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Hiya, Twilightgirl here! I know its late by a couple of days but finally it's here! My very first Fanfiction Ever!


I just want to say thanks to a couple of people before we start with the prologue:


First Thank you belongs to Cali Bunny, without her, this wouldn't be here. And a special Thank you to the following: Akira_Cat, Harukuro, StellaMagic,The_Oddity and last but not least Dominitupsyk (sorry if I have spelt any names wrong), without you guys, this story wouldn't be any fun to write!


 


Loonatics: New Generation//The Legend of the Affected


 


Prologue


 


Welcome to_


NEW GENERATION


Introduction_


Ever since the launch of the children's cartoon "Loonatics Unleashed", it has gained millions a upon millions of worldwide fans, From the USA to Russia, from the UK to Austrailia. After seeing the success of the show, an Internet-gaming company teamed up with WB to create "New Generation", an online role-playing game that is set in Acmetropolis (where the show is based).


Players who sign up to the game, become superheroes of their own creation. Example: they can choose which spieces their characters could be, they could be either be a Rabbit, Duck, Coyote, Roadrunner, Tazmanian Devil, Human or "Other".


When they are in the game they can travel to different areas to complete levels and areas to gain rare items, leveling up points and secret information to lead players to super rare items. Players can also meet other players from over parts of the world to chat, trade, team up and to talk about their favourite things. They also earn CREDITS, the currency in the game, to buy items, power ups, health drinks and some stalls sell information.


To play the full experience of "New Generation", players can use Vitual Helmets, so that they can feel that they are really in the game.
This game and techology has been brought to you by AcmeAtics Gaming and Warner Brothers.


Introduction end_


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In a cluttered bedroom, a boy had just been about to go to bed when his desktop computer bleeped and showed him an envolope spinning around on the screen. The boy looked over and sighed. He then went over to the computer and sat down at the desk. He clicked his mouse on the spinning icon. It was an IM from one of his friends. As he clicked on to it, he soon realized who it was.


Sanxo: hi Akira, whatsup?


Ichigo_Cat: HEY THERE SANXO! You'll never believe wot happened just now, I-was-going-on-the-level.....


Sanxo: Akira?


Ichigo_Cat: And-when-I-got-out-my-light-rock-to-see-in-the-dark-and-then.....


Sanxo: Akira?


Ichigo_Cat: a-wopping-great-monster-came-up-and-I-did-my-summon-and-got-a-metal-bar-and-tied-it-up-with-it-using-my-powers-and....


Sanxo: AKIRA?!


Ichigo_Cat: What?


Sanxo: u were rambling! And wot was it with the monster,a metalbar and YOUR POWERS?!


Ichigo_Cat: Oh, I was just playing "New Generation" and I was telling u how I leveled up!


Sanxo: New Generation?


Ichigo_Cat: GOD, SANXO! Wot rock have u been hiding under? "Loonatics: New Generation" is ssssssssooooooo Popular! Everyones into it!


Sanxo: Everyone? So just enlighten me then, WOT IS IT?


Ichigo_Cat: Yup! you were hiding under a rock not to know about it, it's a RPG online game based on that cartoon, Loonatics Unleashed, heard of it?


Sanxo: yeah, I've seen it, it was ok I guess. I liked that duck guy, he was funny.


Ichigo_Cat: oh u mean Danger Duck, anyway the game is based on that. u get to be a superhero and get kool powers. I've got an account on there and i'm now a level 2 player!


Sanxo: ok....


Ichigo_Cat: there's 2million players on there, it's complete vitual world based on the cartoon. Oh, have u still got that Vitual headset? if u have, u can use it to go in the game and set up an account.


Sanxo: yeah I still got it...HANG ON! who said I was getting a ACCOUNT!


Ichigo_Cat: but Sanxo...  I just wanted to show u how cool it was and I wanted u to meet some friends of mine I met while in the game......I told them all about u from school and I wanted them to see what a great person u are but if u don't want to......


Sanxo: ....... OK, OK, I'll try the stupid game


Ichigo_Cat: Thanks Sanxo! I know you'll like it!!!! sucker!


Sanxo: WAT WAS THAT!?


Ichigo_Cat:  What?


Sanxo: uhhh.... I'm tired, I'm going to bed. see u 2morrow


Ichigo_Cat: ok then, I'll tell u how to make your character and where to met me at school.


