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I'm re-wrighting my very first fanfition Secret Affairs...

 

Secret Affairs: Part 1

 

The dark streets of Acmetropolis where greeted only by the full moon and the occasional 'night owl' looking for a good coffee shop that was still open at midnight. With the exception of the nocturnal, most people would be found sleeping at this late hour. In an orb on top of the cities tallest tower there you would find Acmes great heroes dreaming as well. All of them except one.

 

He laid in the darkened room. Softly lighted by the moon light the flooded in from near by window. It gave every thing in the room a blueish-Silver glow. He looked around the room. No, it wasn't his quarters, but he felt comfortable and could easily slip into sleep. If he wanted to.

 

Instead of sleeping, he laid in a hammock watching. His eyes surveyed the body of the slightly smaller figure that rested at his side. Her head was settled upon his bare chest. There bodies pushed together by the cloth. His left arm wrapped around her tender, yet strong, body. His hand placed firmly on her back, holding her close. His right arm was stretched behind his own head in a relaxed fashion.

 

The palm of her tan, right, hand was on his chest. Beneath her soft cheek. Her left hand stretched across his body and rested on his right shoulder. Breath escaped her slightly open mouth. The warmth made him grin. How could he describe the feeling he felt then and there? Simple. He couldn't. All he knew was in sent in too a frenzy of happiness.

 

With a loving gaze coming out of his deep blue eyes, Ace gazed at the sleeping Lexi.

 

'She looks so...so different,' Ace thought, 'so different in and out of uniform. When she wears it she looks fearless... Tough, independent... Someone who is far from needing protecting... But now, in her pink Pjs, she looks so fragile. I know she isn't, but she looks it. She looks defenseless. Like she dose need a protector...'

 

Me” He whispered removing his hand from his head an pushing a few locks of her golden hair out of her face, “I want to be your protector.

 

Saying this he placed his arm around her. Lexi curled closer to him. Ace smiled and closed his eyes. He started to think back over all the resent events that brought him to where he was now. Thinking back to how his secret affairs with Lexi all started.

 



-- Edited by Siamese712 at 02:49, 2009-02-21

-- Edited by Siamese712 on Thursday 14th of May 2009 07:46:44 PM

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Part 2

 

The battle was lasting longer then the loonatics had hoped. There villein of the month, The Tamer as he called himself, had released the better half of the Acme Retro-Zoo; with the help of his own invention, a mechanical whip, he had the capability of taking over the minds, or free will, of the animals. Luckily, do to there humanistic qualities, the Loonatics where safe from the inventions powers.

 

The battle had dragged on for some time now. Between tracking and re-tracking the Tamer and hafting to doge the run away ZooPets the Loonatics where low on energy and wishing they could jest get it over with. Perhaps, one could say, they where getting snappy.

 

Tech!” Ace yelled getting out of the way of a charging Rhino, “Is dat Freedamatic-what-cha-ma-call-it ready yet!?”

 

Almost Chief! I jest need the back up battery, but it's back at HQ!” Tech yelled back as he continued to fix his lattes invention, intended to neutralize the Tamers whip affect.

 

All right den. Rev run back to HQ and get it for him!” Ace ordered.

 

Okay-Ace!-I'm-on-it,-but-Tech-do-you-want-the-molecular-battery-or-the-nuclear-one?” Rev called from where he was running around a pack of escaped leopards.

 

Molecular, now go!” Tech called out once more from behind a peace of rubble where he had set up shop.

 

Okee-dokee-Tech-be-back-in-oh-3.2-seconds.” Then, in blur of red, Rev was gone with the wind.

 

As Ace continued to tango with his horned friend he managed to get a glans at his team. Slam, holding one hand high in the air as one dose in a rodeo, was holding on to the back of a, as Ace once put it, hairy old elephant. Duck quaked his way back and fourth from claws of a large brown grizzly bare. Ace distinctly heard 'you need a breath mint, PEW!' come sarcastically from the water fouls mouth. Lexi was diligently dogging the disgusting 'stuff' a group of monkeys where throwing.

 

Ace edged closer to where Tech was working. Ready to jump into action the moment it was ready. Rev zoomed back with a small rectangular device in his hand.

 

Tech took it from him, “Rev, that was not3.2 seconds.

 

Okay,-so-I-was-1.3-seconds-off.-I-didn't-expect-there-to-be-a-traffic-jam-over-on-Thirty-second-Street.-Besides-I-was-really-really-really-close.”

 

Hay! If you two are done bickerin' can I have dat t'ing?!” Ace yelled as once again he was almost trampled by a animal. Tech applied the battery to the gun he held and tossed it to his leader.

 

With the invention now in hand Ace quickly took off firing a blue wave towards the attacking creatures.

 

Okay guys, no more monkey business.” Ace fired again at Lexi and her furry 'friends'. With that the monkeys lost interest in the female Loonatics and ran off.

 

Lexi slightly shuddered, “Gross, I officially hate monkeys.” She smiled over at Ace, “Thanks Ace I-

 

To Aces terror, Lexis words where replaced with a pain filled scream as the crackle of a whip struck the air.

 

Lexi!!” Ace yelled out as Lexi fell to the ground.



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Part 3

Lexi struggled to get back up, but found no strength to do so as she fell back down and was lost to concise world. With a flash of anger coursing through his veins Ace reeled around to locate Lexis attacker. The Tamer, a tall dark haired and skinned man with vice looking purple eyes, stood there looking down at Ace from atop an elephant.

With a sinister grin the Tamer said, “
My invention may not be able to take over you and your friends concise hand, but it can knock out your weakest-link.”

Weakest-link!?” Ace repeated,  “Listen Doc, if you where talkin' about Duck I'd agree wit' ya, but no on calls my second in command da weakest-link!”
 
With that said Ace tossed Tech back his invention and pulled out the GSS. Jumping up, he sliced the whip in half and watched as it fell with a clank to the ground. He smiled as Duck fired a direct hit of Glucose Jell. Trapping the Tamer with in it.

Aces smile quickly eroded away as Lexi came back to his thoughts. Running over he gently flipped her onto her back and held her in his arms.

Tech!” He called the coyote over, “Any idea what's wrong?”

