerful beast of a monster.
Duck, Tock, and Humbug gulped and then glanced at each other. With a wild scream the three of them turned on their heels and dashed in the other direction in a cloud of dust.
The giant monster stomped on all fours toward the travelers, digging it long curved claws into the cliffs, its bulk as big as the mountains themselves. Duck, Tock, and Humbug continued running but were knocked in separate directions as the beast slammed its spike-ended tail onto the earth, causing the ground to quake and nearly flattening the three of them.
Tock looked up to see the monster lift a giant, house sized paw and start to bring it down towards where Duck was lying. The watchdog growled as his alarm went off and he charged at the demon, leaping up and chomping down on its hand as hard as he could. The monster recoiled its hand back in pain and then slammed it down onto the earth, sending Tock crashing to the ground with impact.
Duck saw this happen and quickly got up, facing the monster. The demon charged at him, it’s ugly red mouth gapping open. Duck felt a fire swell up in his chest and his eyes glew fiery orange. He put both his hands together and with all his strength let out a large ray of orange energy flying into the monster’s mouth. The demon staggered back and its body twitched and deformed. It shrank with blood curdling screams of anguish until it was nothing and there was dead silence.
Duck huffed and puffed out of breath and then rushed to the limb figure of the dog. “Tock!” He skidded as he slid over on his knees and picked the watchdog’s head up. As he did so there was an obvious sound of something like loose, broken metal. Gears. Duck listened closer for the slightest ticking but the sound never came. He looked up at Humbug. The bug stiffened at the watery blue eyes. “He busted his mainspring…..” He paused and sniffed. “You know I never really……had a dog before……”
Humbug put a hand on his shoulder. “If he could have chosen his death it would have been as heroic as this. Listen, I’ll stay with him while you go up to Rhyme and Reason. Maybe there’s still a chance to help him…Hurry Duck!”
Duck got up and without a second thought ran for the glass staircase. He finally approached it and noticed that the steps weren’t attached to anything and, like the castle, floated in midair. This didn’t faze him as at all weird and was actually kind of expecting it but what did surprise him was that as he ran up the steps they disappeared behind him. He didn’t stop though and kept running as fast as he could to the castle. He finally reached the top, surprisingly not at all tired, and looked around at his surroundings.
Inside the palace was all crystal with changing, colorful lights everywhere. He squinted his eyes from the brightness and wondered how someone could live with this without getting a few headaches. Two slim, flowing figures stood before him, blending in with the colors of the castle. They didn’t have faces and really only seemed to be a colored light in the shape of two girls. Duck thought they gave off the same aura and light effect Zadavia had when she was on the hologram speaking with them.
“Rhyme and Reason?” Duck asked but then felt like hitting his forehead. Duh you idiot.
“We’ve been waiting for you Danger Duck.” The two replied in chorus.
Duck blinked. “Huh?” his made the two girls giggle. Duck blushed. “Wait. You knew I was coming?”
“We sent for you. Normally we wouldn’t allow outsiders into our world but we need someone special to help bring peace back into our land.” Reason explained.
“Special?” Duck on a normal day basis would have become swell-headed at this compliment but he had become strangely humble over the past couple days. “How am I special?”
“Because you’re a hero.” Rhyme giggled.
“But why did you pick me. The others are heroes too. Ace is the leader, Tech’s got the brains, Slam’s got the strength, Lexi has the stealth, and Rev has the endurance. What do I have?”
“You have a good heart, and a hidden thirst to learn.”
“When you were in your friend’s lab and you became interested in his new invention it showed your true curiosity.”
“And by coming here you have learned from everyone around you and has brought out the best in you that you’ve been hiding from your fellow teammates for years.”
“But I’m a screw up! Big time! Tock is dead or broken or something and how many idiots out there can say they messed up the sky?! Who messes up the SKY?!” Duck said in exasperation.
“All mistakes can be fixed.”
“No matter how big.”
“And whoever says otherwise are quitters.”
“How can you say that?!” Duck yelled, feeling tears swell up in his eyes. “Tock’s dead! That was one of my mistakes and how am I going to fix it?! You can’t just bring someone back to life!”
The girls nodded. “That is true. When a life has been taken you cannot give it back.”
“But that doesn’t mean you can’t fix it.”
“Learn from what that person had brought into your life.”
“And make something good out of it.”
Duck was silent a moment. He suddenly crossed his arms. “Okay, so how do we get down?”
“Why don’t you ask him?” The princesses pointed out the window.
