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SoulessAce · An Ace that is without a soul

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LoonaticsF · Loonatic

SoulessAce wrote:

LoonaticsF wrote:

SoulessAce wrote:

LoonaticsF wrote:

0.0
someone kill me...
PLEASE SOMEONE KILL ME!
I CAN'T BELIEVE I WAS SUCH OF A MORONIC IDIOTIC AND OTHER -ICS IDIOT TO NOT CATCH UP WITH THAT STORY...
SOMEONE KILL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
iknkewitiknewitiknewitiknewitiknewitiknewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!
This... is... just... W-O-W
wow
wow wow wow wow
Update soon, please, i can't survive without knowing what's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!

That can be arranged.

Errr... you're... scaring me...
Badly... scaring me...
Me (to Souless): You think she's gonna do it?
Souless: You bet...
Lauren: *jumps behind me with a kitchen knife* Bye bye...
Me: 0.0 ehm.... Help?

Nah.I'd use my bare hands...*seethes*
Souless:Not yet my minion.We need her.She gives us names for mushrooms...
Yesh mastah...........

LOL
Mushrooms XDD
AND THEN I@M GOING TO DIE???? OH NOES!

Date: Sun Jul 27 22:44:18 2008

Is no one going to make a cover for this story? Cos' it would be cool to see. YupYupYup... cry

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Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Hello!!! I'm alive but in pain. I fel like I've been off for ever (My sleeping is all off)

But any who....I've got the next chapter of Loonatics Angel done. Rase of hand: Who wansts mr to post it??? (I'm evil)

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 16:58, 2008-07-28

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

OH! OH! OH! OH!! PICK ME! PICK ME! PICK ME!!!!!!

*waves hand around crazily*

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

CassidyCoyote wrote:
OH! OH! OH! OH!! PICK ME! PICK ME! PICK ME!!!!!! *waves hand around crazily*

Okay weirdface I pick Cassidy

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Oh! Oh! Oh! Me too! Me too!! PLEASE? *gives you puppy dog pout* I wanna see the next of The Loonatics Angel! biggrin

Natynicky · Martian

OK I'M GONNA BEG NOW!!!
PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!! PLEASE POST IT!!! HAVE MERCY ON US!!!!!!!! D8

SoulessAce · An Ace that is without a soul

*doesn't raise hand*BURN!*realizes you won't post unless I do*Well, er...*runs off with hand in air*

SoulessAce · An Ace that is without a soul

LoonaticsF wrote:

SoulessAce wrote:

LoonaticsF wrote:

SoulessAce wrote:

LoonaticsF wrote:

0.0
someone kill me...
PLEASE SOMEONE KILL ME!
I CAN'T BELIEVE I WAS SUCH OF A MORONIC IDIOTIC AND OTHER -ICS IDIOT TO NOT CATCH UP WITH THAT STORY...
SOMEONE KILL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
iknkewitiknewitiknewitiknewitiknewitiknewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!
This... is... just... W-O-W
wow
wow wow wow wow
Update soon, please, i can't survive without knowing what's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!

That can be arranged.

Errr... you're... scaring me...
Badly... scaring me...
Me (to Souless): You think she's gonna do it?
Souless: You bet...
Lauren: *jumps behind me with a kitchen knife* Bye bye...
Me: 0.0 ehm.... Help?

Nah.I'd use my bare hands...*seethes*
Souless:Not yet my minion.We need her.She gives us names for mushrooms...
Yesh mastah...........

LOL
Mushrooms XDD
AND THEN I@M GOING TO DIE???? OH NOES!

Nooooooooo.I have to die.Duck told me so.
Duck:No, I told you to kill Ace*slaps forehead*
0.o

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Siamese712 wrote:

CassidyCoyote wrote:
OH! OH! OH! OH!! PICK ME! PICK ME! PICK ME!!!!!! *waves hand around crazily*

Okay I pick Cassidy

*is pick'd*

8D

*feels important*

8D

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Okay Okay I shall end de tourcher....It's a bit shourt but...

Chapter: I forgot the chapter AGAIN!!!

“You fond it Tech?” Ace asked as he entered the lab room with Rev and Duck at his sides. He gave a nod to Slam as he passed the Tasmanian at the door.

“I believe so, Ace.” Tech answered as he brought up a image on one of the labs larger computer monitors, “I found this planet in the Freeling data base. According to there records it's soils are rich in the mineral we found, and it matches Angels description perfectly. A low tech planet similar, but smaller, then earth, ruled by one source.”

They all looked at the planet on the screen. They couldn't believe it. For 10 years they had morned her in the believe that they had lost one of there dearest, most loving, and closet friends. Then in only days they had found her. How close she was, and yet still so very far away.

“Tech?” Ace asked after a moment of silents. The coyote looked at him, “ How long till the ship is ready?”

“Well... If you let me pull a over nighter I say I could get it in working condition my tomorrow.” Tech exchanged a broad smile with his fellow loonatics.

“Tomorrow it is Tech. We have a long over due hello to give a friend. Guys first thing in the morning we pack for Fruten.”

...