Tech did a quick examination of the unconscious female, “
I'd say that hit just made her go unconscious. Nothing to serious.

Very well,” Ace said picking up Lexi as he stood, “Round up the remaining animals and get Tamer in his cage. I'm getting' Lexi back to HQ.

Sure thing, Ace.” Tech said as he and Ace separated.

Ace carefully laid Lexi down in her hammock. He looked at her. She looked rather peaceful. Ace,  noticing a lose strain of her blond hair, gently pushed in back. Then, realizing what he was doing, he quickly with drew his hand. Looking around the room he decided, not having any real permission to be in there, to give the girl some privacy. He stood there in the door way for a second more. He gave one last glance at the sleeping Loonatic, and with smile he walked away closing the door behind himself.

Feeling not quite himself, unable to pin point why, Ace ventured out into the living room to meditate. Waiting for either the others to return or Lexi to wake up.



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Awesome. *grabs popcorn and chocolate* This is like a movie.

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A movie that deserves bad reviews.

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A movie that deserves bad reviews.






 Hey, wise guy! Have any bad comments, next time, you should, I don't know, maybe, KEEP THEM TO YOURSELF!



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A movie that deserves bad reviews.




 Hey, wise guy! Have any bad comments, next time, you should, I don't know, maybe, KEEP THEM TO YOURSELF!

 


Ice, first off thanks.

Second, no need to stand up for me. He/she can have any veiw they want to have. Though it is childish and uncurtius. Besides It is up to me weather or not I wish to take ofenc.

I say no. I'll ignore there negativity and jest go on being happy. No point to dwel.

 



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Yeah good point, Dwelling only screws up the mind.

I'm enjoying the re-write Siamese, Tis great!

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Dear Siamese712,

Your spelling fucking sucks. Everyone hates your stories. They're too embarrassed to tell you. How old are you, anyways? Based on your writing, I would assume 9 or 10. Are you failing English? Why am I even asking that? Of course you are. Get off the computer and go buy a damn dictionary. When you've done this, smack your head repeatedly with it until you grow a brain.

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PG, Thanks. smile

And Anon thanks for the complement evileye

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*Sarcasm!*   Well anoymous certainly has a nice way of giving feedback...

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Thanks PG

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I agree with PG. By the way, kool kat, if you want me to whack somebody into next week, let me know. I'll be glad to do it.

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Thanks Ice, but I don't retort to violence. Instead I go to annoying who ever is trying to pick on me. It works every time.

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Awwww man! You never let me have any fun! Hey. Maybe I should try that technique on Keely.

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Part 4

Lexi opened her eyes and looked around a moment. At first not realizing were she was. All she remembered was screaming in pain, falling to the ground, then Ace, she thinks, yelling out her name, and finally blackness. She sat up and rubbed her forehead. She felt groggy. She lifted up her left arm and looked at the built in clock in her uniform; 4:26 P.M.

She stood up and rubbed her lower back. A small stinging sensation covering it. It hurt a bit to rub it, so she let out small grunts as she rubbed. Sighing she forgot her pain and left her quarters. She stopped short before entering the main room. She peeked in to see: Rev was at the Air-Hockey table playing around against himself wile being the announcer for it. Slam and Duck where having a tug-a-war over what looked like a box of cookies. Tech was in the kitchen reading a Science book, go figer. Ace, as usual, was meditating in the middle of the living/main room.

The television was on a commercial break about 'The L'Amour Cuisine', a new restaurant in town. Lexi came fully into the room; smiling as she did so. Ace, sensing the new entry, opened his eyes and placed his glance at her. He reflected the grin and stood up.

Lexi, your awake.” He said walking over to the female bunny.

Aces greeting alerted the others to her arrival. They stopped there present activities and joined there leader. Slam, who had been holding the cookies with Duck attached to them, dropped the cookies and duck with them. Duck landed with a loud thump!

Lexi Okay?” Slam grumbled.

Ya?-Lexi-are-you-okay?-That-was-one-nasty-hit-you-took-to-the-back.-Knocked-ya-out-cold.-You-had-us-worried-there-for-a-wile.-Man-I'm-glad-it-wasn't-me.-Not-that-I-mean-that-I'm-happy-that-you-got-hit-instead-of-me!-It's-jest-

Rev!” Tech interrupted there fast talking friend, “Maybe you should give her a minuet to speak.

How you feelin' Lex?” Ace asked, trying, but failing, to hid the worried undertone in his voice.

I'm fine guys.” Lexi shrugged, “My back 's a little sore, but nothing I can't handle.” She reassured them with a smile.

At that moment they all looked away as a holographic Zadavia appeared before them. They all quickly gathered around to hear what she had to say, “
Great work Loonatics. You safely recaptured all the escaped animals and had Tamer put away where he belongs. He wont be using his wipe any time soon. Speaking of which: Lexi, I'm glad to see you up and about after your resent injury.”

Lexi crossed her arms and replied, “
It's gonna take a lot more then that to get this Bunny down.” Lexi said the last bit as she placed on hand on her hip and pointed her thumb at herself.

That's good to hear. Take the rest of the day off, you deserve it. Zadavia out.” As the hologram disapered, allowing the room to retain it's original light, Lexi clenched her fist as her upper back released a stinging pain. To her relief no one noticed.

'
It's probable nothing.' Lexi thought, 'If it turns out to be anything serious I'll go talk to Tech. For if I tell the guys, an it turns out to be nothing, they'll get way to worried for nothing. There so protective.'

The Loonatics spent that evening watching movies. Lexi hafting to readjust every so often to relive pressure on her back. Luckily the guys where absorbed into the movies. The watched late into the night till finally Duck declared he was' hitting the hay' and was shortly fallowed by the others.



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ooh, I like this, I wonder whats gonna happen. *grabs popcorn and waits*

and I wouldn't worry about ur spelling, its fine, and I spell WAY worse than u do. kk :)

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I agree with Maei. Also...

Me and Loonatics: UPDATE!



