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Yay! Your a member!

And thank you again. ^_^

And if I had ended it where they found Lexi I would of been bricked, malled, or killed for leaving so many questions left unanswered. XD

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There's one thing you should do and that's UPDATE! Sorry. I have a little bit of a chest cold right now. Trust me. It ain't pretty. Anyways, back to business. UPDATE!

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No!!!!!!
If you are threathened to be bricked, malled, or killed, tell me. I'll go after them couse then they won't be anyone to finish the story.....

(Cracks knuckles while trying to look menacing.)
Did I mention trying is the key-word???

-- Edited by Sapphire A. Star at 07:07, 2008-09-23

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Small Sneek Peek
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With hope in there hearts and determination in there eyes the Loonatics, Lexi, Angel, Rat-a, and Pop-pa all traveled down the worn path that lead from Lexis house to the village close by. They weren't sure how they where going to convince the people to join them in the battle against the Kutons, but they knew some how they'd manage.
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Ya, like i said, small.

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 20:52, 2008-10-01

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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ohhhhh sounds so interstaning i can't wait for the next chsppie

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Chapter 22

With hope in there hearts and determination in there eyes the Loonatics, Lexi, Angel, Rat-a, and Pop-pa all traveled down the worn path that lead from Lexis house to the village close by. They weren't sure how they where going to convince the people to join them in the battle against the Kutons, but they knew some how they'd manage.

 

They came up on the village. Many of the people stopped and stared. Surprised to see the new strangers walking with some of the local tavern owners, but mostly surprised to see the child that had been missing from there town for half a year traveling in front of them. A green gecko anthro, who was dressed in in a black shirt and pants, approached them casing the group to stop ruffly in the middle of the town.

 

Rat-a, Pop-pa, Lexi! What are you doing with these strangers in are town? Some Kuton guards have placed a watch out for five such strangers traveling with a child. As I see that the young Angel is with them.” He gave what looked like a glare at the young rabbit who, in turn, glared back.

 

Lexi walked up to the gecko, “Mayer McMerving we are on a mission.”

 

Mission? What sort of mission could you have with them.” He said gesturing at the Loonatics.

 

We are on mission,” Lexi looked around at the curious crowd that had gathered around, and she raised her voice, “to over throw the Kuton Army!”

 

Gasps and whispers where herd at such news. Whispers that said such things as 'are they crazy?' or 'What could they be thinking?'.

 

What! Are you crazy! No one dares to take on the Kuton Army. It's an impossible fight.” The gecko said.

 

With that said the crowd around them also started to voice how they think it's impossible. The loonatics and them tried explaining how the task could be accomplished, but there voices where drowned into unheard whispers. Angel held her head. Disliking the loud volume of yells of disapproval and instant dismissal of the idea.

 

Angel jumped up onto some near by wooden crates so that she stood taller then all there and made her voice loud, “Stoooooooooop!”

 

With the scream of the child the crowd was silenced and now stared at her, “It is not an impossible mission! The Kutons aren't invincible. Over six months ago I diapered, as you all know. But I wasn't merely lost or gone. I was taken by the Kuton Army, and I escaped there grasps. I fought against dem!”

 

Small gasps and quiet whispers where heard.

 

Ace stood next to the crates, “To think, a small child like Angel was able to out smart and defeat guards of da Kuton Army! Imagen what all of you could do if you also fought.”

 

Lexi walked up next to Ace, “The Kutons have forced there rule on all of us. They have bought changes to are lives that we did not ask for, nor did we wont. They are nothing more then lying, deceitful, men who want things to go there way or no way.”

 

What makes all of you so sure what you say is true. What gives you the confidence to speak out like this?” Came a voice from the crowed.

 

We know what we say is true, because we have had first hand experience with the Kutons!” Angel called, “Are queen has been taken from us because of these people.”

 

So has the air. We all remember them saying how they had disposed of her.” Said a cat Anthro who stood in the front of the crowed.

 

That's not entirely true pal.” Duck said.

 

Rat-a stepped up this time, “When the Kuton army was at first starting to become a problem the air to the crown, along with her mother the protector, went into hiding. They have been hiding under all of your noises.”

 

Questions traveled quietly throw the crowd. Ace climbed to where Angel stood.

 

Lexi come up hear.” He said as he offered her a hand up. She took it and stood next to there daughter. Ace took a step away from them, “I present to you. Lexi Mari Bunny and Angel Lexina Bunny. The Protector and chosen air to the kingdom of Fruten!”

 

An uproar filled with gasps exploded from the crowed. Slowly the people from the crowed started to bow in the presence of Angel. In the quietness one question was asked by the child, “The challenge will be great. Some will not relearn, but I only ask, Who will fight with us?”

 

One by one the people of the crowed stood up saying they would join the battle till they where all standing.

 

Go to your homes, and gather your things.” Pop-pa commanded, “We leave this place at tomorrows dawn.”

 

Mom! We did it!” Angel said happily to her mother.

 

I know Angel,” Lexi piked her up, “I know.

 

Hay Lexi, Angel. I'd like to give you guys something.” Tech said.

 

In curiosity the hole group gathered around the coyote genius.

 

What-are-you-going-to-give-them?” Rev asked.

 

Some thing I brought with us. Come on. It' back on the ship.”