Duck followed but then slapped his forehead. “Oh no! Not again!” Descending from the sky, still holding onto the balloons, was none other than the Whether Man.
“Have you found your way yet?” Was the first thing out of his mouth.
Duck nodded. “Yeah yeah. I got the pun earlier. Now how do we get down?”
The Whether Man fiddled with the strings a moment and then pulled out tow balloons with words on them. “Okay first you need a ‘Here’s’ and then you need a ‘How’. Now hold onto them and see what happens.”
He handed Duck the balloons and the mallard blinked. “Um…..Here’s how?” He yelped as the balloons suddenly made him float off the ground into the air. “Yipes! Mother!” He brought his knees up and clung to the two strings for dear life.
The princesses held hands and then gracefully floated out the window, a trail of light in their wake. Duck rolled his eyes and sighed I annoyance. “If they could fly why the hell didn’t they try that in the first place!?”
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
*falls on knees* NUUUU!! TOCK!!! WAKE UP LITTLE BUDDY!!!!
*faints*
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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Saviour
Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?! Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3 Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-
Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3
Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
I just read through all of this, and I have to say, this a very engaging, enjoyable story. I haven't seen the original movie, but I can appreciate it's humour, which comes across very well in here. You've managed to capture a certain logical zaniness that moves the story along at a good pace. And you've written all the characters incredibly well - I feel as though every personality is real enough to come right off the page.
Your interpretation of Duck is a joy to read; he's still our loud-mouthed little black Duck, but in here we get extra insight on who he is, and see something that was never really seen in the show: character development. Duck learns from all the things that happen, and comes to terms with what it really means to be a hero. I especially like how he realizes how precious his powers are. There's nothing like a cold splash of reality (or unreality, in this case) to remind someone not to take their own gifts for granted.
Anyways! This is a delightful read, and you can bet that I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter just as much as everyone else.
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I'm dead seriouse when I say that last comment made me shed happy tears. I've been waiting for someone to say something like that about one of my stories for a long time. Thanks Iguana! And thank you all who have read this story, enjoyed it, and commented. You have no idea how much I trully appreciate it as a writer-to-be. ^_^
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Hey! I was THINKING what Iggy said all along! I was just waiting for an appropriate time to say it. ;__;
And, the fact that you made Duck so wonderfully epic throughout all this made me digress and talk about him in all of my comments instead of the story itself. XD
ANYWAY.
YOU WANT ME TO GIVE YOU MY OPINION ON THIS STORY??? DO YOU??????
I agree wholeheartedly with what Iggy said. This story is so captivating, and even when nothing much is happening, you still manage to keep the plot moving at a pace that's readble without deterring the interest. I think I've said before that you've written the characters perfectly; I actually prefer how you've portrayed them in comparrisson to what Warner Bros. did...
You captivate a sort of... Childish essence with this story? But you still maintain the sophistication of mature humour with a nice balance of slapstick gags and tense moments here and there.
You did a fantastic job adapting this crazy world into LU... Especially with Duck's personality. The fact that he comes a cross as so believable and in-character within this role truly shows how capable you are at keeping characters true to themselves in different situations. I'd love to see what else you could do in future fanfictions regarding character development, because seriously, you made this so... Amazing... That I just...
Each of the characters... You did a wonderful job of only describing them precisly without overloading on the details. Imagery is good, without it overwhelming the storyline, which is something I hate to happen in stories. There's a good balance between plot and description, which I think makes this pace so nicely. (I think I'm repeating words... like 'which' and 'pace' and 'storyline' D8!)
The way Duck matured and humbled... You don't actually notice that it's happening, which means that the transformation is gradual and believable. That's what I love most about this. I could SEE this happening in an episode. Warner Bros. SHOULD make an episode out of this, because it shows Duck in such a beautiful light...
Hey... I went back to Duck again. XD
Kay. I'mma go stop rambling nao. XD
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Hi.This is Icy. Serenity is in the bathroom crying right now from happiness (i do not get that gal) so I'm here to fill in for her. Obviously she likes the comments and is glad to here from someone that her fics arent' stupid, badly written, and immature.......HEY! SERENITY! Why the hell weren't you this good when you were writing "Icy Memories?!" It could have been a hit! I could have been a star! You do realize only five prescent of the people on here actually know who I am!!!
Me: *shoves her out of way* Yeah yeah. You'll have you momnet in "In the Cold". Sorry about that guys. Thank you so much for the comments. And I didn't mean just her saying something like that, I meant in general. People usually take one look at my stories and I only get a "good" or " I like it". Nothing ever is beyond that. You guys really make me feel at home here. ^_^
I love this forum...TT_TT Icy: Oh boy. There she goes again....
