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this story takes place after the story "breeder." (which is in the naughty section.) at first this one was going to be more adult and rev was going to be the main char again but as ideas got worked up it started being more about tech. not that i mind;). if you have any questions do ask.


 


It had been six years since that incident with Andre and things had changed somewhat. Rev and Dazzle had finealy gotten married and had a son. At the moment Rev and Tech were shopping for Rev's son fourth birthday.


"Tech? What do you think i should get Spark?"" Rev asked Tech as he looked at the large aisles of toys.


"A straitjacket." Tech said.


"Tech!"


" Just kidding. But you have to admit it might calm him down." Tech said with a chuckle.


"That's not a very uncle like thing to say." Rev said.


" Most uncles don't have to deal with their nephews running THROUGH the walls." Tech replied.


"O.K,fair enough." Rev said with a slight smile.


" Hmm,how about one of those hover race cars?" Tech suggested as he pointed to said item.


"He does need a new one after Duck stepped on his last one." Rev said.


Tech chuckled again.


" Wasn't that the fifth toy Duck's stepped on within the last month? You think he would learn to watch his step by now." Tech said.


"This is Duck we're talking about. He doesn't learn things very easily." Rev said as he picked the toy off the shelf.


"True,true. I think it would take whacking him with a blunt object everytime he steps on a toy and going "bad! bad!" " Tech said.


Rev laughed at this.


Rev soon bought the toy and the two headed out,heading back to headquarters.


"So,what did YOU get Spark,Tech?" Rev asked.


"Something not nosiy like last year. I was surprized it was Lexi who lost it and broke that toy drum while Spark wasn't looking." Tech said.


" Well,she DOES have super hearing." Rev said.


"That's a very good-" Tech started before the sound of rustleing wings filled his ears and something hit him in the back,sending him sprawling forward.


Rev turned to face the attacker. Glideing above Rev and Tech was what looked like a person with bird like features. He had large wings on his back,talons on his feet,and oddly enough what looked like wings on the face,the feathers around the eyes and nose. Rev also noticed there were alot more of thease creatures circleing higher up in the air.


Having seen the bird beings now and seeing they were hostile people begin to panic and run. It didn't seem the bird beings were intrested in the humans though. In fact the one that had most likely attacked Tech flew down at rev,talons open. Rev reacted quickly. Once the bird being was in range Rev whacked the bird being in the face with the shopping bag containing the toy for Spark.


The bird being gave a shrill cry and backpeadeled in it's flight. Some of the other bird beings who had come down closer laughed.


"Kilmo got beat by a shopping bag!" one of them exclaimed between laughter.


Tech meanwhile had gotten up off the ground. He looked a little ticked off. Useing his magnetic powers he lifted a trashcan and sent it flying at one of the laughing bird beings. It hit,sending the bird being to the ground.


" Opit got beat by a trashcan!" Kilmo shot back with a laugh.


"Get it togeather you idoits!" a rather unfreindly looking bird being with gold armor shouted as he swooped in close. " This is not a game!"


"Yes general!" the other bird beings shouted with a salute before continueing their attack.


" Do we KNOW thease guy's?" Tech asked as he dodged one of the bird beings talons.


" Nope,can't say we do. Well,i can only speak for myself but it doesn't seem like you know them either. Maybe-"


"Rev! pay attention!" Tech cried.


Rev turned his head just in time to get a taloned foot to the face. Rev gave a yelp and stumbled back. That was al lthe distraction that was needed for one of the bird beings to swoop in and pick up Rev by the shoulders with his talons.


" Woah! I can fly myself you know!" Rev yelled.


"Hey! Put his down you-" Tech started.


"Hey! beast!" a voice shouted.


Tech looked up to see Opit hovering over him as the trashcan that Tech had thrown at him fell from Opits talons. The trash can beaned Tech in the head. tech gave a groan and fell to the ground. He could hear Rev calling his name as he blacked out.