 

It wasn't long till they found themselves on the Loonatics ship.

 

All right Tech, what do got for dem?” Ace asked.

 

Tech held up a small case, “This one's for Lexi.” He pointed it at Lexi and opened it up.

 

In side all you could see was the pink triangle that rested on the chest of a Loonatics uniform.

 

I thought sens we where all fighting as Loonatics you mite want to look like a Loonatics again.” Tech said. Lexi stared at her old uniform, and gently placed her hand on it.

 

Thank you Tech.” She smiled.

 

Don't thank me quite yet.” Tech picked up another small case and knelled down in front of Angel. This time when he opened the case one could see a smaller uniform with a blue triangle, “For are smallest member. I know I should of cleared this with Ace before but I was sure he wouldn't mind.

 

Angel stared at it, opened mouthed, “It's for me?”

 

“Yup. Specialty dizined to match your color and powers.”

 

Lexi stood next to Ace. Both felling pride and joy. Ace little leaned over to Lexi and whispered into her ear, “Who ever knew pink and yellow made blue.

 

 

To be Continued in the next story 'The Loonatics Angel- The Rising Storm' Coming to a fan site near you. 

 

 



-- Edited by Siamese712 at 23:47, 2008-10-01

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Awesome Siamese...
Can't wait for the next part!!!

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8D

8D

EEEEKKK!!!

I adore Angel now...

I'mma....

I'mma go lay down, now, 'kay?

*passes out*

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Cassidy: *stares*......At least she didn't fall.

Star: Thanks ^^

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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i luv it

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Cool. If I was your teacher and I told the class to write a story on Loonatics Unleashed and you showed me that, I'd give it an A++! The next story's gonna be good, Sia. I believe you can come up with another great story. Don't lose that confidence.

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Alex: Thanks ^^

Ice: Who ever said I lost my confidence? I love writing. I jest felt that this was getting rather long, so I'm splitting it up into multiple stories.

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Siamese712 wrote:

 Who ever said I lost my confidence?



WASN'T ME!!! *shifty eyes* XD



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I DIDN'T MEAN IT LIKE THAT! Sorry. I didn't mean to yell. The Loonatics are throwing bricks at me and it's driving me crazy. *Gets hit by a brick*

THAT'S IT!

*Throws the brick at Lexi. Ace pushed her out of the way and let it hit him. Lexi collapsed over his body and cried hard. Duck, Slam, Tech and Rev glare at me*

I didn't mean that. I just threw it randomly. *Grins nervously* Help me somebody. I'm gonna get killed over here.

-- Edited by IceGirl2772 at 19:07, 2008-10-03

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Wow, this is gonna get interesting.

And Siamese, Saph is enough.

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All right, Saph it is ^^

And for all you who have been enjoying Loonatics Angel I'd like to say i should be getting the next one up shortly. Now I'm not saying it'll be up in a few minets or any thing, but keep checking around in the next few days?

You know, for how many of you liked Loonatics Angel I'm surprised NO one entered the cover contest.

OH, for a little fun I'm going to ask a question. You don't have to answer if you don't wish.

WHO is the Loonatics 'Angel'? Now think on this one. There's an 'plane in site' answer, and one that is more profound. If I really like your answer I'll tell you something about the next story.

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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OH! OH OH!!! *waves hand up in air crazily* PICK ME PICK ME!!!!! 8DDDDDD



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ik ik its angel


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Um yes Cassidy?

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I think the simple answer is Lexi. She's special because of her being the only girl on the team, and all the guys have a bit of a 'brother-sister' bond with her.

I think the more profound answer would be Angel. The guys were obviously torn after Lexi's apparent death, Angel appeared as the guys' 'lighthouse' that lead them to her again.

Anyway, now that I'm done being a serious and rational with ya, I shall skip away merrily! *skips away merrily*

Cassidy: 0.0.... Holy crap..... she really thought about that......

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Good guesses Good Guesses.

in a manner of speaking you are both wrong and wright Danielle.

in a away Angel and Lexi are both the simple and profound answer.

Hears how:
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Angel is the simple answer because (A) Her name is Angel making her the simple choice and (B)Children are usually considered inasent and kind and are refured to as Angels.

Lexi is the profound choice because (A) She was told to be dead and to the Loonatics had became a gardean angel and (B) Through the days Lexi may have given up hope of seeing her friends again but had always had them in her prayers to bring them luck, happiness, and health. In away protecting them, again, like a grdean angel.

Lexi is the simple answer because (A) like Danielle said she had a bond with them and (B) had been the only girl.

Angel is the profound choice because (A) Angel was a beacon of light and hope to the Loonatics. Refuling there hope in the fact that there 'deceased' friend was alive. (B) She gave them faith in there selfs, such as giving Ace the confidence of being a father.
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Dose anyone have any thing to add?


-- Edited by Siamese712 at 10:38, 2008-10-12

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Hay to any one how WAS looking forwered to the loonatics Angel: Risiong Strom to be started soon. Well you can for get that! My F-ing computer jest deleted all my notes and the 1 first chapter!

Gawed! I had JEST finished it to! Sorry I'm a little POed right now!

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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0.0........... You need a hug! *hugs Siamese*

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Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

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It's okay I've commend down now, and have accusal successfully re-completed chapter one!

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*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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