He took a deep, slightly shaky, breath as he sat down in the ship. The Loonatics Jet had been Retro fitted by Tech and Rev and now they where only minuets away from launch. Some of it didn't fell real. Like it was a dream that he didn't wont to wake up from. He gave a looked at the others in the ship.

Rev sat in his seat typing away at his control panel, making last minuet adjustments. Across form the runner Duck sat with his feet up, hands behind head, and eyes gazing at the celling in thought. One of the doors to the rear cabins opened as Slam came in, sat in his seat, and clicked his triangular seatbelt over his uniform.

Ace coked an eye brow when he saw Tech's seat empty and that Angel was standing nervously next to her seat. He got up and walked over to the child, of whom had her back to him.

“Hay kiddo, why ain't ya in your set?” Ace asked softly. She spun around to look at him. The air of Fear surrounded her. “What's da matta?”

She fidgeted a bit and looked around the ****pit, “It's jest... The last I was on a ship... they...they”

“Angel,” Ace said softly as he keeled down and placed his hands on her shoulders, “listen. Dis time ya ain't going any ware you don't wont to. Dis time your going home. To your mudder, your Rat-a, Kiara, and... your Pop-pa.”

she smiled and rapped her arms around him. Ace hugged her back then sat her in her seat and clicked the seatbelt across her chest. He then left the ****pit in search of there final member. He wondered into the lab, and saw the green coyote looking into a suitcase that was in front of him.

“Hay Tech what's da hold up? We launch in only a few minuets.” The yellow rabbit said to his peer. Tech quickly shut the case and looked at his leader.

“I'm jest packing something that may come in handy latter.” Tech replied.

“Well lets jet. Everyone els is waiting.” Tech nodded, grabbed the case and fallowed Ace back to the ship. Ones every one was settled in the ship Ace activated the engine. “Every body hang on.”

The ship launched into the air, gaining speed, as it cleared the atmosphere. Ace let out his breath that he hadn't realized he was holding as he the skis of Acmetropalis became the darkness of space. Every one was quiet. In only hours they would be on Fruten. Oh, how dream like it felt. Ace turned the ship to autopilot and look again at his friends. They all in there own thought as they stared at the distant stars.

He then looked at Angel. The little Anthro had entered his life only a few day ago, but she had impacted it so much. Long ago he had given up the hope of ever finding there sixth member, but now the fire of hope had been relight. That wasn't the only way she had impacted him. He realized that now. She made him get in touch with a part of himself he didn't know existed. Maybe now when he was in a relationship he would look past jest dating.

He gave a glans at Tech. He looked tired. Ace stood up and face the others, “All righty gang. It will be awhile till we reach Fruten so your all aloud to rest and relax. Tech get some sleep. You've been up for 24 hours and then some.”

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Yayz! You have update! *hugs you* But, now we will endure the torture of waiting for the next! :O

I liked it. I mean, really liked it. Ace's thoughts about the launch, about lexi, about angel... awesome! The dream like states of which we weave, are sometimes harder to conceive.

Plz update SOON! I mean, you just put up this one, so theres no rush, but still!!!!

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Note to self: NEVER listen to "Everyday" while reading new chapters on epic stories. It is bad for you health

....... UPDATE VERY SOON PLZ!!!!!! 8D *faints*

LoonaticsF · Loonatic

*faint because of too much awesomness* I CAN'T WAIT FOR ACE TO MEET LEXIIIIIIIIIIIIII!

Alex Bunny · Anthros

can't wait for the next chappie

SoulessAce · An Ace that is without a soul

Cool ^^

Natynicky · Martian

YAY I finally get to comment this ^w^
Awesome chappie I can't wait for Ace to finally see Lexi X3
Please hurry up with the next chapter!! your killing us here with all the tension DX LOL

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Okay, so So SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry for not being on for like...I don't even know how long. I've been realy bizzy with all sorts of stuff, and I haven't goten alot of wrighting done. Still haven't. PLEAS DON'T HATE ME.

I did get a little done soooo, hear is a sneek peak

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“Hay kiddo...Wake wake, sleepy.” Angel opened her eyes slowly before trying to rubbing the sleep out of them. She looked up to see Ace smiling at her, “Looks like a little some one fell asleep.”

She yawned and rubbed her eyes again, “Sorry I guess.”

Ace chuckled and piked her up from the small couch that had been set up in one of the room in the jet. Angel, still half a sleep, simply leaned into him keeping her eyes barely open. “Ders not'in' to apologize for der Angel. If we where still on Acmetrpolic it would be pretty late.” Ace walked over to the window, “Hay Angel, look out da window.”

Angel looked out and her eyes widened. A bit in the distends she could see a small planet, smiler to Earth, slowly growing.

“Fruten.” She stared out in surprise. It'd been so long sens she had seen her beloved home.

“Yup,” Ace smiled, “We should be able to land at dawn.”
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CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Yay! An update... sorta. XD Don't worry! We still luv ya, Siamese! *glomps*

Awww... what a sweet moment! So much cuteness! *faints*

Alex Bunny · Anthros

nice it sounds intresting can't wait for the next one

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Oh, Hi, yay. If any one remembers, I still have a cover contest on this story flouting about and I'd like to say I've deside to give out a prize to the winer and runer up.

