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LoonaticsF


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Whisper (Ch 5 up)
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Just something i came up with... Only the beggining though... 2nd chapter IS finished, i just wanna see if it's worth continuing here...
Please Review either in FF.net or Here...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4590991/1/Whisper

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-- Edited by LoonaticsF at 11:23, 2008-11-08

-- Edited by LoonaticsF at 14:39, 2008-11-16

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Looks like an interesting idea so far LF.

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Creepy and Gripping, Make me want to read on!

Please continue!


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Thanx you guys so much =D

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MOAR! =D

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SoulessAce wrote:

MOAR! =D



 I SHALL START WRITING ZHE THIRD CHAPIE!

BTW i WOULD calll today, but i have a physics test tomorrow, and i only have five more minutes so it wouldn't be worth it... DAMN TIME! WHY DO I HAVE TO HAVE ONLY 20 MINUTES ONLINE!

So many to write in so little time... ND SO MANY TO ****ING STUDY! I see me getting a MAJOR 8 in this test... Out of 20 might i add.... U know Antony WAS right...  I HAVE CHANGED DX



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WHEN WERE YOU ON?! GAH! I MISSED YOU! DDDXX



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And I repeat Lauren.......

*clears throat*

MOAR!!! 8D

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HEY! THAT IS A LAUREN SLOGAN! xD

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New chap!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4590991/2/Whisper
Review either here or there!

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YAYNESS! *hits a pole* I left my review there, so all I gots to say is UPDATE! 8D

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Oooh. Spooky. UPDATE!

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Creepy!

Great job with the suspense!
Please continue!

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Many thanks to all of you... THe next chap's ready, but i don't have the document with me right now. You can freely kill me...

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No, no, ish okay. I already killed you over liking Blink 182, so...XD

Besides...I'm not in a fanfiction position to judge...XDD

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THIRD CHAP UP http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4590991/3/

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Marvelous.

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OMG!  That's kind of...really creepy
Especially scince I'm home alone right now!

Great chapter, you have me on edge!

Please continue!

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4th chapter in progress, but i made the intro: http://wolfgirl1311.deviantart.com/art/Whisper-intro-102806081

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Nice!!!

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4590991/4/
New chap ^^

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*golf clap*

Keep going ^^

But don't you dare forget about LAFOOW ^^;

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5th chap ^^

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4590991/5/

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Cool, creepy and...I can't think of another word beggining with c.


Well at least Dana's on their side!


But someone needs to save Ace!!!!

Please continue!

BTW, PLease continue with 'Trouble in Paris' It's really good!!!!!!!!



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PurpleGirly wrote:

 

Cool, creepy and...I can't think of another word beggining with c.


Well at least Dana's on their side!


But someone needs to save Ace!!!!

Please continue!

BTW, PLease continue with 'Trouble in Paris' It's really good!!!!!!!!

 



 I'm not sure if i will... My head is really messed up to continue that too... But i'll try...



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Don't worry, Story writing can be pressure-filled

I understand!

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DON'T TRUST ANYTHING SHE SAYS.

*huggles LAFOOW* WHY MY LITTLE FISH, WHY?!???????????

................cool chapter ^^

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(Chapter 6)

Awwwwwwwwwwwww,

...Well the stroies going well!

I can't wait to read more...If you feel up to writing more that is...



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