Sanxo: Ok night.


Sanxo logged off


Ichigo_Cat logged off


The boy called Sanxo turned off the computer. He then, got into his bed and switched off his bedside lamp. "Yeah, I'll try that game...." he thought before difting off to sleep. Little did he know that playing "Loonatics: New Generation" would change his and his friend's life forever.



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That's really good so far! Well done on finally getting your fan-fic up. Keep up the good work !

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I don't think anyone made Sanxo but it's good that we have a boy character. Great job so far and I'm sure you can ask us if you have any questions about our characters.



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Yaaaaaaay, fanfiction! ^____^~

Keep it up, then!

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I know, I know, I haven't done the first chapter until now. I'm really sorry for the wait but I'll hopefully update these regualy. Ok, now to Chapter 1!!!!!!!!


 


Login 1: The Experiment


In a darkened room,two dark figures were hunched in front of a computer screen. The smaller of the two was sitting at the screen and was typing in codes and computer program numbers into codeboxes that were displayed on the computer's screen. At last, the smaller figure sighed and leaned back on his chair.


"Well? Is it ready?" The taller figure leaned down and looked at the screen. "If you mean the program......" The smaller figure sat up and pressed a button on the harddrive to produce a  CD-Rom. "Then Yes, the "Virus//Hacker/." program is ready." The small figure picked up the CD-Rom and passed it to his companion. His taller companion held it up to his face. "You see this Rende, after all the testing, tweeking and losing sleep over this, we have finally completed it."


The smaller figure that was called Rende, let out a tut. "You mean ME that has been doing all the work." The taller figure looked round at Rende. "Of course, of course." He turned back to admire the CD again. Rende let out an annoyed sigh as he got up from his chair and looked up at the taller figure. "So Shiguro, are you going to keep the "I'm Mr. Mysterious" act or are you finally going to tell me what you plan to do with that."  The taller figure known as Shiguro, sighed and turned to face Rende. Before he spoke however, he looked around at the darkened room.


"Maybe a little light wouldn't hurt us would it?" He looked down at Rende and smiled. Rende got the message, even though he knew Shiguro was nearer to the light switch. "You are such a lazy manipulater." Shiguro just chuckled.


"No, I'm just lazy." 


Rende just shook his head as he flipped the light switch that all the administrator rooms had in the virtual world.


The light revealed the two figures, Rende's character design was a small martain wearing a navy blue helmet with what looked like a bright green lighting bolt stuck to it. He was also wearing a oriental navy blue robe with red trimmings and had brown boots. Shiguro's character design was a white rabbit with purple rings on his ears. He wore a purple metalic suit of armour with a dark blue cloak and had short silver hair that was held up by a dark green headband.


"You avoided my question Shiguro, what are you hiding?" Shiguro just waved his hand up and down. "Did I?" he said absendmindedly.


"Yes, You Did." 


"Oh"


"So, are you going to tell me?, haven't I worked my butt off enough to have the right to know what is going to happen to it." Rende humphed. Shiguro sighed and held out the CD-Rom. "This...." he said "is going to help me catch Nyx."


Rende raised his eyebrows. "Nyx the Rouge A.I?" The rabbit nodded. "Yes, the very same. No one knows who made her or where she came from but she has been disrupting the game server."Rende closed his eyes in thought, "Yes, I remember the last incident,the one 5 months ago, she hacked the game and drained data from the villian boss. I read the player's account report." The martian opened his eyes and looked at the rabbit, who was brooding. "According to the reports, the players were low on HP and were losing. Then Nyx came along, gave the players full health. When other administrators checked whether A.Is in the level was supposed to be there, the data showed that no one was supposed to help those players."


Shiguro nodded again. "I read that report too, it seems that Nyx goes to players that are in need. That is why we are going to put this program into a level and hope that she will make an appearance." Rende looked sharply at Shiguro, with shock and worry on his face. "You are not seriously putting it in with players are you?! You don't know what effects it will have! And what if the other administrators or worse,the bosses, find out that you are doing this! You will get youself fired!"


Shiguro looked at Rende calmly and said "Maybe, but if my theory is correct, Nyx will come to aid the players." He then walked over to the computer and placed the CD-Rom in the harddrive. He then clicked on to the levels page. "Let project:Affected begin." he said as he send the CD program to a level. 


