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Here's my OC Maei's story, hope u like it.

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Chapter 1: Adding 6

The sun streatched its arms across Acmetropolis, it seemed to be a blissful day. Other than that, all was routine with the Loonatics. Ace was sipping coffee at the table. Lexi was next to him reading a magazeen called "The Acme Stars". Slam was taking numerous amounts of food out of the fridge, and making a sandwich of it it. And Duck was fiddling with his MP3 player 4000. But Rev and Tech were no where in site. Just then Zadavia walked in.

"Hey Zadavia." They all greeted
"Hello Loonatics" she responded softly
"Hey Zadavia, have you seen Tech or Rev today?" Questioned Ace "We haven't seen them in while"
"Ah yes acctually, I asked them to help me with something. Whch is partly the reason I just came in. You have an assignment."
"What is this assignment exactly"
"You will find out right now"

They all looked at each other slightly puzzled before following her into the main Head Quarters.

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Tech and Rev were already there. So the other 4 took a seat, and waited.

"Alright boss-lady, whats all this about?" Duck asked.
She looked at duck with an annoyed expression
"Team, you are not the only Loonatics" She began "There are other potential members out there, 6 to be exact"
Duck interupted her-"Oh great more rooming in with us, as if this place wasn't crowded enough. I'm buying a lock for my door."
"Duck, quiet! They are not moving in with you. At least not perminatly. Since there are 6 of them, you will be assigned one each, your assignment is to act as mentors to the one you are matched with." 
"Oh sweet, when do we get to choose?"
"You don't choose your partner, the the pairings are personality based. So you will end up getting someone who acts the most similar to you."         
Duck thought for a moment. "So I'm gonna get a powerful, ladies man stud!" Everyone stared angerly at Duck. "What?!"

Zadavia gestured Tech and Rev to pull up the files.
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First on screen was a light brown Lynx. She was on the tall side, skinny, and had pink long flowing hair. She was wearing a pink tang top, with a white skirt.

"Her name is Kayti (pronounced Katy). Her powers are Sourcery. And her Mentor is Rev."
"Oh cool!" Rev shouted

Next was a Female Possum. She had black short hair, and was a little on the short side herself. She was wearing a white top, jeans, and a small jacket that complimented the outfit.

"Her name is Taela Dyann (pronounced Tayla Dianne). Her power is a sonic scream. She also has an eye for fashion. Lexi you will be her Mentor."
"Awesome! Fashion diva."

After that was a young Raccoon/Cat Hybrid. She looked only about 15, with long blond hair, and wore a camoflage top, and white cut offs.

"Her name is Jaimee (pronounced Jamie). Her powers are super strength. And she will be paired with Slam."
"aghlrfigt (alright)"

Next was a tall male Hyena. He kept his outfit simple-A T-shirt, baggy jeans, and a dark blue light jacket.

"This is James Kyle, or JK for short. He has the poer to control water. He is also a prankster. And his mentor is...Duck."
Duck thought this over a moment. "Hmm, not bad...A prankster, I can teach him everything I know."

The others had a nervous look on their faces.

Then a picture of a white wolf appeared on screen. She looked smallish, very skinny, and was in a wheel chair. She wore a blue and white sundress, with light blue shoes. She also had braces around her legs.

"Her name is Maddeiline, or Maddei for short. She Turns objects into metal and control metal objects. Her mentor is Ace.

"Ne seriously? Working with metal seems more around Tech's area." Ace stated
"But her personality was matched best with yours, She also happens to be the leader type."
"Hmm, interesting."

"Last of course is Tech's partner."

An image of a brownish Raccon with long blue hair came up on screen. She wore a pink shirt with black skulls on it, a black skirt, and boots.

"Her name is Maei (pronounced May). She is a shapeshifter. She is also Jaimee's cousin."
"No offense Zadavia, but I don't see much of anything in common with her."
"Acctually Tech, you are paired with her by the way that she uses her powers."
Everyone looked puzzled. "What do you mean Tech asked?"
"Her powers are shapeshifting, but she experiments with them...you'll see what I mean."
Zadavia looked at the team. "I hope you are all pleased with your match ups.You will meet them tomorrow."

She gave a warm smile just before exiting the room.
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End of chapter 1.



-- Edited by maei13 on Sunday 29th of March 2009 07:22:17 PM

-- Edited by maei13 on Saturday 30th of May 2009 09:17:15 PM

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Interesting....Continue.

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Sorry I haven't had time to update. I just got back from my 3 day class trip to Boston Massachusets. Long drive...crazy/very disturbing 3 days. (I wrote a little about it in my D.A. journal http://unknown-artist23.deviantart.com/journal/23922329/ but not much)

I will update soon though...

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A very short chapter...sorry
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Chapter 2: Meet and Greet

The next day...
Sometime in the afternoon, the loonatics were summoned to the Main Headquarters, they knew "they" had come. Nervously, they all walked there, exchanging questioning expressions at each other on the way.

"I have to admit, I'm a little nervous." Tech stated "We sort of know their personalities, but...is that how they really are? I doubt we'll get along, my partner doesn't look even close to my type."

"Yea-I-know-what-you-mean!" Rev started "I-mean-don't get-me-wrong-mine-seems-nice-but-she-doesn't-look-like-the-videogame-sports-or-anything-like-that-type. More-of-a-pretty-in-pink-type-I-think.Its-just-"

"Put a sock in it Rev!" Duck interupted. "I don't know what you guys are talking about, I kinda like mine."

"Ne ya never met him Duck." said Ace

"No but I can tell. Besides he matches me best, so he must be great. I'm betting he's a chic magnet, just like me."

They all stared blacky, slightly snickering.

"All of the rest of you don't have much to worry about." Ace said "I didn't bring this up in front of Zadavia, but mine is in a wheel chair. I dunno if I could handle someone like that, ya know."