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
I'm half way done with the next chapter. I might just have it in before Sunday. ^_^
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Chapter 11 Humbug sat up against a cold black rock in the silence of the night with the lifeless dog lying next to him. He looked up at the castle, wondering if Duck had made it up okay. He suddenly noticed the stairs were missing and stood up. “My goodness! He could have fallen! Or maybe now he’s trapped up their! Um…uh! I’ll go look for help! Yeah! That’s what I should do. I’ll……huh?” The bug looked up to see something float from the castle into the sky. As it did three other figures followed. It was Duck, a short chubby guy, and two beautiful young ladies. As they passed by a light suddenly shone down on the earth, parting the clouds and letting the sun in. Humbug awed for a moment but then looked himself over. His ragged, torn up suit had been replaced with bran new clothes and a cane. Humbug turned around to look at himself. “Would you look at that!” He suddenly heard a familiar ticking noise and looked over to see Tock twitch with the rhythm of the ticking, lift his back leg to scratch his behind his ear, and then his alarm suddenly went off, waking him up completely. Duck looked down and grinned as he saw the dog shoot up awake. The distraction caught him off guard though and he accidently let go of the strings. With a yelp he plummeted toward the earth only to find himself fall flat on top of Tock and Humbug. Tock shook the dust off his head and licked Duck on the cheek. “You know for a second there I thought I was a goner. You okay Duck?”Duck held his head. “Yeah, I’m fine. Just kinda getting over that last drop there….” “Would you mind getting up, sir…?” Humbug grumbled form under Duck and he let him up. The bug stood and carefully brushed his new suit and top hat off. He looked up for a moment and elbowed Duck with a chuckle. “Looks like they fixed the sky for you.” Duck and Tock looked up to see Rhyme and Reason float over the land, turning the sky into a grayish blue. As they disappeared the sun began to rise. Duck normally would have caught that as corny, which it was, but he also noticed the symbolism in it.Just then the sound of a honking horn came from behind them and the threesome turned around. Out of nowhere the toy car zooms up, good as new, and runs straight into Duck without stopping. The Loonatic felt himself roll up the hood and into the front seat as the car drove at full speed out of control. Duck sat up and looked behind him and got one more glance at Tock and Humbug before he was thrown out of the dimension…….
The Loonatics stood around bored out of their minds as they waited near the Tollbooth. Rev had run to the royal kitchen and grabbed them all snacks at least three times already. A siren on the Phantom Tollbooth suddenly blared; scaring the crud out of them and making each and every one of them jump at least two feet in the air. “Make way! Make way! Clear away!” The Loonatics dodged to the side just in time as a red blur suddenly zoomed out of the Tollbooth and crashed into the other wall with a loud bang. They didn’t easily get over their shock and only stared at the red toy car. Duck’s head spun as he tried to recover from his whiplash. He was sprawled out on the front seats, his arms over the back and his legs hanging over the door and the hood. Kicking the door open he staggered out, nearly falling flat on his face. The other Loonatics gasped and rushed to crowd him. “DUCK!” Duck tried to push the glomps away. “Let me recover. Let me recover…can’t--breathe--*gasp*!” Ace held Duck’s shoulders at arm’s length and looked him over. “Are you okay? What happened to you in there?” “What was it like?” Tech added curiously.Duck pulled away from them without a word and stood in front of the Tollbooth. He stared for a moment and then frowned. “Hey! Can’t I get back in?!” The Tollbooth speaker only replied. “Ticket please.”“What?” Duck shook his head with frustration. “I was just pulled out of there with no warning of any kind! Are you telling me I need a ticket to get back in?!” The Tollbooth sighed. “Here we go again. Look, you’ve had your time. Let someone else have a turn in this world. End of discussion.” “But-but…” Duck pouted but the Phantom Tollbooth suddenly swiped a stop sign in front of his face. “Talk to the sign.” Duck was a little dazed for a minute but then his shoulders slumped in disappointment. The other Loonatics looked at each other with concern and then Ace stepped up to the mallard. “Duck?” “I…” Duck said quietly. “I didn’t even get to say bye…..”
