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Frelengian

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Can anyone give me ideas for new Loonatics fanfictions?

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How about one where Tech tries to teach at a ninja school?

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Or... or... or...


Do the LU100 like I'm doing! There's a hundred ideas! ^_^ -is promoting- -needs to get off her lazy ass, check her email, then get off-



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Well, I have an idea...that I thought up...you can take it, I suppose...but I might continue writing it...


What if Tech was having nightmares of walking down a dark street and being chased by people who look...sad...and..stuff... O_o I dunno.


Anyways...so he wakes up, but he returns to that street every night. One night, he meets a girl who tells him why he's here - he's to help all these souls find peace, and fix their 'dreams' - that is, to fix their broken lives. Unless he does this (during his waking hours), he has to wander the street in his dreams for all time. So everytime he wakes up, he hunts down a person whose life is 'broken', and helps them achieve their goal, or dream, or whatever-the-crap-they-need.


Finally, he's done helping everyone he can, and he thinks that he can finally go to sleep and rest easily. But, much to his surprise, he returns to the street again. He spots the girl that helped him, and asked why he was still there. She tells him that there was only one person left - himself. Tech is confused, and tells the girl that he didn't need anything else, the people that he helped gave him their gratitude and that was enough, wasn't it? The girl replies that she wouldn't know, that he had to find out for himself. Tech wakes up, and...


...uh...I haven't...got that far...yet...


(c) Jessica C. Duck



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What a cool story Oddity. That would be pretty weird if he was like, the figure of "Jesus" in peoples dreams. But still, good idea. 

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Thanks ^_^ But I still suck at writing -is hit by bricks- Ow!


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Bugs: And use proper puncuation!



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Frelengian

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Actually, I was hoping to have a story about Rev.

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...oh. Well then, you should have said that in the first place! But I'm afraid I haven't thought up any Rev-centered pieces...


...yet.



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Hmm... t3h R3v st0ry...-le gasp- What if you wrote one where Rev did it with Lexi and got her pregnant only no one knew it and and along the way Rev slowly found out he was in love with her and we find out that Tech was abused as a kid and Rev was abandonded-


Tech: Abandonded?


and Cookie (his boss at Quick Wrap Sandwich Shack) took him in and abused him and he got hooked on drugs and Tech helped him get off and then Tech's mom gets pregnant with 17 kids because she was taking fertility drugs because she had woman problems and she already had like 12 kids Tech included and Tech's dad kidnaps his autistic brother because he thinks he and Tech are both freaks and kills him and gets sent to jail and Rev finds out he has a sister although I think in the end it turned out that they weren't related and Ace dies and Jack and Daxter and friends join the fray for a while and Tech also has a baby and something bad happens to Tech and he gets retarded for a while and we find out that he and Mallory made a baby so now he has two kids and Rev has one and they all start having problems so Zodavia splits them up but they get back together and Ace quits but comes back and Ace's ghost saved Tech from being retarded and Tech has a gay brother and Slam is gay so they hook up and they all form a band but later split up and Tech makes an android to be his girlfriend but the others don't know until she dies and then he tells them she's an android except not all in that order? -panthuffpant-


Tech: You've already done that. "It's Been A While, After All", "How I Feel", "Fixxxer", "Truth is in the Pain", "Nothing Else Matters"? Remember those?


Me: Oh yeah. They were more you centered  anyways. Started out Rev centered, but changed. Hmmm, seems I owe him a story.


Rev: Damn-right-you-do!


Me: Speakin' of ya, what if you were to do something epic?

Rev: Like-what?

Me: Not epic like "Oddysey" epic, but... something shocking...

Rev: Like-make-babies-with-Lexi? Or-make-babies-with-Tech-so-to-speak? Or-Tech-and-Ace?


Me: What? I was a fan! And still am! -LE... GASP!- You should do something illegal like be an undercover drug dealer to catch all the REAL drug dealers! You'd take on an assumed identity and everything! OR JUST PLAIN DO IT CAUSE IT'S ILLEGAL! Or be a pimp or a gigolo YEAH YOU SHOULD BE A GIGOLO JUST BECAUSE YOU CAN! AND IT'S ILLEGAL AND THAT MAKES IT FUN!


Tech/Rev: O_o;;



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Well if you are for a story about Rev what about makes an invanten to go into peoples dreams? and this guy(or girl) go's into rev's dream makes him so scared he did't come out(the dream I was thing thinking about was Rev gets stuck in 1 place and he gets smashed!)

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How about if Rev was suddenly turned into a little kid by some strange raygun?

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How about if Rev was suddenly turned into a little kid by some strange raygun?



That was my idea! Only all of the Loonatics apart from Duck gotr turned into babies. (See my LU comedies).


Anyways, how about a new RPG game comes out and Rev downloads the game onto one of the many computers they all have so either:


A. He asks Lexi to play and she says yes but when they go onto a level into the game, they get attacked by this monster and both go into a coma but only Rev manages to wake up while Lexi is still comatised. So he decides to try and find out what's going on inside the game.


B. He complains about not having attack powers like Ace or Lexi but then a virus goes into the game at the same time Rev was picking his powers for his character in the game so when the virus hits, Rev accidently downloads the powers into him so he gets new powers that can cause damage like Ace, Duck, Slam and Lexi's can.


What do you think?


 



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These ideas are alright. I like Mimic's and Lexi Bunny's ideas, too; but I was sort of thinking of something having more of the kid related scent to it, instead of violence.

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I know. Why not write journal entries written by Tech about his days before the meteor.