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Ice:Thanks

Maei: Thanks, and you do realize this is the re-written copy of the story? You could go and read ahead through the old one. It's the same story with only a little difference. It also has a squeal: Father Bird(which I'll proble re-wright as well) and a squeal after that, my current story:I'm a country gal. (my own Fan season if you will)

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Maei: Thanks, and you do realize this is the re-written copy of the story? You could go and read ahead through the old one. It's the same story with only a little difference. It also has a squeal: Father Bird(which I'll proble re-wright as well) and a squeal after that, my current story:I'm a country gal. (my own Fan season if you will)


 I am aware, and I could but would just rather not. At least not at this time, I am interested in reading it, and if I had more time I probly would read the 1st copy. But since u are rewriting it little by little anyway, and I only have time to read a little of the fanfics, I figure it kinda evens out, ya know, kinda a pacing thing. Especially since I really don't have time right now. (but when I get I would probly read the 1st copy)



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Oh, that makes sens. Thanks for readingaww

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Part 5

Lexi had troubles sleeping that night. She would place herself in a comfortable position then readjust as her back would start stinging. She tried to keep her back from being touched, but having a hammock for a bed didn't help. When it was 6 AM Lexi decided against trying to get any more sleep and got up. After all it was only an hour earlier then when she and the others usually got up.

She figured she could stay in her Pjs for the time being. She was a bit startled when she saw Ace in the kitchen. With the paper in one hand and coffee in the other. He to was still in his night dressings. Lexi walked passed him to get her own cup of morning brew. Ace looked up at her and was taken back by how tired she look. Besides Tech Lexi often pointed out the bodies need for rest. To see her tired was like watching Rev moving slow. Not natural.

“Didn't get much sleep I'm guessin'?” Ace asked keeping his eyes on an article of his paper.

“Huh? Oh, ya.” Lexi replied turning to him, “How about you? Your up early and look a bit rugged yourself.

Ace had jolted awake that morning. Painting hard and sweeting bullets. A recurring nightmare he could never remember, but it frightened him. He had it any time his team members had a bad accident. Besides Tech. Ace motioned it was because Tech had the ability to regenerate. A upper hand the others didn't have.

Ace took a sipped of his coffee and then answered Lexi, “Somet'in' woke me up, don't know what,” That was a lie. He heated lieing to his friends, but he didn't wish them to worry over something as trivial as a bad dream, “tried to go back to sleep but couldn't.”

Lexi gave him small nod and sat down. Being careful with her back against the chair. Ace took note of her behavior, but thought it best not to ask. After all, every one should be aloud to act a bit strange once in a wile. Besides Lexi would tell him something was wrong; she always did.

Lexi lend on the table and took a sip of her drink, but as she sat back, not being as careful as before, pain ran through her. She jolted forewords. Knocking over her drink She shut her eyes and gasped in pain. Her breathing was off as she waited for the pain to subside.

Ace was up and over to her in less then a second, “Lex are you all right?

She looked up at him. He was worried perhaps even frightened, “I-I guess that hit yesterday did more damage then I thought.”

Lexi sat up, keeping away from the back of the chair. Ace looked down for a moment then back at his female friend, “Perhaps I should have a look, so dat we know what your dealing wit'

Lexi shrugged and positioned herself to were Ace could get to her back. What harm could it do? Ace went to her back. He gently lifted the lower corner. His expression went to one of confusion and concern. He didn't see her normal peach color. Instead he gazed upon a bruise of blue, black, purple, and in places red. He fallowed the bruise up her back. Lifting the back of her shirt till the wasn't much to lift.

“Ace?!” Lexi managed to say. She had to hold down her shirt so that her frontal body view wasn't reviled.

“Lexi, there's a bruise on your back. From you left shoulder blade,” Ace placed his index and middle finger on her shoulder bald, being cautious about it. Lexi felt her heart start to pound in her chest. “all the way...to....der.” He traced the mark down to her lower back. A diagonal line across her whole back. “In some arias it looks as if he almost broke skin.

Ace placed her shirt back and walked back into her site. She felt her heart slow back down.

“No wonder it hurt.” Lexi commented.

“I could help you wit' dat.” Lexi could detect a hint of shyness coming from her leader.

She looked at him confused. How could her help, “What do you mean?

“I'll show you what I mean.” He rubbed his hands together and walked over to her again, “Ya mite brace yourself. Dis could feel...Awkward.

Before she could ask she knew what Ace meant.



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Hey, nice rewrite of this chapter!

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Ace quickly slipped his hands under her shirt and placed them firmly on her upper back. Lexi, taken by surprise by Aces sudden movement, clucked the bottom of her chair to stop herself from falling back on him. There was a huge different between two fingers and two hands. One would think that all her mussels would grow tens, but the warmth he applied relaxed her. For the second time she felt her heart racing. Ready to break through her rib cage and jump out.

Ace slid his hands to her lower back. She heard his breathing change. It came in short, nerves, breaths, and his heart. It was usually a steady bet. Even in combat he managed to stay steady. It's not like she listened to him often, but she knew her team mates hearts and breathing patterns well. Something she had picked up over the years. She grew used to hearing it, but she was always alerted to when they jumped out of there regular patterns. Like now. His nerves breathing and raped heart beating made her wonder . She didn't know who's heart was beating faster, the one rapidly beating in her chest, or Aces, who's was beating as fast if not faster thin hers.

Ace gently started to rub and massage around the bruise. As he did he asked himself, 'Why do I feel so nerves? Why is my heart abut to come out my mouth? Why did I jump on the opportunity to do this?'

His answer? Silents. He pushed the questions out of his mind and focused on his task. He leaned forward a lightly breathed on her to add more heat.

All this got Lexi asking herself, 'Why doesn't this feel wrong? If any of the other guys tried this I would of Brain Blasted them the moment they touched me. But right now. As he massages my entire back why doesn't it feel? Besides a little awkward, why doesn't it feel uncomfortable, wrong, like it shouldn't be happening. Why douse it fell... fell right? Like, that out of all the guys he should be touching me. Wow that could be taken the wrong way! Why is Aces hart racing? Why is mine? He's helped me dozen of times. I know I've all ways had a small attraction for him but this, I don't know what this is.'