Rende looked other at the rabbit and gave an annoyed sigh. "Well, if I'm going to be fired for this, at least tell me what level it is on." The rabbit turned and smiled. "It is on Level: Alleyway Hollow." Rende again looked at Shiguro sharply, "Thats the beginners level." The rabbit faced the computer again,


"Yes, I Know." 






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Fwee, new chapter! Keep it up!

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That is good. I like the names Rende and Shiguro! You can so tell what sort of characters they are.

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Thank You!!!! I try to put up the next chapter very soon!

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Ok chapter 2!!!!!! Yes, it's short but who cares I have been up late to post this so Hope you like it!


 


Login 2: Starting out


 "Finally, finished!" Sanxo leaned back on his chair as he looked at the character avatar that he had created on his computer screen. His friend, Akira from school, had told him how to download the game, set up a profile account and create an avatar image of what he would look like once inside the game. She had also said to choose wisely when picking "powers". "You know, you have to pick carefully as it's the only power you will have and you can't change it once you verify your profile to the administrators. They get really cranky if you keep bugging them as to why you can't change powers as the one you chose were really stupid and weak." she had said. He had asked why you only got one power, "I mean what is the point in having only one power if you got loads of monsters attacking you?" Akira had just gave him a look and told him it would of been too easy to win all the levels if everyone had more powers than one.


Sanxo sat up properly in his chair and checked the time on his watch. "Damn, I'm late!" At school, Akira gave him directions to where they would meet inside the online game. "So, I'm meeting you at 5.30pm ok? Akira had looked at him as he wrote it down in his notebook. If he hadn't, he would of got a bleeding ear off Akira the next day. It was now 5.45pm.

He quickly put in his new username and password into the login box, then he got up knelt down under his bed. His hand franticly felt around, trying to find his cyber helmet. He had got it from his older cousin, who had got a new one for his birthday. His cousin let him have the old headset and Sanxo had put it under his bed. Finally, Sanxo’s hand rested upon the second hand helmet and pulled it out. After dusting it down, he plugged it in to the hard drive and sat down at his computer table. He put on his headset and moved the mouse arrow so that it hovered over the “Start” button. “Ok” he said, “Time to find out what was all fuss is about.” He pressed the “START” button on his computer screen.   

-- Edited by Twilightgirl at 13:28, 2006-11-14

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sO FAR THIS STORY SOUNDS VERY EXCITING.

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Whee, new chapter!


Whee, virtual helmet!


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Oooooh!!! This is sooooooooo exciting! Keep it up!

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Nice idea with virtual reality helmets. Keep it up.

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-dies-


MOREMOREMOREMOREMO-


Tech: -slaps hand over mouth- Eh, Faust was... "entertaining", and let's just say "Herba non est bona".


Me: He's telling the truth. I'm so ****ing ****ed up right now. It's a wonder I can type straight and catch my mistakes.


Tech: Wait until it ALL sets in. And about a million more brain cells die.


Me: -holds a funeral for lost brain cells- Screw it,. -thows flowers over shotlder- @.@


Tech: Herba non est bona...



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dOMITUPSYK wrote:



-dies-


MOREMOREMOREMOREMO-


Tech: -slaps hand over mouth- Eh, Faust was... "entertaining", and let's just say "Herba non est bona".


Me: He's telling the truth. I'm so ****ing ****ed up right now. It's a wonder I can type straight and catch my mistakes.


Tech: Wait until it ALL sets in. And about a million more brain cells die.


Me: -holds a funeral for lost brain cells- Screw it,. -thows flowers over shotlder- @.@


Tech: Herba non est bona...





Wow I didn't think people would really like this, It makes me happy that you enjoy it! Er.... What does "Herba non est bona" mean? (Not good on languages, really ^^;)



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Twilightgirl wrote:



dOMITUPSYK wrote:



-dies-


MOREMOREMOREMOREMO-


Tech: -slaps hand over mouth- Eh, Faust was... "entertaining", and let's just say "Herba non est bona".


Me: He's telling the truth. I'm so ****ing ****ed up right now. It's a wonder I can type straight and catch my mistakes.


Tech: Wait until it ALL sets in. And about a million more brain cells die.