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Hrm...kiddy-like...what about something that has barely any plot at all? Like...I dunno, Tech fighting to defend a pie? O_o

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Not quite. I obviously want a plot, but I want more of the child feeling to it and I want stories about Rev.

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Maybe you write about Rev chaperoning his bro's dance and discovers that his shy date gained telekinetic powers from the meteor.

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RevRunner wrote:


Not quite. I obviously want a plot, but I want more of the child feeling to it and I want stories about Rev.



Ack! I keep forgetting that it's Rev, not Tech! X( My mind is set to 'your favorite characters need attention instead of your homework' mode, and most of my ideas are directed to Duck (although the ideas just randomly decide to wander off away from Duck, or change from another character to Duck).


Um...how 'bout...


Bugs Bunny doll: Can't think?


Jessica: Shut up, Bugs, and I'll go do my homework in the morning.


Bugs: Yay! -leaves-


Jessica: -had fingers crossed- Um...I keep thinking about concerts + Rev now... X( I dunno.



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What do you think of my idea, Rev?

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It's okay, but I need more ideas.

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Don't rush the creative process Rev! I'm sure inspiration will come to you at some point when you least expect it. And you're probably the best person to decide what kind of Rev story you will write, coz it has to be something that interests and motivates you! It's probably best if you decide for yourself.


But since you said you wanted to write something with a more 'child-like feel' to it, perhaps you may consider a story actually involving a child? Perhaps Rev rescuing a child in danger and learning something important from him/her about himself, or some other morale like friendship.



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Don't rush the creative process Rev! I'm sure inspiration will come to you at some point when you least expect it. And you're probably the best person to decide what kind of Rev story you will write, coz it has to be something that interests and motivates you! It's probably best if you decide for yourself.


But since you said you wanted to write something with a more 'child-like feel' to it, perhaps you may consider a story actually involving a child? Perhaps Rev rescuing a child in danger and learning something important from him/her about himself, or some other morale like friendship.





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I'll remember that.

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How about Rev dancing in clothing worn by Michael Jackson in Moonwalker?

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Lol.



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They are all great ideas, but I need more opinions. To be honest, I'm also having trouble of how I want the story to look. I feel that my ideas are too simple and I'm running out of these ideas. So, do you think that I could have more story ideas and suggestions on how to spice up the stories a bit?

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Have the story go in one direction, then twist the plot by making it go in the exact opposite direction. XP

Like...Ace is kidnapped by a villain, but when the Loonatics try and rescue him, they learn it's a trap, and Ace have been working with the villain all along, to...er...get...his...friend back...or something...

Wait...IT'S COMING BACK TO ME.

Duck is brainwashed by a villain after he meets the villain, and then attacks the other Loonatics, and he is eventually freed from mind control, but then the villain kidnaps one of his friends and tells Duck that if he doesn't work for evil, his friend'll get killed.

DON'T TAKE THAT IDEA. IT'S MINE. XP

No, no...you can take it...even though I've written a fanfic using that plot already... XP

And I haven't been of any help, have I? I feel sad =( no one likes my ideas.

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Ah dooz! >_> I've officially run out of ideas. For both LU and LOSH. Aside from Remnants II. But... Io and Paulie are writing it with me and Io's... somewhere... I don't know where... and dang Paulie's grounded for sneakin' out the window at 2:00AM just to meet some other kid to buy candy (which is forbidden in his house).

That kid has a sugar problem.

Anyways, RemnantsII is based off these books I read (well, partially, for Not Quite Human, I needed that for Brainy references only XD) that, and Remnants (the main book I borrowed plot from XP), plus LOSH and LU. I... haven't gotten to the LOSH part yet- that's Io's part and he's MIA.

Darn him.

http://www.freewebs.com/legionofloonatics/ch1thebeginning.htm If anyone's interested...

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Will do Doma!

Hmm... how about Rev does some form of community service with Rip after the incident with either the Parasite thing or he'd help alone after Melvin the martian shrunk everything. He works at a baseball club thing or something just painting walls, cutting grass, etc, until one day, he accidently breaks a kids baseball coach's leg so they are unable to teach the kids baseball. So it is Rev's task to teach a bunch of kids who have no idea on the game in just 3-4 days up to a week at least. I'll leave the rest up to you.

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Will do Doma!

Hmm... how about Rev does some form of community service with Rip after the incident with either the Parasite thing or he'd help alone after Melvin the martian shrunk everything. He works at a baseball club thing or something just painting walls, cutting grass, etc, until one day, he accidently breaks a kids baseball coach's leg so they are unable to teach the kids baseball. So it is Rev's task to teach a bunch of kids who have no idea on the game in just 3-4 days up to a week at least. I'll leave the rest up to you.
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Mmm... that... doesn't quite fit the story line... then again, it's my opinion that no one has read Remnants besides me. In the entire world. XP Because basically no one has ever heard of it. XD

Basically, a meteor slams into the earth and only 80 survive because they get on a shuttle and fly away for 500 years, get captured by aliens, and now they have to survive. Because if they don't, they're dead. XP

Tech: Not all of them survive, remember? 34% of them died, and 10% were captured.

Me: Oh yeah. >_> I forgot. Dang it, I lost book 1! And I had only 1 and 2 to begin with! >_> Nu.

Tech: Seeing as how you pretty much had it memorized... you don't need it.

Me: >_> Quiet, you.

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I'm running out of ideas for this. Hmm... I don't really have anything left to offer. Looks like you'll have to rely on your imagination Rev and see what you come up with.



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I had this one story...I suppose you could take the idea...but I want to make it into a novel...so I guess you can't...

I'm no help. I suck!

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