Lexi stopped thinking about these questions and closed her eyes. Allowing Ace to rubbed the line of bruising several times before returning back to her line of sight. Lexi leaned back on to the chair and made a tiny smile. It didn't hurt! Seeing Lexi smile made Ace feel a strange happiness. He got a dish towel and started to clean up the spilled coffee. There was an awkward silents in the room. Nether of the two would look up at each other. Lexi took picked up the cup and placed it in the sink.

“Th-Thank you.” Lexi said braking the silents standing by the sink

Your welcome, and you might still wont Tech to look at dat later. ” Ace replied looking up at her. He took the towel and placed it next to the sink. The Looked at each other an smiled.

“I will and...Where'd you learn that?” Lexi asked out of peer curiosity.

“Ehh, Lets jest say you learn a lot being a Stunt Double.” Ace smiled. They sat back down. Lexi remembered that Ace had been a Stunt Double for two years before becoming a hero.

“Oh, best not strain your back for da rest of da day, or it could start hurting worse then when you woke up. Trust me, I learned dat da hard way.” Ace added

“Oh? And how did you learn?” Lexi asked.

Ace chuckled and told her a story of his old years as a double. The one story led to others and so the two told each other stories of there past. Stories that they had never really shared as Loonatics. Stories of there more personal lives that there not always comfortable with sharing. There conversation stopped when the others started to wake up.

As the week went by both, Lexi and Ace, got up an hour earlier then usual. They'd spend there time talcking about things they wouldn't talk about with the others. Ace learned that Lexi had to go to speech lessons at the age of 6 and Lexi learned that at the age of 10 Ace's parent had died in a car crash and he was put into the foster system. He didn't have any aunts or uncles to take him in.



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I know I'm not much of an AcexLexi shipper but nice story. aww.gif And I know this is late but I agree with you it's best to ignore the a**holes.

Please continue!

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Part 7

It was a dull week. No commotion from super powered villeins, no mad man with a renegade invention, no nothing. It was an enigma that happen every few months or so. A time the loonaetics use for there advantage.

It was Saturday, nothing happened during the day, and the night clubs in the western side of Acmetrpolic where calling out to them. They switched there uniforms for casual clothing. Rev in a red hoodie and baggy blue jeans. Looking like the kid brother of the group. In a purple tee and gym pants was Slam. Duck was wearing an orange soccer shirt with white paints equipped a chin going from one of his front pocket to his back one. Tech had a green button up work shirt on with it's sleeves folded up to his elbows, a black tie, and black paints. Ace was wearing a light blue work shirt, unbuttoned and short sleeved, over a white tank top. His denim jeans fit snugly on his frame and had a brown belt through it's loops. Lexi had on a whit sleeveless shirt and black paints. A black band wrapped around her mid section. From under her breast down to above her hips. It was part of ether the paints or the shirt, hard to tell, but it was part of either one it complemented her thin waist and body. And she let her ears dangle down. Both the bunnies out of there usual colors.

At a club, entitled 'The Sonic Blast', the loonatics had conquered a table in the corner of the building. Now they engaged in conversation, nursing on there ordered drinks. Tech and Rev the voted designated drivers.

And thats when Duck finally realized he didn't have his uniform on and was standing there in his boxers!” Tech had finished telling a story of one of his and Ducks trips to the market. The hole table had burst into laughter. Duck narrowed his eyes and glared at the Coyote.

Tech, your despicable!” Duck said very annoyed. Every one only laughing harder. This only enraged the black water foul more, so he spat out “You know Tech you really are a DOG!”

He quickly stood up, his chair falling behind him, daring the k-9 to join him. At this comment every one stopped laughing and Tech was letting out a low growl. Tech stood up as well, the two ready to go one on one at any minuet. Lexi, quickly thinking, stepped between them. Pushing them apart the best she could. Now she stood in the middle of them, her hands on there chests to stop them from advancing forward.

Chill guys. Duck we where only having some fun. And Tech, you, me, and every one knows your a coyote not a dog. Duck was only trying to get to you. A little tooo successfully I mite add.” Lexi terned to address Danger Duck directly “Duck if you make another comment like that you leave hear with very few feathers.” Lexi lowered her arms, glared at them both, sat back down and crossed her arms. “This was suppose to be are day off, something that rarely happens these days, but if you two want to ruin it by fighting one of your best friends by all means continue.” Lexi finished with a hint of sarcasm.

Tech and duck looked at each other then down at the ground. Lexi was right. With that Tech and Duck retook there sets. As the two silently sat down the DJ started to play a high bet tech-no song. Rev started listening to the song. He looked away from there table, a cross all the others, and at the glowing dance floor that groups of people shook there bodies in rhythm to the pounding music. Lights of all colors flickered and moved from the sealing. Looking at it all gave Rev an idea to end the sudden tension.

Lexi's-right-it-is-are-day-off-so-I-vote-we-all-hit-the-dance-floor!!”

The Loonatics smiled and said there agreements. As they started for the dance floor Lexi looked back to see Ace had not fallowed the group. She turned back to him.

You comin' Ace?” Lexi asked

He looked up at her, “Na, you guys go on wit' out me. I don't feel much like dancin'.”

Lexis face fell a little “You sure?”

Ya, I'll be fine.” Ace gave her a big smile.

All right.” Lexi shrugged, and left to joined the others

Ace stared down at the orange drink he had ordered. Swishing the ice this way and that. His mind was wander off on him. Confusing thought larked in the corner of his mind. He looked up at the dancing figures. His team mates had successfully blended into the crowed. The club was full of Human and Anthros alike. He straitened up in order to see above some of the people hopelessly seeking one in particular. The crowd thinned a little making the one he was looking fore visitable.

He sighed when he saw her. Ace stared at the dancing Lexi, and went deep in to thought.

'Why cant I get her out of my head? It was Monday I helped her with her back. But...still..that moment...I.' His eyes started to followed Lex. A group of guys had gathered around her but non did she actually dance with, 'Man look at her dance. She could bring sexy back any day. Did I jest think that!? It's strange, I find it a pity she's dance alone, yet I'm glad not to see her dancing with any of those guys.' Ace looked down at he table, 'Come on Ace, get her out of your head! Jest STOP thinking about her!... But I can't. The more she tells me about herself the harder it is to ignore her. I think about her even when meditating. What are these feelings? I can't act on them...Can I?'