The entire trip home Duck was completely silent. All he did was stare out the window, his chin on his fist. No matter what the others did he didn’t budge, look, or speak. They tried games, putting on his favorite music, and Lexi even came up with the idea on ragging on how short he was to see what the response would be. Slam chucked a bouncy ball he had been playing with at the back of his partner’s head and he still didn’t move. “What’s eating him?” Lexi asked. “Alien mind wipe?” Rev whispered mysteriously and Tech hit him over the side of the head. When the Loonatics finally reached HQ, Duck was a little more responsive. First thing he did was go to the fridge and start making a huge club sandwich. He scoffed the entire thing down as if he were Slam and then he had to explain to the others he hadn’t eaten two days. After a few hour they finally got him to talk about what he had experienced in the other world…and they didn’t believe there ears. “So….This place is magic in some sense?” Ace asked. “And there’s a dog with a clock?” Tech added. “And you broke the sky?!” Lexi tried to keep herself from giggling. “You don’t believe me do you?” Duck sighed. Lexi finally laughed.”No, I believe ya. That’s why I’m laughing.” Duck didn’t take it as an insult. He knew she meant it good-humoredly. Instead he laughed along with her. “Yeah, it is kind of silly. I mean, who breaks the sky?!” Ace patted his shoulder. “Well Duck, seems like you’ve had quite the adventure. Saved a kingdom and rescued a couple of princesses? You deserve something special.” “Wha…” Duck ****eded his head. “Well, we got something for you the other day.” Ace shoved an orange wrapped box at Duck. The mallard blinked owlishly and then back up at them. Rev elbowed him. “What-did-you-forget-that-today-was-your-birthday-you-silly-duck!?”Duck slapped his forehead and laughed. “Oh duh! I guess I did forget!” With a silly, eager grin on his face he opened up his present like as if he were a five-year-old. When he finally got it opened he stopped, staring dumbfounded on what was inside. It was a crystal statue on a wooden stand of himself in his Loonatics uniform, his fist poised in the air in a heroic pose and an Egg in the other hand. Duck was speechless as he looked back up at his teammates. “Uh………wow guys. I don’t know what to say.” “Thank you is a good start.” Ace smirked. Lexi pointed to a silver plate on the wooden stand. “We had it personalized for you. Read the inscription.” Duck looked closely at the plate.
Danger Duck
A True Hero
Always and forever your teammates, Ace, Lexi, Rev, Tech, and Slam. The Loonatics.
“Huh? Duck grabura rying?” Slam asked. “I’m not crying! I got something stuck in my eyes….” Duck turned around and wiped his eyes with his arm. The others only looked at each other and smiled as they rolled their eyes. Tech suddenly looked at his watch and groaned. “Aw man. I have to get busy cleaning my lab. If I don’t do it now I’ll never get anything done tomorrow. You guys start the party without me.” With that the coyote began to walk out of the room. “Happy Birthday Duck.” He waved over his shoulder and left. Duck blinked and then began to wrap his present back up. “Uh, hey guys. Why don’t we have my party tomorrow. I’m gonna go help Tech out with his lab. I’ll take you all out for lunch. My treat!” With that he leapt out of his seat and ran after the coyote. “You comin Rev?” “Um………sure-yeah-okay…” The speedster took of and the to of them disappeared into the elevator. Ace, Slam, and Lexi stood their dumbfounded. Lexi ****ed her head. “Did that just happen?” “Ralien ind ripe?” The pink bunny nodded. “Yeah. I don’t think Rev was too far off with that one. Ace only folded his arms and grinned with a far off look in his eyes.