Which is:

First place: Get's to ask one question about this story and get a summery of any of my fanfics to come.

Second place:Get's to ask one question about this story

And I will anser truthfully the questions. So if you get 1st or 2nd sertent questions that have been already ask could be clarafied to the winner.

And I've also desided to set a due date: Aug 21.

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 13:50, 2008-08-07

Alex Bunny · Anthros

uhhhh wats the question again...?

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Alex Bunny wrote:
uhhhh wats the question again...?

We'll the winners get to ask ANY question they wont about the storry, but what I meant by 'sertent' questions it like....

Well the number one question that's been asked is

Is Ace or Pop-pa Angels real father? So yay tou win you get an anser.

Alex Bunny · Anthros

ummm i meant about the contest i don't get it since i'm new here and all

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Alex Bunny wrote:
ummm i meant about the contest i don't get it since i'm new here and all

Oh, well It's, jest as said, a cover contest. Thoughs how want to draw/ dezine a cover for the story. Where it looks like a book cover or a movie poster. Some thing to atract peoples attention or to kinda show what it's about

I guess a good example would be some of , good old, Kaejae's works. Though these wheren't for a contest, she just did them for fun, We have her cover for BlackOracle's fan script Love Stinks

Another good one is Kaejae's Unfinished Business

did that help at all or are you just more confused?

Alex Bunny · Anthros

more confused

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

Okay....Can some one els help me?

Rileybunny · Beast

*raises rileys hand and pretends to do rileys voice* I WILL I WILL!
Riley:let me go!

-- Edited by Rileybunny at 14:20, 2008-08-07

Alex Bunny · Anthros

sure but i think i get it now were supposed 2 draw a cover for ur story but were do we make it?

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Well, you could get one of those programs... but I haven't the foggiest idea how or what they're called.... I just draw mine with good old paper and pencil! XD

Rileybunny · Beast

Siamese: YES SHE FINALLY GETS IT!!!!!!!!!!

-- Edited by Rileybunny at 14:43, 2008-08-07

Alex Bunny · Anthros

kk i just i can't enter it cause i don't kow wat the programs r called and my scanner really bad.

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

OH! OH! OH!!!! PICK ME! I KNOW!

*cough*

I draw my pictures, then take a picture of them with my camera then upload them from there.

Alex Bunny · Anthros

thats a gd idea thz i'll give it a shoot put were do i send them?

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

If you have a digital camera, you upload them to the computer then attach them to this thread in your reply (Or wherever Siamese wants them)...

If you do not have a digital camera.... I can't help you... DX

Alex Bunny · Anthros

i have a quite a few digtial camras

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

Well, then, you're in luck! Can't wait to see your entry! I might be able to draw an entry, but I have a lot on my plate at the moment. I'll try, though!

Alex Bunny · Anthros

yea same i have 2 start packing cause i'm going 2 alberta soon also i'm not a very gd drawer and plus i need so more info bout each charcter since the place i also go 2 does explain wat each charcter looks like and i don't know that much bout Angel

Rileybunny · Beast

*waiting for siamese to update*

Alex Bunny · Anthros

yea siamese u should update soon were all waiting PLz

Natynicky · Martian

YAY!! I don't know if I'll enter though D8
Since I'm working, I'll we starting school next week, and I have a lot of artwork piled up to finish... Maybe who knows ^__^

Rileybunny · Beast

i hope the reason why shes of of luo is to finish the chapter

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

I'd like to apologizes for my absences of late from LUO and the lateness of the next chapter, I still do not have it done.

I wish to give you all the reasons for this:

1)there are some personal and family happenings in my life right now, some I do not wont to discus, that have kelped me away from writing and well doing anything on the computer.

2)I've had a lot of people come to me who have asked me to help them wright some thing, draw some thing, and help them get Ideas for who knows what. And this has cosed me to obtain Writers and artist block. I've had no good ideas come to me for some time. I ave not been able to wright, to draw, or be able to be creative in any way

So I apologizes for these things.

Alex Bunny · Anthros

irs ok

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

It's okay, Siamese! We still luvs ya anyway! *snugs*

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

I thank you guys for your understanding. I will do a few things that have helped me in the past to over come the writers block. I hope it dose not last long.

CassidyCoyote · Techie 4 life

I usually find that watching LU episodes helps me overcome writer's block.... a suggestion if you'd like.

SoulessAce · An Ace that is without a soul

Yes...Now I just hack that picture of Ace and Lexi dancing, change it to Duck, and...oh!Hello there!!!Hehhe...he...*runs*0////0

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

SoulessAce wrote:
Yes...Now I just hack that picture of Ace and Lexi dancing, change it to Duck, and...oh!Hello there!!!Hehhe...he...*runs*0////0

* Rolls eyes and mutters under my breath* Dacers.... The Acexis will rule you know!

And Cassidy, thanks for the suggestion, but it's more then jest LU writters block. It's a block on all my creativity. I've done some meditation, and it's helped me a little but I still some time to over come it. *sigh* I'm going to go read some Poems.