Lexi looked back to see Ace in deep thought. She let her arms fall to her side as she shook her head lightly, “Oh Ace.”

She walked back to there table, “Ace?”

His eyes had widened as he suddenly jolted up and out of his confusing thought. Aces sudden jolt made Lexi jump back a little. Throw all of it Ace had not noticed Lexi as she had stopped dancing and walked over to her dear leader.

Oh, hay Lexi.” Ace said rubbing the back of his neck embarrassed by his reaction.

Ace why do you do this?” Lexi asked him with concern.

Do what?” Ace asked staring up at her in confusion. Lexi took a set besides him.

It's are day off and all you can do is sit hear in thought. You don't always haft to be the fearless leader. Come on Ace, loosen up and have some fun. I everyone ells has.” She pointed to the dance floor with her thumb.

Ace fallowed Lexis finger to see Slam and Duck dancing with some women. Rev and Tech where in conversation with some female Anthros. Tech looking a little embarrassed but still showing a broad smile. Ace smiled, looked up at Lexi, and shrugged.

Lexi smiled back, having an idea pop into her head, stood up leaned in towards Ace and said “You listen hear, Ace Bunny, I'm going to make sure you have fun tonight!”

Lexi grabbed Ace and pulled him out to the dance floor. Ace, caught off garred, had no choice but to fumble and fallow. Lexi was quickly able to get back into the grove of the music. Ace took a few moment till he was able to join her. At fist they only danced next to each other. Ace blending in with the other guys buzzing around Lexi. But soon enough Ace found his hand placed on Lexis wait. Realizing where he had his hands, Ace was going to remove them, but before he could Lexi slid them down to her hips and placed her hands at the base of his neck. He looked at her. She smiled at him. He smiled back.

'Ne, what's a dance between friends?'

As the music continued there bodies grew closer. When the music went quiet Lexi and Ace found them self pulled together by them selfs and the other, both their lower and upper torsos touching. Arms wrapped tightly around neck and hips/waist. They stared into each others eyes. Aces blue sapphires vs. Lexis green emeralds.

As Ace looked into her eyes he saw their regular twinkle, he saw her kindness, happiness, strength and her childishness. The things he always saw in her eyes, and much enjoyed. But their was some thing ells in her eyes. A feeling of sorts. Giving her eyes a glow and making them soft with a feeling of a type of happiness. Different from any he'd ever seen in those emerald eyes.

Lexis expression suddenly changed. The feeling Ace saw vanishing. Lexi blinked a few times and her eyes broke a way from his. She jest realizing what had jest happened. Lexi started to walk away with out saying a word, and heeded for the stares that lead to the buildings upper deck where more people grouped in conversations, and where 3 balconies leaned out over the sidewalk out side.

Ace stood their, dumbfounded, for a few more seconds before he to realized what jest took place, and took off after Lexi. When Ace had caught up to Lexi she was standing at the railing of the middle balcony looking up, the noon sky that they had entered the club in had changed in to the star filled night.

Ace leaned on the railing with his back, his arms up on top of the bar, and on the right side of Lexi.

There beautiful. Aren't they?” Lexi said still looking up. Ace was looking at her eyes.

Ya...I mean...what?” Ace had whispered the first three words.

The stars. My Pa and I use to look at them together.” Lexi turned her body to face him, stared up a couple extra seconds before turning her gaze on Ace.

Ace looked up at the sky to see the billions of twinkling lights then looked at Lexi and, there it was again. That softness in her eyes. They where so luring. Lexi tilted her head a little to the left making it even more irresistible. Ace didn't quit know how it happened, who made the jester first, who leaned in first, all he know is that it happened.



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Wow!

This is definately one of my favourite stories, Siamese!  (But I still love your others...especially...wait, I don't know....I like all of them soooooooo much!!!!!!!)

!!!!PANIC!!!! (Again...)

I really like the descriptions too, and the drawing of Lexi!  they're very good.

You're really talented at drawing on paint.  I can't, the lines always go shaky on me! 

I prefer to draw with good old fashioned pencil and paper....with a good eraser!!!

I can't wait for your next update, seeing the small changes you made are interesting, and they really make a difference to the content!

Also, I can't wait to see the other drawings of the Loonatics, I know they'll be awesome!

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Wow!

This is definately one of my favourite stories, Siamese!  (But I still love your others...especially...wait, I don't know....I like all of them soooooooo much!!!!!!!)

!!!!PANIC!!!! (Again...)

I really like the descriptions too, and the drawing of Lexi!  they're very good.

You're really talented at drawing on paint.  I can't, the lines always go shaky on me! 

I prefer to draw with good old fashioned pencil and paper....with a good eraser!!!

I can't wait for your next update, seeing the small changes you made are interesting, and they really make a difference to the content!

Also, I can't wait to see the other drawings of the Loonatics, I know they'll be awesome!


Thanks PG.

And I love the good old pencil as well, but my scanners gon ca-put! So I'm stuch with paint.
The others will probly be a wile. After all to do this one all I did was agust the one I made for my Top FLIGHt story.

again thank you

 



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Lexi's arms where around Ace's neck, pulling him close and tight. Her eyes where closed, and so where his. Aces arms on her shoulders and back. Cosing her to arch her back slightly. There lips: Locked onto the other anthro bunny.

Both of there hearts where racing. There minds going to fast to recall any any of the speeding thoughts. The only thing they would retain was the feelings. The others touch, the beating hearts, and the emotional explosion happening in each of them. The two didn't want the moment to end, and for a moment time did not seem to exist. All there was was him, her, and that very first kiss.

The need for oxygen is was drove them apart. When they brook apart they opened their eyes slowly and where left listening to the music that played in the background. It was a 20th century song called '8th world wonder' by Kimberley Locke.

...guess that I'm just falling deeper into something I've never known.
But the way that I'm feeling, makes me realize that it can't be wrong.
You're love's like a summer rain, washing my doubts away.

Seven days and seven nights of thunder,
The waters rising and I'm slipping under.
I think I fell in love with the 8th world wonder.

It's only been a week, but it's coming over me.
It's making me believe that you're the one for me.