A while later in Tech’s lab, Duck had taken to sweeping again. Rev helping fix anything broken since he was the fastest one a doing so and Tech was left to do some physical work by moving stuff around. As the scientist lifted a cardboard box, he couldn’t help staring amazed at the fact Duck had willingly volunteered to help clean. He chuckled out loud. “I don’t know what’s gotten into you lately but I really do appreciate the help.” “Yeah yeah. Don’t get used to it. By tomorrow I’ll be my grumpy self again.” Duck joked, making the coyote laugh a second time before he went to find a spot for the box of blown up junk. As he passed the the main computer he noticed a little blinking green light. “Huh?” Tech put the ox down a moment and checked to see what it was. “That’s weird. I got a message.” “How’s that weird?” Duck scoffed. “Because it says it’s coming from a different world yet it’s not Zadavia’s or Tweetums’ ring. Those are the only other two that know how to get into this computer system.” Rev zipped up to see what he commotion was about. “Hey-what’s-up?”“We’ll see in a moment.” Tech tapped away at the keyboard and an image suddenly appeared on the giant computer screen. The coyote and roadrunner blinked n puzzlement at the two figures staring down at them but Duck gasped in disbelief. “Oh there you are, Duck!” “Yes, we’ve been looking everywhere for you my lad. “Why’d you leave in such a rush? R-U-S-H.” Duck’s mouth dropped open. “Tock?! Humbug?! Spelling Bee?! How the heck did you three get ahold of this line?!” Tech held up his hands before the other three could answer. “Wait! Wait! Hold on a second! You know these guys?!” “These three are from the Phantom Tollbooth.” Duck explained, still a little dazed himself. “You’re friend Tweetums was able to contact us through the Tollbooth and gave us the computer code to a Mr. Coyote’s lab.” Tock said as he gestured his head to the room behind him. “We’re in the Mathemagician’s lab in Dictionopolis. Oh, by the way, Doddy says hi.” Rev grinned silly, excitement rising up in him. “Um-Duck-said-you-have-a-built-in-clock.-Is-that-true?” Tock chuckled and then opened up his fur to show the brand new golden clock. Duck smiled. “Hey, you got a new one! And Humbug, you’re looking pretty spiffed up!” “I am aren’t I?” Humbug twirled his new mahogany cane. “There is a festival here in your honor, Duck. H-O-N-O-R. But you left so fast we didn’t have time to thank you.” Before Duck could reply there was a sudden whirring sound from the seemingly broken portal at the back of the room. The six looked over to see what was happening but only a few lights were blinking on it. Tech scratched his head from his computer seat. “Rev, could you check on that please.” The speedster zoomed over to the universal portal and started checking it out. As he turned his back on the opening to check the wire system the portal suddenly started to glow. Rev was taken by surprise as a tentacle suddenly shot out of the machine and pulled him in and then shut itself off again. Duck and Tech screamed. “REV!” Tech ran out of the lab to get the others while Duck stayed behind a little to close thir conversation. “Uh, um, guys! If you see a really quick, fast talking black and red bird in their please keep him out of trouble. Keep him away from the orchestra too. If you think I’m a disaster just wait till this guys shows up. Uh, gotta go! Love you guys! Bye!” “See ya Duck!” With that the computer screen closed and Duck ran out of the room to catch up with the others. “Oh boy…”End…
-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 01:00, 2008-07-23
-- Edited by lovegreenanred at 01:07, 2008-07-23
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
THIS IS MY FIRST FINISHED FANFIC!!!! WOOOOOHHHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD
Icy: Oops. There she goes again. Sorry guys. I'll give her some knock out meds. -__-
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?! Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3 Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-
Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3
Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83 And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/
I'm so glad you guys like it! Now that you've read this go watch the movie on youtube. XD
TThese are the fanfics for Loonatics I'm working on at the moment that I would like you guys to look out for in the future....
Last chapter to "Icy Memories"; it's sequal "In the Cold" where Icy returns; "Trial By Fire" where Rev is kiddnapped by lizard aliens; "The Second Generation" the Loonatic children have to save their parents; "Serenity's Play #6" which will be the little mermaid; "Of Mice and Loonatics" featuring two famous Chuck Jones characters (guess who), and "Space Jam" only instead of Basketball it's Basherball! XD
........i've got a busy scedual...
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8
Eeeeeeeeeee! *jumps up and down* It's finished, it's finished! And what a wonderfully satisfying ending! Duck finally gets the appreciation he deserves. I loved the bit where everyone ran forward to embrace Duck after he came out of the Phantom Tollbooth. It just goes to show that no matter how indifferent they may seem, they really do care about him. And you saved Tock!! Yaaaay! Geez, I was so worried for a second there. The fact that Duck got to talk to him and Humbug again through Tech's computer really made the ending satisfying for me. Poor Rev, though, getting sucked inside the Tollbooth! I wonder what kind of adventures he'll have?
In any case, my final say is this: you used excellent characterization throughout the story, and skillfully weaved together two existing works of fiction that I never would've thought to combine. Long story short, I loved this to pieces, and I hope you continue to write. I know I'll be looking forward to it!
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Yeah, in the movie Milo (Duck's character) just leaves during a musical number without saying goodbye to everyone and it ticked me off so I though it would be cute to add the comjputer part in. But I left in where Milo's friend finds his own Tollbooth. Rev! XD
Real ending quote from movie too. "Oh boy..." ^_^
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Me: I SHALL HAVE THEE FERRET GOD OF DOOM SMITE YE DOWN IF YE FAIL TO DO SO!!!!!! I SHAAAAAAALLLLL!!!!!!!! Ozzie: *standing on a tall pillar in a cape and robes with his stone glowing* MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Do as she says or I shall turn you all into bugs! AHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Ant:... Is that supposed to be a threat? Rev: *squeals like a girl and jumps into Ace's arms* They're BACK!!! D8