Me: -holds a funeral for lost brain cells- Screw it,. -thows flowers over shotlder- @.@


Tech: Herba non est bona...





Wow I didn't think people would really like this, It makes me happy that you enjoy it! Er.... What does "Herba non est bona" mean? (Not good on languages, really ^^;)




Cause it's Latin. Herb (one in particular) is not good. Heehee... Mrs. Johnston/Strong screwed up and put "Herba est bona" by accident. It was SO funny.

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Ok Chapter 3! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry it took so long!


 


 


Login 3: Newbie

 


 


At a city centre, the sunlight made the tower block buildings look silver instead of the usual light grey colour that they were normally. In a street, shops were selling various items, from health drinks to protection belts, from abilities (that players could install into their characters) to customising colours.


 


Next to this street was a park with trees in full bloom of green that seemed ageless. Then again, this was the virtual world of “The Next Generation”, so it had to look right for players to keep playing the game. From the park gates, there was a light brown gravel path leading to a large silver and gold platform that was located at the centre of the park.


 


In the middle of this platform, was a large beam of light that shot towards the sky. Every so often, it change from one colour to another and it would go rainbow if anyone wished to be teleported to any area in the game. Next to the beam, a lone figure stood tapping her foot. She looked at her communicator for the time and then humphed. “Where the heck is he?!” she grumbled.  



 


 


Sanxo felt like he was being pulled though a tight rubber tube. He felt like his body was being constricted and he kept wishing it would stop; now he knew how anyone with claustrophobia felt. At last the feeling the sensation stopped as he landed his rear end. “OWCH!” he yelped as he landed on the concrete floor. Sanxo opened his eyes and looked around at his surroundings. He had landed near some dustbins, near a large grey building or rather more than one building.


 


He got up while rubbing his behind. “Akira never told me about “THAT” experience.” He mumbled. He looked up and looked around. “Wow. This feels really real.” He thought. Sanxo wondered how long it took the game makers to make everything look…well, real. He while he was pondering this, he suddenly was knocked to the ground. “What the…OW! That hurt!” he looked up to see a bear on it’s hind legs wearing a yellow tunic with blue trousers. Sanxo picked himself up once again and yelled at the bear’s retreating back. “Hey You! Aren’t you going to apologise! I got run over here!”


 


The bear stopped and looked around at Sanxo. It grunted, “Sorry ducky” it said in a gruff voice. It then turned around and walked away. Sanxo felted his temper rising and had a mind to go up to that stupid idiot and make him apologise properly when he heard a beeping sound. At first, he wasn’t sure where it was coming from, then he felt vibrations on his left arm. He looked at his left arm and found a device on it, he looked closely at it and saw that it was receiving a call. “Wonder who’s ringing me? I don’t know anyone on here yet” he wondered as he pressed the button that said open. Sanxo soon found out as he had to pull the communicator far away from his face as shouting came from the device. “WHERE THE HECK WERE YOU?! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU FOR AGES AND YOU DIDN’T EVEN BOTHER TO AT LEAST TELL ME WHERE YOU WERE OR TELL ME YOU WERE GOING TO BE LATE!!!!!” shouted his friend down the line. Sanxo waited until she run out of breath before he spoke into the device. “Look I know I’m late and everything but…” he didn’t get to finish his sentence as Akira started shouting again.     


“DON’T GIVE THAT! JUST GET OVER HERE NOW!!!!!!!” Sanxo looked about him and he knew he was in trouble. “Erm…. Akira? I don’t actually KNOW where I am at the moment …..I think I’m lost.” Sanxo winced as Akira shouted again. “WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU’RE LOST!” Sanxo just sighed and looked at the communicator. “I’m lost, Lost, I just appeared here and I AM new. Remember?” He heard Akira take a deep breath and said in a more calmer tone, “Okay….Can you describe where you are?”


 


Sanxo once again looked around, trying to find a land mark that would help him. He then turned back to the communicator, “Well…I’m near some buildings and one of them is green.” “Oh THAT helps, We are in a CITY!!!!” Sanxo just glared at the device on his arm. “Look, I am trying, Ok, there are two shops in front of me, one’s selling some stuff in bottles and the other is selling bits of paper.” He heard a groan from the device, “There are loads of shops like that Sanxo, ok just forget it. Just go ask someone, ask which area you’re in. Ok?” Sanxo just took a deep sigh. “Ok.”