Seven days and seven nights of thunder,
The waters rising and I'm slipping under.
I think I fell in love with the 8th world wonder...

Lexis cheeks where becoming hot as a blush came to appear. Ace was smiled as he gazed at her with soft eyes. Lexi was looking down, still blushing, with the same softness in her eyes and a very similar smile. Ace's arms where now around her hips and waist. The palms of Lexis hands where on his chest.

Lexi looked up into his eyes. She let out a happy sigh. She broke away from his arms and leaned once again on the balcony railing staring up at the night sky. Lexi was trying to holed back her excitement and happiness swelling up in side her. Ace, still smiling, stood their and looked Lexi up and down a time or two, before he too leaned on the railing.

He tapped the bar a couple of times and walked his fingers around on the railing. Lexi watched his childness in the corner of her eye. Causing her to have a smile trickle across her lips. Seeing the smile made Ace smile even more. Neither one could stop the repetitive happy grins.

Ace sighed, looked a way, looked at Lexi and said, “Well I guess are friendship is definitely over.”

Lexi straitened up and looked at Ace with sadness as if to say 'why?'

Ace was smiling still “Well after what jest happened I'd say dat we're more den jest friends.”

Lexi gave him a happy and yet annoyed look. She walked over and laid her head on his shoulder. Ace, now standing striate, felt nerves and almost shy. Something really strange for him. He slowly and hesitantly wrapped his arm around her body.

Lexi felt the warmth of him as arm now lay across her back and his hand on her arm. Lexi lifted her left hand and and intertwined her fingers with his right and free hand. They stayed their staring up at the twinkling lights, and the blue full moon, enjoying the moment. After a few songs went by they decided to return to the dance room before any one got suspicions.

“Wait.” Ace said holding on to Lexis arm to stop her from leaving.

What's wrong Ace?” Lexi asked, looking at him confused and concerned.

“Well...Da guys.” He wrapped his arms around her, but still allowing space between them, “What will dey t'ink?...I mean, I'm your guy's leader.”

And I'm your right hand.” Lexi added, looking down. “The others could take it badly, or the wrong way.”

There was a quiet pause between them

“Maybe den... We shouldn't tell dem.” Ace said. Lexi looked up at him a bit surprised. Ace, there always truthful leader, willing to keep there relationship secret? “At least...Not until we have a foundation to work with and an idea of how dey will react.

Lexi hugged him, “All right.”



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Yey!

You updated, again!

Once again, I love the few minor edits, great work Siamese!

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Ace Bunny dressed for the Sonic Blast!



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Wow!

That's so cool, you obviously described Ace really well, that's just how I imagined him!

You definately have a talent at drawing in 'Paint'!

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That is sssssssooooooo cool!

Rev looks so cute in that picture!
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(Baby Cute, not guy cute)

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Wow!

Duck's stance really captures his attention seeking persona, I love it!

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Thanks PG. I hope to get Slam and Tech up soon, buuuut till then hears the next chapter

Part 9

Ace and Lexi continued there early morning rising. Secretly rising an hour before the others. Now they greeted each other with a kiss or a more then friends hug. The two rabbit enjoyed this time. A time where they where able to be Ace and Lexi the couple, and not Ace and Lexi the team mates. They continued to dive into each others past, but they still kept things from each other. People deserve there secrets and somethings can be a little to painful to bring up.

They did well in keeping there relationship hidden, but small behavior actions could have been noticed by watchful eyes. When separating the team into groups, Ace used to send Lexi off as the leader of the second half, but now he unconsciously kept her with him. A protectiveness he was unaware of. In fact, he had been defending her quite a bit recently. Stopping, or reversing, Ducks continues snide comments towards there lone female team mate. Making sure he was there when ever she accidentally tripped or stumbled. Running to her add in battle. All the wile letting her have her space.

When walking past each other they would lightly touch the others back, shoulder, or arm. Giving each other the satisfaction of there partners touch. Ace would from time to time wink, or smile, at Lexi. Often she would blush in return. She was thankful her uniform concealed it, but she knew Ace could tell. Perhaps he recognized the smile she had when blushing.

Lexi would often look at Ace with her Soft Eyes' as Ace had named it. The feeling she had showed at the club was continuously there. Becoming a riddle Ace jest had to figer out. What was that feeling in her emerald eyes? Ace didn't know, but, oh, how he enjoyed it.

They had always sat next to each other during meetings and what not, but now they sat close enough to hold hands under the table. Or they would there foot up against the others. Rubbing there show to the others. Sometimes, not to often, they'd rub the others leg.

These small tokens of affection continued for a couple of months, but it could only satisfy them so much. They wanted to be able to hold each other, sit so close that there skin would touch, and rest there head upon the other. So it makes only sens they'd find away to satisfy this lust for touch and closeness.

HQ was dark with nigh time. The Loonatics had hit the sack some time ago. He tried to sleep, let the feeling o tiredness take him. Let the silents of his dark room, with the exception of the red glow of his digital clock, rock him to the world of dreams. He was still awake, waring his yellow P.J.s, laying in the exact middle of the bed hands behind his head, and blinking blindly at the sealing. He was thinking of her.

Ace couldn't stop himself. He closed his eyes. He could see her. As clearly as if she was there. He took in her details. The way her hair fell. How her ears curved. The precise angle she enjoyed tipping her head. Every thing.

But when he felt a dreaminess start to take him he heard the hissing of his door. He opened his eyes wide and stared blindly around the room. Looking for the spot where the shadow of a person, or thing, could be in the darkness. He was tempted to activate his vision, but decided to begin with a gentler way.

“Who's de-” Ace stopped as a finger was lightly pressed to his lips.

“Shh.” Lexi whispered into the night air.

Ace smiled at the sound. He scooted over to make room when he felt her legs slipping under the blanket next to him. He didn't question, think, or care why she was there. All that seemed to matter was that she was there, next to him. Lexi snuggled close to him. Ace, seeming by instinct, wrapped his arms around her body. He felt Lexis head suddenly resting on his chest. He smiled. Ace rested his head on hers to where his check was touching the top of her head.