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Who are these mysterious winged people? What do they want with Rev? Rev has a son?! And why do Duck and Lexi wreck so many of Spark's toys?! This is an interesting one.

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to who thease winged people are and what they want with rev,will be revealed in the next part.  the son thing isn't too surprizeing really if you've read my character profiles.


as for the toy thing,uhh...they hate toys,thats it!


duck: do not!


 


err..in anycase tech does have a large part in this story though rev is the reason for the whole thing.



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When Tech came to his head still hurt. He made a mental note to look up more next time he faced bird beings. With that Tech started to get to his feet but found he couldn't. It didn't take long for Tech to figure out he was tied up. Knowing he wouldn't be going anywhere soon he looked at his surroundings.


There was nothing remarkable about the room. Just a cold,featureless grey room. Tech certainly had no idea where he was. His attention shifted to bird beings in the room,no doubt acting as guards. They didn't how any signs of knowing that Tech was now awake. Rev had noticed however.


"Tech! I'm glad your o.k. I wasn't sure if you were going to wake up." Rev cried from the otherside of the room,also tied up.


"I seem to be fine. Head still hurts but i think i'll be o.k. Do you know what's going on here?" Tech asked.


"A little. Thease bird guys are called Aviverians from the planet Avius. I haven't heard of this planet before. I wonder what it's like. Plenty of open sky i'm sure since thease guys fly and-"


"Rev,back on topic please." Tech said dryly.


"Oh,right,sorry. Anyway's they said they kidnapped me because their queen ordered them to. Oh,and we’re on their spaceship right now." Rev said.


Tech frowned.


"O.k,that explains things somewhat. But why did they take me?" Tech asked.


"They didn't want to leave a witness." Rev paused a moment then spoke again.


"They keep calling you "beast" for some reason. I don't think they like you much."


"I got that impression when a trashcan was dropped on my head." Tech replied.


"Too bad it didn't kill you." one of the guards muttered.


"Excuse me?" Tech growled.


" You Drapgnells are dangerous beasts that should all be dystroyed." the guard said.


"Drapgnell? I don't know what a Drapgnell is but i'm a coyote."


The guard came over to Tech and studied him.


"You look like Drapgnell." the guard said.


"Well,i'm not." Tech replied.


The guard looked like he was about to say something when the door to the room slid open. The guard’s snapped to attention. Seeing who had entered the room they bowed.


"Your majesty, what you’ve ordered had been done." the other guard said.


Tech’s and Rev’s eyes were wide as they saw the queen.


Saphrina.



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Me: YOU AGAIN!?!?!?


Saphrina: The one and only.


Me: YOU DON'T KNOW WHEN TO LEARN DO YOU!?


Saphrina: Oh don't tell me you're jealous now are you?


Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!


A cloud of dust forms when me and Saphrina fight. Cheriestar pulls me away from her while I'm struggling to go after her.


Me: LET ME AT HER!!! I'LL SCRATCH HER EYES OUT!!!


Cheriestar: Leave her Akira! She's not worth it!



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Saphrina was dressed in a regal gown,adorned with jewelery,and had a gold tiara on her head. Rev hated to admit it but she did look every inch a queen.


Looking Rev's way,a smile came to Saphrina's beak. She sauntered over to Rev.


"It's great to see you again Rev. So sorry for the rude way you were brought to me but i don't think you would would have come any other way." Saphrina said.


"You bet i wouldn't! Since when did you become a queen?" Rev asked.


"Ah, thats a interesting story. Not long after the break out i was sought out by the Aviverians. Turn's out i'm not a full roadrunner. I'm part Aviverian. A member of the royal family was my father. It also turned out that the rest of the royal family died out and i was the only one left that could take the throne. Neat,isn't it?" Saphrina explained with a grin.


"I think if they knew what you were like they would have tried harder to find someone else." Tech muttered.


Saphrina gave Tech a dirty glare. One the guards promptly kicked Tech in the ribs.


" Show respect to the queen,beast!" the guard snarled.