"Chill Ace!" Lexi interupted "Zadavia did say she was a leader, and judging from her being matched with you, she's probably very smart and brave and independent, like you..." After realizing what she just said, she began to blush a little.

Ace smiled, and went went red in the face a little himself. "Egh, thanx Lex." They quickly turned away from each other, and continued walking in silence.


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*Arriving in the Main Headquarters*

"Ah Loonatics, there you are." Zadavia warmly greeted them. "Are you ready to meet them?"

"As ready as will ever be I suppose" was Tech's response.

Zadavia looked at them questioningly for a moment, but continued anyway. "Alright, here they are."

The first one out was JK, he seemed rather excited about it. He walked out casually in an attempt to prove that he was not the least bit nervous. Then Zadavia directed him over to Duck.

Next was Taela, walking out nervously to meet her mentor. She was handed over to Lexi who happily greeted her with a warm smile.

Then came Kay. Rev had a joyous look on his face when he saw the cat. And an excited smile rose on both of their faces.

Jaim was next, she ran into the room and over to slam, where she stated a confident "Hi!"

Maddei came now. She wheeled out slowly on her wheelchair. She was nervous. She looked up at Ace, her eyes dreadfully, so dreadfully nervous looking. Her eyes met his, where Ace gently pulled out his hand, and grasped Maddei's. Showing her that it was ok.

Last was Maei. It took a few seconds, but the raccoon finally stepped out from the shadows to meet her mentor. She looked up into his eyes, drifted into a daze for a moment...and then colapsed onto the floor!

"What happened?!" Tech demanded to know.

Zadavia rushed over "*sigh*, I was afraid this may happen."

 



-- Edited by maei13 on Monday 30th of March 2009 10:47:54 PM

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GASP!

Why did she faint?

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You'll find out soon...eventually

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Eventually came early...

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Chapter 3: Maei's Ebony Heart


    Struggling to open her light blue eyes, Maei was beginning to wake up. Everything seemed blurry, and she really couldn't remember what happened too well. Light foot steps where pacing outside the dark room she was in. Maei sat straight up to hear a conversasion going on on the other side of the doorway.

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*In the hallway outside of Maei's room stood Zadavia, Ace, Tech, and another man*

The man was pacing back and forth with worryful eyes.

Zadavia then introduced the stranger. "This is Dr. Wayson." she said "He's the one who found grouped the 6 others together. And Who's idea it was to start this little assignment."

"Hello." Dr. Wayson greeted in a nervous tone.

"So ah doc...whats up with Maei there?" Ace asked

"Yeah I'd really like to know." Tech jumped in.

"Unfortunatly I cannot be the one to tell you. It's upto Maei."

"Why? you know whats wrong with her, I know you know!" Tech argued

Dr. Wayson stood blankly for a moment before providing a small vague ansewer. "Lets just say that it was a dark day for our team that day. A villian got away, and we lost one of our best members."

"Lost?" Ace questioned

"Lost, perminatly... If you want to know more you'll have to ask Maei, the rest of those details are her buissness."

"His name was Brae, he was her boyfriend." Said a small voice from behind them all. They all turned to see Maddei. "And she loved him...alot."

"But why did she faint?" Tech asked

"Brae was tall, smart, had big sparkly eyes, like you...I guess you reminded her of him. And it wasn't that long ago that he...passed on, I guess she's still heart broken."

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*Back in the Maei's room*

All she could do was sit there and remember... Poor Brae She thought. She could feel her eyes slowly fill up with tears.

She sat in that dark room all alone crying, praying, dying from his memory, then slowly fading from her thoughts. She did not want to forget him, how could she? But she also did not want to remember...all the pain, it was too much. Only one question ran through her mind, over and over again.."Why did it have to happen, I loved him, why?" Hate was slowly rising in her, saddness right behind. Then she heard faint knock from the door way. The small raccoon picked herself up, and draged her body to the door way.

"Hey Maei, I...uh, just wanted to see if you were okay. You seemed a little upset, so I just wanted to be sure..." Tech stated when entering the room. He wanted to say more, but got lost on her hypnotic blue eyes, which he could tell were swelled up with tears.

"I'm fine" Maei stated in a melancholy tone. "Just...not feeling well." Her long blue hair ran over half of her face, like a waterfall. Almost as if trying to hide her weakness, why she was crying.

Maei mainly liked to try to hide her eyes, they were like a mirror, always reflecting off her true self, her true emotions, and a side she did not like others to see. Tech knew, knew she was crying, and knew why... He said nothing, just walked straight up to her and threw his arms around the young girl. Surprised, she said nothing as well, but began to accept it. She put on his heart, geantly stroking it. The soft, black texture comforted her.

She had not felt this way since... Deep in thought, and in pain from it, she felt her warm tear drops slowly running down her cheek.

"I know." Tech whispered "I'm sorry..."

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End of Chapter 3



-- Edited by maei13 on Tuesday 31st of March 2009 09:26:22 PM

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Okay, it's official...I'll probably never finish this story.... So I'm just gonna tell what happened now.

Maei is a raccoon, she was in love with another anthro, who was a raccoon named Brae. They were on a mission one day, since they are all part of a different team, and it was against a mad man called the harvester. He was trying to kill them, basically (I'm not going into detail), but Brae ends up pushing Maei out of the way and sacrificing himself to save her. She is left heart-broken and guilt ridden.

Then, her team trains with the Loonatics (as said in the story) but Tech reminds her so much of Brae, that it leaves her feeling physically and mentally ill.

The plot of the story was basically for Maei and her team to move on from the loss of Brae, and work together with the Loonatics. With quite a bit of romance wink And work together to defeat the harvester. It's ashame I'll never finish the story cry...but ya know.

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