Ace lifted his head for a moment, in order to kiss the top of her head, but at the moment she had shifted, and he found himself pressing his lips to hers. Not that ether could complain. They held it for a few minuets before snuggling back together. Not a word was spoken. Not a word was needed. He closed his eyes and smiled. Something told him she was smiling too.

The next night, Ace returned the favor by sneaking into Lexis room and gently sliding into her hammock next to her. They continued this nightly ritual. Alternating room, but always crawling into bed next to the other. No, they did not let temptation get the best of them. There relationship was young and innocent, and nether of them wished to take that away yet. After all, there relation was a secret, and such an act could lead to heart break or something more life altering. Who would they have to confide in if needed? So, no, not yet.

Now, almost 4 months sens there very first kiss, Ace found himself in her room. There bodies weaved together so perfectly. His arms wrapped around her; her hand on his shoulder and chest. Peaceful and joyful. Content with his world, Ace closed his eyes and aloud sleep to take him.



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Awww, that chapter was sweet!

Again, I like the little edits and detail that you have included in the rewrite of the story!


"No, they did not let temptation get the best of them. There relationship was young and innocent, and nether of them wished to take that away yet. After all, there relation was a secret, and such an act could lead to heart break or something more life altering. Who would they have to confide in if needed? So, no, not yet."

I found that ^  part interesting, and I like how you've shown that they haven't...you know, yet, because they don't want to ruin their relationship, and instead they want to keep it innocent. 


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Thanks PG. I hope to get the next chapter up soon, I've decided to add a few *new* chapters to the story.

To make Ace and Lexi relation ship go through a bit of hard ship.

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Hmm...interesting....*Stroke beard*

(FYI, I have NO facial hair whatsoever....except from my eyebrows and eyelashes....if they count)

Though sometimes I wish I could grow a moustache...

I can't wait to see what you add in, and what happens!!!!!!!

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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Wow!

That's amazing!

It's so much like him, the stance, the eyes...everything!!!!!!!

It's so...amazing, awesome, cool, spectacular.....And I can't think of any more words to describe it!

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....Now where's Cassidy..?



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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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Wow!

Okay, that is officially amazing!

Siamese, you need to work for WB, You could probably create an even better new series than they would, with your story writing abillities and your drawing styles; the pics look just like the Loonatics!

Well Done!   biggrin



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Part 10

The early rays of sun light came through the window. They sky outside gray as the sun had yet to truly rise. Lexi opened here eyes into slits. She blinked a few times, slightly squeezing Ace when her body tensed into a stretch, as she woke up. She lifted herself up slightly. Gentle enough not to wake Ace. She smiled when she felt his arms still around her.

She looked at him. So peaceful and calm and handsome in her eyes. She placed her hand under his chin, closed her eyes, and kissed him. Aces eyes fluttered open, but quickly re closed as he tightened his hold from last night and kissed her back. He pulled her closer to him. Lexi couldn't stop herself from smiling and lightly giggling, causing them to break the kiss.

Ace gave a chuckle too as he laid back and looked at her. His eyes and grin where genital. He loosened his grip on her. Lexi smiled back and gave Ace her soft eye.

She laid back down next to him and said gently, “Morning Ace.”

“Morning Lex.” He replied kissing her cheek.

The hammock stated to gently rock. They laid there for a moment. The cloth of the hammock pushing them together. A joyful closeness. Eventually, Lexi gave a sigh and swinged her legs off the side. Her bare feet gingerly landing on the floor. Gravity cased Ace to take the new found space in the hammock. They smiled at each other before Ace too got up.

They quickly changed into there uniforms. Something they did still in the confines of Lexis room. There back to each other to present some form of privacy, and being respectful enough not to look till the other said okay.

After completing the morning ritual of making themselves presentable, Lexi opened the door. Ace pressed himself against the wall next to it as Lexi carefully listened. Ace watched as pink energy encased her still dangling ears. A few days back the had made the mistake of not taking this careful action, and had been caught by a very sleepy Duck. Duck, not being a real early bird, had merely passed them by and forgot ever seeing them. Lexi couldn't clearly remember if Ducks eye had been open or shut the hole time.

Not all there team mates where as groggy in the mornings there more egotistical friend, so before leaving there quarters Lexi would listen for sounds of activity. Today was 4 snores going from shallow and quick, semi loud, mumbled words and near silents, to another near silents with a slight sucking sound.

Lexi smiled, 'All asleep.'

She took Aces hand and together they walked to the kitchen. Settling down for a morning meal. Once they had plates in hand and where at the table Ace sparked up there conversation with a question.

“Lexi?” Ace began.

“Yes, Ace.”

“Last night I was t'inkin' a little. Dat night, when came to my room, why 'd you come?”

Lexi slightly blushed as she looked down and poked her fork at her breakfast, “Well, I remember that I was having trouble falling asleep. M-my mind started to wander off on me. I was, actually,” Her blush deepened, “thinking of you. I found myself wanting to be next you so I got of bed and...you know the rest.

Ace leaned on his hand and smiled at her, “Ya...I do.”

A small chuckle from him made Lexi look up, “What's so funny?”

Ace grinned wider, almost shutting his eyes. He sat back up, “Another thought came through my head. We've been together officially, yet unofficially, for four months. If dat makes sens.

Lexi smiled and raised one brow up, “Ya? I don't see any humor in that.”

“Let me finish.” Ace said matching her look, “If you think about it, Lex, you and I have been dating for a very long time.

Lexi looked at him more confused this time, “What are you talking about?”

Ace chuckled, “Sens we first became a team Lex. Over the last three years we've gone to see so many movies, jest you and me, diners, walks through the park, and more. Did things that are usual considered a date.”

“Hum,” Lexi pressed her lips together then looked at him, “ Your both right and wrong with that statement Ace.”

“huh?”

“We have gone on 'Dates' all that time, but there was about a six month time period before the meatier that we also knew each other.”

Ace smiled, “Oh ya, but it was only six months, and we saw each other what 8, 10 times tops? Not a lot to call each other real friends.”

“Then why did you come to me for help?” Ace looked at her. Smile and enjoyment for the conversation melting into a small frown and tinge of pain.

“Ace?” Lexi placed her hand on his. He held her hand back, rubbing his thumb across her skin, but didn't look at her or reply. “Ace? You've still never told me what happened to you that night.