"OW!" cried Tech.


"Leave him alone!" Rev yelled.


Rev quickly found himself involved with his own problem as Saphrina took his beak and directed his face towards hers.


"I've missed you Rev." she said gentlely.


"Can't say i've missed you." Rev shot back to her.


"Now now,thats no way to talk to your future wife." Saphrina said.


Rev snorted.


"Your a few years too late. I'm already married thank you very much." Rev said.


Saphrina frowned.


"Don't tell me you married that bitch of a coyote?"


Both Rev and Tech looked pissed at this remark.


" Dazzle is not a bitch! And she's not a slut like you." Rev snarled.


Saphrina shrugged.


"So your married. That's another planet. My planet has diffrent rules. One of those rules being i can't choose anyone for my husband,includeing those who are married. I could even have more then one if i wanted. However the only one i want is you." Saphrina said as she played with Rev's headfeathers.


Rev couldn't help but shudder.


" Your mine now."



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Right! That's it! I'm gonna have to save Tech and Rev myself!  Ichigo Cat transformation!


I transform into my alter ego Ichigo Cat and is about to go up to Saphrina until I bump into some invisible wall.


Me: What? WHAT IS THIS!?


Saphrina: Well if you payed attention to your so called "drama lessons", you'll find that this sort of script has a "fourth wall", which means there's nothing you can say or do that can change the situation unless the author decides it.


Me: I'll just have to say to Cheriestar to kill you off!


Saphrina: She could, But she won't! I placed her under a hypnotic trance and she only obeys me, which means what I say, happens.


Me: You can't do that! That's illegal!


Saphrina: Oh no it isn't. Isn't it right Cheriestar?


Cheriestar: Yes master.


Me: Wait! I call upon the powers of imagination to snap Cheriestar out from the hypnotic trance!


Cheriestar: Eh? Where am I?


Me: You were under Saphrina's hypnotic trance but I snapped you out of it. So you have to get rid of Saphrina!


Cheriestar: Well you're gonna have to wait until the next few chapters to see what happens.


Me: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!


Saphrina: What does happen to me anyway?


 



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hee hee,saphrina WISHES she had hypnotic powers. as if i could be hypno- (suddenly goes stiff and starts walking off) must..write..more...duck..scenes.


duck: (just grins innocently)


 


 



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Me: Duck! Snap her out of it NOW!


Duck: But-


Me: No buts!  Snap her out of it so that she can kill Saphrina!


Duck: Okay, okay.


He snaps his fingers and Cheriestar wakes up.


Cheriestar: What happened?


Me: You were hypnotised again by Duck this time. Now do you have a chapter to do?


Cheriestar: Okay. Thanks Akira.


Cheriestar exits.


Duck: Thanks a lot Akira! I could have got her to make me look more heroic!


Me: Well that should teach you for trying to use hypnosis for your own selfish needs.



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1. i like this story

2. im new

3. when r u doiing the next chapterwinkblankstareaww



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Awsome story cheristar! I haven't read 'breeder' (don't have access to the naughty sections, yet) so I have no idea who Dazzle or Saphrina are, but this story is really interesting!

-- Edited by doggirl2772 at 01:12, 2007-06-25

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I haven't got access to the naughty section either. But it's a great story, even if I don't know who Saphina is.  

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1. whos andre?
2. whos saphira?
3.whos dazzle?
4. when r u going 2 do the next chapterfurious



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uh,yeah,been awhile since i acutelly really checked out the board,sorry.

anyways,to anwser questions...

1. andre is a char from "breeder". that story is in the adult section.

2. also a character from "breeder"

3. dazzle is one of my fan chars. though i haven't finished her origin story, what i did is up on the board.  http://www.activeboard.com/forum.spark?forumID=84895&p=3&topicID=9742688&topicPage=3

4. as for finishing this...sorry,i'm a awful slow writer most of the time.


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why does saphrina want 2 marry rev? did she fall in luv with him in the other story "breeder"?confused



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