 


Sanxo just looked at the characters that where walking by him. Were all these people playing this game? he wondered. Was this “Loonatics” Really THAT popular? He spotted a bird with blue head and tail feathers, among the crowd. “Here goes nothing.” He said as he walked up to the bird. He tapped on its shoulder and asked, “Um…. excuse me Mr…um…. Bird…” The “Bird” turned around and frowned at him. “That’s “Road Runner” to you and My Name is RoadsterX2, buddy.”


Sanxo cursed himself under his breath, “Sorry, I’m new here, Can you tell me where I am?” RoadsterX2 looked at him and said, “Oh, a Newbie right?” He waved his arm to a purple coyote on his right. “Hey, Shiori! Got a Newbie here!” The purple coyote thanked the shopkeeper she was talking to and walked up to Sanxo and the roadrunner. “Roads, I hope your not picking on kids again, remember the newbie rabbit that pushed you off the cliff?” she said. The roadrunner looked annoyed with her. “Hey, she just got lucky that time, You Know That!” The coyote that RoadsterX2 called Shiori, rolled her eyes. “Yeah, ssssuuurrree she did. Anyways…” Shiori turned to Sanxo, “So what can we do for you then?”


 


Sanxo just looked at her for a second before stammering out his answer, “Uhh…I was just asking where I was cos I’m uh…Kind of lost …heh heh.” Sanxo felt his cheeks burn as he felt the embarrassment sweep over him. Shiori didn’t seem to notice his flaming cheeks, she just smiled and giggled a bit. “Don’t worry, we were all beginners at one time, We all got lost here on our first time. Roads here gets lost all the time so don’t feel bad about it.” RoadsterX2 gave her a dirty look, “I don’t get lost! You made that up!” he protested.


 


The coyote just rolled her eyes again, “Whatever.” She said. She looked back at Sanxo, “This area is Warner District11 but if you get lost again…” Shiori pointed to her communicator, “…Just pin in my username and call. Ok?” Before Sanxo could reply, the coyote grabbed RoadsterX2’s arm. “Come on Roads, Lets go to that Haunted house area. I feel like beating up a few ghosts!”


 


As Shiori and RoadsterX2 disappeared into the crowd, Sanxo sighed and redialled Akira. “Ok, those people were just…weird.” he muttered as Akira picked up.


After telling her where he was, Akira told him to stay put until she got there. “Thanks Akira.”he said gratefully. “Hey, While we’re in the game, I’m Ichigo_Cat because that’s my username or you can just call me Ichigo.” This just confused Sanxo, “Ok, “Ichigo?”, so when you turn up, Where are you going to take me?” Sanxo just heard a giggle down the line. “You’ll see!” she said.


 


 


That was ssssoooo long, my arms hurt and I am tried 


 


Any way, We will find out what character design he chose in the next chapter AND EVERYONE WHO WANTED TO BE IN THE STORY WILL BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WWWWWWWWWWHHHHOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!      


     


 



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Ham: -explodes-


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*Hits head against a wall* Iknowiknowiknow I'm Sorry!!!!! I really wanted to update this earlier but my job shifts keep me really busy. Sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!


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It's pretty good so far, keep up the good work.

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Yay, I has not missed much!

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It's really good Twilightgirl. Like the chapter. Keep it up! Woot!

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Finally, I have written Login 4! WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, I know I’m bad at keeping deadlines so I’m going to try REALLY hard to update this story. Now, enough of my rambling lets get on with the show!!!!

  

Login 4: Self designed and Keywords  

After Ichigo (a.k.a Akira) found him and lead him back to the main square, Sanxo just gazed in awe at all the buildings. “Wow, it looks so real in here” he said with awe.

“Well, this IS virtual reality. This is the main home world, Nenviro” The theme music played out a slow, futuristic sounding music as they walked though the city centre.

Akira pointed to one building, “This is were you save your progress,” she then pointed to a couple more buildings, “And these are the shops were you get your equipment, potions, spells and information, they’re all needed sometime in the area your in to fight monsters and stuff. Information is usually about where to find rare items.”

 

Ichigo lead Sanxo on further towards the park gates. Ichigo looked at Sanxo while they were walking.“ By the way Sanxo, your character looks really good.” Sanxo took his eyes off all the realistic background and turned to the pink cat wearing a navy blue sleeveless dress with a pink triangle on it. “My character?”