“Lexi I-” Ace looked up at her she froze at the look in his eyes. Pain, “Please don't make me talk about it.”

She gave him a gentle, understanding, grin, “It's okay, Ace, we all have are secrets.

They leaned close to each other. Aiming for a kiss, but before there lips could meet Lexi place her hand on Aces chest and pushed him back. She turned her head a listened.

“Tech 's coming.” They placed a little distance between them to not look so suspicious. Overtime Lexi had become adroit at deciphering the different step patters of her friends. Techs where usually firm and even. Ducks had a small echo. Lexi presumed it was because of his webbed feet. Rev, though slower in the mornings, still had a even quick beet. Slam had a heavier sound and wide spacing.

Tech was also in his uniform when he walked in. he looked groggy as he walked to the coffee maker. They could tell he had pulled another overnighter and had probably woken up from a hour or two of sleep. Wouldn't be the first time, wouldn't' be the last.

“Morning guys.” Tech greeted.

“Morning Tech.” Lexi and Ace said in unison. Quicker then intended. Both bunnies froze at there reply. Tech ****ed an eye brow, but went back to fixing himself hi own morning meal. Lexi felt herself give a sigh of relief.

At times she wondered if Tech knew about them. He was a genius and could see small changes in things. Why not in behavior.

Slowly the others joined them for the morning meal. The two being pulled out of there world that only had the two of them and being thrusted into the one where they couldn't be. Not Yet.



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Hmm....Interesting...

So Ace and Lexi knew (of) eachother before the meteor...I wonder how....

"They quickly changed into there uniforms. Something they did still in the confines of Lexis room. Their back to each other to present some form of privacy, and being respectful enough not to look until the other said okay."

^ That's sweet, it shows that they trust eachother with personnal stuff like that.  I had often wondered in the original (Fist version) of 'Secret Affairs' whether that line meant that they changed in different rooms, or whether they did indeed change in front of eachother!   So thanks for clearing that up!

I was chuckling to myself when Ace was talking to Lexi in the kitchen (After he asked her why she first came into his room)  y'know, when they were talking about dating and stuff.  I thought he was hinting at something....(Since they had been going out for so long, that and he's a dude and a rabbit)   But I guess I got that bit wrong, but it did make me chuckle to myself.

 

Hmm...So I wonder what this 'Hard Ship' will be between Ace and Lexi...the cover you did showed Lexi looking as though she was crying, and Ace looking sad...

Hmm.........


Great chapter, and I can't wait for your next update, Siamese!



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Part 11

“Why dose Tech always haft to wake up so early?” Ace said as the door shut behind Lexi. He walked over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. Both bunnies mow dressed in there pajamas after a long day. Todays call was for run away robots. A new brand that was accidentally downloaded with a virus. The police had been unable to contain the problem and called the Loonatics. They destroyed and deactivated the robots they came in contact with, but knew it was highly possible they'd get a call some time during the night to stop any that may still become infected with the virus.

“I don't know, but I don't think he's a coyote.” Lexi replied.

“You don't?”

“Nope! I think he's a rare species of bird known as the Early Bird.” Ace gave a chuckle and lightly pocked Lexi in the side. Lexi jerked away a little, with a smile, “Ace don't.

“Don't do what? Oh you mean dis?” He poked her again.

“That tickles.” Lexi giggled.

Ace gave her a look, “Oh it dose, dose it?”

“Ace don-” Lexi was cut short as she erupted into fits of giggles. Aces hands continued to run up and down Lexis sides. Soon Ace had Lexi on the ground laughing. Lexi managed to reach up and dig her fingers into his fur. In surprise, Ace jumped up off her and landed on the floor near by.

They both sat there laughing. Lexi crawled over to Ace and laid on top of him. “We really should be more quiet Ace. Some one's going to hear us.”

Ace smiled and giggled before getting to his feet, “Maybe. You coming?” Ace asked as he pointed to the bed with his thumb.

Lexi reached up to him, “Lift me up.

Ace smiled, “Okay.” He grabbed her around the waist and hulled her over his shoulder.

Lexi let out a short high pitch scream, “Ace put me down!”

Ace looked over his shoulder, “Make up your mind, girl!

He playfully threw Lexi onto the bed. She landed with a soft 'umff' before Ace placed himself on top of her.

You jerk.” Lexi smiled up at him.

“What ever.” Ace replied before placing his lips on hers.

They escape for air then went back in. As they kissed Ace slid his hand to the small of her back, under the shirt, and softly stroked with his fingers in small cericals. Lexi didn't seem to mind. He brought his attention to her neck and continued to kiss as Lexi wrapped her arms around him.

Without thinking, Ace removed his hand from her back to her hip. Slipping his hand into her paints waist band. He gently started to play with the elastic bands of her under garments. That hit Lexi like a ton of bricks as a red flag shot up in her mind. She pushed Ace up slightly and said, “Ace, what are you doing?”

Realizing what he was doing, where there actions where leading, Ace removed himself from on top of her. Siting up on the bed across from her. Lexi also sat up, pulling her legs up to her chest and wrapping her arms around them. Ace looked at her and he became slightly confused. Lexi, though not looking at him, looked scared.

Ace didn't understand. Why would she be scared? Ace wouldn't lie, he wanted to be with Lexi in every sens of the word, but he would never do any thing that would put there relationship in jeopardy. She must of known this.

Then Ace remembered what she had said that morning.

'we all have are secrets.'

What where her secrets? Where they why she was scared?

Ace took her hand his and placed his free hand on her cheek. Getting her to look at him.

“Lexi, you know I'd never make you do any thing you don't want to do? Right?” He searched her emerald eyes for an answer.

Her eyes sparkled as she smiled, “I know Ace.”

Ace smiled back, kissed her, then turned off the light, “Lets go to sleep.”

They both snuggled into the blankets together. And jest as they got comfortable and relaxed the lights in the room automatically turned on and flashed red as the buildings alarm went off.

The two bunnies looked at each other and groaned.



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GASP!   I know what the secret is (So that's how it eads into 'I'm a Country Girl'...)

Nice chapter, it was sweet, yet....shocking at the same time....

I can't wait for the next update!  biggrin

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