 

“Look in the shop window.” Sanxo looked into a armour shop and saw a black duck wearing a navy blue sleeveless top with short yellow poncho over it, two blue belts hanged over his brown trousers and yellow leggings and silver boots staring back at him. “Wow….This is me?” he gaped as he ran his hand though his messy brown crop of hair.  Ichigo giggled as she watched her friend’s reaction. “ You know, if I didn’t know the real you, I’d ask you to be my cyber boyfriend!”  Sanxo turned quickly away from his reflection and stared at her. “WHAT!” he shouted.

“Don’t yell. Jeez, I was kidding, ha ha!”

 

“Oh you forgot to warn me.” He muttered under his breath sarcastically. Then Akira grabbed his hand. “Come on, lets go to the Portal Gate!” She started dragging him towards the park gates before he could protest.

 
 

“Is this the Portal Gate?” Sanxo asked as they stopped in front of the small flight of steps that lead to the platform that held the portal. Ichigo nodded, “Yep, you just activate it by pressing the (X) button and then put the three keywords so you can go to that area. Some areas have different levels so you have to check the level before you go there, just in case you go in a area that’s way higher than you. But once you get experience, you’ll have to go on higher levels to level up.”

 

Ichigo started to mount the steps. “Come on, my friends are waiting and we’re going to a beginner’s level so you can level up. I got the keywords to get there from Jamie, she said it’s the perfect spot to level up quickly.” Sanxo looked up a the giant beam of light that changed colour every so often. “Ok, I’m coming.” He said, but before he even stepped on the first step, he heard something behind him. He quickly turned around to see a red roadrunner in a black costume with a red triangle on the top, suddenly appear from nowhere.

 

“HI-I’m-Rev-Runner-and-I-am-a-guide-to-to-explain-how-to-use-your-controls-so-you-can-enjoy-“New Generation”-to-the-full!” Sanxo didn’t understand a word the roadrunner had said and he couldn’t make out what else he was saying. Sure he could hear the roadrunner but it was hard to understand what he was saying. Then, as suddenly as he come, the red roadrunner was swallowed up by a bright ring of light and disappeared. “Sanxo, What’s the hold up? I thought we were going now?” Sanxo turned and faced Ichigo. “It’s Ok, I was just stopped by a weird roadrunner that was making no sense.” Sanxo replied. Ichigo’s cat-like eyes widened. “Roadrunner? Was he red and spoke really fast?” she asked excitedly. “Well, he talked in a weird language but yeah, he was red. You know him?”  Ichigo let out a squeal and jumped a little.  “Know him! He’s Rev Runner, One of the cutest, funniest and sweetest characters ever! I can’t believe it, you got Rev to do your intro, no fair, I wanted Rev to do mine but I got Lexi instead. Ichigo looked at Sanxo and knew then that she had lost him with her ramblings. “Sorry But I was excited, you don’t meet your favourite character everyday you know. That was Rev Runner, one of characters in the show. In the game, when you first start, you get a Loonatic to show you how to attack with your powers, moves and options and so on.” Sanxo nodded, “But I couldn’t understand him so I don’t know how to use powers or nothing.” Ichigo sighed and explained, “Check your talk blog at the bottom of the screen, it should be recorded.”

The character Sanxo stood motionless as the real Sanxo looked at Rev’s instructions. The character suddenly come to life again, then said, “Ok, I think I got it.” Ichigo then turn towards the portal again, “Good, cos we have go, the others might think we’re not going to show.” Sanxo climbed the steps and stood next to Ichigo. “Ok then, let’s go” he said as Ichigo put in the key words.

 Keyword: Alleyway Hollow 

Sanxo and Ichigo were engulfed by all the rainbow colours of the Portal Gate as they were transported to the area known as Alleyway Hollow.            

     

 

      

 

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Oooh!!! The excitement!!! Now we just have to see what happens next! Great job there sis!

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AWESOME!!!!!! is this a real game?!? please tell me it's a real game!!!! where do I find it on the internet?!?! WHERE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!rage.gifrage.gifrage.gif

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katie: No one posts on this topic anymore. So what's the point on posting an old topic when it's already dead?

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